GrahamSH wrote:

Username: GrahamSH
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) Shop
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) Be honest
Deadline: ASAP, but you can do it after your order is completed so you have an example.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/418054/
Preferred way of contact Profile, but on the topic is fine

Abigblueworld wrote:

There is a grammar errror, one of the forms say forme not form.

Review for Beautiful banners:

Title: 8/10
While it is not impossible to read, it did take me a second to decipher the crazy text. It made my eyes hurt (tiny bit)
and the weird sideways “s” 's (Idk how to put that in correct grammar xD) were a bit weird. That being said however, it was kinda cool, and the having to read it again is probably good for business.

Front/Info pages: 10/10
The banner, as the title states, was beautiful. The gif was of smooth quality, and the shapes in the background were great. The forms were in a nice, quoted format, made them easier to read. Don't change anything about those pages

Speed: 10/10
My order was “Taken” by 2 people in 2 minutes. The person who actually took my order (Which was GrahamSH, the owner) estimated the wait time to be about a week, I ordered a package (7 banners), but it was done in a little over 12 hours.

Quality: 9.5/10
The 7 banners were of high quality, however I would have liked it to be a little more animated. That being said, however, the banners were much, much better than the ones from the profile picture shop. (The ones I had before I got your ones)

Customer service: 9.7/10
The customer service was excellent, gave me the link alongside the banner, which I have never seen before (Although I have only really ordered banners and banner-like items from the Profile Picture Shop). Also, they notified me on my profile, which was an added bonus. I did not see one of the staff active however.

Overall: 9.5/10
The quality and speed were some of the best ever, but the title brought the overall down 0.5. Great shop!

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Yeetoburro1 wrote:

Review for Beautiful banners:

Title: 8/10
While it is not impossible to read, it did take me a second to decipher the crazy text. It made my eyes hurt (tiny bit)
and the weird sideways “s” 's (Idk how to put that in correct grammar xD) were a bit weird. That being said however, it was kinda cool, and the having to read it again is probably good for business.

Front/Info pages: 10/10
The banner, as the title states, was beautiful. The gif was of smooth quality, and the shapes in the background were great. The forms were in a nice, quoted format, made them easier to read. Don't change anything about those pages

Speed: 10/10
My order was “Taken” by 2 people in 2 minutes. The person who actually took my order (Which was GrahamSH, the owner) estimated the wait time to be about a week, I ordered a package (7 banners), but it was done in a little over 12 hours.

Quality: 9.5/10
The 7 banners were of high quality, however I would have liked it to be a little more animated. That being said, however, the banners were much, much better than the ones from the profile picture shop. (The ones I had before I got your ones)

Customer service: 9.7/10
The customer service was excellent, gave me the link alongside the banner, which I have never seen before (Although I have only really ordered banners and banner-like items from the Profile Picture Shop). Also, they notified me on my profile, which was an added bonus. I did not see one of the staff active however.

Overall: 9.5/10
The quality and speed were some of the best ever, but the title brought the overall down 0.5. Great shop!

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Application form
Username: Scwestbrook
Have you read the terms? Yes
Experience: I work for the Scratch Mall
Why you want to work here: I am trying to become a part of the scratch community, and I feel that helping others is the way to do it!
2 Example reviews: What does this mean??

scwestbrook wrote:

Application form
Username: Scwestbrook
Have you read the terms? Yes
Experience: I work for the Scratch Mall
Why you want to work here: I am trying to become a part of the scratch community, and I feel that helping others is the way to do it!
2 Example reviews: What does this mean??

2 things (3, really)
1: Example reviews are like this: I should make it 1…

Example Review:
I really liked your animation. The story was great, you clearly put a lot of thought into it. However, it was a little choppy and slow. Maybe put the code into a custom block with “Run without screen refresh”?

The telling them how to do it is optional.
2: Codeword?
3: I really want to let you in, just do these things

Yeetoburro1 wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

Application form
Username: Scwestbrook
Have you read the terms? Yes
Experience: I work for the Scratch Mall
Why you want to work here: I am trying to become a part of the scratch community, and I feel that helping others is the way to do it!
2 Example reviews: What does this mean??

2 things (3, really)
1: Example reviews are like this: I should make it 1…

Example Review:
I really liked your animation. The story was great, you clearly put a lot of thought into it. However, it was a little choppy and slow. Maybe put the code into a custom block with “Run without screen refresh”?

The telling them how to do it is optional.
2: Codeword?
3: I really want to let you in, just do these things

when green flag clicked
set [Codeword v] to [Reviews]
say [My review is:] for (2) secs

Example review #1
Really good animation, but too many frames. Maybe
make the wait time between frames shorter, or delete a few costumes

Example review #2
The coding was great, and the transitions were really smooth, but the storyline needs some work

GrahamSH wrote:

Review form
Who did your order? Yeetoburro1
Was it on time? Yes
How was it, on a scale of 1 to 10? 10
Would you come back? Yes

scwestbrook wrote:

Yeetoburro1 wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

Application form
Username: Scwestbrook
Have you read the terms? Yes
Experience: I work for the Scratch Mall
Why you want to work here: I am trying to become a part of the scratch community, and I feel that helping others is the way to do it!
2 Example reviews: What does this mean??

2 things (3, really)
1: Example reviews are like this: I should make it 1…

Example Review:
I really liked your animation. The story was great, you clearly put a lot of thought into it. However, it was a little choppy and slow. Maybe put the code into a custom block with “Run without screen refresh”?

The telling them how to do it is optional.
2: Codeword?
3: I really want to let you in, just do these things

when green flag clicked
set [Codeword v] to [Reviews]
say [My review is:] for (2) secs

Example review #1
Really good animation, but too many frames. Maybe
make the wait time between frames shorter, or delete a few costumes

Example review #2
The coding was great, and the transitions were really smooth, but the storyline needs some work

PndaGmr978 wrote:

Order Form
Username: @PndaGmr978
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) My shop, “Panda’s Studio”
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) How some banners a GIF and some are not. (If you’re going to do it right after I order. How some banners are using the scratch banner links and some are using cubeupload links.)
Deadline: Anytime before the 24th.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/423097/?page=1#post-4225497
Preferred way of contact: Profile or here.

scwestbrook wrote:

PndaGmr978 wrote:

Order Form
Username: @PndaGmr978
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) My shop, “Panda’s Studio”
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) How some banners a GIF and some are not. (If you’re going to do it right after I order. How some banners are using the scratch banner links and some are using cubeupload links.)
Deadline: Anytime before the 24th.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/423097/?page=1#post-4225497
Preferred way of contact: Profile or here.

Taken

Possible fixes
There is a grammar error:

Please read through the terms and conditions before ordering. Also use our order form, not a form from another shop. If you didn’t read the terms and condition or/and don’t use our form then I won’t be able to do your order.

The Red and blue letters need to be switched
Maybe add some images or something to direct attention, because I found it hard to read the whole thing without getting slightly bored.

Overall 9.5
Very nice I saw no other grammar errors

scwestbrook wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

PndaGmr978 wrote:

Order Form
Username: @PndaGmr978
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) My shop, “Panda’s Studio”
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) How some banners a GIF and some are not. (If you’re going to do it right after I order. How some banners are using the scratch banner links and some are using cubeupload links.)
Deadline: Anytime before the 24th.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/423097/?page=1#post-4225497
Preferred way of contact: Profile or here.

Taken

Possible fixes
There is a grammar error:

Please read through the terms and conditions before ordering. Also use our order form, not a form from another shop. If you didn’t read the terms and condition or/and don’t use our form then I won’t be able to do your order.

The Red and blue letters need to be switched
Maybe add some images or something to direct attention, because I found it hard to read the whole thing without getting slightly bored.

Overall 9.5
Very nice I saw no other grammar errors

Yeetoburro1 wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

PndaGmr978 wrote:

Order Form
Username: @PndaGmr978
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) My shop, “Panda’s Studio”
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) How some banners a GIF and some are not. (If you’re going to do it right after I order. How some banners are using the scratch banner links and some are using cubeupload links.)
Deadline: Anytime before the 24th.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/423097/?page=1#post-4225497
Preferred way of contact: Profile or here.

Taken

Possible fixes
There is a grammar error:

Please read through the terms and conditions before ordering. Also use our order form, not a form from another shop. If you didn’t read the terms and condition or/and don’t use our form then I won’t be able to do your order.

The Red and blue letters need to be switched
Maybe add some images or something to direct attention, because I found it hard to read the whole thing without getting slightly bored.

Overall 9.5
Very nice I saw no other grammar errors

That is our order form… Also, try to make it more like the one I did, make a test order and such.

Yeetoburro1 wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

PndaGmr978 wrote:

Order Form
Username: @PndaGmr978
Type of review (Project, studio, shop) My shop, “Panda’s Studio”
Have you read the terms?: Golden
What you do not want us to say (Like something you're working on) How some banners a GIF and some are not. (If you’re going to do it right after I order. How some banners are using the scratch banner links and some are using cubeupload links.)
Deadline: Anytime before the 24th.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/423097/?page=1#post-4225497
Preferred way of contact: Profile or here.

Taken

Possible fixes
There is a grammar error:

Please read through the terms and conditions before ordering. Also use our order form, not a form from another shop. If you didn’t read the terms and condition or/and don’t use our form then I won’t be able to do your order.

The Red and blue letters need to be switched
Maybe add some images or something to direct attention, because I found it hard to read the whole thing without getting slightly bored.

Overall 9.5
Very nice I saw no other grammar errors

That is our order form… Also, try to make it more like the one I did, make a test order and such.

scwestbrook wrote:

Yeetoburro1 wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

scwestbrook wrote:

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Taken

Possible fixes
There is a grammar error:

Please read through the terms and conditions before ordering. Also use our order form, not a form from another shop. If you didn’t read the terms and condition or/and don’t use our form then I won’t be able to do your order.

The Red and blue letters need to be switched
Maybe add some images or something to direct attention, because I found it hard to read the whole thing without getting slightly bored.

Overall 9.5
Very nice I saw no other grammar errors

That is our order form… Also, try to make it more like the one I did, make a test order and such.

OK, Maybe add a navigation menu to the shop, since it took be Awhile to find the terms and all