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bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

I'm ordering something from my own shop XD
Reviews
Username: bigpuppy
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/118749590/
Type/name of thing you want reviewed: The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure
Comments: I like ordering from my own shop
Oi!!!!! Taken!
That was fast!

edit: 45th page!

Last edited by bigpuppy (Dec. 15, 2016 22:45:41)


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GeeTransit wrote:

Review for The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure by you
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Coding (90/100)
The coding was straight forward.

Graphics (90/100)
The position of the lists block the only way to scroll up on the main list with the story.

Bugs (100/100)
Simple game with no bugs.

Grammar (95/100)
Might wanna check out capitalization.

Creativity (90/100)
I've seen a few (but not a lot) WIP's with the same mechanisms.

Overall score (465/500)

Comments:
The list named ‘you’ blocks the scroll button in the list named ‘the stolen diamond’.

Improvements that could be made:
The list sometimes goes too quickly, thus making gameplay too fast at times. You could also shorten the number of characters entered by adding shortcuts like ‘m’ for move, numbers for choices after move, and ‘j’ for Joe and the others.

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Review by GeeTransit from your Shop

Thanks for ordering from your shop! If you liked your order, consider reviewing your own shop! Have a nice day!

Last edited by GeeTransit (Dec. 15, 2016 23:05:56)

bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

Review for The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure by you
—————
Coding (90/100)
The coding was straight forward.

Graphics (90/100)
The position of the lists block the only way to scroll up on the main list with the story.

Bugs (100/100)
Simple game with no bugs.

Grammar (95/100)
Might wanna check out capitalization.

Creativity (90/100)
I've seen a few (but not a lot) WIP's with the same mechanisms.

Overall score (465/500)

Comments:
The list named ‘you’ blocks the scroll button in the list named ‘the stolen diamond’.

Improvements that could be made:
The list sometimes goes too quickly, thus making gameplay too fast at times. You could also shorten the number of characters entered by adding shortcuts like ‘m’ for move, numbers for choices after move, and ‘j’ for Joe and the others.

—————
Review by GeeTransit from your Shop

Thanks for ordering from your shop! If you liked your order, consider reviewing my own shop! Have a nice day!
Thanks!

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
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bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

I'm ordering something from my own shop XD
Reviews
Username: bigpuppy
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/118749590/
Type/name of thing you want reviewed: The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure
Comments: I like ordering from my own shop
Oi!!!!! Taken!
That was fast!

edit: 45th page!
lol! I like helping my employer, or co-worker, or boss, or friend, or all of the choices on the left!
bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

I'm ordering something from my own shop XD
Reviews
Username: bigpuppy
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/118749590/
Type/name of thing you want reviewed: The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure
Comments: I like ordering from my own shop
Oi!!!!! Taken!
That was fast!

edit: 45th page!
lol! I like helping my employer, or co-worker, or boss, or friend, or all of the choices on the left!
XD

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
GeeTransit
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bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

Review for The Stolen Diamond - A Text Mystery/Adventure by you
—————
Coding (90/100)
The coding was straight forward.

Graphics (90/100)
The position of the lists block the only way to scroll up on the main list with the story.

Bugs (100/100)
Simple game with no bugs.

Grammar (95/100)
Might wanna check out capitalization.

Creativity (90/100)
I've seen a few (but not a lot) WIP's with the same mechanisms.

Overall score (465/500)

Comments:
The list named ‘you’ blocks the scroll button in the list named ‘the stolen diamond’.

Improvements that could be made:
The list sometimes goes too quickly, thus making gameplay too fast at times. You could also shorten the number of characters entered by adding shortcuts like ‘m’ for move, numbers for choices after move, and ‘j’ for Joe and the others.

—————
Review by GeeTransit from your Shop

Thanks for ordering from your shop! If you liked your order, consider reviewing my own shop! Have a nice day!
Thanks!
No prob!
GeeTransit
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bigpuppy wrote:


Name Color code: Owner Master! You are awesome! Thank you! Very active! Thank you! In the middle. Please try to be more active. Please be more active!
Staff
Complete Staff List (this is the only list that has colors)
bigpuppy
SimplyKomplex
SpectralKnight
Birdmusic
TacoCatProuductions
Remix-the-Dragon (formerly Teamactivecatz)
KathrynJaneway
f1lip
Vpody
FireHeart03
doggy230
banana439monkey
Saiid
makethebrainhappy
Simpler14
GeeTransit <<<—— I'm a MASTER!!!!!

Thanks bigpuppy!
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GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:


Name Color code: Owner Master! You are awesome! Thank you! Very active! Thank you! In the middle. Please try to be more active. Please be more active!
Staff
Complete Staff List (this is the only list that has colors)
bigpuppy
SimplyKomplex
SpectralKnight
Birdmusic
TacoCatProuductions
Remix-the-Dragon (formerly Teamactivecatz)
KathrynJaneway
f1lip
Vpody
FireHeart03
doggy230
banana439monkey
Saiid
makethebrainhappy
Simpler14
GeeTransit <<<—— I'm a MASTER!!!!!

Thanks bigpuppy!

I was like, “OOO!!! Simpler14 was the 14th staff member hired. What a coincidence!” I wonder if the music order form will be up and running again since it said that music staff are having trouble…

One last thing! Do partner shops basically order from us and then reply to the customer with our finished products? I feel like we could handle more…

P.S. I won't be back 'til around 5pm (6am for Scratch Time) for a little trip to the Oriental Pearl Tower in Shanghai!
bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:


Name Color code: Owner Master! You are awesome! Thank you! Very active! Thank you! In the middle. Please try to be more active. Please be more active!
Staff
Complete Staff List (this is the only list that has colors)
bigpuppy
SimplyKomplex
SpectralKnight
Birdmusic
TacoCatProuductions
Remix-the-Dragon (formerly Teamactivecatz)
KathrynJaneway
f1lip
Vpody
FireHeart03
doggy230
banana439monkey
Saiid
makethebrainhappy
Simpler14
GeeTransit <<<—— I'm a MASTER!!!!!

Thanks bigpuppy!

I was like, “OOO!!! Simpler14 was the 14th staff member hired. What a coincidence!” I wonder if the music order form will be up and running again since it said that music staff are having trouble…

One last thing! Do partner shops basically order from us and then reply to the customer with our finished products? I feel like we could handle more…

P.S. I won't be back 'til around 5pm (6am for Scratch Time) for a little trip to the Oriental Pearl Tower in Shanghai!
1. Not necessarily. Some people were fired or they retired.

2. No, they just go to each other if they need help. However, one of our partners, ✔ Ray of light ✔, has agreed that we can do their orders because they have SO MANY UNFINISHED ONES. But make sure you take it with “Taken by Bigpuppy's Shop” and tell me when you finished one in that shop because we can be credited for it and I will add it to our unfinished orders list.

3. Ok.

Last edited by bigpuppy (Dec. 16, 2016 00:22:08)


“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
GeeTransit
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bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:


Name Color code: Owner Master! You are awesome! Thank you! Very active! Thank you! In the middle. Please try to be more active. Please be more active!
Staff
Complete Staff List (this is the only list that has colors)
bigpuppy
SimplyKomplex
SpectralKnight
Birdmusic
TacoCatProuductions
Remix-the-Dragon (formerly Teamactivecatz)
KathrynJaneway
f1lip
Vpody
FireHeart03
doggy230
banana439monkey
Saiid
makethebrainhappy
Simpler14
GeeTransit <<<—— I'm a MASTER!!!!!

Thanks bigpuppy!

I was like, “OOO!!! Simpler14 was the 14th staff member hired. What a coincidence!” I wonder if the music order form will be up and running again since it said that music staff are having trouble…

One last thing! Do partner shops basically order from us and then reply to the customer with our finished products? I feel like we could handle more…

P.S. I won't be back 'til around 5pm (6am for Scratch Time) for a little trip to the Oriental Pearl Tower in Shanghai!
1. Not necessarily. Some people were fired or they retired.

2. No, they just go to each other if they need help. However, one of our partners, ✔ Ray of light ✔, has agreed that we can do their orders because they have SO MANY UNFINISHED ONES. But make sure you take it with “Taken by Bigpuppy's Shop” and tell me when you finished one in that shop because we can be credited for it and I will add it to our unfinished orders list.

3. Ok.

Thanks for the info!

1. I guess he must be the 17th staff then.

2. Unfinished ones lol. I will see for myself then

3. I'm back! They shortened the trip from like 5 hours to just 2 hours. What a rip-off… (*angry face)
doggy230
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bigpuppy wrote:


Unfinished Work:

Red = Not Taken
Green = Taken
Purple = Pending/Old
Gray = Nobody has taken it for so long and it will be removed soon

Click here to visit The Dustbin! If you had an old order and it is not in here, it is probably in the Dustbin.

Username: SonicMasterSystem
What you want it to be: All the of the BTTF (back to the future) posters
Do you have a preferred employee? Nope.
Bitmap or Vector? Bitmap.
Comments: (anything else?) Make it chibi!


Username: DonutyBuffalo
What you want it to be: A nutcracker sprite (Sprites are art too right?)
Do you have a preferred employee? No
Bitmap or Vector? ???
Comments: Nothin here,


Username: SoarPlusPlus
What you want it to sound like: like a prologue from a game
Long, medium or short? medium
Comments: (anything else?) nope
Taken by doggy230
done here it is

martie
doggiecake
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Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)

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bigpuppy
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doggiecake wrote:

Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)
Okay, I've re-hired you. Make sure to be more active please this time!

Also, I have removed all the jobs. Now do whatever orders you are good at.

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
TacoCatProuductions
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bigpuppy wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)
Okay, I've re-hired you. Make sure to be more active please this time!

Also, I have removed all the jobs. Now do whatever orders you are good at.
Ummm okay….

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bigpuppy wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)
Okay, I've re-hired you. Make sure to be more active please this time!

Also, I have removed all the jobs. Now do whatever orders you are good at.
Wee! I think that you (bigpuppy) made the right choice. No one likes being stuck anywhere… Also, what catagories do we have currently?
bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)
Okay, I've re-hired you. Make sure to be more active please this time!

Also, I have removed all the jobs. Now do whatever orders you are good at.
Wee! I think that you (bigpuppy) made the right choice. No one likes being stuck anywhere… Also, what catagories do we have currently?
-Reviews
-BBCode
-Scripts
-Art
-Image hosting
We used to have music, but those orders were overwhelming our shop

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
GeeTransit
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bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

Hello again i was wondering if i could once again work here

Username: Doggiecake
Activeness: 8/10
Job(s): Review
Example of work: Ummmmm i never reviewed anyones work but i'll do so on one of yours for an example
Skills: I tend to be able to notice the simplest of thing that stand out.
Are you following this topic? Year i've never actually unfollowed
How many Scratch shops are you a employee at? 2 (both inactive right now)
Okay, I've re-hired you. Make sure to be more active please this time!

Also, I have removed all the jobs. Now do whatever orders you are good at.
Wee! I think that you (bigpuppy) made the right choice. No one likes being stuck anywhere… Also, what catagories do we have currently?
-Reviews
-BBCode
-Scripts
-Art
-Image hosting
We used to have music, but those orders were overwhelming our shop
I think I can handle music! I can use open sourced music without much sweat… Only after Dec 24th though. That's when I'll be back in Canada when I can use my computer more frequently than before. Lol… Autocorrect helps a lot on iPads!
bigpuppy
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GeeTransit wrote:

(snipped by bigpuppy)

I think I can handle music! I can use open sourced music without much sweat… Only after Dec 24th though. That's when I'll be back in Canada when I can use my computer more frequently than before. Lol… Autocorrect helps a lot on iPads!
Except only having one person on music isn't that good. I am still worried about it.

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall
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bigpuppy wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

(snipped by bigpuppy)

I think I can handle music! I can use open sourced music without much sweat… Only after Dec 24th though. That's when I'll be back in Canada when I can use my computer more frequently than before. Lol… Autocorrect helps a lot on iPads!
Except only having one person on music isn't that good. I am still worried about it.
True… Who else was on the music staff positions before, or are they all inactive?
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How big are: (In Pixels)

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Logos?
Signatures?

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