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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
third weekly
again, very rushed i apologize to anyone who has to read this :sob: also there's a lot of italicized text i don't feel like going through and italicizing rn sorry lol | 2017 words
part one | 650
part two | 526
part three | 421
part four | four hundred and twenty
again, very rushed i apologize to anyone who has to read this :sob: also there's a lot of italicized text i don't feel like going through and italicizing rn sorry lol | 2017 words
part one | 650
Rayla darted through the trees, gracefully jumping from one branch to the next. She was moving quickly, trying to outrun her pursuers on the ground. She paused for a second and glanced towards the ground. There was no one in sight.
Did I lose them? Rayla wondered, but as she finished the thought a soldier rounded the path below her.
“This is ridiculous! She's an elf, how are se supposed to catch her? Viren is losing it.”
Another soldier glared at him. “You can't say that!”
“Oh what, now he's monitoring us at all times?” The first shot back sarcastically.
A third soldier joined them. Ugh, how many are there?! Rayla had been too busy escaping to count her pursuers.
“I wouldn't put it past him,” the newest soldier added
“Whatever! This is dumb, can we just report back and say she jumped off a cliff and survived or whatever it is those elves do?” The first one threw his hands up. “I'm tired from all this running!”
Rayla scoffed at his ignorance of her culture, and realized too late what her situation was. Oops… She clamped her hand over her mouth but that caused her to lose her balance on the branch she was perched on.
This was how Rayla found herself hanging by one arm 20 feet above the ground in a tree in front of three of Viren’s finest soldiers.
Callum was * that Rayla had just left him in the dead of night, completely ignoring their perfectly planned plan.
Nevertheless, he was sneaking through the forest behind the soldiers chasing Rayla. As capable as she was, her attitude sometimes got her in trouble, and Callum didn't feel like breaking her out of Viren’s most high security prison.
Callum was running out of breath and worried he had lost her when he heard yelling in the distance. He ran one of his hands through his hair, realizing he hadn't thought past the finding Rayla part of this escapade.
The leather book thumped against Callum’s hip, and he lifted it up to look through. There were plenty of spells he could use, but he needed one that would work from a distance and be well enough aimed that it wouldn't hit Rayla if they had captured her.
Then an idea struck him and he charged forward.
“Let's talk about this!” Rayla lifted her free hand in the air as a gesture of peace. “You can…let me go, and I'll bake you a cake!”
The soldiers were stunned, but soon broke free of their stupor.
“Get her!” Their leader yelled as the other two circled Rayla. She had finally gotten her other hand back on the branch and flipped herself up.
“Not today, boys!” Rayla cheerfully waved at them before leaping off the branch. Her calculations weren't quite correct and she fell to the ground – hard.
Today is not my day! She tried to catch her breath as the soldiers approached her cautiously. Rayla scrambled backward, trying to grab her swords from her back.
“Split!” The leader screamed and the three surrounded her in a triangle. “This is the end, Rayla.” He sounded so smug, and Rayla wanted nothing more than to punch that smirk off of his face. But she couldn't. She was trapped.
“Not today!” A male voice called from behind. Rayla’s heart soared, she could kiss him from relief.
“Callum!” Rayla shot up, ready to fight. There was a sizzling from the direction of the voice, and a bolt of lightning hit the leader of the soldiers square in the chest. Serves him right. Rayla was thrilled.
She hit the one closest to her with the butt of her sword and Callum took the last soldier down.
“Next time, maybe think it through before you go off on a mission alone?” Callum teased as they walked side by side through the forest.
Rayla laughed, “You wish!”
part two | 526
Narrator: Kit Rehder
Traits: 17, very smart, murder victim, dead
Premise: discussing the murder of Kit but Kit’s a ghost, at the end reveal the victim’s name: Kit
It was a freezing December day, and snow was falling softly outside the tall windows of the Rehder house. There were 5 people in the cozy living room, two on an overstuffed couch, one in a dark red armchair, one splayed out on the carpet, and one sitting on a poof.
They were all suspects in a murder, specifically the murder of the youngest Rehder child. The two on the couch were the victim's older sister Victoria and her girlfriend, Penny. The person in the chair was Mike, the victim's best friend up until two weeks before the murder. The girl on the floor was the victim's study partner, Jackie, and the last person was Kit.
This is ridiculous, Kit thought, we all know who did it. Who did it, according to Kit, was Mike. Mike and the dead kid had had a fight almost exactly two weeks ago over the fact that he ghosted them for a week and wouldn't explain why. They were so close before, two peas in a pod, but for some reason this was an unmendable rift. They weren't speaking and fourteen days later Mike's friend was dead. The pieces line up perfectly.
“Why am I here again?” Penny asked, “I've never met this person before.”
“Because,” Kit explained patiently, “you and Victoria were together at the time of the crime, and maybe you guys decided murder was a great date night activity.”
Penny still looked confused and glanced around the room. Finally, Victoria relented and repeated what Kit had just said.
“This is bull!” Jackie sat up from her place on the carpet, indignantly. “I talked to them maybe twice. Just because we went over Lincoln’s assassination a few times doesn't mean I'd go all John Wilkes Booth on them!”
Kit laughed, admiring the historical humor. They loved history as well, and made a mental note to get Jackie’s number. If they made it out of this without going to jail of course.
Mike looked around seriously. “I know you all think I did it, but I swear I didn't. I was actually doing homework!”
There were scoffs around the room.
“Yeah right,” Kit mumbled.
The voices in the room rose, each accusing the others that they did it.
“Okay. What was everyone doing when the murder happened?” Kit’s voice rose, trying to cut through the noise.
The others kept yelling, unaware of Kit’s question. They shook their head, annoyed.
“Guys!! Stop yelling, it won't get us anywhere!” Kit stood up, trying to get their attention. Ugh, why won't they listen?
“This is ridiculous!” Mike was livid now, after not being believed. “I didn't kill them!”
Kit was also angry, and walked over towards Mike. “I know you did it!” They put their finger in Mike’s face. Mike was unfazed, looking somewhere past Kit's shoulder. “Why aren't you paying attention to me?” Kit tried to push Mike backward, but their hand just passed through him. What…?
Jackie pointed at Mike. “Sit down. Let's discuss this like civilized people. Now, in order, where was everyone when Kit was killed?”
What?!
part three | 421
Enemies to lovers
Chosen one
Quest for magical artifact
Math class was so boring, and the only thing that could make it worse for Alicia is if Harper showed up. She shuddered with disgust at the thought of his name. He was such a stereotypical “bad boy,” with his long greasy hair, ripped jeans, and skateboard he rode to and from school on. It was terrible.
Alicia looked back at the teacher who was droning on and on about the Pythagorean Theorem. a2 + b2 = c2. We get it. Alicia thought, glancing around the classroom. That was when the door opened, and Alicia’s heart quickened. Oh, shut up, she reprimanded herself, I refuse to be in an enemies to lovers storyline with this idiot.
“Harper, you're late.” The teacher commented as Harper strutted through the classroom.
“Oh, yeah, sorry.” He said offhandedly. The disrespect! Alicia’s blood boiled and she could feel her face start to flush. You are not into this ridiculous excuse of a teenager! He flashed her a grin, as if knowing how much it bothered her and slid into the seat across from her.
“Hey there Alia,” Alicia was sure he got her name wrong on purpose, “what's up?”
His snide tone made her so angry. Bad boys need to stay in YA novels. They're so much worse in real life. Alicia scoffed and ignored him, doodling on the triangles worksheet in front of her.
“Sooo…” Harper drew the word out unnecessarily long and Alicia wanted to punch him. “Do anything fun this weekend?”
“Shut up Harper, and go bother someone else!” Alicia couldn't hold back her anger anymore. His face didn't change and that was somehow worse. “I said, go!”
“Alicia, please stop distracting the class!” The teacher glared at her. Alicia gave Harper her most withering look and he smirked.
“Feisty, eh?” She couldn't believe he was saying that right now.
Alicia stood up and left the room, signing out for the bathroom. She was fuming, and yet somehow didn't feel too angry. I swear to God, I will not fall for my least favorite person ever! Enemies to lovers is not happening right now!
She finished in the bathroom but stayed a little longer, scrolling on her phone and trying to get her thoughts together. She heard a massive crash, and a giant serpent came hurtling through what used to be the door to the bathrooms. Jesus Christ, is my life becoming a fantasy novel now? She reallydid not have time for this right now.
part four | four hundred and twenty
Self insert: Maia
Claudia had just finished defeating a massive polar bear that was trying to wreck an IKEA and had made it back to her small consulting place with little trouble. She was making herself a cup of tea when she heard the door jingle as it opened.
“Hey there! Who are you?” Claudia asked of the person walking in. She made her way behind the counter in order to look professional.
“I'm Maia!” The girl pushed some of her red hair out of her face. She was slightly shorter than Claudia and wore a green shirt with khaki colored pants. “I have a request for you…”
“That's what I'm here for!” Claudia acted cheerful even though she was dead tired. Her teapot whistled from behind her and she put up a finger. “One moment.”
As Claudia went to grab her tea, Maia’s eyes wandered around the little shop, taking it all in. To her right was a small leather sofa and a wooden coffee table covered in mug stains. The wall to her left was covered with bookshelves containing old dusty volumes. Behind the counter was a folding chair and table with a teapot and electric kettle. There was a crocheted basket next to the two that contained lots of kinds of tea bags and a few old fashioned looking containers of looseleaf.
Claudia finished pouring her tea and turned back to her client. “Well, what do you need?”
“This morning, I was making breakfast when I heard a strange noise in the attic. I never go up there – it's barely a crawlspace – but I'm sure there was something there. I could probably find a ladder to reach there, but I don't want to release anything onto my apartment.”
“I see,” Claudia mused. “What did it sound like? Paws padding around? Footfalls? Bird feet clattering on wood? Hooves?”
“Hmm…” Maia thought about that for a minute. “I think it was talons.”
“Okay so it's not an Allocamelus, or Criosphinx, or all the “mythical” beasts she could remember. “Did it make any noise, like a roar?”
“Um…Not that I can remember.” Maia said apologetically.
“That's fine! Let me see,” Claudia turned around and went to one of the bookshelves. She pulled out a particularly old tome and flipped through it. “Oh!” She exclaimed. “I think we have ourselves a Cockatrice. This’ll be so fun!”
In Maia’s opinion, she sounded way too excited about having a dragon-serpent-rooster hybrid on her property. This was going to be very interesting.
Last edited by wolfiebear- (July 23, 2024 22:34:15)
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
As an swc host, I propose we accept Gurtle into our ranks and use him as a war machine during cabin wars. For example, if a cabin is struggling they can simply call Gurtle up and have him come over and throw flaming mangoes at the opposing cabin and eat the ruins. This way, he’ll have lots of proper enrichment and it will also allow him to get ample exercise and learn how to forage for food on his own. Since we are keeping Gurtle in captivity, it’s important that he receives the proper care and new experiences he needs. I’m sure he’d have a ball eating cabins and throwing mangoes.
I also propose we issue an swc-wide ban on potatoes. We don’t need them. Get them out. The procrastination potatoes can’t hurt us if they’re not even there! Very in depth, accurate, and scientific studies show that ingesting potatoes can also make you more likely to procrastinate. Imagine how productive we’d all be if we didn’t eat so many potatoes! I think putting a blanket ban on potatoes would allow for all swcers to use their motivation and productivity to the max, and this will not only help the campers to feel better about themselves, but it will also allow for more words to be written as a whole.
We should also pass out ikea plushies to everyone. Giving each camper their own personal emotional support skog will help to keep their spirits high, and will give them their own little cheerleader while they’re writing their last minute daily or weekly. Swcers will find lots of joy in these plushies, which will create an even happier environment where we can all write to the full extent of our potential.
In conclusion, implementing these three things in swc will improve it to be the best camp it can possibly be. Thank you for reading my proposal. Don’t let the Gurtles bite.
I also propose we issue an swc-wide ban on potatoes. We don’t need them. Get them out. The procrastination potatoes can’t hurt us if they’re not even there! Very in depth, accurate, and scientific studies show that ingesting potatoes can also make you more likely to procrastinate. Imagine how productive we’d all be if we didn’t eat so many potatoes! I think putting a blanket ban on potatoes would allow for all swcers to use their motivation and productivity to the max, and this will not only help the campers to feel better about themselves, but it will also allow for more words to be written as a whole.
We should also pass out ikea plushies to everyone. Giving each camper their own personal emotional support skog will help to keep their spirits high, and will give them their own little cheerleader while they’re writing their last minute daily or weekly. Swcers will find lots of joy in these plushies, which will create an even happier environment where we can all write to the full extent of our potential.
In conclusion, implementing these three things in swc will improve it to be the best camp it can possibly be. Thank you for reading my proposal. Don’t let the Gurtles bite.
- inkycloud
- Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
weekly 3 total: 1816 words
pt1: 546 words (sorry to whoever has to read this.. not my proudest moment :skull
pt2: 350 words
mio:
–> stubborn and realistic
–> refuses to believe anything he can't see or remember
–> but.. for some reason.. he can't seem to remember anything?
pt3: 511 words (very ooc i just need names and a scenario)
tropes:
tragic backstory
evil vs good
loveless marriage (or, well. partnership?)
pt4: 409 words (sorry for whatever this is for clarification the self insert here is both and none of them thx)
pt1: 546 words (sorry to whoever has to read this.. not my proudest moment :skull
“what’s your favourite food, kai-chan?” kokichi calls from across the table, huge smile on his face. from this angle, it almost seems endearing. before kaito can think of a witty, dismissive answer that completely overwhelms the little mastermind, maki places her hand on kaito’s.
“don’t answer him,” the assassin says without sparing kokichi a glance. “he doesn’t deserve it.” kokichi rolls his eyes dramatically, does a little spin, and drapes himself right in front of kaito’s breakfast. suddenly, eggs don’t seem appetizing at all.
“kai-chan~! you can’t ignore me, you know,” he says, pouting. kokichi gets up then, taps his lips three times with his pointed finger, and the devilish grin returns to his face. “anyways, i think i already know the answer! can i guess, can i?”
stone faced, kaito looks back at the eggs and lifts up his fork. kokichi can ramble and try to rile him up all he wants, but he’s ready for it.
“hmm.. is it blood?” kaito’s fork clatters to the ground.
kokichi isn’t a stranger to planning for the future. maybe that’s why he finds the blood-splattered napkins tucked in a little box under kaito’s bed, one fateful non-stalkerish day. from that day on, he starts to pay a bit more attention to the so-called hero.
he notices things he’s pretty sure kaito doesn’t even notice himself; the way his swagger loses a bit of its allure every day, how the napkins pile up until the box isn’t enough, but it becomes increasingly clear that kaito momota isn’t getting better whatsoever.
kaito drags him out of the kitchen by his arm.
“ooh, did i guess right? aw, you can’t drag me around like this, kai-chan! that’s scaryyyy.. m-maki!!! save me..!” even as he blubbers on, kokichi can’t help but feel delighted. once the door to the kitchen shuts, he does a little twirl and deftly shoves kaito’s hand off of him.
“so i’m right, huh?” kokichi says, leaning forwards on his toes. “what do you have?” kaito visibly stiffens again, looking away.
“can you—! don’t you ever just shut up,” he hisses, walking towards one of the staircases in this ugly, empty, phoney parody of a school.
“aw, that’s no fun.. don’t you have anything else to say to the only person who knows you’re dying?” kokichi giggles as he follows kaito down the hallway.
kaito might’ve been dying before, but now the pain pours over him in waves that are increasingly miserable. he holds his hand up, but it feels more like he’s working out.
“hey, kokichi,” he mumbles, coughing violently. . the blood splatters onto the pretty bathroom floor. it’s unfair, he thinks. kaito shouldn’t ruin this floor with his blood, or, eventually, his corpse.
“what’s up?” kokichi asks, pretending to look bored. at least, kaito hopes he’s pretending. he has another violent bout of coughing in response.
“ah. you could have said so—“ kaito glares. “i’ll get you water.” kaito sighs, but he’s too tired to fight it. water won’t do anything to save him— at this point, nothing will. worst part? at the end of it all, kokichi is still the only one to know there’s no cure.
“forget it,” kaito says, spitting more blood out. “i’m the one dying. stay here until i do.”
pt2: 350 words
mio:
–> stubborn and realistic
–> refuses to believe anything he can't see or remember
–> but.. for some reason.. he can't seem to remember anything?
It was strange, even for him, to have a teenage boy wailing uncontrollably and clutching at Mio's shoulders. When he tried to offer comfort, that only made the strange boy scream louder, and every word seemed to only escalate the situation. Worst of all? He didn't, or couldn't seem to remember the past few days, weeks, maybe years of his life. Surely it was only the stress of this strange situation.
Minutes had long passed before Mio was able to understand the boy's name through the incessant blubbering. “Taichi,” the boy had wailed, nails digging into Mio's skin in a claw-like grip. “My name is Taichi, you stupid f-freaking ghost!”
Mio gingerly tried to pry one finger at a time off of his now irritated and reddened shoulders, more bewildered than scared. Ghost? There were no ghosts in this completely normal, human world, meaning this poor boy was delusional.
“H-Hey, would you mind letting go?” he ventured, patting the hand that was latching onto him. So-called Taichi screeched in response.
“Look, you're a total stranger–! I mean, it's not right for you to hold onto me like this.. Where are your parents?”
Taichi stopped screeching and finally looked up at him, snickering, clearly gone insane. "Hey, . Look around, will you? Do you see any f-freaking people around you? Your parents?? Hey, are you stupid? Huh? Get it together, dimwit! I'm the only one left.“
Now that he looked, the room was awfully bare. He couldn't hear anything except for the boy in front of him, and a soft hum that could be anything, to be honest. But whatever this boy said only sounded like an awful, mean joke.
”Don't say that!“ Mio shouted back, wrenching his arms away from the snivelling boy. ”You don't- can't say anything about my parents." Stiffly, he stood up, brushed off his clothes, and shoved Taichi away. It didn't matter what nonsense this boy was spewing, nor the fact that he couldn't remember his parents' faces at all– Mio was going to leave the room, leave this delusional boy, and find a way home.
pt3: 511 words (very ooc i just need names and a scenario)
tropes:
tragic backstory
evil vs good
loveless marriage (or, well. partnership?)
“You’re a book character,” Grian suddenly says, staring Scar down with his beady little eyes. Scar ignores him. Sometimes, it’s better not to engage with crazy. “Scar. You’re a book character.”
“What else is new?”
“.. can you hear me? Scar?”
“Of course I can.” Iron goes in slot 3 of the chest, but not too much, or their enemies will rob them blind. Scar just wants to go outside and hang out with his Jellies. Grian wants to go out and frolic with BigB. Well, Grian can have his little affair, and Scar can have his beautiful pandas, and maybe, in a perfect world, nobody else dies.
“Scar! You’re not listening to me at all. Are we soulmates or not?!”
“We are.” When Scar dies, Grian dies. When Scar gets hurt, Grian gets hurt. Win together, die together.
“Then why don’t you understand..! This is a book. You’re a character. This whole world— it’s fake!! That’s-“ Grian breaks off, choking slightly. “That’s probably why this isn’t working out.”
“Keep believing that,” Scar snaps back.
“I mean it! Look, nobody else can even hear me. Come.” Like an ugly little dog, Scar follows Grian past their reddish cake-like house and across practically the whole world before they find others.
“Jimmy!” Grian beckons his friend down. “You’re in a book. You’re a character. You don’t exist.” To his horror, Jimmy just stares blankly at Grian, a confused smile appearing on his face.
“Oh, and also, I ate a cactus today.” Grian adds after a minute.
“What? That’s disgusting. You came all the way here just for that?” Grian nods, then tugs Scar away.
“His eyes glazed over once I started speaking,” Grian whispers. “You’re the only one who can hear me. So let’s work together.”
“.. Together to do what?”
“Well, it’s a story, so we need to give it an ending. By that, I mean… destroy whatever evil force or whatever, solve the hero’s journey, all that jazz!”
“You’re going crazy,” Scar says, then chuckles. “There’s only one way to end this whole story thing anyways.”
“Yeah?”
“Win the death game.”
“And how do you know that?” Grian asks, then snaps his fingers. “Who told you that? How did you get here? What life do you have outside of this boring, scripted, useless game?” Scar furrows his brows.
“I just know it,” he mutters, feeling a bit stubborn but mostly just stupid. “I think you told me.”
“Then why do I remember you telling me?”
“Huh. But I do remember life outside of here— My parents are at home. If I win the game, I need to go home to rebuild. Their house burned down..?” Now that he’s really thinking, the details blur. Was it a house, or a forest? His parents.. aren’t they missing? He’s desperate to win and go home, but is it to cure his mother’s sickness, or support his grandpa, or just to see his cat?
“.. Grian,” Scar says, swallowing sharply. “Why can’t I remember my parents’ faces?” Grian only smirks.
“Now you get it. Let’s get moving, hero.”
pt4: 409 words (sorry for whatever this is for clarification the self insert here is both and none of them thx)
You stagger, baking in the summer heat. The city is surprisingly cool these days, but once you leave its bustling dome, the pavement is your enemy. It’s tiring, you think, to walk all the way home. You wish it was nighttime.
<skip ahead?>
>YES
NO
The cool air feels wonderful during these sweltering days. It’s no wonder you decided to wait until nightfall to take your daily walk. A girl- or, well, you’re not really sure. Someone is waiting for you at the bench, so you had better get a move on. You don’t want to miss this once in a lifetime opportunity, do you?
“You’re here..!” He- well, you’re really not sure. They say. “It’s nice to see you again!”
<answer.>
OF COURSE I’M HERE!
>HAVE WE MET BEFORE?
“Yes.” That’s that, you suppose. Strange day you’re having. Then again, it’s not day, so maybe this isn’t strange at all. You’re not confused at all, you’ll find. You’re just tired.
“I’m tired now,” the person– (thing?) says, echoing your thoughts. “Talking makes me tired. You’re not saying anything, and now I’m tired of you.” You frown. This isn’t very nice, stranger. Now you’re even more tired. A cool breeze tickles your shoulders as they sit up straight, stand up, and walk away. Ah, posture. That’s important, isn’t it? You sit up straight. Well, isn’t this boring?
<skip ahead?>
>YES
NO
You’re always tired these days. You’re long past taking a daily walk; that was a momentary phase. Now, you’re into sleeping, where you don’t think about anything. Life is never bad when you’re asleep. Sleeping feels nice, doesn’t it?
<doesn’t it?>
>YES
NO
It does. Anyways, the only bad thing you can find about sleeping is that you haven’t seen that girl- or, well, you’re not really sure- since. Somehow, though, you find them.
“Do you know me?” He- or, is it they? say, and for some reason you think the emphasis might be different from your first impression. No, you suppose not. You have no idea who they are, do you?
“Ah, well. Isn’t it better this way? I don’t know you either.” You agree. It’s nice, not knowing anything. The world can be a nice place sometimes. Today is a nice day, and you’re happy as-is. Even so, the world changes.
<skip ahead?>
YES
>NO
Ah, I think you’ve made a mistake. Let’s try again?
<skip ahead?>
>YES
NO
Thanks. That’s a lot better, isn't it?
- -vanillamochabear-
- Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
so, i’m magically a scratch writing camp host now? and i have the power to propose anything i want, and perhaps make it into a reality for our community? this is going to be so fun :rubs hands together like a supervillain. because. you’ll find out quickly enough:
i think that instead of completing dailies and weeklies in order to have our cabins rise on a measly leaderboard, we should omit that concept entirely. instead, we should enroll all of the cabins into a hunger games style champion, where the winning cabin gets a variety of prizes!! (to be decided). from each cabin we’d have two members be chosen, and they have to compete against everyone else in a variety of challenges (night at ikea, writing sprints, baking competitions, that sort of thing!) of course we have to keep it pg so no one is allowed to be unalived :( instead they’re just. kicked out? and the remaining person wins for their cabin!!
we need to keep a writing aspect in for the spectators as well (because we’re sWc! duh) so the dailies and weeklies should still be around, they’d just go to a different purpose. for every point earned, the cabin’s competitors are given something to help them in that round! this will make sense later on i promise
during cabin wars days, everyone is allowed to join in on the current challenge! will this get chaotic, yes, but it’ll be fun so it cancels out. imagine the entirety of camp crammed into an ikea fighting each other :heart eyes:
i’m kind of running out of ideas so. for funsies at the end of every session everyone should receive a blahaj (totally not because i’m obsessed with them right now - i mean look at him!!) as a souvenir, for them to take home! and the competitors get extra large blahajs for their efforts! and of course they’d all have “swc chaos is forever” embroidered onto their fishy sides in comic sans
/j please!! maybe??
i think that instead of completing dailies and weeklies in order to have our cabins rise on a measly leaderboard, we should omit that concept entirely. instead, we should enroll all of the cabins into a hunger games style champion, where the winning cabin gets a variety of prizes!! (to be decided). from each cabin we’d have two members be chosen, and they have to compete against everyone else in a variety of challenges (night at ikea, writing sprints, baking competitions, that sort of thing!) of course we have to keep it pg so no one is allowed to be unalived :( instead they’re just. kicked out? and the remaining person wins for their cabin!!
we need to keep a writing aspect in for the spectators as well (because we’re sWc! duh) so the dailies and weeklies should still be around, they’d just go to a different purpose. for every point earned, the cabin’s competitors are given something to help them in that round! this will make sense later on i promise
during cabin wars days, everyone is allowed to join in on the current challenge! will this get chaotic, yes, but it’ll be fun so it cancels out. imagine the entirety of camp crammed into an ikea fighting each other :heart eyes:
i’m kind of running out of ideas so. for funsies at the end of every session everyone should receive a blahaj (totally not because i’m obsessed with them right now - i mean look at him!!) as a souvenir, for them to take home! and the competitors get extra large blahajs for their efforts! and of course they’d all have “swc chaos is forever” embroidered onto their fishy sides in comic sans
/j please!! maybe??
Last edited by -vanillamochabear- (July 23, 2024 23:09:34)
- Whimsy_lux
- Scratcher
64 posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
7/21/24
Week 3: Perspectives
Part 1: Switching Perspectives - Write three separate scenes, the first and third with a different character and setting POV than the second.
Fritz did his best to savor the feeling of holding Kai’s hand, it must have been a once in a lifetime occurrence. Sure, the only reason the introverted boy was allowing himself to be led along by Fritz was most likely due to no one else knowing the way to the forbidden library, but why focus on the details. Especially when the prince would rather focus on his betrothed. Kai’s hands had a graceful quality to them, one that could only belong to someone who spent day in and day out practicing magic. They had warmed up in Fritz’s hands as well and something about the air around them felt so incredibly intimate.
He risked a look back, hoping to catch the slight reddening of the tips of Kai’s ears that was always so endearing. Instead Kai instantly locked eyes with him, and pulled his hand back before clearing his throat. “I can walk by myself.” He muttered, rubbing the part of his hand Fritz had just held, “How long is it until we reach the library?”
Fritz fell back so he could walk beside him and then leaned forward to meet his avoidant gaze. “I know, but can’t a prince treat their betrothed every once in a while? You work too hard. You know I’d carry you if you’d let me!” He replied, the last comment only getting a dry scoff out of Kai.
“You can barely carry your school books without your servants to help you,” He said, finally looking at Fritz as if he was a friend and not some high and mighty heir to the kingdom. He didn’t even try to hide the smile that crossed his face.
“You know that’s different! Magic isn’t allowed in the halls” He pouted and the small laugh Kai let out made the boy want to record it and play it over and over like a theme song to his day. Then, a small idea popped into his head and Fritz just couldn’t let it go, “But it's not like there are any teachers here… Upsy daisy!”
With a flick of his wrist and a flurry of giggles, Kai’s feet flew off the ground. “What–! Let me down!” He yelped but Fritz couldn’t just stop halfway. He slowly maneuvered Kai’s body towards him, and held his arms out as if to carry him. The second Fritz’s hand touched his back, the boy jolted and his ears turned the brightest shade of red.
“See, you’re as light as a feather! And don’t squirm so much, attacking your prince is against the law” He joked, thankful Kai was barely paying attention to his own warm cheeks. The proximity made him realize how cold Kai was. It only made Fritz want to pull him in closer but there was only so much he could do before Kai actually started fighting back, which he wasn’t keen on having to deal with. Kai must’ve been one of the most powerful Kalimi he’s met, nearly going toe to toe with Fritz, which was insane considering he isn’t royalty. The fact he hadn’t immediately tried to dispel his magic must’ve been a sign he doesn't mind it as much as he claims to.
That or he knows they’d both topple over if Fritz stopped levitating him.
“Why do you always insist on doing things like this? It’s embarrassing,” Kai said, tense but not moving half as much as before, his brow furrowed ever so slightly.
“Maybe I wouldn’t have to insist if you weren’t so stubborn. You never let anyone help you or even try to care about you. I saw your arm y’know? If you told me, I could’ve tried to heal it but instead you're hiding it and pretending you aren’t exhausted from trying to break the barrier.”
When he said that, Kai pulled his arm closer to himself and looked away before changing the subject completely, “You never answered my question. We’ve been walking for a while, shouldn’t we have reached the library by now?”
Fritz realized he was right. He’s never actually been inside the library before, so maybe his father told him wrong, but he expected the barrier to be the only obstacle. They must’ve been walking for more than five minutes. He didn’t want to tell Kai this though, the way he looked at Fritz when he effortlessly broke the barrier was something else entirely and he knew Kai would be disappointed if he revealed they were equally clueless, so all he said was. “Only a bit longer. Probably.”
But then the air around them shifted, the feeling nearly indiscernible, but Kai’s demeanor changed instantly. Immediately he was out of Fritz’s arms, his entire body on alert and before Fritz could even think to cast a barrier or defensive charm Kai yelled, “Watch out!” and pushed him out of the way. The ground split between them and Kai began to fall. And all Fritz could do was watch.
~
Kai should've known everything was too good to be true. They were heading to a forbidden library, one no one but the royal family can enter and even they avoid doing so. If it was only protected by some barrier, a strong one sure, but one Kai could’ve broken given more time, practically anyone would be able to get through it.
If Fritz hadn’t insisted on going with him, he would’ve sensed the trap much sooner, he just knew it. The prince just had a way of distracting him and no matter how much he protested, Kai felt himself relax the tiniest bit when he ‘held’ him. It wasn’t Kai’s fault the vibrations of Fritz’s laughter was just soothing and that the steady beat of his heart had this way of putting him to sleep. And he was just so warm, his body, his smile, his–
That wasn’t the point. Right now Kai was on the ground, somewhere, probably dangerous and made to ward off intruders. Trying to escape was top priority, next was finding out what exactly was calling him to the library in the first place. Fritz wasn’t even close to third, he’d be last place if anything. He looked around and took in his surroundings which was really just a lot of dust and dust and more dust.
Oh, wait there's more. A cobweb too.
But for some reason, he felt a tug at his chest. One all too similar to the one that’s been keeping him up at night and led him here in the first place. Kai put a hand on the wall in front of him and a wave of dizzying magic crashed over him, so hard he felt he would drown. With heavy ragged breaths he let go and suddenly the thought that maybe this wasn’t a trap but the destination appeared in his mind. It only made sense a secret library would have such an intoxicating effect on him. He’s always been affected by magic like that.
But if so, how did this place work? There were no symbols, no runes, no instructions or anything. Only that tug getting stronger and stronger in a way Kai could barely explain. One that only seemed to cease when he…
Kai readied himself, shaking out his hands which felt numb from how much exposure to magic they’ve gone through. Just one more time. He stepped forward and placed both hands on the wall. Magic crashed over him once more, surging and pulsing like a raging storm. He felt his body quake with the sensation but instead of fighting it, he allowed himself to be washed away. To drink it all in and as stupid and cartoonish drinking the ocean sounded, instead of overwhelmed, Kai felt powerful.
But there was something else. He needed to do something else, to let it out somewhere but how? He remembered the motion Fritz always did, the flick of the wrist and the subtle flexing of his fingers. He never understood how he could cast such powerful magic with such little effort but maybe that’s just what he needed. He copied the movement as best he could and the second he did, something clicked.
The pulsing calmed, feeling warm and steady like a heartbeat that was all too familiar to Kai and the walls around him began to move. He backed away, spent and aching, as the walls lit up like fairy lights and yelling echoed from above.
~
Why hadn’t Fritz been more careful. He should’ve noticed sooner. He was the prince for goodness sake, how did Kai figure out something was wrong before he did? Why did Fritz let himself be pushed out of the way? Why didn’t his magic work as he watched Kai fall?
His voice had gone hoarse from yelling down the pitch black ravine that had formed in front of him. Kai should’ve been able to hear him, why wasn’t he responding? The second he realized what happened Fritz had tried to jump down but a barrier was in its place, and this one wouldn’t break no matter how much he tried. If he was like Kai and paid attention in school, maybe he’d actually know dispelling magic but not a single incantation came to him as he tried over and over to fix everything.
Suddenly, the floor began to sink and the corridor lit up with iridescent light. What was happening! Was Kai okay? Every question, echoing in his mind, was answered when he saw Kai, at the bottom swaying unsteadily but perfectly okay, his eyes alight with pride and wonder.
“Kai!” He yelled and his body was moving before he could even realize, launching himself at the boy and instantly wrapping him in a hug. “You’re okay! And I think you revealed the library!” Fritz rambled, his words riddled with apologies, praise and everything in between. The cold stone walls had transformed to a deep mahogany, and only a few feet away from them was a massive door, clearly leading to the inside of the library.
Strangely enough, Kai barely reacted, instead he sank into Fritz arms, his entire body barely holding itself up, “It’s… It’s okay. We just… Let’s go inside.” He mumbled and even though the entire display made Fritz want to destroy something with how adorable it was, he wasn’t going to let anything else happen. It was time for him to be the responsible one!
“No! Let’s go back, you need to rest and what if this isn’t it! I’ve actually never been to the forbidden library, and I have no clue what’s happening. I wish I could do more but I don’t want us to get separated again.” He said and Fritz had no clue what he was expecting but Kai hugging him back wasn’t one of them. He was so unprepared for it in fact he nearly toppled over, his back hitting the wall behind him as Kai’s head rested on his shoulder.
“I’ll live, it's only a little magic. But…” And then he paused, and Fritz felt the boy's ears heat up as he said, “Can you carry me, Fritz? Only for a minute or two I–”
Kai didn’t even need to go on. The request made Fritz go almost entirely red and his magic flared up without thinking, causing both their feet to fly off the ground and Fritz struggling to control the sporadic surge of magic. Kai didn’t even react, and only when Fritz felt the steady rise and fall of his chest did he realize the boy had fallen asleep.
He managed to lower the two of them down and Fritz sank to the ground, hoping Kai was at least a bit comfortable on top of him. There was no way the prince could try to lift Kai off of him and for the first time in a long time, his magic was completely spent. Plus, he knew Kai would be mad at him if he woke up and realized they weren’t in the Forbidden Library anymore. For some reason, he’s always seemed so drawn to it, and now they were just inches away. And maybe, just maybe, Fritz didn’t want to move.
“Only for a minute…” The prince agreed, exhaustion catching up to him as well. The library could wait an hour or two, right?
Part 2: For this task, brainstorm a list of traits showing how and/or why your narrator is unreliable. Using that list, write a scene in 300 words, and make sure to leave details that will make your reader question the narrator and their credibility!
Character: Sunset - Forgetful, exaggerated and naive.
This wasn’t supposed to happen! This was the exact opposite of what was supposed to happen! I jumped in front of Flare, who was glaring at Midnight like she wanted to eat her alive. I honestly don’t know why I did, Flare could easily eat me alive too, and now that I think about it Midnight could definitely do that same. Instantly I regret my actions but I can’t stand down. I wasn’t about to let my friends eat eachother!
“Why are you protecting a cat? Get away from her!’ Flare seethed, and Midnight just hissed, her once smooth fur bristling dangerously. I looked between the two of them frantically. Then I remember I was the alpha, at least soon to be, and summoned up the courage of a whole pack of wolves!
“Flare! Trust me, Midnight’s like the most trustworthy, best cat I’ve met! Please don’t try to eat her!” I said in a super cool very brave way and I swear I saw Flare cower a little bit.
“The Sun Pack once trusted cats and look where it got us. They do nothing but lie and betray!” She said, stalking around me, and out of the corner of my eye I saw Midnight follow suit. Time to pull out the big guns!
I let out a strong howl like no other, but quiet enough that no other wolf heard me because I didn’t want to get in trouble, and said something like, “Flare, I am your alpha! If you disagree with me you disagree with the pack, but as your best friend I suppose I’ll humor your insolence. I put all my trust in Midnight since the day I met her, allow me to tell you the story.” And the two of them sat and listened super hard and were so impressed with each other they became best friends on the spot, just like me and Midnight did!
“That didn’t happen.” Midnight said plainly and I was jolted out of my thoughts. Crescent, her younger brother, was listening silently to my awesome story and I pouted as she interrupted me.
“What do you mean!” I whined, my ears sagging against my head as she clicked her tongue. Then she turned to Crescent and sat in front of him. “Let me tell you what actually happened, kay?”
Part 4: Metafiction - Brainstorm 2-3 literary tropes. Then, write 400 words about a character noticing and openly acknowledging or criticizing these tropes.
Being stuck in a simulation really messes you up. There’s this whole ptsd thing where you wonder, “Hey is any of this real? What if I wake up and notice that everyone I know and everything I do is just part of some sick game and nothing I’ve experienced actually matters?” And yeah that a lot of it. Like a big part, but there’s also this bit of self-awareness whenever something coincidental or tropey happens. And at first it’s a bit funny, the stuff where you joke about being the main character to your friends, but its to the point where I’m pretty sure my life is just some crappy book written by some fifth grader.
Actually scratch that, I’m sure. I mean, to start off, I’m basically the definition of the chosen one. Dead dad, homeschooled, magic powers I wasn’t aware of till recently, stupidly powerful with no explanation. I even have a disgruntled mentor who can't stand me, but I know he’s just acting and secretly thinks of me like family. I mean who wouldn’t? But anyway, there’s that whole thing but now that I’m in school I think it’s gotten so much worse. I mean my inciting incident kind of sucked, as do most main character’s but TV was right. High school is so much worse!
At least when I’m alone in a magical simulation I can just deus ex machina my way out of it, no need for the power of friendship. At school, I can’t just magically get my homework done. And I can’t magically un-fall in love with the bad boy. And before in all the otomes I’ve played, I never understood it. Why get with the brooding loner when there’s a happy sunshine boy who never clogs the narrative with boring angst! But this brooding loner actually has a personality and super nerdy hobbies and I can’t just save scum my interactions with him. Or see how many hearts he has to make sure I’ll get the right ending. The worst thing, whoever the author of this book is, clearly isn’t on my side because I can not say anything cute or charming for the life of me! How am I supposed to get the boy when the author clearly has never talked to one?!
“Earth to CC. What’s got you all red?” My hopefully broody love interest teases, flicking my forehead with his face dangerously close to mine. His smirk is so infuriatingly cute and I lean back to stop myself from glitching. I had no clue what to say and just sat there like some game that was still loading.
No matter how hard school and crushes and all that jazz was, everyday I thank the Lord this isn’t a forbidden romance.
Part 4: Self-Insertion - Write 400 words of a self-insert into the world created in the part above, being sure to write yourself in an impartial style.
Charles was being watched. He just knew it, and though Sasha and Kyle were talking just as they were before, he knew they felt it too. Kyle’s smile gained an uncomfortable tilt to it, his brow somewhat furrowed. Sasha’s grip on the hilt of her sword tightened as well, even though there was no way she’d draw it in the middle of a busy marketplace. Well, maybe she would, Charles never knew what to expect with her.
The thing is, whenever something like this did happen, something actually would be happening. Kyle being taken as hostage was a common one, but if the watcher wanted to be original, they’d wait til the group passed a shadowy alleyway and knock them out then. There was one time where the person was some admirer asking for Sasha’s hand in marriage but that’s an exception, and fortunately not the rule. Instead, whoever the person was had simply been following them for perhaps half an hour. Their steps were quiet but clumsy and many times they’d disappear and reappear as if they got lost. Charles hoped it wasn’t a crime guild lackey, if this was who they recruited now, there was no hope for them.
Kyle’s ear twitched and he looked around, before stepping closer to the two of them and whispering, “So, are we just going to keep acting like we aren’t being followed. I’m kinda starting to freak out.”
Sasha just smiled and ruffled his hair, though Charles noticed she didn’t let go of her sword, “Don’t worry about it, as long as you don’t wander off again, we’re not letting you get kidnapped. I’m just hoping it's not a proposal again.” She then looked at Charles, who was absentmindedly flicking a coin in his hand. “I’m assuming you’re waiting for them to confront us?”
With a flick of his wrist, the coin disappeared from Charles’ hand and he let out a sigh, though it sounded more amused than tired, “I was, but this is getting boring. Let’s see what this is about, yeah?” He asked, and with a shared nod, they turned back and looked for their mystery assailant.
It wasn’t hard to find her. The second they turned, the person, who they realized was a girl, quickly turned away and tried to hide herself, ducking behind an empty stall. She looked different, foreign maybe, with attire he’d never seen before but nothing else out of the ordinary. She had human ears so she couldn’t be from the fog. The tips of her black braided hair was a shade of violet, which sure wasn’t normal but considering his hair was green and Sasha’s was pink, who was he to judge? Unfortunately, whatever clothing she was wearing was sleeved so he couldn’t tell if she had a guild mark, but from the clueless look on her face he doubted it.
She froze and shrunk back as the group approached, and the shock on Kyle and Sasha’s face was apparent, “It’s a child?”
Really, she looked thoroughly into her teens, tall enough and mature in stature. Clearly, she found issue with their verdict and blurted out, “I-I’m only a few years younger than you.” The girl muttered and quickly shut her mouth, but something about the way she looked at them showed more wonder than fear. Huh.
“And how’d you figure that out? Been following us for a while?” Charles said, an amused smile playing on his lips. It wasn’t threatening, he made sure it wasn’t and yet the girl stepped back as if knowing it was fake. Sasha stepped forward and nudged him in the shoulder.
“Don’t scare her,” she chided and then looked down at the girl, “What do you want with us? Are you lost?”
The girl took a deep breath, her voice was soft as she spoke, “I wasn’t trying to be weird or anything I just– I guess I’m lost. Honestly this all seems like a dream and it probably is but, I’m not from here. This world actually! I think.” She shoved her hands in her pockets and rocked on her heels, “I’m Jes– Actually call me Whimsy. Can you help me?”
Week 3: Perspectives
Part 1: Switching Perspectives - Write three separate scenes, the first and third with a different character and setting POV than the second.
Fritz did his best to savor the feeling of holding Kai’s hand, it must have been a once in a lifetime occurrence. Sure, the only reason the introverted boy was allowing himself to be led along by Fritz was most likely due to no one else knowing the way to the forbidden library, but why focus on the details. Especially when the prince would rather focus on his betrothed. Kai’s hands had a graceful quality to them, one that could only belong to someone who spent day in and day out practicing magic. They had warmed up in Fritz’s hands as well and something about the air around them felt so incredibly intimate.
He risked a look back, hoping to catch the slight reddening of the tips of Kai’s ears that was always so endearing. Instead Kai instantly locked eyes with him, and pulled his hand back before clearing his throat. “I can walk by myself.” He muttered, rubbing the part of his hand Fritz had just held, “How long is it until we reach the library?”
Fritz fell back so he could walk beside him and then leaned forward to meet his avoidant gaze. “I know, but can’t a prince treat their betrothed every once in a while? You work too hard. You know I’d carry you if you’d let me!” He replied, the last comment only getting a dry scoff out of Kai.
“You can barely carry your school books without your servants to help you,” He said, finally looking at Fritz as if he was a friend and not some high and mighty heir to the kingdom. He didn’t even try to hide the smile that crossed his face.
“You know that’s different! Magic isn’t allowed in the halls” He pouted and the small laugh Kai let out made the boy want to record it and play it over and over like a theme song to his day. Then, a small idea popped into his head and Fritz just couldn’t let it go, “But it's not like there are any teachers here… Upsy daisy!”
With a flick of his wrist and a flurry of giggles, Kai’s feet flew off the ground. “What–! Let me down!” He yelped but Fritz couldn’t just stop halfway. He slowly maneuvered Kai’s body towards him, and held his arms out as if to carry him. The second Fritz’s hand touched his back, the boy jolted and his ears turned the brightest shade of red.
“See, you’re as light as a feather! And don’t squirm so much, attacking your prince is against the law” He joked, thankful Kai was barely paying attention to his own warm cheeks. The proximity made him realize how cold Kai was. It only made Fritz want to pull him in closer but there was only so much he could do before Kai actually started fighting back, which he wasn’t keen on having to deal with. Kai must’ve been one of the most powerful Kalimi he’s met, nearly going toe to toe with Fritz, which was insane considering he isn’t royalty. The fact he hadn’t immediately tried to dispel his magic must’ve been a sign he doesn't mind it as much as he claims to.
That or he knows they’d both topple over if Fritz stopped levitating him.
“Why do you always insist on doing things like this? It’s embarrassing,” Kai said, tense but not moving half as much as before, his brow furrowed ever so slightly.
“Maybe I wouldn’t have to insist if you weren’t so stubborn. You never let anyone help you or even try to care about you. I saw your arm y’know? If you told me, I could’ve tried to heal it but instead you're hiding it and pretending you aren’t exhausted from trying to break the barrier.”
When he said that, Kai pulled his arm closer to himself and looked away before changing the subject completely, “You never answered my question. We’ve been walking for a while, shouldn’t we have reached the library by now?”
Fritz realized he was right. He’s never actually been inside the library before, so maybe his father told him wrong, but he expected the barrier to be the only obstacle. They must’ve been walking for more than five minutes. He didn’t want to tell Kai this though, the way he looked at Fritz when he effortlessly broke the barrier was something else entirely and he knew Kai would be disappointed if he revealed they were equally clueless, so all he said was. “Only a bit longer. Probably.”
But then the air around them shifted, the feeling nearly indiscernible, but Kai’s demeanor changed instantly. Immediately he was out of Fritz’s arms, his entire body on alert and before Fritz could even think to cast a barrier or defensive charm Kai yelled, “Watch out!” and pushed him out of the way. The ground split between them and Kai began to fall. And all Fritz could do was watch.
~
Kai should've known everything was too good to be true. They were heading to a forbidden library, one no one but the royal family can enter and even they avoid doing so. If it was only protected by some barrier, a strong one sure, but one Kai could’ve broken given more time, practically anyone would be able to get through it.
If Fritz hadn’t insisted on going with him, he would’ve sensed the trap much sooner, he just knew it. The prince just had a way of distracting him and no matter how much he protested, Kai felt himself relax the tiniest bit when he ‘held’ him. It wasn’t Kai’s fault the vibrations of Fritz’s laughter was just soothing and that the steady beat of his heart had this way of putting him to sleep. And he was just so warm, his body, his smile, his–
That wasn’t the point. Right now Kai was on the ground, somewhere, probably dangerous and made to ward off intruders. Trying to escape was top priority, next was finding out what exactly was calling him to the library in the first place. Fritz wasn’t even close to third, he’d be last place if anything. He looked around and took in his surroundings which was really just a lot of dust and dust and more dust.
Oh, wait there's more. A cobweb too.
But for some reason, he felt a tug at his chest. One all too similar to the one that’s been keeping him up at night and led him here in the first place. Kai put a hand on the wall in front of him and a wave of dizzying magic crashed over him, so hard he felt he would drown. With heavy ragged breaths he let go and suddenly the thought that maybe this wasn’t a trap but the destination appeared in his mind. It only made sense a secret library would have such an intoxicating effect on him. He’s always been affected by magic like that.
But if so, how did this place work? There were no symbols, no runes, no instructions or anything. Only that tug getting stronger and stronger in a way Kai could barely explain. One that only seemed to cease when he…
Kai readied himself, shaking out his hands which felt numb from how much exposure to magic they’ve gone through. Just one more time. He stepped forward and placed both hands on the wall. Magic crashed over him once more, surging and pulsing like a raging storm. He felt his body quake with the sensation but instead of fighting it, he allowed himself to be washed away. To drink it all in and as stupid and cartoonish drinking the ocean sounded, instead of overwhelmed, Kai felt powerful.
But there was something else. He needed to do something else, to let it out somewhere but how? He remembered the motion Fritz always did, the flick of the wrist and the subtle flexing of his fingers. He never understood how he could cast such powerful magic with such little effort but maybe that’s just what he needed. He copied the movement as best he could and the second he did, something clicked.
The pulsing calmed, feeling warm and steady like a heartbeat that was all too familiar to Kai and the walls around him began to move. He backed away, spent and aching, as the walls lit up like fairy lights and yelling echoed from above.
~
Why hadn’t Fritz been more careful. He should’ve noticed sooner. He was the prince for goodness sake, how did Kai figure out something was wrong before he did? Why did Fritz let himself be pushed out of the way? Why didn’t his magic work as he watched Kai fall?
His voice had gone hoarse from yelling down the pitch black ravine that had formed in front of him. Kai should’ve been able to hear him, why wasn’t he responding? The second he realized what happened Fritz had tried to jump down but a barrier was in its place, and this one wouldn’t break no matter how much he tried. If he was like Kai and paid attention in school, maybe he’d actually know dispelling magic but not a single incantation came to him as he tried over and over to fix everything.
Suddenly, the floor began to sink and the corridor lit up with iridescent light. What was happening! Was Kai okay? Every question, echoing in his mind, was answered when he saw Kai, at the bottom swaying unsteadily but perfectly okay, his eyes alight with pride and wonder.
“Kai!” He yelled and his body was moving before he could even realize, launching himself at the boy and instantly wrapping him in a hug. “You’re okay! And I think you revealed the library!” Fritz rambled, his words riddled with apologies, praise and everything in between. The cold stone walls had transformed to a deep mahogany, and only a few feet away from them was a massive door, clearly leading to the inside of the library.
Strangely enough, Kai barely reacted, instead he sank into Fritz arms, his entire body barely holding itself up, “It’s… It’s okay. We just… Let’s go inside.” He mumbled and even though the entire display made Fritz want to destroy something with how adorable it was, he wasn’t going to let anything else happen. It was time for him to be the responsible one!
“No! Let’s go back, you need to rest and what if this isn’t it! I’ve actually never been to the forbidden library, and I have no clue what’s happening. I wish I could do more but I don’t want us to get separated again.” He said and Fritz had no clue what he was expecting but Kai hugging him back wasn’t one of them. He was so unprepared for it in fact he nearly toppled over, his back hitting the wall behind him as Kai’s head rested on his shoulder.
“I’ll live, it's only a little magic. But…” And then he paused, and Fritz felt the boy's ears heat up as he said, “Can you carry me, Fritz? Only for a minute or two I–”
Kai didn’t even need to go on. The request made Fritz go almost entirely red and his magic flared up without thinking, causing both their feet to fly off the ground and Fritz struggling to control the sporadic surge of magic. Kai didn’t even react, and only when Fritz felt the steady rise and fall of his chest did he realize the boy had fallen asleep.
He managed to lower the two of them down and Fritz sank to the ground, hoping Kai was at least a bit comfortable on top of him. There was no way the prince could try to lift Kai off of him and for the first time in a long time, his magic was completely spent. Plus, he knew Kai would be mad at him if he woke up and realized they weren’t in the Forbidden Library anymore. For some reason, he’s always seemed so drawn to it, and now they were just inches away. And maybe, just maybe, Fritz didn’t want to move.
“Only for a minute…” The prince agreed, exhaustion catching up to him as well. The library could wait an hour or two, right?
Part 2: For this task, brainstorm a list of traits showing how and/or why your narrator is unreliable. Using that list, write a scene in 300 words, and make sure to leave details that will make your reader question the narrator and their credibility!
Character: Sunset - Forgetful, exaggerated and naive.
This wasn’t supposed to happen! This was the exact opposite of what was supposed to happen! I jumped in front of Flare, who was glaring at Midnight like she wanted to eat her alive. I honestly don’t know why I did, Flare could easily eat me alive too, and now that I think about it Midnight could definitely do that same. Instantly I regret my actions but I can’t stand down. I wasn’t about to let my friends eat eachother!
“Why are you protecting a cat? Get away from her!’ Flare seethed, and Midnight just hissed, her once smooth fur bristling dangerously. I looked between the two of them frantically. Then I remember I was the alpha, at least soon to be, and summoned up the courage of a whole pack of wolves!
“Flare! Trust me, Midnight’s like the most trustworthy, best cat I’ve met! Please don’t try to eat her!” I said in a super cool very brave way and I swear I saw Flare cower a little bit.
“The Sun Pack once trusted cats and look where it got us. They do nothing but lie and betray!” She said, stalking around me, and out of the corner of my eye I saw Midnight follow suit. Time to pull out the big guns!
I let out a strong howl like no other, but quiet enough that no other wolf heard me because I didn’t want to get in trouble, and said something like, “Flare, I am your alpha! If you disagree with me you disagree with the pack, but as your best friend I suppose I’ll humor your insolence. I put all my trust in Midnight since the day I met her, allow me to tell you the story.” And the two of them sat and listened super hard and were so impressed with each other they became best friends on the spot, just like me and Midnight did!
“That didn’t happen.” Midnight said plainly and I was jolted out of my thoughts. Crescent, her younger brother, was listening silently to my awesome story and I pouted as she interrupted me.
“What do you mean!” I whined, my ears sagging against my head as she clicked her tongue. Then she turned to Crescent and sat in front of him. “Let me tell you what actually happened, kay?”
Part 4: Metafiction - Brainstorm 2-3 literary tropes. Then, write 400 words about a character noticing and openly acknowledging or criticizing these tropes.
Being stuck in a simulation really messes you up. There’s this whole ptsd thing where you wonder, “Hey is any of this real? What if I wake up and notice that everyone I know and everything I do is just part of some sick game and nothing I’ve experienced actually matters?” And yeah that a lot of it. Like a big part, but there’s also this bit of self-awareness whenever something coincidental or tropey happens. And at first it’s a bit funny, the stuff where you joke about being the main character to your friends, but its to the point where I’m pretty sure my life is just some crappy book written by some fifth grader.
Actually scratch that, I’m sure. I mean, to start off, I’m basically the definition of the chosen one. Dead dad, homeschooled, magic powers I wasn’t aware of till recently, stupidly powerful with no explanation. I even have a disgruntled mentor who can't stand me, but I know he’s just acting and secretly thinks of me like family. I mean who wouldn’t? But anyway, there’s that whole thing but now that I’m in school I think it’s gotten so much worse. I mean my inciting incident kind of sucked, as do most main character’s but TV was right. High school is so much worse!
At least when I’m alone in a magical simulation I can just deus ex machina my way out of it, no need for the power of friendship. At school, I can’t just magically get my homework done. And I can’t magically un-fall in love with the bad boy. And before in all the otomes I’ve played, I never understood it. Why get with the brooding loner when there’s a happy sunshine boy who never clogs the narrative with boring angst! But this brooding loner actually has a personality and super nerdy hobbies and I can’t just save scum my interactions with him. Or see how many hearts he has to make sure I’ll get the right ending. The worst thing, whoever the author of this book is, clearly isn’t on my side because I can not say anything cute or charming for the life of me! How am I supposed to get the boy when the author clearly has never talked to one?!
“Earth to CC. What’s got you all red?” My hopefully broody love interest teases, flicking my forehead with his face dangerously close to mine. His smirk is so infuriatingly cute and I lean back to stop myself from glitching. I had no clue what to say and just sat there like some game that was still loading.
No matter how hard school and crushes and all that jazz was, everyday I thank the Lord this isn’t a forbidden romance.
Part 4: Self-Insertion - Write 400 words of a self-insert into the world created in the part above, being sure to write yourself in an impartial style.
Charles was being watched. He just knew it, and though Sasha and Kyle were talking just as they were before, he knew they felt it too. Kyle’s smile gained an uncomfortable tilt to it, his brow somewhat furrowed. Sasha’s grip on the hilt of her sword tightened as well, even though there was no way she’d draw it in the middle of a busy marketplace. Well, maybe she would, Charles never knew what to expect with her.
The thing is, whenever something like this did happen, something actually would be happening. Kyle being taken as hostage was a common one, but if the watcher wanted to be original, they’d wait til the group passed a shadowy alleyway and knock them out then. There was one time where the person was some admirer asking for Sasha’s hand in marriage but that’s an exception, and fortunately not the rule. Instead, whoever the person was had simply been following them for perhaps half an hour. Their steps were quiet but clumsy and many times they’d disappear and reappear as if they got lost. Charles hoped it wasn’t a crime guild lackey, if this was who they recruited now, there was no hope for them.
Kyle’s ear twitched and he looked around, before stepping closer to the two of them and whispering, “So, are we just going to keep acting like we aren’t being followed. I’m kinda starting to freak out.”
Sasha just smiled and ruffled his hair, though Charles noticed she didn’t let go of her sword, “Don’t worry about it, as long as you don’t wander off again, we’re not letting you get kidnapped. I’m just hoping it's not a proposal again.” She then looked at Charles, who was absentmindedly flicking a coin in his hand. “I’m assuming you’re waiting for them to confront us?”
With a flick of his wrist, the coin disappeared from Charles’ hand and he let out a sigh, though it sounded more amused than tired, “I was, but this is getting boring. Let’s see what this is about, yeah?” He asked, and with a shared nod, they turned back and looked for their mystery assailant.
It wasn’t hard to find her. The second they turned, the person, who they realized was a girl, quickly turned away and tried to hide herself, ducking behind an empty stall. She looked different, foreign maybe, with attire he’d never seen before but nothing else out of the ordinary. She had human ears so she couldn’t be from the fog. The tips of her black braided hair was a shade of violet, which sure wasn’t normal but considering his hair was green and Sasha’s was pink, who was he to judge? Unfortunately, whatever clothing she was wearing was sleeved so he couldn’t tell if she had a guild mark, but from the clueless look on her face he doubted it.
She froze and shrunk back as the group approached, and the shock on Kyle and Sasha’s face was apparent, “It’s a child?”
Really, she looked thoroughly into her teens, tall enough and mature in stature. Clearly, she found issue with their verdict and blurted out, “I-I’m only a few years younger than you.” The girl muttered and quickly shut her mouth, but something about the way she looked at them showed more wonder than fear. Huh.
“And how’d you figure that out? Been following us for a while?” Charles said, an amused smile playing on his lips. It wasn’t threatening, he made sure it wasn’t and yet the girl stepped back as if knowing it was fake. Sasha stepped forward and nudged him in the shoulder.
“Don’t scare her,” she chided and then looked down at the girl, “What do you want with us? Are you lost?”
The girl took a deep breath, her voice was soft as she spoke, “I wasn’t trying to be weird or anything I just– I guess I’m lost. Honestly this all seems like a dream and it probably is but, I’m not from here. This world actually! I think.” She shoved her hands in her pockets and rocked on her heels, “I’m Jes– Actually call me Whimsy. Can you help me?”
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Weekly #3 ✧
Part 1: Switching Perspectives
Three scenes of 100 words switching perspectives
Captain Catfish May stood at the helm of The Marriot, relishing the rare moment of peace as the ship clipped through the night’s waters.
“We’re almost there, Pa,” she said to the stars.
Cat patted the smoothly worn wood of the ship’s helm fondly.
“Just a few more days, that’s all it is. Then we’ll find the treasure.”
She sighed and allowed herself a moment to cross her arms on top of the helm and rest her head on them, staring up at the stars that had guided her her whole life.
“I’m going to find it for you, find it all,” she whispered. “And when my name’s in that history textbook, I’ll tell them it's all because of the fearless Captain Will May. I’ll them them it’s all because of you, Pa”
The stars seemed to wink and twinkle at her from their perches high above.
“Captain May!”
The door leading below deck slammed open, and a worried sailor tumbled out. Cat snapped to attention.
“What is it?” she barked, staring down at him.
His eyes were wide with panic. “Captain, there’s a problem.”
Inspector Jack Daniels lay in bed, anything but asleep. He twiddled his thumbs while his eyes seemed to bore holes into the wall across his room.
They’re out there somewhere. The thought pounded incessantly in his mind.
The windows rattled as gales swept by the small house, howling with the rain. He jumped a little when he heard a large clap of thunder.
The storm’s just freaking you out. It’ll be fine.
But after the thunder subsided, he could dimly make out another sound, the ringing of the home phone from somewhere deep in his house.
Sighing, he tried his best to quietly swing himself out of bed and leave the room.
Who on earth would be calling at this hour?
Lightning lit up the hallway as he padded into the kitchen. Jack squinted at the home phone’s screen: the caller’s number was slightly familiar. He picked up the phone.
“Hello?” he asked.
“Inspector Daniels?” came the voice from the other end of the line.
Good grief, it's like she’s got a sixth sense.
“Hello Captain May. Why are you calling me in the middle of the night?” he asked, trying to mask his increasing worry with humor.
“Now is not the time for frivolities, Inspector.” she said sharply. “Now you know I am absolutely unparalleled in the field of navigation, especially by sea, and I have very rarely ever needed assistance, especially from the likes of you-”
He cleared his throat. “Frivolities, Captain?”
“Right.” She hesitated. “I need your help, Daniels.”
Katie Daniels wrestled her husband for the keys to his car.
“Just let me drive,” she grunted, snatching at them. “We could take my truck; it’ll probably be better in the rain.”
Jack dangled them out of her reach. “It’ll be fine, Katie. I’m just going down to the office. You just woke up. I don’t want to bother you.”
She stopped and put her hands on her hips. “And you just spent the night staring into the abyss. Do you really think that’s exhibiting safe driving behavior?”
She raised her eyebrows sassily.
“Besides,” she smiled and gestured at him. “You’re really not even dressed for going out.”
He gaped at her and looked down at his pajamas. “Well you aren’t, too-”
Jack trailed off as he noticed that she had changed and was dressed for the day.
“Alright, you win,” he muttered, handing her the car keys.
Katie laughed as they got into the car and she began to pull out of the garage. “Honestly, sometimes I don’t know how you survived on that ship all by yourself.”
He leaned his head against the passenger window, staring out into the dark and stormy night.
“I wouldn’t of without Cat’s help.”
“You wouldn’t have been stuck there in the first place without her ‘help’ either,” Katie reminded him.
She remembered when he called her that day and told her he wasn’t coming home that night. And that that night may turn into two, or three. Or weeks, as it turned out.
It was hard to convince a slightly crazy lady who believed she was a pirate to interrupt her plans to take you back home.
She sighed and tried to refocus on driving through the night. The storm battered Jack’s little car and its headlights had a difficult time cutting through the rain.
“We have to help them, Katie,” Jack said gently.
“Okay, you have to help them. I’m just coming along because there’s no way I’m missing out this time.”
“Yeah.” He trailed off. “I think you’d like her.”
Katie snorted. “What makes you think that?”
“Well, she’s like a mixture of ‘aunt’ and ‘fairy godmother’, so she’s not all that bad.”
“A winning endorsement – not that bad.”
Jack rolled his eyes, grinning. “Okay, you get it.”
Katie tapped her fingers on the wheel.
“Yeah, for what it's worth, I do. But I just hope she doesn’t end up in Davy Jones’ locker before I get to meet her.
He sighed and stared back out the window.
“Me too,” he said. “Me too.”
862/300 words
Part 2: Unreliable narrators
A 300 word scene with an unreliable narrator
(this is absolute ridiculousness, do not read it if you want to save your braincells)
Jack (not daniels, though, my other one lol)
Me beating Chip at Mario Kart? A sign!
Mom making her famous meatloaf? A sign!
And my best friend showing up at my house with her dad? The biggest sign ever!
She was being kind of weird, too, which I should’ve noticed was also, you guessed it, a sign. I mean, she probably knew what was going on! What was going to happen!
Because, I mean, she was there. When it happened. When her dad pulled me aside for a “chat” (totally a sign because he didn't say it like we were going to talk about the weather). She was there when her dad said the best words ever (which I didn’t think were the best earlier): “Jack, would you like to work for us?”
Total epicness.
Except I didn’t think it was epicness because, like, mister I am 13 years old, why would I work for your accounting firm or whatever. BUT HE DOESN’T WORK FOR AN ACCOUNTING FIRM!!!
She was there so she could patiently explain to me, her peer and fellow kid, that her dad is actually (wait for it) a spy!!!! !!! ! And works for a private intelligence company! !!! And they want ME! (I need more explanation points to stress the total epicness and awesomeness)
Except she got kind of snivelly after that last part because apparently she also really wanted to do this, too and she’s basically a spy already or whatever. I just told her it would be great because then we could work together because, come on, being a spy?! With your best friend?! Cool.
So anyway, apparently he’s very impressed with my mad computer skills, which he should be because this is like, a gift! Not to brag, but I’m kinda awesome at it.
I mean, I don’t even want to think about the legalities of this right now because it's too awesome. I can’t tell my parents because, duh, top secret spy work. But I at least have Fox!
That’s what her dad said I have to call her now. It’s her name in the agency since she’s the kid of its employees. She says she wants it to be her spy name, too, if she becomes one. Awesome! (but weird, she doesn’t seem like a “Fox” to me)
Anyway, I’m starting to think this is something like destiny. Because the signs were all there. Why would I have these talents if not to do something awesome with them? Why would I be friends with Fox if not to be given this opportunity?
She says it was all part of some plan. I agree, but I think the author of that plan was a gal named “Fate”, not Luther and Ivy, or whatever her parents call themselves now.
I can’t wait. This is going to be life changing.
493/300
Part 3: Metafiction
400 words of a character acknowledging tropes used
It is a truth universally acknowledged that on a girl’s sixteenth birthday she becomes the main character of her life and is therefore subject to the plot and all it promises or threatens.
Too Austenian?
Lisa didn’t particularly care about cliched openings as long as they served their purpose. She had gotten used to cliches in her now sixteen years of this life, and was rather wondering about whatever was waiting to befall upon her today, her sixteenth birthday.
Hunter wanted cake. He hoped Lisa’s was good and that they’d also hurry up and eat it already.
“Hunter!” Lisa shouted, interrupting his musings. “Would you just let me be the protagonist for once?”
She rolled her eyes as she took over the narrative again. Blasted orphans. They always thought that they could be the main character all time just because they saved the world and whatnot.
She stared at her friends, happily seated at the table and chattering. The adults were in the kitchen, most likely having an interesting time, as her parents were here as well as the circus leaders. Her brother was … somewhere, which worried her. It would be just like Vincent to come barging in with some questline to kick off her birthday.
However, nothing happened.
The adults walked in, Vincent in tow, and presented her with a cake, chocolate with buttercream frosting. They sang “Happy Birthday”, then Hunter insisted on regaling her with the version from The Emperor's New Groove, of course. She cut them each a slice, giving Hunter the smallest as retribution, of course. Lisa sat in silence as she enjoyed her cake and the others laughed and talked around her. It was perfectly … ordinary.
The cake was good, but Hunter wished he had a bigger slice.
“Seriously, Hunter?” Lisa huffed.
He snickered and reached for the knife and cake.
“Why do you want the narrative so badly?” he asked as Alexandria batted his hands away from the cake.
“Firstly, to save the audience from the drudgery that is you and your thoughts,” she said, looking pointedly at him.
“And secondly…” She set down her fork. “Because I think something is going to happen to me, and I need to be prepared.”
“Okay, why do you think something’s going to happen?” West asked incredulously, butting into the conversation.
“Because it’s my sixteenth birthday!” she cried out. “And I’m a girl!”
He looked at Hunter, who shrugged.
“Not following,” West said. “What does that have to do with anything?”
Lisa rolled her eyes. Boys could be so unobservant.
“An inciting incident happening on a girl’s sixteenth birthday is a very common trope. The author may spring it upon us as I am the first girl here to have turned sixteen.”
“Why’s it only girls?” Hunter muttered to himself.
“I don’t know!” Lisa growled. “I think it’s stupid, but it’s not like we haven't been subject to stupid tropes before.”
Now she got the group’s attention. Lisa stood and began to pace back and forth.
“Hunter.” She pointed at the gray-haired boy who was trying to sneak another piece of cake again. “You’re an orphan who literally ran away to the circus. Need I say more?”
He shrugged. “Eh, you have a point there.”
“West.” She moved her finger to him.
“Woah, I don’t know about you all, but I-”
She cut him off. “You also lost your parents. Luckily the author was kind enough to give one back. But you can’t deny that we literally are the definition of the ‘grumpy one and the sunny one’ friendship.”
He crossed his arms.
“That’s not stupid,” he said defiantly.
“Aw, I’m so touched,” she shot back sarcastically. “But whatever. Alexandria, you’re that one person who wants the main character to return. Laurel,”
She trailed off. “I can’t actually think of anything, Laurel. You’re just nice.”
“That’s okay!” Laurel chirped.
Lisa took a deep breath and faced the group once more. “And me?” She stabbed her finger at herself. “I am the most stereotypical vampire girl anyone could ever come up with. Which sucks, because I still manage to be like that even if vampires in this world are nothing like those in literature and folklore. Like, that’s just impressive, at this point.”
“You do like to sit in the dark a lot and you are kinda pale,” Hunter said.
“See!” She waved a hand at Hunter. “Someone gets it.”
“I still don’t think anything’s going to happen to you,” West said, shrugging.
And then, to Lisa’s momentary delight, but also horror, the doorbell rang.
757/400
Part 4: Self-Insertion
Place a self-insert in the story above in 400 words
The house they were residing in had a dining room located just off of the main foyer. While it was a small place, tucked inside a large, sprawling wood, the dining room managed to comfortably fit all the members of the party and remain fairly open to the rest of the house.
For this reason, all Lisa could do was stare from her proverbial soapbox in the dining room at the front door, which creaked open by some yet unseen hand, by some yet unseen person.
But instead of a person, what first appeared was a large stack of boxes, followed by a pair of feet wearing black tennis shoes.
Wearing black trainers, Lisa corrected herself.
The person set down the boxes on the foyer floor and popped back up.
“Hello, y’all!”
It was a girl, slightly older than Lisa, with dark brown hair pulled into a simple braid. Hispanic, American accent, perhaps slightly southern, and, most oddly, familiar.
Lisa’s family stepped forward, cutting the girl off from the dining room.
“Who are you?” her father asked curtly,
The girl opened her mouth to speak, then paused.
“Hmm.” She tapped her chin. “You can call me Hail, how about that?”
“That doesn’t answer the question,” Vincent pointed out.
“Ack.” She clasped her hands together. “Vincent! This is crazy. You know you guys are so much taller in real life.”
Hail looked down at herself.
“I forgot that I’m somewhat short compared to most people. Well, not most people but, like, guys. And also your family is supposed to be tall, so that's not really a good comparison anyway.”
Lisa looked at her friend’s faces as the girl rambled. They seemed equally confused.
“This girl is nuts,” West whispered.
“Oh my gosh, West! Hi!” Hail waved at him and studied the group at the table.
“How does she know who we are?” Hunter hissed.
Hail laughed. “I just wanted to stop by and say happy birthday. I brought presents, since I always imagine myself walking through the door carrying presents, but I can’t think of anything to put in them.”
She snapped her fingers and the pile of boxes disappeared.
“That’s better. Now, can I, um, join in?” She pointed at the table. “I need to finish the weekly and that cake looks delicious.”
She tried to scoot past Vincent, but he blocked her from walking into the dining room.
“Gah, curse you and your tallness,” she muttered. “I’ll just go by your mom.”
She pivoted and stepped through Lisa’s mother.
Lisa’s eyes widened as she saw her mother whip around angrily while Hail scuttled to take a seat at the table.
“She doesn’t have much substance, does she? I’ll have to fix that one day. Except for her nose,” Hail conceded, pulling out a chair and plopping down in it. “Her nose does because Vincent has her nose. And Vincent’s probably like in Technicolor because I think about him and draw him all the time.”
Vincent’s hand flew to his face as he looked at his mother with concern. Hail giggled, then turned to the group seated at the table.
“Who are you?” Lisa whispered, shocked.
“Oh that’s easy.” Hail grinned and cut herself a slice of cake. “I’m the author of course.”
543/400
2655/1400
Part 1: Switching Perspectives
Three scenes of 100 words switching perspectives
Captain Catfish May stood at the helm of The Marriot, relishing the rare moment of peace as the ship clipped through the night’s waters.
“We’re almost there, Pa,” she said to the stars.
Cat patted the smoothly worn wood of the ship’s helm fondly.
“Just a few more days, that’s all it is. Then we’ll find the treasure.”
She sighed and allowed herself a moment to cross her arms on top of the helm and rest her head on them, staring up at the stars that had guided her her whole life.
“I’m going to find it for you, find it all,” she whispered. “And when my name’s in that history textbook, I’ll tell them it's all because of the fearless Captain Will May. I’ll them them it’s all because of you, Pa”
The stars seemed to wink and twinkle at her from their perches high above.
“Captain May!”
The door leading below deck slammed open, and a worried sailor tumbled out. Cat snapped to attention.
“What is it?” she barked, staring down at him.
His eyes were wide with panic. “Captain, there’s a problem.”
Inspector Jack Daniels lay in bed, anything but asleep. He twiddled his thumbs while his eyes seemed to bore holes into the wall across his room.
They’re out there somewhere. The thought pounded incessantly in his mind.
The windows rattled as gales swept by the small house, howling with the rain. He jumped a little when he heard a large clap of thunder.
The storm’s just freaking you out. It’ll be fine.
But after the thunder subsided, he could dimly make out another sound, the ringing of the home phone from somewhere deep in his house.
Sighing, he tried his best to quietly swing himself out of bed and leave the room.
Who on earth would be calling at this hour?
Lightning lit up the hallway as he padded into the kitchen. Jack squinted at the home phone’s screen: the caller’s number was slightly familiar. He picked up the phone.
“Hello?” he asked.
“Inspector Daniels?” came the voice from the other end of the line.
Good grief, it's like she’s got a sixth sense.
“Hello Captain May. Why are you calling me in the middle of the night?” he asked, trying to mask his increasing worry with humor.
“Now is not the time for frivolities, Inspector.” she said sharply. “Now you know I am absolutely unparalleled in the field of navigation, especially by sea, and I have very rarely ever needed assistance, especially from the likes of you-”
He cleared his throat. “Frivolities, Captain?”
“Right.” She hesitated. “I need your help, Daniels.”
Katie Daniels wrestled her husband for the keys to his car.
“Just let me drive,” she grunted, snatching at them. “We could take my truck; it’ll probably be better in the rain.”
Jack dangled them out of her reach. “It’ll be fine, Katie. I’m just going down to the office. You just woke up. I don’t want to bother you.”
She stopped and put her hands on her hips. “And you just spent the night staring into the abyss. Do you really think that’s exhibiting safe driving behavior?”
She raised her eyebrows sassily.
“Besides,” she smiled and gestured at him. “You’re really not even dressed for going out.”
He gaped at her and looked down at his pajamas. “Well you aren’t, too-”
Jack trailed off as he noticed that she had changed and was dressed for the day.
“Alright, you win,” he muttered, handing her the car keys.
Katie laughed as they got into the car and she began to pull out of the garage. “Honestly, sometimes I don’t know how you survived on that ship all by yourself.”
He leaned his head against the passenger window, staring out into the dark and stormy night.
“I wouldn’t of without Cat’s help.”
“You wouldn’t have been stuck there in the first place without her ‘help’ either,” Katie reminded him.
She remembered when he called her that day and told her he wasn’t coming home that night. And that that night may turn into two, or three. Or weeks, as it turned out.
It was hard to convince a slightly crazy lady who believed she was a pirate to interrupt her plans to take you back home.
She sighed and tried to refocus on driving through the night. The storm battered Jack’s little car and its headlights had a difficult time cutting through the rain.
“We have to help them, Katie,” Jack said gently.
“Okay, you have to help them. I’m just coming along because there’s no way I’m missing out this time.”
“Yeah.” He trailed off. “I think you’d like her.”
Katie snorted. “What makes you think that?”
“Well, she’s like a mixture of ‘aunt’ and ‘fairy godmother’, so she’s not all that bad.”
“A winning endorsement – not that bad.”
Jack rolled his eyes, grinning. “Okay, you get it.”
Katie tapped her fingers on the wheel.
“Yeah, for what it's worth, I do. But I just hope she doesn’t end up in Davy Jones’ locker before I get to meet her.
He sighed and stared back out the window.
“Me too,” he said. “Me too.”
862/300 words
Part 2: Unreliable narrators
A 300 word scene with an unreliable narrator
(this is absolute ridiculousness, do not read it if you want to save your braincells)
Jack (not daniels, though, my other one lol)
- Naive and too focused on what is happening to himself
- Filters the world through his own happiness and doesn’t notice the feelings of others
- Biased towards the objective good of an event
Me beating Chip at Mario Kart? A sign!
Mom making her famous meatloaf? A sign!
And my best friend showing up at my house with her dad? The biggest sign ever!
She was being kind of weird, too, which I should’ve noticed was also, you guessed it, a sign. I mean, she probably knew what was going on! What was going to happen!
Because, I mean, she was there. When it happened. When her dad pulled me aside for a “chat” (totally a sign because he didn't say it like we were going to talk about the weather). She was there when her dad said the best words ever (which I didn’t think were the best earlier): “Jack, would you like to work for us?”
Total epicness.
Except I didn’t think it was epicness because, like, mister I am 13 years old, why would I work for your accounting firm or whatever. BUT HE DOESN’T WORK FOR AN ACCOUNTING FIRM!!!
She was there so she could patiently explain to me, her peer and fellow kid, that her dad is actually (wait for it) a spy!!!! !!! ! And works for a private intelligence company! !!! And they want ME! (I need more explanation points to stress the total epicness and awesomeness)
Except she got kind of snivelly after that last part because apparently she also really wanted to do this, too and she’s basically a spy already or whatever. I just told her it would be great because then we could work together because, come on, being a spy?! With your best friend?! Cool.
So anyway, apparently he’s very impressed with my mad computer skills, which he should be because this is like, a gift! Not to brag, but I’m kinda awesome at it.
I mean, I don’t even want to think about the legalities of this right now because it's too awesome. I can’t tell my parents because, duh, top secret spy work. But I at least have Fox!
That’s what her dad said I have to call her now. It’s her name in the agency since she’s the kid of its employees. She says she wants it to be her spy name, too, if she becomes one. Awesome! (but weird, she doesn’t seem like a “Fox” to me)
Anyway, I’m starting to think this is something like destiny. Because the signs were all there. Why would I have these talents if not to do something awesome with them? Why would I be friends with Fox if not to be given this opportunity?
She says it was all part of some plan. I agree, but I think the author of that plan was a gal named “Fate”, not Luther and Ivy, or whatever her parents call themselves now.
I can’t wait. This is going to be life changing.
493/300
Part 3: Metafiction
400 words of a character acknowledging tropes used
- Birthday
- Main character
- Grumpy/sunny
- Stereotypes
It is a truth universally acknowledged that on a girl’s sixteenth birthday she becomes the main character of her life and is therefore subject to the plot and all it promises or threatens.
Too Austenian?
Lisa didn’t particularly care about cliched openings as long as they served their purpose. She had gotten used to cliches in her now sixteen years of this life, and was rather wondering about whatever was waiting to befall upon her today, her sixteenth birthday.
Hunter wanted cake. He hoped Lisa’s was good and that they’d also hurry up and eat it already.
“Hunter!” Lisa shouted, interrupting his musings. “Would you just let me be the protagonist for once?”
She rolled her eyes as she took over the narrative again. Blasted orphans. They always thought that they could be the main character all time just because they saved the world and whatnot.
She stared at her friends, happily seated at the table and chattering. The adults were in the kitchen, most likely having an interesting time, as her parents were here as well as the circus leaders. Her brother was … somewhere, which worried her. It would be just like Vincent to come barging in with some questline to kick off her birthday.
However, nothing happened.
The adults walked in, Vincent in tow, and presented her with a cake, chocolate with buttercream frosting. They sang “Happy Birthday”, then Hunter insisted on regaling her with the version from The Emperor's New Groove, of course. She cut them each a slice, giving Hunter the smallest as retribution, of course. Lisa sat in silence as she enjoyed her cake and the others laughed and talked around her. It was perfectly … ordinary.
The cake was good, but Hunter wished he had a bigger slice.
“Seriously, Hunter?” Lisa huffed.
He snickered and reached for the knife and cake.
“Why do you want the narrative so badly?” he asked as Alexandria batted his hands away from the cake.
“Firstly, to save the audience from the drudgery that is you and your thoughts,” she said, looking pointedly at him.
“And secondly…” She set down her fork. “Because I think something is going to happen to me, and I need to be prepared.”
“Okay, why do you think something’s going to happen?” West asked incredulously, butting into the conversation.
“Because it’s my sixteenth birthday!” she cried out. “And I’m a girl!”
He looked at Hunter, who shrugged.
“Not following,” West said. “What does that have to do with anything?”
Lisa rolled her eyes. Boys could be so unobservant.
“An inciting incident happening on a girl’s sixteenth birthday is a very common trope. The author may spring it upon us as I am the first girl here to have turned sixteen.”
“Why’s it only girls?” Hunter muttered to himself.
“I don’t know!” Lisa growled. “I think it’s stupid, but it’s not like we haven't been subject to stupid tropes before.”
Now she got the group’s attention. Lisa stood and began to pace back and forth.
“Hunter.” She pointed at the gray-haired boy who was trying to sneak another piece of cake again. “You’re an orphan who literally ran away to the circus. Need I say more?”
He shrugged. “Eh, you have a point there.”
“West.” She moved her finger to him.
“Woah, I don’t know about you all, but I-”
She cut him off. “You also lost your parents. Luckily the author was kind enough to give one back. But you can’t deny that we literally are the definition of the ‘grumpy one and the sunny one’ friendship.”
He crossed his arms.
“That’s not stupid,” he said defiantly.
“Aw, I’m so touched,” she shot back sarcastically. “But whatever. Alexandria, you’re that one person who wants the main character to return. Laurel,”
She trailed off. “I can’t actually think of anything, Laurel. You’re just nice.”
“That’s okay!” Laurel chirped.
Lisa took a deep breath and faced the group once more. “And me?” She stabbed her finger at herself. “I am the most stereotypical vampire girl anyone could ever come up with. Which sucks, because I still manage to be like that even if vampires in this world are nothing like those in literature and folklore. Like, that’s just impressive, at this point.”
“You do like to sit in the dark a lot and you are kinda pale,” Hunter said.
“See!” She waved a hand at Hunter. “Someone gets it.”
“I still don’t think anything’s going to happen to you,” West said, shrugging.
And then, to Lisa’s momentary delight, but also horror, the doorbell rang.
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Part 4: Self-Insertion
Place a self-insert in the story above in 400 words
The house they were residing in had a dining room located just off of the main foyer. While it was a small place, tucked inside a large, sprawling wood, the dining room managed to comfortably fit all the members of the party and remain fairly open to the rest of the house.
For this reason, all Lisa could do was stare from her proverbial soapbox in the dining room at the front door, which creaked open by some yet unseen hand, by some yet unseen person.
But instead of a person, what first appeared was a large stack of boxes, followed by a pair of feet wearing black tennis shoes.
Wearing black trainers, Lisa corrected herself.
The person set down the boxes on the foyer floor and popped back up.
“Hello, y’all!”
It was a girl, slightly older than Lisa, with dark brown hair pulled into a simple braid. Hispanic, American accent, perhaps slightly southern, and, most oddly, familiar.
Lisa’s family stepped forward, cutting the girl off from the dining room.
“Who are you?” her father asked curtly,
The girl opened her mouth to speak, then paused.
“Hmm.” She tapped her chin. “You can call me Hail, how about that?”
“That doesn’t answer the question,” Vincent pointed out.
“Ack.” She clasped her hands together. “Vincent! This is crazy. You know you guys are so much taller in real life.”
Hail looked down at herself.
“I forgot that I’m somewhat short compared to most people. Well, not most people but, like, guys. And also your family is supposed to be tall, so that's not really a good comparison anyway.”
Lisa looked at her friend’s faces as the girl rambled. They seemed equally confused.
“This girl is nuts,” West whispered.
“Oh my gosh, West! Hi!” Hail waved at him and studied the group at the table.
“How does she know who we are?” Hunter hissed.
Hail laughed. “I just wanted to stop by and say happy birthday. I brought presents, since I always imagine myself walking through the door carrying presents, but I can’t think of anything to put in them.”
She snapped her fingers and the pile of boxes disappeared.
“That’s better. Now, can I, um, join in?” She pointed at the table. “I need to finish the weekly and that cake looks delicious.”
She tried to scoot past Vincent, but he blocked her from walking into the dining room.
“Gah, curse you and your tallness,” she muttered. “I’ll just go by your mom.”
She pivoted and stepped through Lisa’s mother.
Lisa’s eyes widened as she saw her mother whip around angrily while Hail scuttled to take a seat at the table.
“She doesn’t have much substance, does she? I’ll have to fix that one day. Except for her nose,” Hail conceded, pulling out a chair and plopping down in it. “Her nose does because Vincent has her nose. And Vincent’s probably like in Technicolor because I think about him and draw him all the time.”
Vincent’s hand flew to his face as he looked at his mother with concern. Hail giggled, then turned to the group seated at the table.
“Who are you?” Lisa whispered, shocked.
“Oh that’s easy.” Hail grinned and cut herself a slice of cake. “I’m the author of course.”
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PART 1: Switching Perspectives
Even before she hatched from her egg, Chervil knew she was part of the great network of the turtles, stretching back millenia. Her instincts ran deep. The minds of her pondmates swirled around her as she nestled in the round sphere, a self-contained universe, buried in the dirt. She was a piece of a whole, unfathomably large, the wisdom of the ancients.
Her ancestors had seen drastic changes across the planet before. Some natural, some created. And the one that was about to happen, well- it was a little of both.
The supervolcano.
As Chervil pushed her way out of her egg, tiny egg tooth splitting the soft shell, her small body felt the tremors in the ground. And already, she understood. Though it was her eyes’ first glimpse of the world, the minds around her, within her, spoke of what was to come.
Her legs carried her through the dirt, towards the lake, as frantic as a turtle can manage.
And the eruption began.
Death circled high above the world, gazing down upon the steady stream of ash and smoke that had begun billowing forth. Soon, the monster her people had awoken would invoke her sacred spirit, her namesake. She was a vessel for Death itself. Perhaps more than anyone, she comprehended what was about to happen.
Yet, flocks of birds churned around the site of the volcano, as if drawn to the impending doom. Their mechanism was all set up, its parts glinting in the sunlight when a ray happened to pierce the heavy smoke. But would it work?
Death did not know. The inventions of the common birds were not her place to meddle in. She followed a far more ancient ritual.
One that would soon bring about her own end.
A crow, one of her followers, flapped up beside her. “You must come,” he squawked. “The rest of us await by the Turtle Pond for your orders.”
Alarm flashed through Death. “They aren’t safe there!” Curving her wings back, she went into a dive. Vultures were not meant for such maneuvers, but the power of the spirits was on her side.
She reached them just in time.
Fire began to rain from the sky.
“Go!” she urged her followers. “Join the rest of the flocks!”
It seemed insane, to order them towards the danger. But the mechanism was working.
Death chose to believe it would continue its purpose.
She spread her wings to join the others- and that’s when she noticed the turtle.
Turtles are not known for their speed. Newly-hatched Chervil was no exception. As molten rock came tumbling down all around, she could not outrun her doomsday.
A ball of flame came hurtling directly toward her.
Every mind screamed in chorus.
Then a shadow swooped in. Its mind was different. It hummed with a melancholic peacefulness, and Chervil knew instantly that this was a goddess. She exuded an energy almost as ancient as the turtles’.
And she had chosen Chervil as her angel.
Faster than a turtle can comprehend, the shadow’s wide black wings shielded Chervil from the fireball. An explosion. Smoldering feathers.
The last remnants of the goddess’s mind embedded themselves into Chervil’s. A separate mind than the network of the turtles, yet syncing up perfectly with the hatchling’s brainwaves.
Chervil pulled herself into the lake, diving deep into the safety of the water. The end of days passed by. The ground fell silent and still once more, leaving a smoking caldera.
Seasons passed, bleak and sunless.
But turtles are patient.
Life builds itself again upon the remains of the fallen.
Chervil now understood that better than anyone.
The new vessel of Death had arrived.
PART 2: Unreliable Narrators
Character: Marigold
her memory is deteriorating and she constantly confuses the past and present, as well as her thoughts and reality
sometimes does not recognize family members
she loves her family and completely overlooks that her children might have evil motives; tends to be naively optimistic at times
she has lost some of her senses, so she struggles to accurately interpret what is going on around her
Deary me, is it time to wake up already? Oh, I was having the most wonderful dream… You were in it, Pebble! You had grown these wondrous long wings and were soaring through the clouds. I just know you’re going to have an amazing time when you fledge, Pebble. Your feathers are already coming in, aren’t they? Why, yes, they are! Such pretty, long, brown feathers…
Oh- where are you going? Do you have to go so soon? Ah, off to smell the flowers, I’ll bet. I know how you love them. I’d join you, but, ah… I’m still so tired… Must be from playing so much yesterday. I’ll just rest a bit. I’ll come out soon…
It’s so lonely in here, by myself, though. Hmm? What’s that? There’s someone else there? I can’t quite hear you… Ah, there you are- Wait, who are you again? Your scent is familiar…
Parsnip?
I don’t think I know anyone named Parsnip. Where did you come from?
My egg? That can’t be right… My eggs haven’t hatched yet, silly!
I’m not sure, actually, now that I think about it. Where is my nest? My paws can’t seem to touch it; it’s right there… Just a memory? No, it has to be real- see? Right there, it’s right there!
Oh, do you have to leave, too? What a shame. I’ll be out soon, I promise…
What are you doing with those vines? My sister loves playing with vines, making knots and all. Maybe she made those ones, too. Although I can’t remember her doing it. I have to talk to her-
Ah! What do you mean, I have to stay here? No, I have to find my sister, this is important! Where is she? Web? Web?
And Pebble? Where is Pebble? He can’t be gone, can’t lose him again…
Oh, what an unusual vibration in the ground…
I remember-
PART 3: Metafiction
(I used the tropes of the chosen one, a character having a special ability/superpower, and questioning one’s place in the universe)
Chaos had always been dimly aware of the voices as a constant hum in the background. Some were ghosts of the past, the echoes of stories still remembered, passed down through the ages. Some were the whisperings of life running through the forest, permeating the soil and soaring through the skies. Others were unfamiliar, otherworldly. Chaos wasn't sure how many different kinds there were. They overlapped, like waves crashing onto a distant shore, the roar barely perceptible, the individual words inaudible. They were easy to ignore. Most wolves did, so she did too.
Until the voices chose her.
Out of the corner of her eye, gray wings fluttered. But that couldn't be. The feathered creatures were myths of long ago. If they were ever real in the first place, they certainly weren't anymore. Was she seeing things?
When she failed to catch sight or scent of the feathered creature again, Chaos let it go. However, after that, the voices became ever so slightly clearer. Gradually, so gradually she barely noticed, a host of personalities manifested in her mind. They were almost indistinguishable from her own thoughts at first. Then, bit by bit, she learned to pick out their words. And, to her surprise, she could understand their language.
They were in her head, though she wasn't sure if they could read her mind or not. She just listened. Sometimes, they would talk amongst themselves. She couldn't always understand the topics they were discussing. But sometimes they would talk about her.
“Chaos is a complicated character. She's as intelligent and ambitious as her brothers, but more subtle. Observant, too. I can make a great plotline with her…” one of the voices said.
Chaos knew all about characters. Her father was a Storyteller, after all. But characters were fictional. Made up by their authors. Not real, not able to think for themselves and make their own choices. Chaos was pretty sure she could think for herself. Wasn't that what she was doing right now? Thinking about thinking?
Overcome with curiosity, she focused her thoughts into a sentence, hoping to communicate with the voices. “So… do I have free will?”
The voice froze, as if startled. “I. I mean. I did not program you to ask that question.” In the background, Chaos could pick up echoes coming off of the words, forming hurried whispers of their own: “Is this it? My characters are- are actually sentient? They're out of my control now? This- could be interesting…”
Chaos thought it was interesting, too.
No one else had mentioned hearing an author speaking to them. Somehow, she had been chosen, and by Haven, Chaos intended to make the most of this opportunity. She figured she should start by getting on the author’s good side.
“Cool. So what’s your name? I’m Chaos.”
PART 4: Self-Insertion
“Oh, uh. Call me Wild.”
The owner of the voice- the author, Chaos corrected herself- materialized as a small gray feathered creature in Chaos’s imagination. She briefly wondered if she was hallucinating the whole thing, but then she remembered that little flutter of wings she had spotted so long ago, before she had begun listening to the voices.
This had to be real.
“Are you a bird, then?” Chaos remembered the name of the mythological creature from her father’s stories. If the legends were to be believed, wolves and birds used to live side by side, even cooperating with each other at times. Chaos wasn’t sure how true those stories were, but this author was proof, weren’t they?
“I’m- I can be a lot of things,” Wild said awkwardly. “Something you'll relate to before too long.”
What did that mean? Chaos had so many questions, but she didn’t want to scare Wild away. They seemed rather shaken by Chaos’s presence alone. But wait- weren’t there other voices, too? “Are there others here?” she inquired in as soothing a thought-voice as she could muster.
“Kind of-? It’s… complicated.”
“Oh?”
Wild sighed when they saw that Chaos was highly focused and expecting an explanation. “I’m still figuring this out myself,” they admitted. “Best I can tell, I’m a… bridge? between two worlds. Half of my mind is here, and the other half is somewhere else. Look, here are my experiences.”
Wild concentrated for a moment, and then Chaos could feel it- the perspective of a different body. She looked out at a world that didn’t resemble her own at all. And another that felt similar, but from much higher up, in the sky, even…
Wild blinked, and the vantage points were gone.
“But… how?” Chaos scuffled her paws against the ground, reminding herself that she was still in her own body. The experience had disoriented her, but at the same time, it was intriguing. Being able to see other places, that sort of thing could be very useful.
“I don’t know.” Wild shrugged hopelessly. “It’s just like this.”
“I’ll help you figure it out,” Chaos volunteered, trying to not sound overly eager.
“Really?” In Chaos’s mind, the image of Wild fluttered up to Chaos’s shoulder. Chaos could nearly feel the bird’s talons on her pelt. But of course, it was all in her head.
“Well then. Welcome to Half-Canon.”
Half-Canon. Chaos wasn’t sure about that name. Still, it already felt perfectly normal to talk to the voice in her head.
This was where she was meant to be.
Even before she hatched from her egg, Chervil knew she was part of the great network of the turtles, stretching back millenia. Her instincts ran deep. The minds of her pondmates swirled around her as she nestled in the round sphere, a self-contained universe, buried in the dirt. She was a piece of a whole, unfathomably large, the wisdom of the ancients.
Her ancestors had seen drastic changes across the planet before. Some natural, some created. And the one that was about to happen, well- it was a little of both.
The supervolcano.
As Chervil pushed her way out of her egg, tiny egg tooth splitting the soft shell, her small body felt the tremors in the ground. And already, she understood. Though it was her eyes’ first glimpse of the world, the minds around her, within her, spoke of what was to come.
Her legs carried her through the dirt, towards the lake, as frantic as a turtle can manage.
And the eruption began.
Death circled high above the world, gazing down upon the steady stream of ash and smoke that had begun billowing forth. Soon, the monster her people had awoken would invoke her sacred spirit, her namesake. She was a vessel for Death itself. Perhaps more than anyone, she comprehended what was about to happen.
Yet, flocks of birds churned around the site of the volcano, as if drawn to the impending doom. Their mechanism was all set up, its parts glinting in the sunlight when a ray happened to pierce the heavy smoke. But would it work?
Death did not know. The inventions of the common birds were not her place to meddle in. She followed a far more ancient ritual.
One that would soon bring about her own end.
A crow, one of her followers, flapped up beside her. “You must come,” he squawked. “The rest of us await by the Turtle Pond for your orders.”
Alarm flashed through Death. “They aren’t safe there!” Curving her wings back, she went into a dive. Vultures were not meant for such maneuvers, but the power of the spirits was on her side.
She reached them just in time.
Fire began to rain from the sky.
“Go!” she urged her followers. “Join the rest of the flocks!”
It seemed insane, to order them towards the danger. But the mechanism was working.
Death chose to believe it would continue its purpose.
She spread her wings to join the others- and that’s when she noticed the turtle.
Turtles are not known for their speed. Newly-hatched Chervil was no exception. As molten rock came tumbling down all around, she could not outrun her doomsday.
A ball of flame came hurtling directly toward her.
Every mind screamed in chorus.
Then a shadow swooped in. Its mind was different. It hummed with a melancholic peacefulness, and Chervil knew instantly that this was a goddess. She exuded an energy almost as ancient as the turtles’.
And she had chosen Chervil as her angel.
Faster than a turtle can comprehend, the shadow’s wide black wings shielded Chervil from the fireball. An explosion. Smoldering feathers.
The last remnants of the goddess’s mind embedded themselves into Chervil’s. A separate mind than the network of the turtles, yet syncing up perfectly with the hatchling’s brainwaves.
Chervil pulled herself into the lake, diving deep into the safety of the water. The end of days passed by. The ground fell silent and still once more, leaving a smoking caldera.
Seasons passed, bleak and sunless.
But turtles are patient.
Life builds itself again upon the remains of the fallen.
Chervil now understood that better than anyone.
The new vessel of Death had arrived.
PART 2: Unreliable Narrators
Character: Marigold
her memory is deteriorating and she constantly confuses the past and present, as well as her thoughts and reality
sometimes does not recognize family members
she loves her family and completely overlooks that her children might have evil motives; tends to be naively optimistic at times
she has lost some of her senses, so she struggles to accurately interpret what is going on around her
Deary me, is it time to wake up already? Oh, I was having the most wonderful dream… You were in it, Pebble! You had grown these wondrous long wings and were soaring through the clouds. I just know you’re going to have an amazing time when you fledge, Pebble. Your feathers are already coming in, aren’t they? Why, yes, they are! Such pretty, long, brown feathers…
Oh- where are you going? Do you have to go so soon? Ah, off to smell the flowers, I’ll bet. I know how you love them. I’d join you, but, ah… I’m still so tired… Must be from playing so much yesterday. I’ll just rest a bit. I’ll come out soon…
It’s so lonely in here, by myself, though. Hmm? What’s that? There’s someone else there? I can’t quite hear you… Ah, there you are- Wait, who are you again? Your scent is familiar…
Parsnip?
I don’t think I know anyone named Parsnip. Where did you come from?
My egg? That can’t be right… My eggs haven’t hatched yet, silly!
I’m not sure, actually, now that I think about it. Where is my nest? My paws can’t seem to touch it; it’s right there… Just a memory? No, it has to be real- see? Right there, it’s right there!
Oh, do you have to leave, too? What a shame. I’ll be out soon, I promise…
What are you doing with those vines? My sister loves playing with vines, making knots and all. Maybe she made those ones, too. Although I can’t remember her doing it. I have to talk to her-
Ah! What do you mean, I have to stay here? No, I have to find my sister, this is important! Where is she? Web? Web?
And Pebble? Where is Pebble? He can’t be gone, can’t lose him again…
Oh, what an unusual vibration in the ground…
I remember-
PART 3: Metafiction
(I used the tropes of the chosen one, a character having a special ability/superpower, and questioning one’s place in the universe)
Chaos had always been dimly aware of the voices as a constant hum in the background. Some were ghosts of the past, the echoes of stories still remembered, passed down through the ages. Some were the whisperings of life running through the forest, permeating the soil and soaring through the skies. Others were unfamiliar, otherworldly. Chaos wasn't sure how many different kinds there were. They overlapped, like waves crashing onto a distant shore, the roar barely perceptible, the individual words inaudible. They were easy to ignore. Most wolves did, so she did too.
Until the voices chose her.
Out of the corner of her eye, gray wings fluttered. But that couldn't be. The feathered creatures were myths of long ago. If they were ever real in the first place, they certainly weren't anymore. Was she seeing things?
When she failed to catch sight or scent of the feathered creature again, Chaos let it go. However, after that, the voices became ever so slightly clearer. Gradually, so gradually she barely noticed, a host of personalities manifested in her mind. They were almost indistinguishable from her own thoughts at first. Then, bit by bit, she learned to pick out their words. And, to her surprise, she could understand their language.
They were in her head, though she wasn't sure if they could read her mind or not. She just listened. Sometimes, they would talk amongst themselves. She couldn't always understand the topics they were discussing. But sometimes they would talk about her.
“Chaos is a complicated character. She's as intelligent and ambitious as her brothers, but more subtle. Observant, too. I can make a great plotline with her…” one of the voices said.
Chaos knew all about characters. Her father was a Storyteller, after all. But characters were fictional. Made up by their authors. Not real, not able to think for themselves and make their own choices. Chaos was pretty sure she could think for herself. Wasn't that what she was doing right now? Thinking about thinking?
Overcome with curiosity, she focused her thoughts into a sentence, hoping to communicate with the voices. “So… do I have free will?”
The voice froze, as if startled. “I. I mean. I did not program you to ask that question.” In the background, Chaos could pick up echoes coming off of the words, forming hurried whispers of their own: “Is this it? My characters are- are actually sentient? They're out of my control now? This- could be interesting…”
Chaos thought it was interesting, too.
No one else had mentioned hearing an author speaking to them. Somehow, she had been chosen, and by Haven, Chaos intended to make the most of this opportunity. She figured she should start by getting on the author’s good side.
“Cool. So what’s your name? I’m Chaos.”
PART 4: Self-Insertion
“Oh, uh. Call me Wild.”
The owner of the voice- the author, Chaos corrected herself- materialized as a small gray feathered creature in Chaos’s imagination. She briefly wondered if she was hallucinating the whole thing, but then she remembered that little flutter of wings she had spotted so long ago, before she had begun listening to the voices.
This had to be real.
“Are you a bird, then?” Chaos remembered the name of the mythological creature from her father’s stories. If the legends were to be believed, wolves and birds used to live side by side, even cooperating with each other at times. Chaos wasn’t sure how true those stories were, but this author was proof, weren’t they?
“I’m- I can be a lot of things,” Wild said awkwardly. “Something you'll relate to before too long.”
What did that mean? Chaos had so many questions, but she didn’t want to scare Wild away. They seemed rather shaken by Chaos’s presence alone. But wait- weren’t there other voices, too? “Are there others here?” she inquired in as soothing a thought-voice as she could muster.
“Kind of-? It’s… complicated.”
“Oh?”
Wild sighed when they saw that Chaos was highly focused and expecting an explanation. “I’m still figuring this out myself,” they admitted. “Best I can tell, I’m a… bridge? between two worlds. Half of my mind is here, and the other half is somewhere else. Look, here are my experiences.”
Wild concentrated for a moment, and then Chaos could feel it- the perspective of a different body. She looked out at a world that didn’t resemble her own at all. And another that felt similar, but from much higher up, in the sky, even…
Wild blinked, and the vantage points were gone.
“But… how?” Chaos scuffled her paws against the ground, reminding herself that she was still in her own body. The experience had disoriented her, but at the same time, it was intriguing. Being able to see other places, that sort of thing could be very useful.
“I don’t know.” Wild shrugged hopelessly. “It’s just like this.”
“I’ll help you figure it out,” Chaos volunteered, trying to not sound overly eager.
“Really?” In Chaos’s mind, the image of Wild fluttered up to Chaos’s shoulder. Chaos could nearly feel the bird’s talons on her pelt. But of course, it was all in her head.
“Well then. Welcome to Half-Canon.”
Half-Canon. Chaos wasn’t sure about that name. Still, it already felt perfectly normal to talk to the voice in her head.
This was where she was meant to be.
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Static sat in the office quietly, fidgeting with his paws. He had to go find that false eeveelution and get her to safety before she got caught in the middle of the growing tensions.
It was surprising how quickly lines had been drawn after the Altered had appeared in Rinasita. He had stuck with his side for so long, Taga Genetics, because he thought it was keeping the Altered safe from the violent Purifiers. But after seeing what his coworkers were doing to the contained ‘mons, he couldn’t do it anymore. There didn’t seem to be any harm being on the fence, after all. Parson, the famous Arcanine bounty hunter, would sometimes dump random Altered on the lab’s doorstep, or carry out the Purifiers’ more…intense requests.
Static’s train of thought was cut off as his boss, Claw, entered the room, looking unamused as always. “You wanted to speak with me?” he said, sitting at his desk.
Static took a deep breath, knowing that this wouldn’t end well. But he couldn’t stay silent anymore, not with all of the suffering Pokémon within the building. He sat up straighter, remembering the little flying eeveelution he had met. He couldn’t let her suffer the same fate.
Lifting his eyes to meet Claw’s, Static said two words.
“I quit.”
“This must be it,” Sky said to herself, peeking into the cave beneath the odd rock shaped like some sort of flame. It looked just like the Ampharos had described it to her. She curled up inside, silvery wings flattened against her sides.
*Maybe this is a trap*, she thought to herself, keeping one of her large ears up in order to stay aware of her surroundings. Static had seemed genuine, but she didn’t know if she could trust anyone anymore.
Yet here she was, trusting the word of one of the lab workers. Of all the Pokémon she could’ve run into!
Sky let out a dramatic sigh, rolling onto her back, before getting jolted to her paws by large, thumping pawsteps nearby that didn’t seem to fit her ‘friend’. Not wanting to risk being caught, she stayed low, hiding in the shadows and watching the open hole as a large Arcanine passed, a young Growlithe trotting by his side, actively searching for something, or…someone.
Sky didn’t know whose side they were on, but she knew that either way, they were dangerous to her. She laid down, staying frozen, hoping so badly that she wouldn’t get caught.
*This is taking way too long*, Static thought to himself as he followed Claw through the dark hallway. It was where Taga were to keep the ‘highly unusual’ entities that had spawned alongside the Altered, if they caught any. Claw had something important to show him, because he was a ‘valued member of our community’. Static paused to what looked like a jumble of purple, orange, and white particles in one of the glass boxes, but clearly Claw didn’t care much about that, walking on.
The two stopped at a different box. Static squinted at what was inside. It was a tiny brownish blob with empty orange eyes. He raised an eyebrow at Claw, who actually seemed fond of this creature. “This being,” he said, “seems to hold similar abilities to Arceus itself.”
Static gasped sharply. “Are you sure-?”
“What else would be able to react to the plates? It even shares some of the magic they have…just imagine what we’d be able to do with this, if we harnessed this power! Do you really want to lose this opportunity? We might even be able to /cure/ the Altered!”
Static hesitated. The thought of being able to use Arceus’s power to help Pokémon was certainly enticing…was leaving actually the right decision? Maybe they were the good guys after all…
Unreliable Narrator (454)
Thinks people are all lying manipulators, doesn’t believe that Ender Dragons are as dangerous they actually are
Slaytir walked into the village, casting a suspicious glance around. She hated these places, they were always filled with scams. They watched the seemingly innocent villagers trading with one another, speaking in their own mysterious language. Emeralds were obnoxiously hard to find, and the villagers obviously profited off this. She waved off one of the farmers trying to get them to buy her potatoes, heading towards the library.
Once she was inside, she quickly started searching. Another thing about villagers was that 98% of their books were fake, and the other 2% were overpriced enchanted books filled with magical nonsense. Still, she didn’t know where else to look for the information they needed, and had decided to take a chance on this particular village, the one closest to the Ender temple.
“Can I help you?” the librarian asked Slaytir, adjusting his glasses. Slaytir just shook her head, continuing to search. They’d just get dragged into some trading scenario.
But, of course, the librarian didn’t leave her alone, swiftly coming over to nag them. “…You know these bookshelves are mostly decoration, right? You’ve been going through those for fifteen minutes now.”
“Yes, I know,” she said, glaring. This random villager did not need to know about their intentions. He’d just freak out like everyone else did.
He simply just gestured to a small set of bookshelves on the other side of the building. “The chiseled bookshelves are over there. You can borrow one for free, if you’d like.”
Slaytir looked over at them, expecting a prank. No village ever had real books in it…except this one.
The librarian smiled softly as she dashed over to go through them. Finally, they had found them! Books on the End…this was exactly what she needed! “How much,” they quickly said, bracing for the horrible price that was bound to come.
“Like I said, they’re free,” he said, “but you have to bring them back in a week in proper condition, or you will have to pay.”
Well, that was a surprise to Slaytir. She nodded, beginning to shove the books into their inventory. The librarian watched, mildly amused, making a soft “Hrm” sound.
“Don’t get too invested,” he warned. “People like you all want to run off to defeat the dragon, but she’s not dead for a reason.”
Slaytir rolled her eyes, not responding. He was just too much of a coward. One only needed to be well-prepared to take on the End. It wouldn’t be very hard at all.
“Thank you,” they muttered as she walked out, the librarian calling out “Be careful! I’m serious! And please don’t lose those books, they’re very important to our village!”
“Oh please,” Slaytir mumbled to themself. This would be easy.
Metafiction (489)
-Orphan; friends to lovers
Cherry sat on her bed, head buried in her paws. She tried to practice the breathing techniques Phlox had taught her, but she still couldn’t get Iris out of her mind. “This isn’t fair,” she moaned, looking up at the ceiling angrily. “Why did I have to be the orphaned one? Why did I have to orphan myself? Couldn’t I just have lived a normal life without all of this? And now…” She let out a sob, trembling. Everything that had happened to her left her scarred, and she wasn’t going to forget that this had all stemmed from her becoming the orphan. She trembled uncontrollably, unable to cope with the blunt force of the reality behind her existence at the moment.
She jolted up as she saw Phlox open the door and rush to her side, the red panda wrapping his arm around his struggling friend. “Breathe,” he said, gently squeezing her, just enough to give her comfort but not too tight, as that would make her feel trapped. “You’re safe here. You’re safe…”
Cherry cried into Phlox’s shoulder, listening to his words and reminding herself that she wasn’t alone. He silently stroked her fur, and Cherry could tell from his movements that he was reading her thoughts. She had been hesitant at first when he had first awoken these powers, but he had really focused on using them to comfort her and help both of them learn how to cope with Cherry’s mental state.
She felt the artificial sense of calming flow into her as she found her breath again, looking at Phlox, struggling to find her words at first.
“Why…did we have to…be orphaned? Why did I…” she trembled again as Phlox pulled her close.
“I wish I knew,” he responded. “It’s not easy, having such a burden on anyone. I…” He shook his head. Cherry knew what he was going to say though. She wasn’t the only one going through this trope.
“I’m sorry,” she said, and although they both knew this wasn’t directly her fault, the feelings were real.
Phlox gazed off, thinking for a moment, before saying “Not everything is all doom and gloom though, Cherry.” He turned towards his cat-fox friend. “We’re not defined as orphans.”
“What are we though? I feel like I only exist to be picked on and made suffer…”
“Well, we’re friends,” he said softly. “That should count towards something, right? If they really wanted you to suffer they wouldn’t have let me be here to help you.”
Cherry knew Phlox was right. Of course, it was just another trope, friends to lovers, but it was definitely the more wholesome of the boxes she was crammed into. She rested her head on his shoulder. “Yeah, you’re right,” she sighed. “I should try to remember that more.”
“I’ll try to remind you more,” Phlox offered, hugging Cherry. The two embraced, Cherry feeling a bit of hope for the future.
Self-Insert (507)
Cherry walked around the meadow, watching her reflection in the lake. She remembered that the catalyst for everything that had happened recently had started here, when Timeslice had fallen into the lake. Cherry couldn’t control her powers back then, but now she could sizeshift with ease.
Seeing a new reflection in the water, she quickly turned around to see someone she had never seen before. They were what seemed to be a cross between a cat and a butterfly, a star emblazoned on their hoodie.
“Hello?” Cherry whispered, surprised to see a new face. Maybe Oak had directed them to the town like he had with some others?
The creature avoided eye contact, their tail twitching around their feet anxiously. “Hello,” they responded, voice barely a whisper. Cherry raised an eyebrow.
“Do you need something? Did…did Oak send you?”
They shook their head. “I just…felt like talking to you.”
The two cat hybrids stood there awkwardly, before Cherry said “Uhm. Okay. Well…I’m sorry, I don’t really know how to start a conversation-“ The other being laughed softly, before stepping over to Cherry and hugging her. The hug was surprisingly soft, which took her by surprise.
“…Sorry-“ they said, stepping back and giving the confused Cherry space.
“I- it’s okay- thanks?” Cherry blinked, looking at the cat-butterfly, realizing that she recognized something in their eyes, the blue, star-shaped pupils gazing at her with guilt.
“Seriously, I’m sorry,” they said, avoiding eye contact again and tensing up. “For everything.” Cherry didn’t think that they understood what she had actually gone through, or how they could tell that something was wrong, but she appreciated the apology. What she didn’t appreciate was the reminder.
“Thanks, but I’d rather not be reminded of ‘everything’,” she said. “Crud, sorry-“ her companion responded, turning away and gritting their teeth. Cherry gently rubbed their shoulder in an attempt to ease them, which surprisingly worked immediately. They softened, smiling weakly at Cherry at the comfort. Cherry, knowing what she liked as a cat, gently moved to give them pets, which resulted in light purring from the cat-butterfly.
Meanwhile, Cherry struggled to remember why the figure was so familiar. The blue eyes, green and purple color scheme, even the voice struck a chord in her that she couldn’t put her finger on.
After petting them for a bit, she finally decided to speak. “Y’know, I feel like I’ve seen you before- have we met?” In Cherry’s mind, she thought maybe they had lived together before the…accident, and that’s what brought them back here. Another survivor.
“Yes and no,” they responded cryptically, looking at her with sad eyes. “I mean…we know each other, but we’ve never met like this. I guess I go by a lot of names, but you probably know me as Aurora.”
Cherry let out a sharp gasp, recoiling slightly. Aurora whimpered softly and lowered her head. This was Cherry’s creator, the one who influenced her entire life, who had led her to the suffering she was going through now. Right in front of her.
- Whimsy_lux
- Scratcher
64 posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
As the self proclaimed greatest SWC host that has ever graced this children’s coding website, I have many ideas that will benefit SWC greatly. First of all, I think having more non prose dailies would be cool. This may backfire considering I only like writing prose, but I think a bunch of people would like more poetry dailies or nonfiction dailies for a change. In my creative writing class, one of my assignments was creating a board game and while that takes way longer than 24 hours, I think more variety in terms of writing would make sessions way more fun. Writing is basically everywhere, so let’s use everything!
Next, I think having bonus challenges would be really cool, especially for the more vague dailies. Kind of like cabin war extra challenges they can be completely optional but reward a few more points depending on the difficulty. But you don’t even need to reward points! I actually really like how the first daily of every session is making an intro but we’ve made it a little community challenge to write a thousand words for no reason other than starting the session off with a bang. They can be silly or made to push the boundaries of writing, but having that extra goal could help especially with the more vague dailies that can be harder to come up with ideas for.
Finally, this is more iffy, because it could easily become just an advertising spam thing, but it would be cool if there was a specific studio just for talking about your and other people’s writing. Every now and then people mention their works if they’re really proud of it but most of the main cabin is submitting dailies and people talking about how they procrastinated on the weekly (Not that there’s anything wrong with that). I think it’d be a great way to make friends and even a little writers group if there was a place you could rave about what cool things you're working on and have other people read them and rave about them too. And then everyone can be absolutely raving about being surrounded by so many talented writers and give them ideas and encourage each other. Kind of like the critiqueitaire but less for criticism but praise!
- Flowerelf371
- Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Weekly Three
First Part (347 words)
The warehouse was dark and seemingly empty as Leila hopped from box to box, trying to gather her surroundings. Crates were stacked on top of each other, forming a tower that swayed precariously as Leila slowly crawled up each one, hoping to get a full view of the large room. As she reached the top nothing she began to worry of the heights she had reached, one slip and she’d find herself most likely on her back, flattened by the crate. Just breathe she told herself, reminding herself why she was doing this. It was worth taking risks for it. Finally, she reached the last crate, pulling herself up she scanned the ground below her when she felt something behind her and found herself plummeting into the darkness.
—
Damion groaned as he rubbed his head, he was stupid, tripping over the maps lying on the deck and his head was smarting for it. The sun had just begun rising and yet streaks of light flew across the ship waking the other sailors, starting loud grumbling and complaints. Damion his watch just ten past six, they would have to leave soon. Hopefully, Leila had been able to obtain everything they needed and soon they would be able to set fire to the warehouse and Damion would never have to take another look at it again. Just a few hours and it would be over.
—
Leila gasped stepping back, her heart thumping out of her chest. It couldn't be. Not him. Never him. All of these years of chasing this mysterious man and it was him all along. Leila heaved deep breath after another. She needed to calm down. He was getting back up and would be back at her any second. She needed to stand up. Needed to use her head. But she couldn’t it. Because it couldn’t be him, the boy she knew would never do this. Who was he? Just then she heard it, the familiar loud attack of her crew. But no. They couldn’t attack him, they would destroy him. She had to save him.
Part Two (330 words)
Nora
- Has known Mikayla for longer
- Makes rash decisions under pressure
- Gets very emotional to be rational
“I don’t know what I saw okay! Can everyone just leave me alone!” Nora yelled, throwing her hand up.
The questioning had gone on for at least thirty minutes and there had been no progress. Ms. Silya groaned rubbing her temples. Her day had been tiring enough without having to interrogate three nine year olds to try and find anything out.
“Listen Nora, all you need to tell me is who you say take the jar, you won’t get in trouble, I just need to know.”
Nora paused, contemplating, as she saw twin stares coming from Mikayla and Evie from both sides of the room.
“Well- I think- it was Evie!” She blurted, cringing the second she said it.
“What? Nora you know it wasn’t me. Stop lying! You know it was Mikayla.” Evie yelled standing up angrily.
Ms. Silya sighed, crossing her arms. “Evie we don’t accuse people of lying, Nora said it was you. Now can you please tell me where it is now?”
Evie screeched, tears brimming, “It wasn’t me! I would never steal anything!” The crossed her arms, mirroring Ms. Silya, and turned facing the window.
Ms. Silya turned towards Mikayla just in time to see her smirk before it was wiped of her face. “Mikayla! Is this true?”
“What? No! Nora will tell you, right Nora?”
Nora stood up, shivering, “Yes! It was Evie.” She said gulping getting more confident every word. “She grabbed the jar and hid the jar and hid it when you were in the other class!”
Ms. Silya to see Evie shaking her head angrily. “Alright! That’s it! Whoever took it can keep, but if any of you try to do that again I will have a meeting with your parents.” She said giving her sternest glare. “Now go to silent reading!”
She shook her head as they left, why she had ever gotten into teaching kindergarteners she’ll never know.
—
Third Part (430 words)
I yawned stretching as I crawled from under my blankets and stumbled out into the kitchen area. A note was left on the table, weighed down by a rock. As most mornings Gothel was out traveling leaving me to do whatever I wanted. My favorite. All I wanted was to get out of this tower.
The walls were littered with my artwork but I had plenty of spots I planned to fill in today. Oh how I loved the tower. It showed all of my life, every piece of art I’v made, all the projects I’ve begun, Gothel never got rid of anything and it was exhilarating sifting through all my memories. I could spend my whole life here.
But I knew that wasn’t what I was made for. I was meant to hate my life, resent Gothel, and dream of escaping. It was any day now that some “saviour” was supposed to come and whisk her away.
“Isn’t that right?” I screamed at the empty walls
Gothel was awful, never letting me out of the castle, always obsessing over my hair, never letting me see the outside world. I planned on asking her if I could leave the tower for by birthday, just this once. I want to see the world around me and be free of Gothel.
“Hey! Stop that!” I yelled, stomping my foot.
I spent the rest of my day bored. There was nothing in the tower to do and I had to just brush my hair over and over again. Just as the thought of sleeping hit me I heard Gothel’s familiar, grating, voice sound from below.
“Rapunzel! Let down your hair!”
I groaned and happily went over to the windowsill throwing my hair over the hook, pulling Gothel up, one arm after another. Once Gothel reached the room she crawled through the window, joining me on the sill.
“Mother Gothel? I was hoping to ask you ask you a question?”
She smiled, nodding me to continue.
“How was your trip? May I leave the tower please, just for my birthday?”
I frowned smiled as Gothel rose, she scowled.
“Have I not told you enough how scary it is out there?”
I paused, “Yes, but-
“No buts, I say no. Now go to bed Rapunzel” Gothel scolded.
I sighed sadly, maybe one day my dreams can come true, despite what Gothel says. No. Stop. I don’t want this. I want to stay with Gothel. I don’t want to leave. I got to bed and fell fast asleep, dreaming of escaping the prison.
Part Four (403 words)
Gothel was out once again, I had spent most of the day playing with Pascal and drawing. It was still light out when I first heard it. A voice. Not Gothel’s and not anyone’s I’ve heard of before. At first I thought I was just hearing things, soft tapping on the walls, scrambling, hard thuds. Soon after those sounds turned into a voice. Too quiet to make out what they were saying but just loud enough to hear all they way in my room.
Slowly I creeped towards the window sill, Pascal on my shoulder and a frying pan in my hand. I peeked out quickly and caught glimpse of someone. Not Gothel.
“Hello?”
There was the voice again.
“Who’s there?”
I paused before taking a deep breath in and sticking my head out. It was a person. They looked even younger than me.
“Who is this?” I called out. Then it hit me, the saviour. They weren’t supposed to come so soon, I wanted more time.
“I’m Ni-”
I dropped a frying pan on their head.
Oh god, what have I done. What will Gothel think? Why did they come so soon, Gothel is goind to find an unconscious person at the bottom of the tower.
“Are you happy now? Did you get the damsel in distress you wanted?”
I wonder what they want, maybe they could help me get out of the tower. I looked out once again staring the strange person in the eyes.
“Niko?” My voice wavered, “Here hold onto my hair and I’ll pull you up.”
Slowly, I pulled and pulled until I was face to face with the unknown person. They stared at me for a few seconds before pulling themselves into the tower, getting off of my hair.
“So… Are you going to save me or not?”
They looked at me, their face contorting, “What are you talking about? You need saving?”
I paused. Was this some sort of joke? What are they doing here if not to save me? Am I not meant to be the damsel for them to save.
“You mean- you’re supposed to come and rescue me from this tower. Is that not why you’re here?”
They sat, their face still confused, “I’m not exactly sure how I got here, I don’t recognize this forest or anything here. I was just exploring and stumbled upon this tower, I don’t who you are.”
First Part (347 words)
The warehouse was dark and seemingly empty as Leila hopped from box to box, trying to gather her surroundings. Crates were stacked on top of each other, forming a tower that swayed precariously as Leila slowly crawled up each one, hoping to get a full view of the large room. As she reached the top nothing she began to worry of the heights she had reached, one slip and she’d find herself most likely on her back, flattened by the crate. Just breathe she told herself, reminding herself why she was doing this. It was worth taking risks for it. Finally, she reached the last crate, pulling herself up she scanned the ground below her when she felt something behind her and found herself plummeting into the darkness.
—
Damion groaned as he rubbed his head, he was stupid, tripping over the maps lying on the deck and his head was smarting for it. The sun had just begun rising and yet streaks of light flew across the ship waking the other sailors, starting loud grumbling and complaints. Damion his watch just ten past six, they would have to leave soon. Hopefully, Leila had been able to obtain everything they needed and soon they would be able to set fire to the warehouse and Damion would never have to take another look at it again. Just a few hours and it would be over.
—
Leila gasped stepping back, her heart thumping out of her chest. It couldn't be. Not him. Never him. All of these years of chasing this mysterious man and it was him all along. Leila heaved deep breath after another. She needed to calm down. He was getting back up and would be back at her any second. She needed to stand up. Needed to use her head. But she couldn’t it. Because it couldn’t be him, the boy she knew would never do this. Who was he? Just then she heard it, the familiar loud attack of her crew. But no. They couldn’t attack him, they would destroy him. She had to save him.
Part Two (330 words)
Nora
- Has known Mikayla for longer
- Makes rash decisions under pressure
- Gets very emotional to be rational
“I don’t know what I saw okay! Can everyone just leave me alone!” Nora yelled, throwing her hand up.
The questioning had gone on for at least thirty minutes and there had been no progress. Ms. Silya groaned rubbing her temples. Her day had been tiring enough without having to interrogate three nine year olds to try and find anything out.
“Listen Nora, all you need to tell me is who you say take the jar, you won’t get in trouble, I just need to know.”
Nora paused, contemplating, as she saw twin stares coming from Mikayla and Evie from both sides of the room.
“Well- I think- it was Evie!” She blurted, cringing the second she said it.
“What? Nora you know it wasn’t me. Stop lying! You know it was Mikayla.” Evie yelled standing up angrily.
Ms. Silya sighed, crossing her arms. “Evie we don’t accuse people of lying, Nora said it was you. Now can you please tell me where it is now?”
Evie screeched, tears brimming, “It wasn’t me! I would never steal anything!” The crossed her arms, mirroring Ms. Silya, and turned facing the window.
Ms. Silya turned towards Mikayla just in time to see her smirk before it was wiped of her face. “Mikayla! Is this true?”
“What? No! Nora will tell you, right Nora?”
Nora stood up, shivering, “Yes! It was Evie.” She said gulping getting more confident every word. “She grabbed the jar and hid the jar and hid it when you were in the other class!”
Ms. Silya to see Evie shaking her head angrily. “Alright! That’s it! Whoever took it can keep, but if any of you try to do that again I will have a meeting with your parents.” She said giving her sternest glare. “Now go to silent reading!”
She shook her head as they left, why she had ever gotten into teaching kindergarteners she’ll never know.
—
Third Part (430 words)
Damsel in distress
I yawned stretching as I crawled from under my blankets and stumbled out into the kitchen area. A note was left on the table, weighed down by a rock. As most mornings Gothel was out traveling leaving me to do whatever I wanted. My favorite. All I wanted was to get out of this tower.
The walls were littered with my artwork but I had plenty of spots I planned to fill in today. Oh how I loved the tower. It showed all of my life, every piece of art I’v made, all the projects I’ve begun, Gothel never got rid of anything and it was exhilarating sifting through all my memories. I could spend my whole life here.
But I knew that wasn’t what I was made for. I was meant to hate my life, resent Gothel, and dream of escaping. It was any day now that some “saviour” was supposed to come and whisk her away.
“Isn’t that right?” I screamed at the empty walls
Gothel was awful, never letting me out of the castle, always obsessing over my hair, never letting me see the outside world. I planned on asking her if I could leave the tower for by birthday, just this once. I want to see the world around me and be free of Gothel.
“Hey! Stop that!” I yelled, stomping my foot.
I spent the rest of my day bored. There was nothing in the tower to do and I had to just brush my hair over and over again. Just as the thought of sleeping hit me I heard Gothel’s familiar, grating, voice sound from below.
“Rapunzel! Let down your hair!”
I groaned and happily went over to the windowsill throwing my hair over the hook, pulling Gothel up, one arm after another. Once Gothel reached the room she crawled through the window, joining me on the sill.
“Mother Gothel? I was hoping to ask you ask you a question?”
She smiled, nodding me to continue.
“How was your trip? May I leave the tower please, just for my birthday?”
I frowned smiled as Gothel rose, she scowled.
“Have I not told you enough how scary it is out there?”
I paused, “Yes, but-
“No buts, I say no. Now go to bed Rapunzel” Gothel scolded.
I sighed sadly, maybe one day my dreams can come true, despite what Gothel says. No. Stop. I don’t want this. I want to stay with Gothel. I don’t want to leave. I got to bed and fell fast asleep, dreaming of escaping the prison.
Part Four (403 words)
Gothel was out once again, I had spent most of the day playing with Pascal and drawing. It was still light out when I first heard it. A voice. Not Gothel’s and not anyone’s I’ve heard of before. At first I thought I was just hearing things, soft tapping on the walls, scrambling, hard thuds. Soon after those sounds turned into a voice. Too quiet to make out what they were saying but just loud enough to hear all they way in my room.
Slowly I creeped towards the window sill, Pascal on my shoulder and a frying pan in my hand. I peeked out quickly and caught glimpse of someone. Not Gothel.
“Hello?”
There was the voice again.
“Who’s there?”
I paused before taking a deep breath in and sticking my head out. It was a person. They looked even younger than me.
“Who is this?” I called out. Then it hit me, the saviour. They weren’t supposed to come so soon, I wanted more time.
“I’m Ni-”
I dropped a frying pan on their head.
Oh god, what have I done. What will Gothel think? Why did they come so soon, Gothel is goind to find an unconscious person at the bottom of the tower.
“Are you happy now? Did you get the damsel in distress you wanted?”
I wonder what they want, maybe they could help me get out of the tower. I looked out once again staring the strange person in the eyes.
“Niko?” My voice wavered, “Here hold onto my hair and I’ll pull you up.”
Slowly, I pulled and pulled until I was face to face with the unknown person. They stared at me for a few seconds before pulling themselves into the tower, getting off of my hair.
“So… Are you going to save me or not?”
They looked at me, their face contorting, “What are you talking about? You need saving?”
I paused. Was this some sort of joke? What are they doing here if not to save me? Am I not meant to be the damsel for them to save.
“You mean- you’re supposed to come and rescue me from this tower. Is that not why you’re here?”
They sat, their face still confused, “I’m not exactly sure how I got here, I don’t recognize this forest or anything here. I was just exploring and stumbled upon this tower, I don’t who you are.”
- Natt519
- Scratcher
41 posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
weekly!
note: all the slashes are supposed to be italics (the word counter I'm using doesn't have them)
Pt. 1 (395 words)
Ezra
Ezra's footsteps echoed around the empty museum despite his attempts to quiet them. But then again, nobody was there, were they?
That was actually a bit of a problem.
Gwen was supposed to have been at the art museum twenty minutes ago. She was the only one who had the code to the locked wing, where the art was being stored. Now, reader, this wasn't a heist, so to say, more like a favor to the museum. The art was a fake. It did, however, contain the map to a certain lost treasure on the back. So Ezra and Gwen did get quite a bit more out of it than the museum. But back to the story.
Gwen
Gwen knew she was late, and it was very annoying to her. She liked things to be on schedule (and /stay/ on schedule). So, despite her best efforts, she very much felt like yelling at inanimate objects as if that would make them work properly. She had so far restrained herself, though.
The reason she was late was a simple one. There was a hatch beneath the staircase leading to the upstairs wing, and the lock on that hatch was stuck. Gwen's bobby pin, which usually did the trick, couldn't get it open.
Ezra
Ezra had hidden himself in a storage closet after waiting for a few minutes. Gwen still hadn't appeared, and he was beginning to worry. Had she been caught? Just as he was about to text her to leave, he heard footsteps and opened the door just a crack.
It was not Gwen, as he had thought, so he quickly shut the door. It was another woman. She had light brown hair and startlingly blue eyes, and her hands did not seem to be able to keep still. She walked quietly, glancing around and keeping to the shadows. When she was sure nobody was there, she picked up the fake painting, then went over to the door and slid a piece of paper under it. Ezra waited for a moment, then picked it up. It read, “Don't try to come after the painting again. I'm serious. You're getting yourself into more than you know, and I'm trying to get you out of it. A powerful group wants that painting and they'll do anything to get it.
My name is Elana, by the way.”
Pt. 2 305 words (Jespin is full of himself and a often lies)
If you think I'm full of myself, you are sorely mistaken. I'm just that good.
I've won so many awards. If anyone tells you different, they're lying. Sure, I almost ended the world. It's not /that/ bad, is it? No, it's not.
It all started like this. I was working on homework, getting every question right, when a bird flew through my window and plucked me upm the carried me out. I did not scream, nor did I panic. I'm always courageous, and this is just another example. It dropped me in the river nearby, and I plunged down into the depths. Again, I didn't panic, just tried to swin to the top. The whirlpool, of course, was designed to keep me down, or else I would have escaped. I was thrown to the ground, then, as if I had teleported. I got up, brushed myself off, and checked my hair. Perfect, as always. The room was beautiful, glamorous, just as I should have. I walked over to a chair and sat down.
—–
Goodness, I apologize for having you read that. I promised Jespin he could write some. Anyways- here I am! Lydia here. Let's start again.
I was waiting for Jedpsin in the other room. I had cooked, cleaned, made the bed, and done everything I could so he couldn't complain. “Well, Lydia. Long time no see. What do you want?” Jespin said, sound annoyed. I glared at him. His attitude hadn't been dulled at all since I'd last seen him. Unfortunately, I needed his help. It was vital that the Gem be returned to its chamber, and Jespin was the only one who could get it. Trust me- I had no wish to ask him. I could've done it myself, I had wished, but I couldn't. So, I suppose I needed him.
Pt. 3 564 words (i did the chosen one trope bc I legit could not think of anything, plus parallel universes more or less)
“Race you to the top!” Jackie yelled, scrambling up the tree.
“Not fair! You had a head start!”
“Too bad, Quinn!”
I grumbled, but she didn't hear me. How was I supposed to create an interesting story if someone always beats me at everything? I still have seven years, but still- I'm responsible for the entertainment for literally thousands of people.
Yikes.
As I began to race up the tree, my finger found a hole that hadn't been there before. It was big, too, and smooth around the edges. I peeked inside- there was a tiny button, about the size of my fingertip. /Well, this will make for an interesting story./ I pressed it.
The world froze for a second- the leaves stopped blowing, and everything was silent. Then, it started to spin. I though maybe I was falling, but I was in the same place- the tree was unmoving. /Ah,/ I thought. /The Story Council chose my story already./ Usually they give people a few more years, but I suppose they got a bit impatient. I don't blame them.
Everything changed to swirls of black and purple and turquoise for a moment before they vanished. I fell onto a dirt road that split a few feet ahead of me. The left road has a sign that said “Solo Heroine”, and the right road had a sign that said “Pick a Sidekick”. I glanced around there was nobody to ask where I was. Shrugging, I chose to pick a sidekick.
—-
“Welcome, welcome, Quinn Rastelby! We've been waiting for you. We have the best sidekicks here! Feel free to browse band ask them questions.”
The sidekicks were all in separate booths. Some of them were trying to catch my attention; others just looked bored. I passed right by the attention-seekers. /No thank you./ As I looked around, asking questions, nobody seemed right. They were all acting to flashy, or they didn't want to answer my questions. One of the people who worked there seemed to notice. “If you can't find anybody who you think could be helpful, then we do have one Sidekick-in-training who you could meet, if you are quite sure there's nobody else…” The woman sounded hesitant, but I nodded. She took me into another room near the back, where a boy was reading. “Caleb, we have a heroine! She's considering choosing you.” The boy- Caleb- looked up, scowling. “I told you, Lina, it's Cal, not Caleb.” Lina huffed, then said, “Well, Cal, I'll let Quinn ask you some questions.” To me, she whispered, “Oh, do pick him, if you can. He's been here for a year already and he's a bit irritating at times.” Then, she left.
Cal wasn't bad looking, I suppose. His dark hair was wild and unruly, but not in a bad way. His temper, though, seemed quite bad.
“So. Um. Cal. Why do you think I should pick you?”
“Don't really care if you do or not, honestly. But I suppose I could be useful. Blend in. I can cook, too.”
“Okay… so, uh, if I did pick you, you'd be able to help me?”
“S'pose so.”
“How do I pick someone?”
“Just tell them.”
“Well, then, I pick you.”
He looked very surprised for a moment, and a bit eager, but then it vanished. He got up and walked through the door. “Well, then, come on.”
Pt. 4 668 words (so I did a past heroine that would've come before Quinn, hope that's alright) (not me just having mackenzie trash talk me most of the time because that's probably about how useful I'd be on a quest lol-)
I walked through the rows of booths where the sidekick sat. They all were very eager to be chosen, I suppose. One girl, a teenager, was looking at me hopefully. I came over and smiled.
“I'm Mackenzie. I'm looking for a sidekick. What's your name?”
“Natasha.”
“So, what are you good at, Natasha?”
“Well, I'm pretty good at art, but I doubt that'd help you. I, uh- well, honestly, I'm terrible at anything sports and stuff,” she said sheepishly. At least she was honest- unlike some of the others.
“Can I see some of your art?”
She picked up a sketchbook and flipped to one of the pages. It was filled this hands- a practice page, I guessed. It was pretty good- not exactly professional, but good for a teenager. I told her that, but she didn't seem convinced. /So, she's an artist, but a bit insecure, too,/ I thought, mentally adding that to my list. She seemed like she's be nice to have around, though.
“How long have you been here?”
“About three years. There's been four heroines and heroes before you came that I've seen.”
“Well, how would you like to be my sidekick?”
She gaped at me. “Really?” she asked, sounding a bit skeptical. I nodded.
—-
She didn't really prove to be as useful as I'd hoped, but she was alright. I suppose.
She did complain a lot. She didn't talk much, either. I guess I can't blame her for that, but it's still like talking to a wall somethimes. There was one time when she did better than I could've, though.
We were going through the Forest of Stories, where every story ever written is kept. We were searching for a lost story in a temple deep in the woods. As soon as we walked in, a voice boomed, “One who enters must stand on the platform. Choose wisely.” We both turned to each other.
“Do you want me to do it?”
“Are you sure you want to?”
“We're in the Forest of Stories, Mackenzie. I'm a bibliophile. /Yes/.”
She went up and stood on the platform. “Choose three stories. Choose wisely,” the voice boomed again. Natasha was shaking a bit, but she at least tried to keep it out of her voice. “I choose… Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, and… Keeper of the Lost Cities.” The moment she said the last syllable, the platform dropped and she plummeted into the darkness.
—-
Hi there, everyone! Natasha here. Mackenzie didn't see this part, so I'm writing it in her journal for her. Don't worry, I promise she asked me to.
So, where were we? Oh! Right. Plummeting into darkness. As I fell, torches lit on the side of the wall. It felt like forever, but it was probably only a few seconds before my feet hit the ground. That creepy voice yelled at me again. “You must answer questions about your chosen stories, to see how well you really appreciate them. Enter the first room to begin.” /Oh!/ I thought. /Awesome! Trivia! I'll ace this./ I stepped into the first room.
There were three pieces of paper on three different stands. The floor glowed, lighting a path to the first one. Also- spoiler warning! Skip over the next few paragraphs if you don't want Harry Potter spoiled for you. You can stop when you see “ALL CLEAR!” Mackenzie thinks it's dumb to add that in here, but I had to. Sorry.
The first paper read, “What is Severus Snape's Patronus?” That one was easy. It's a doe, the same as Lily Potter's Patronus, since he was in love with her. I really hate Snape, but I kind of feel sorry for him for that. First he got friendzoned, then Lily didn't even want to be friends with him anymore, and /then/ she marries another guy? Yikes. But I'm getting away from the point.
Mackenzie is getting mad at me, though. She says she was watching this part. I suppose I'll let her continue, then.
note: all the slashes are supposed to be italics (the word counter I'm using doesn't have them)
Pt. 1 (395 words)
Ezra
Ezra's footsteps echoed around the empty museum despite his attempts to quiet them. But then again, nobody was there, were they?
That was actually a bit of a problem.
Gwen was supposed to have been at the art museum twenty minutes ago. She was the only one who had the code to the locked wing, where the art was being stored. Now, reader, this wasn't a heist, so to say, more like a favor to the museum. The art was a fake. It did, however, contain the map to a certain lost treasure on the back. So Ezra and Gwen did get quite a bit more out of it than the museum. But back to the story.
Gwen
Gwen knew she was late, and it was very annoying to her. She liked things to be on schedule (and /stay/ on schedule). So, despite her best efforts, she very much felt like yelling at inanimate objects as if that would make them work properly. She had so far restrained herself, though.
The reason she was late was a simple one. There was a hatch beneath the staircase leading to the upstairs wing, and the lock on that hatch was stuck. Gwen's bobby pin, which usually did the trick, couldn't get it open.
Ezra
Ezra had hidden himself in a storage closet after waiting for a few minutes. Gwen still hadn't appeared, and he was beginning to worry. Had she been caught? Just as he was about to text her to leave, he heard footsteps and opened the door just a crack.
It was not Gwen, as he had thought, so he quickly shut the door. It was another woman. She had light brown hair and startlingly blue eyes, and her hands did not seem to be able to keep still. She walked quietly, glancing around and keeping to the shadows. When she was sure nobody was there, she picked up the fake painting, then went over to the door and slid a piece of paper under it. Ezra waited for a moment, then picked it up. It read, “Don't try to come after the painting again. I'm serious. You're getting yourself into more than you know, and I'm trying to get you out of it. A powerful group wants that painting and they'll do anything to get it.
My name is Elana, by the way.”
Pt. 2 305 words (Jespin is full of himself and a often lies)
If you think I'm full of myself, you are sorely mistaken. I'm just that good.
I've won so many awards. If anyone tells you different, they're lying. Sure, I almost ended the world. It's not /that/ bad, is it? No, it's not.
It all started like this. I was working on homework, getting every question right, when a bird flew through my window and plucked me upm the carried me out. I did not scream, nor did I panic. I'm always courageous, and this is just another example. It dropped me in the river nearby, and I plunged down into the depths. Again, I didn't panic, just tried to swin to the top. The whirlpool, of course, was designed to keep me down, or else I would have escaped. I was thrown to the ground, then, as if I had teleported. I got up, brushed myself off, and checked my hair. Perfect, as always. The room was beautiful, glamorous, just as I should have. I walked over to a chair and sat down.
—–
Goodness, I apologize for having you read that. I promised Jespin he could write some. Anyways- here I am! Lydia here. Let's start again.
I was waiting for Jedpsin in the other room. I had cooked, cleaned, made the bed, and done everything I could so he couldn't complain. “Well, Lydia. Long time no see. What do you want?” Jespin said, sound annoyed. I glared at him. His attitude hadn't been dulled at all since I'd last seen him. Unfortunately, I needed his help. It was vital that the Gem be returned to its chamber, and Jespin was the only one who could get it. Trust me- I had no wish to ask him. I could've done it myself, I had wished, but I couldn't. So, I suppose I needed him.
Pt. 3 564 words (i did the chosen one trope bc I legit could not think of anything, plus parallel universes more or less)
“Race you to the top!” Jackie yelled, scrambling up the tree.
“Not fair! You had a head start!”
“Too bad, Quinn!”
I grumbled, but she didn't hear me. How was I supposed to create an interesting story if someone always beats me at everything? I still have seven years, but still- I'm responsible for the entertainment for literally thousands of people.
Yikes.
As I began to race up the tree, my finger found a hole that hadn't been there before. It was big, too, and smooth around the edges. I peeked inside- there was a tiny button, about the size of my fingertip. /Well, this will make for an interesting story./ I pressed it.
The world froze for a second- the leaves stopped blowing, and everything was silent. Then, it started to spin. I though maybe I was falling, but I was in the same place- the tree was unmoving. /Ah,/ I thought. /The Story Council chose my story already./ Usually they give people a few more years, but I suppose they got a bit impatient. I don't blame them.
Everything changed to swirls of black and purple and turquoise for a moment before they vanished. I fell onto a dirt road that split a few feet ahead of me. The left road has a sign that said “Solo Heroine”, and the right road had a sign that said “Pick a Sidekick”. I glanced around there was nobody to ask where I was. Shrugging, I chose to pick a sidekick.
—-
“Welcome, welcome, Quinn Rastelby! We've been waiting for you. We have the best sidekicks here! Feel free to browse band ask them questions.”
The sidekicks were all in separate booths. Some of them were trying to catch my attention; others just looked bored. I passed right by the attention-seekers. /No thank you./ As I looked around, asking questions, nobody seemed right. They were all acting to flashy, or they didn't want to answer my questions. One of the people who worked there seemed to notice. “If you can't find anybody who you think could be helpful, then we do have one Sidekick-in-training who you could meet, if you are quite sure there's nobody else…” The woman sounded hesitant, but I nodded. She took me into another room near the back, where a boy was reading. “Caleb, we have a heroine! She's considering choosing you.” The boy- Caleb- looked up, scowling. “I told you, Lina, it's Cal, not Caleb.” Lina huffed, then said, “Well, Cal, I'll let Quinn ask you some questions.” To me, she whispered, “Oh, do pick him, if you can. He's been here for a year already and he's a bit irritating at times.” Then, she left.
Cal wasn't bad looking, I suppose. His dark hair was wild and unruly, but not in a bad way. His temper, though, seemed quite bad.
“So. Um. Cal. Why do you think I should pick you?”
“Don't really care if you do or not, honestly. But I suppose I could be useful. Blend in. I can cook, too.”
“Okay… so, uh, if I did pick you, you'd be able to help me?”
“S'pose so.”
“How do I pick someone?”
“Just tell them.”
“Well, then, I pick you.”
He looked very surprised for a moment, and a bit eager, but then it vanished. He got up and walked through the door. “Well, then, come on.”
Pt. 4 668 words (so I did a past heroine that would've come before Quinn, hope that's alright) (not me just having mackenzie trash talk me most of the time because that's probably about how useful I'd be on a quest lol-)
I walked through the rows of booths where the sidekick sat. They all were very eager to be chosen, I suppose. One girl, a teenager, was looking at me hopefully. I came over and smiled.
“I'm Mackenzie. I'm looking for a sidekick. What's your name?”
“Natasha.”
“So, what are you good at, Natasha?”
“Well, I'm pretty good at art, but I doubt that'd help you. I, uh- well, honestly, I'm terrible at anything sports and stuff,” she said sheepishly. At least she was honest- unlike some of the others.
“Can I see some of your art?”
She picked up a sketchbook and flipped to one of the pages. It was filled this hands- a practice page, I guessed. It was pretty good- not exactly professional, but good for a teenager. I told her that, but she didn't seem convinced. /So, she's an artist, but a bit insecure, too,/ I thought, mentally adding that to my list. She seemed like she's be nice to have around, though.
“How long have you been here?”
“About three years. There's been four heroines and heroes before you came that I've seen.”
“Well, how would you like to be my sidekick?”
She gaped at me. “Really?” she asked, sounding a bit skeptical. I nodded.
—-
She didn't really prove to be as useful as I'd hoped, but she was alright. I suppose.
She did complain a lot. She didn't talk much, either. I guess I can't blame her for that, but it's still like talking to a wall somethimes. There was one time when she did better than I could've, though.
We were going through the Forest of Stories, where every story ever written is kept. We were searching for a lost story in a temple deep in the woods. As soon as we walked in, a voice boomed, “One who enters must stand on the platform. Choose wisely.” We both turned to each other.
“Do you want me to do it?”
“Are you sure you want to?”
“We're in the Forest of Stories, Mackenzie. I'm a bibliophile. /Yes/.”
She went up and stood on the platform. “Choose three stories. Choose wisely,” the voice boomed again. Natasha was shaking a bit, but she at least tried to keep it out of her voice. “I choose… Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, and… Keeper of the Lost Cities.” The moment she said the last syllable, the platform dropped and she plummeted into the darkness.
—-
Hi there, everyone! Natasha here. Mackenzie didn't see this part, so I'm writing it in her journal for her. Don't worry, I promise she asked me to.
So, where were we? Oh! Right. Plummeting into darkness. As I fell, torches lit on the side of the wall. It felt like forever, but it was probably only a few seconds before my feet hit the ground. That creepy voice yelled at me again. “You must answer questions about your chosen stories, to see how well you really appreciate them. Enter the first room to begin.” /Oh!/ I thought. /Awesome! Trivia! I'll ace this./ I stepped into the first room.
There were three pieces of paper on three different stands. The floor glowed, lighting a path to the first one. Also- spoiler warning! Skip over the next few paragraphs if you don't want Harry Potter spoiled for you. You can stop when you see “ALL CLEAR!” Mackenzie thinks it's dumb to add that in here, but I had to. Sorry.
The first paper read, “What is Severus Snape's Patronus?” That one was easy. It's a doe, the same as Lily Potter's Patronus, since he was in love with her. I really hate Snape, but I kind of feel sorry for him for that. First he got friendzoned, then Lily didn't even want to be friends with him anymore, and /then/ she marries another guy? Yikes. But I'm getting away from the point.
Mackenzie is getting mad at me, though. She says she was watching this part. I suppose I'll let her continue, then.
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What's the point? I feel so sad. I don't like walking anymore, I don't like thinking, I don't like waking up.
I am tired.
Why do my friends always look so happy. I feel like I'm the most stupid one in every bunch. Am I just being paranoid? Or am I the only sad one here. I just wanna go cry in a corner and have someone comfort me. My eyes are heavy nearly every second of the day. My heart is never full. Why do I feel this way?
Where can I go to find something that fills me? Where can I search to get water that doesn't leave me empty?
It's almost like every kind word doesn't matter. My thoughts destroy everything. My social anxiety, it hasn't faded away.
–
I wake up. Tubes, are taped, onto my arms. A doctor glares into my eyes. “ma'm. You're in a hospital”
I am vulnerable laying on the hospital chair in a gown.
A man in the corner of my eye looks at me with heavy eyes. He rocks my hospital chair, back and forth.
“Your parents didn't survive.”
What parents? I continue to listen in. A crash? What crash? I don't recall any of this! Soon enough all their words become blurs of noise in my ears. Nothing matters. Why am I here?
I don't remember any of this. What's the purpose. I tell them my thoughts.
They respond “You have amnesia.”
Why are you telling me so many statements. Yet not comforting me.
Where can I go. To cry?
Where can I go to relieve these worries?
Will anybody love me anymore?
They hand me a mirror.
I look nothing like them. I have a scar on my face from the ‘crash’ these people keep telling me about.
“Why?” I yell. “Why?”
They look at me with pity, and the guy in the corner lowers his head.
They tell me he is my uncle. I think he was a good uncle. Was. I don't remember him anymore….
They tell me I'm 16 years old. That I have to remember something. That I can't just start over and go into school with no memory. That even if I myself don't notice it currently, that I have a lisp on my words.
Why me?
WHY ME
I close my eyes. I wanna rest again. I wake up. It all repeats.
I'm in a cycle. There's no escape. I can try hard. But why try? Is it not all meaningless. Is not all toil meaningless?
Why try any longer.
I am tired.
Why do my friends always look so happy. I feel like I'm the most stupid one in every bunch. Am I just being paranoid? Or am I the only sad one here. I just wanna go cry in a corner and have someone comfort me. My eyes are heavy nearly every second of the day. My heart is never full. Why do I feel this way?
Where can I go to find something that fills me? Where can I search to get water that doesn't leave me empty?
It's almost like every kind word doesn't matter. My thoughts destroy everything. My social anxiety, it hasn't faded away.
–
I wake up. Tubes, are taped, onto my arms. A doctor glares into my eyes. “ma'm. You're in a hospital”
I am vulnerable laying on the hospital chair in a gown.
A man in the corner of my eye looks at me with heavy eyes. He rocks my hospital chair, back and forth.
“Your parents didn't survive.”
What parents? I continue to listen in. A crash? What crash? I don't recall any of this! Soon enough all their words become blurs of noise in my ears. Nothing matters. Why am I here?
I don't remember any of this. What's the purpose. I tell them my thoughts.
They respond “You have amnesia.”
Why are you telling me so many statements. Yet not comforting me.
Where can I go. To cry?
Where can I go to relieve these worries?
Will anybody love me anymore?
They hand me a mirror.
I look nothing like them. I have a scar on my face from the ‘crash’ these people keep telling me about.
“Why?” I yell. “Why?”
They look at me with pity, and the guy in the corner lowers his head.
They tell me he is my uncle. I think he was a good uncle. Was. I don't remember him anymore….
They tell me I'm 16 years old. That I have to remember something. That I can't just start over and go into school with no memory. That even if I myself don't notice it currently, that I have a lisp on my words.
Why me?
WHY ME
I close my eyes. I wanna rest again. I wake up. It all repeats.
I'm in a cycle. There's no escape. I can try hard. But why try? Is it not all meaningless. Is not all toil meaningless?
Why try any longer.
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Daily: July 24 | Sweaty White Cats (540 words)
Author's Note: Acronym taken from @TKb0iZ of Folklore Fan Fest
SWC is a famous acronym known to any normal human being who has not been living under a rock and has been keeping up to date with recent pop culture. It would be questionable and concerning for one to be unfamiliar with SWC, as it has been a prevailing term used to describe the recent influx of Sweaty White Cats, otherwise known as the acronym SWC.
Sweaty White Cats are a certain type of feline species with the scientific name Felis swecatus. It has a physical appearance similar to a Persian cat, however these sweaty felines are purely white. As of writing, there have been no other discovered sweaty cats with a color other than white. According to scientists, zoologists, and veterinarians, Sweaty White Cats are sweaty due to their possession of excessive sweat glands in their body. Experts recommend owners of these felines to keep them in cool environments and to expect sweat trails around their environment.
Sweaty White Cats are also known for their playful, curious nature. One example would be Mr. Swecarius Volarius III, a popular SWC on social media. Swecarius has been kind enough to provide us with a story of his typical day to include in this article, saying that sharing his story would “bring light to the realistic, productive day of a typical Sweaty White Cat.”
My day starts at three in the morning to scratch on the door of my human's bedroom and cry for food, for I have not eaten in 5 days. Actually, that is 5 hours, but it is still animal abuse to not be fed in 2-hour intervals! My bed is also soaked every morning due to my sweat, although that is a problem for my servant to resolve. I also like to leave more sweat trails in the morning, since I take pleasure in seeing my human work tirelessly for me. It is nice bossing people around, am I not wrong?
After I am fed, I return to my slumber. It does not take long before I begin dreaming of traveling the world and conquering lands, both of which are my favorite scenarios to fantasize about.
By the time the afternoon creeps in, I have acquired sufficient energy to unleash the playful, curious nature that humans like to associate with us Sweaty White Cats. I begin traversing the wooden floors, imagining that it was Mount Everest. I do knock a few objects down and leave the entire house partially flooded, but again, that is for my servant to take care of. I am not to blame for my playful, curious nature. I also bring gifts of gratitude to the door of the bedroom. They are pungent and foul, although I believe my servant should be grateful that I even have the time and effort to bring her a gift.
After five hours of endless exploration and adventure, I have my fifth meal of the day. A traveler always needs its meals, or else it would not even lift a paw to step out into the vast world.
Alas, my day ends. I curl up in my cat bed, which is now dry again, and sleep for the rest of the night before repeating my routine.
Good night, world!
Last edited by rynn_ (July 24, 2024 14:32:28)
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
The Cursed Mask:
Part 1:
The sound of silence deafens my ears. It echoes and bounces. So loud, yet so silent. So aggressive yet so subtle. I long for it to be broken, to shatter like the glass inside me, for it to disappear and never come back.
Never.
Hot tears began to flow, down my cheeks and onto my blood-stained hands, the water trickling through the gap between my fingers. All the water in every river and sea, every lake and canal, not all the water mustered from every inch, nook and cranny of the world, none of it could dilute the bright, thick blood that stains my hands. A painful reminder of what I did.
Heaves gates rattle open, the bright gold blinds my already-blind eyes, as the angels part for me, heads bowed down in shame. I felt a pang of guilt as I look at what I’m about to leave behind, before remembering all the suffering, embarrassment and heartbreak this place has caused me. An over-advertised propaganda of the fake utopian of heaven.
With new adrenalin, I pick up pace, until I’m soaring through heavens gates, thrill overwhelming me. I let out a light chuckle. Its so good to finally be free.
Free.
But,
That’s when I
Plummeted.
Down.
Down below into
A void
Of
Darkness.
Which swallows you
Whole
And chews you
Until you’re
Inside
Out.
Darkness.
So thick,
So saturated,
So condensed,
You can almost feel it on your
Skin,
Bone
And
Blood.
Darkness.
Which reawakens nightmares
Which were
Buried
So deep,
You never thought they could ever reincarnate
Again.
Darkness.
And that’s all you
Touch,
Breathe,
Smell,
Think,
Feel.
Darkness
Is what
Took me
When I
Plummeted.
Down below,
To a void of…
Darkness…
This is just a very quick draft with many mistakes, I did it on word and pasted it on here, so the format is not as it's suposed to be, but when i could be bothered i will change it.
Part 1:
The sound of silence deafens my ears. It echoes and bounces. So loud, yet so silent. So aggressive yet so subtle. I long for it to be broken, to shatter like the glass inside me, for it to disappear and never come back.
Never.
Hot tears began to flow, down my cheeks and onto my blood-stained hands, the water trickling through the gap between my fingers. All the water in every river and sea, every lake and canal, not all the water mustered from every inch, nook and cranny of the world, none of it could dilute the bright, thick blood that stains my hands. A painful reminder of what I did.
Heaves gates rattle open, the bright gold blinds my already-blind eyes, as the angels part for me, heads bowed down in shame. I felt a pang of guilt as I look at what I’m about to leave behind, before remembering all the suffering, embarrassment and heartbreak this place has caused me. An over-advertised propaganda of the fake utopian of heaven.
With new adrenalin, I pick up pace, until I’m soaring through heavens gates, thrill overwhelming me. I let out a light chuckle. Its so good to finally be free.
Free.
But,
That’s when I
Plummeted.
Down.
Down below into
A void
Of
Darkness.
Which swallows you
Whole
And chews you
Until you’re
Inside
Out.
Darkness.
So thick,
So saturated,
So condensed,
You can almost feel it on your
Skin,
Bone
And
Blood.
Darkness.
Which reawakens nightmares
Which were
Buried
So deep,
You never thought they could ever reincarnate
Again.
Darkness.
And that’s all you
Touch,
Breathe,
Smell,
Think,
Feel.
Darkness
Is what
Took me
When I
Plummeted.
Down below,
To a void of…
Darkness…
This is just a very quick draft with many mistakes, I did it on word and pasted it on here, so the format is not as it's suposed to be, but when i could be bothered i will change it.
Last edited by unercornshine (Sept. 10, 2024 18:36:26)
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Daily 24
Prompt: Stop Watching Children
I crept up the lattice fence, vines winding around my wrists. I tore them off impatiently and, with the sun beating down on my head, slipped through the little hole into a tiny gap, just big enough for me.
The concrete walls scraped against my hips and I saw a trickle of blood running down my legs. I squatted down and looked down onto the gathered crowd of children. Their faces were pale and trembling, many of them had streaks of blood on them and dirt. They were dressed in thin woollen shirts and shorts and patchy sandals.
“Ahem.”
A tall proud man strutted up onto a little podium at the front of the sandy clearing.
“I assume most of you don’t know who I am. I am Sir Alfred Cunningham, owner of this… orphanage, let’s say, and, most importantly, the one who’s found, well, taken, all of you wonderful children.”
He uttered the last word bitterly and wrinkled his nose before carrying on.
“For a while now we have provided food for you, and drink and clothes and beds; you’ve been living in luxury. Well, you’ll think of it that way soon. You see, we’re going on a journey across the ocean, all the way to Italy!”
Murmurs of excitement and doubt rippled across the room.
“Mummy says food in Italy is very yummy!”
“What if we're put in another orphanage?”
“What’s going to happen to us?”
“Maybe we’ll get adopted!”
“Maybe we’ll have some money!”
“Perhaps…”
“Silence!” He bellowed, his face flushed red. “Good. We shall be going to Rome, a place of riches and money and slaves. And you, my dear children, will be…”
He trailed off, hesitating, his eyes glittering with malice.
“You’ll see!” He announced brightly.
He sipped from a water glass as the children started grouping together, a few of them crying, the tears splashing onto the ground like raindrops. Some were laughing and chattering, their eyes sparkling.
I knew what was going to happen to them.
Tears welled up in my eyes.
These poor children.
A shuffled around, trying to get a better view, and as I did so, a cloud of dust erupted into the air making me splutter and cough. And when it cleared I saw hundreds of faces gazing up at me in amusement and terror and confusion.
“Whatever are you doing up there?” asked Mr Cunningham.
I regained my posture.
“What you are going to do with these children is just terrible. I’m Mr… Stapler, a government agent and I’ll report you back to my boss if you don’t give them back to their parents right now!” I exclaimed. I obviously wasn’t a government agent, but I had to lie.
“Well, Mr Stapler, I have one thing to say to you.”
I nodded eagerly.
“Stop watching children.”
Prompt: Stop Watching Children
I crept up the lattice fence, vines winding around my wrists. I tore them off impatiently and, with the sun beating down on my head, slipped through the little hole into a tiny gap, just big enough for me.
The concrete walls scraped against my hips and I saw a trickle of blood running down my legs. I squatted down and looked down onto the gathered crowd of children. Their faces were pale and trembling, many of them had streaks of blood on them and dirt. They were dressed in thin woollen shirts and shorts and patchy sandals.
“Ahem.”
A tall proud man strutted up onto a little podium at the front of the sandy clearing.
“I assume most of you don’t know who I am. I am Sir Alfred Cunningham, owner of this… orphanage, let’s say, and, most importantly, the one who’s found, well, taken, all of you wonderful children.”
He uttered the last word bitterly and wrinkled his nose before carrying on.
“For a while now we have provided food for you, and drink and clothes and beds; you’ve been living in luxury. Well, you’ll think of it that way soon. You see, we’re going on a journey across the ocean, all the way to Italy!”
Murmurs of excitement and doubt rippled across the room.
“Mummy says food in Italy is very yummy!”
“What if we're put in another orphanage?”
“What’s going to happen to us?”
“Maybe we’ll get adopted!”
“Maybe we’ll have some money!”
“Perhaps…”
“Silence!” He bellowed, his face flushed red. “Good. We shall be going to Rome, a place of riches and money and slaves. And you, my dear children, will be…”
He trailed off, hesitating, his eyes glittering with malice.
“You’ll see!” He announced brightly.
He sipped from a water glass as the children started grouping together, a few of them crying, the tears splashing onto the ground like raindrops. Some were laughing and chattering, their eyes sparkling.
I knew what was going to happen to them.
Tears welled up in my eyes.
These poor children.
A shuffled around, trying to get a better view, and as I did so, a cloud of dust erupted into the air making me splutter and cough. And when it cleared I saw hundreds of faces gazing up at me in amusement and terror and confusion.
“Whatever are you doing up there?” asked Mr Cunningham.
I regained my posture.
“What you are going to do with these children is just terrible. I’m Mr… Stapler, a government agent and I’ll report you back to my boss if you don’t give them back to their parents right now!” I exclaimed. I obviously wasn’t a government agent, but I had to lie.
“Well, Mr Stapler, I have one thing to say to you.”
I nodded eagerly.
“Stop watching children.”
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- Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
prompt by @starthorn (sunrise will come)
Sunrise will come. That’s what Pa had always said while we huddled in the dark bunker below the earth, fear making our breaths come quick. Sunrise will come. Or, we won’t be here forever. We will see the sky again and feel the wind in our hair once more.
I’d always believed him, then.
But when he wasn’t here to say it, when it was just me holed beneath the earth’s dark embrace, when all I heard was my own fearful breaths and the beep of my watch as it counted the hours, I found it hard to believe.
Would the sun even be there, when I finally braved the surface? Or would my eyes adjust to the blackness, blinding me when I again sought the sun’s rays?
I wasn’t sure, and that was the worst of it. I didn’t know anything, not even why exactly I was down here, much less what would happen when I emerged. I’d heard the sirens, and, dutiful citizen—afraid citizen, my mind corrected—that I was, I’d slipped alone into the two-person bunker below my shed.
With a sigh and an attempt at more measured breaths, I pressed my forehead to the cool stone. I shivered. My watch beep, beep, beeped. Three o’clock. Perhaps I should try to sleep, but with the rock and dirt surrounding me, I always found the task impossible. I’d only nodded off once, years ago, when the sirens had lasted two days. I hoped they wouldn’t. Not this time. I bit my lip, thinking about the crops I hadn’t watered, wondering what my land would look like when I came above ground again.
A breath later, something shifted. For a moment, with a jolt of terror, I wondered if it was the earth itself, but then I realized it was the silence. With my watch’s noise, I hadn’t noticed at first, but once it fell silent, I could tell there was no noise at all. No sirens.
I laughed, voice wavering a bit—this type of solitude wasn’t good for me—but I couldn’t muster up the energy to care. Instead, I shoved up the heavy metal door and stepped into the cool night air. Everything was . . . exactly the same as I’d left it. I laughed again. It was suddenly absurd that I’d ever doubted it. I looked to the east. It was still dark now, but in that moment I knew sunrise would come.
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Sunrise will come. That’s what Pa had always said while we huddled in the dark bunker below the earth, fear making our breaths come quick. Sunrise will come. Or, we won’t be here forever. We will see the sky again and feel the wind in our hair once more.
I’d always believed him, then.
But when he wasn’t here to say it, when it was just me holed beneath the earth’s dark embrace, when all I heard was my own fearful breaths and the beep of my watch as it counted the hours, I found it hard to believe.
Would the sun even be there, when I finally braved the surface? Or would my eyes adjust to the blackness, blinding me when I again sought the sun’s rays?
I wasn’t sure, and that was the worst of it. I didn’t know anything, not even why exactly I was down here, much less what would happen when I emerged. I’d heard the sirens, and, dutiful citizen—afraid citizen, my mind corrected—that I was, I’d slipped alone into the two-person bunker below my shed.
With a sigh and an attempt at more measured breaths, I pressed my forehead to the cool stone. I shivered. My watch beep, beep, beeped. Three o’clock. Perhaps I should try to sleep, but with the rock and dirt surrounding me, I always found the task impossible. I’d only nodded off once, years ago, when the sirens had lasted two days. I hoped they wouldn’t. Not this time. I bit my lip, thinking about the crops I hadn’t watered, wondering what my land would look like when I came above ground again.
A breath later, something shifted. For a moment, with a jolt of terror, I wondered if it was the earth itself, but then I realized it was the silence. With my watch’s noise, I hadn’t noticed at first, but once it fell silent, I could tell there was no noise at all. No sirens.
I laughed, voice wavering a bit—this type of solitude wasn’t good for me—but I couldn’t muster up the energy to care. Instead, I shoved up the heavy metal door and stepped into the cool night air. Everything was . . . exactly the same as I’d left it. I laughed again. It was suddenly absurd that I’d ever doubted it. I looked to the east. It was still dark now, but in that moment I knew sunrise would come.
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Like a Heart that’s Never felt Love
Thanks to @Fantastical_Words for her critique! <3
I stormed out of the door, the cold air biting my cheeks, my head pounding, my fists clenching, my heart pumping.
Why couldn’t they just leave me alone?
All I wanted was to have a bit of peace.
They’re too scared to let me live my life.
I gritted my teeth and glanced back over my shoulder. Shadowed figures stood silhouetted under the streaks of amber and pink in the marbled sky. I could hear distant shouts, confused and laced with worry.
“Aria?”
“Where are you?”
“We just need to have a little talk with you!”
I took a deep breath, closed my eyes, trying to control myself…
I screamed. It was a raw and unearthly sound that pierced through the air. And yet it was beautiful. I shrieked and I bellowed and I sobbed and I cried. Tears streamed down my face, splashing onto the ground. The sky started to weep with me, raindrops hammering down on my head, my hair plastering to my skin. I collapsed to the ground and curled up in a ball and let sleep swallow me up.
My eyelids fluttered open and I sat up quickly, my breathing quick and shallow. That was when I realised where I was.
Right next to my best friend’s grave.
I was in a dark and endless cemetery, thousands of graves scattered amongst the drooping bushes and wilted grass. And there was his. Luka’s.
In dedication to Luka Parakotsi
Died aged 14 years old
27th March 2022
A lump rose in my throat. I gulped and bit my lip, trying to stop the tears from coming through. Blood trickled into my mouth, sharp and metallic.
We had been climbing. It was his favourite tree. And then I dared him to go up to another branch. And another. And another. I still remember every single second of it. The sickening crack of the branch. His strangled cry. The dull thud. Sirens wailing in my ears. People comforting me, giving me too-bright smiles. Me clinging to his stone-cold body, clutching onto it as though it was the last link to the real world. My aunt prising me from his body as it was wheeled into the ambulance.
And it was all two years ago. And I couldn’t even apologise. I couldn’t tell him how I had been thinking about him every day. What torment I suffered through. All the regret and sorrow that I ever tried to make him go onto that cursed branch.
I swore under my breath. I wish I could just see him one last time. Just a glimpse.
“Aria?”
I gasped.
“Luka?”
My voice sounded lonely and wobbly in the inky darkness.
“So you came.”
Instead of the warmth that I expected to feel, the tingle that should have rushed through my body, I just felt like a bucket of freezing cold water had been washed over me. His voice was bitter and angry. My lip wobbled.
“Of course I did.” I stammered faintly.
He stepped out from under a gnarled tree, pale and thinning.
“Do you know how long I’ve been suffering here? Do you know what it feels like to be trapped under the ground in a box, slowly suffocating but never actually dying? I waited for so long… and you gave up on me. You forgot. How could you?” He spat.
I gazed at him longingly. His hair was matted and his shirt was covered in streaks of dirt and mud, a long gash running down the side of his face. Guilt overwhelmed me.
“I thought about you every day! I never stopped for a single moment. Not for two years. I look at your photographs and watch our videos and I try to remember every last detail. I would never give up on you! I just didn’t know how to find you. I’m sorry.”
I trailed off, my voice breaking. He looked down at his feet.
“It’s a bit late for that.” He mumbled.
“I’m sorry!”
And then he lifted his head and stared at me directly in the eyes. They were an endless pit of anger and fury.
Like a raindrop that’s never touched that ground.
Like a star that’s never seen light.
Like a heart that’s never felt love.
I woke up, sweating, back where I was before. Now I was bathed in darkness, the moon providing little light. I brushed the tears away from my eyes and hauled myself up. Mud dripped down from my drenched clothes and a violent shiver tingled down my spine.
I made for my house, its lights shining cheerfully. For a moment I believed that they had maybe just left it. Just left me on my own for a while. Not worried. I sighed in relief. The clouds had cleared, revealing a shining crescent in the sky with a shimmering halo surrounding it. And for the first time since Luka’s death, I felt strangely happy. I knew I shouldn’t be. My best friend had just broken my heart. And yet I’d seen him again. I’d done the one thing I’d wanted to do for years. Say sorry. I lifted my head to the sky.
“I’m sorry, Luka.” I whispered.
I climbed up the hill to my house, slipping on the gravelly path. But when I did finally approach it, I saw a blinding blue flash and lots of worried voices, people wandering around our driveway. I saw two cars parked further away, with a familiar blue and neon yellow pattern. The police. I scrambled up the last of the hill and stumbled into the throng of people.
“I’m safe!” I cried.
They all looked at me in astonishment.
“We’ve been looking for you everywhere!”
My aunt walked out of the house, her face tear-streaked and flushed.
“Is it really you?”
I grinned.
“Of course it’s me.” I told her soothingly.
“Aria!”
I turned around and saw Luka, standing on the rise of the hill, his face barely distinguishable. I furrowed my brow. Why had he come back?
“Luka… I’m coming….”
I wobbled forwards unsteadily and waited for those words that would bring me forgiveness.
Nothing.
The world spun around me and everyone’s voices became distant and blurry. As I fell back into Aunt’s arms, he fixed me with a gaze that burned forests and tumbled mountains as though they were just building blocks. It was an abyss of yearning and regret.
Like a raindrop that’s never touched the ground.
Like a star that’s never seen light.
Like a heart that’s never felt love.
And then everything went black.
Thanks to @Fantastical_Words for her critique! <3
I stormed out of the door, the cold air biting my cheeks, my head pounding, my fists clenching, my heart pumping.
Why couldn’t they just leave me alone?
All I wanted was to have a bit of peace.
They’re too scared to let me live my life.
I gritted my teeth and glanced back over my shoulder. Shadowed figures stood silhouetted under the streaks of amber and pink in the marbled sky. I could hear distant shouts, confused and laced with worry.
“Aria?”
“Where are you?”
“We just need to have a little talk with you!”
I took a deep breath, closed my eyes, trying to control myself…
I screamed. It was a raw and unearthly sound that pierced through the air. And yet it was beautiful. I shrieked and I bellowed and I sobbed and I cried. Tears streamed down my face, splashing onto the ground. The sky started to weep with me, raindrops hammering down on my head, my hair plastering to my skin. I collapsed to the ground and curled up in a ball and let sleep swallow me up.
My eyelids fluttered open and I sat up quickly, my breathing quick and shallow. That was when I realised where I was.
Right next to my best friend’s grave.
I was in a dark and endless cemetery, thousands of graves scattered amongst the drooping bushes and wilted grass. And there was his. Luka’s.
In dedication to Luka Parakotsi
Died aged 14 years old
27th March 2022
A lump rose in my throat. I gulped and bit my lip, trying to stop the tears from coming through. Blood trickled into my mouth, sharp and metallic.
We had been climbing. It was his favourite tree. And then I dared him to go up to another branch. And another. And another. I still remember every single second of it. The sickening crack of the branch. His strangled cry. The dull thud. Sirens wailing in my ears. People comforting me, giving me too-bright smiles. Me clinging to his stone-cold body, clutching onto it as though it was the last link to the real world. My aunt prising me from his body as it was wheeled into the ambulance.
And it was all two years ago. And I couldn’t even apologise. I couldn’t tell him how I had been thinking about him every day. What torment I suffered through. All the regret and sorrow that I ever tried to make him go onto that cursed branch.
I swore under my breath. I wish I could just see him one last time. Just a glimpse.
“Aria?”
I gasped.
“Luka?”
My voice sounded lonely and wobbly in the inky darkness.
“So you came.”
Instead of the warmth that I expected to feel, the tingle that should have rushed through my body, I just felt like a bucket of freezing cold water had been washed over me. His voice was bitter and angry. My lip wobbled.
“Of course I did.” I stammered faintly.
He stepped out from under a gnarled tree, pale and thinning.
“Do you know how long I’ve been suffering here? Do you know what it feels like to be trapped under the ground in a box, slowly suffocating but never actually dying? I waited for so long… and you gave up on me. You forgot. How could you?” He spat.
I gazed at him longingly. His hair was matted and his shirt was covered in streaks of dirt and mud, a long gash running down the side of his face. Guilt overwhelmed me.
“I thought about you every day! I never stopped for a single moment. Not for two years. I look at your photographs and watch our videos and I try to remember every last detail. I would never give up on you! I just didn’t know how to find you. I’m sorry.”
I trailed off, my voice breaking. He looked down at his feet.
“It’s a bit late for that.” He mumbled.
“I’m sorry!”
And then he lifted his head and stared at me directly in the eyes. They were an endless pit of anger and fury.
Like a raindrop that’s never touched that ground.
Like a star that’s never seen light.
Like a heart that’s never felt love.
I woke up, sweating, back where I was before. Now I was bathed in darkness, the moon providing little light. I brushed the tears away from my eyes and hauled myself up. Mud dripped down from my drenched clothes and a violent shiver tingled down my spine.
I made for my house, its lights shining cheerfully. For a moment I believed that they had maybe just left it. Just left me on my own for a while. Not worried. I sighed in relief. The clouds had cleared, revealing a shining crescent in the sky with a shimmering halo surrounding it. And for the first time since Luka’s death, I felt strangely happy. I knew I shouldn’t be. My best friend had just broken my heart. And yet I’d seen him again. I’d done the one thing I’d wanted to do for years. Say sorry. I lifted my head to the sky.
“I’m sorry, Luka.” I whispered.
I climbed up the hill to my house, slipping on the gravelly path. But when I did finally approach it, I saw a blinding blue flash and lots of worried voices, people wandering around our driveway. I saw two cars parked further away, with a familiar blue and neon yellow pattern. The police. I scrambled up the last of the hill and stumbled into the throng of people.
“I’m safe!” I cried.
They all looked at me in astonishment.
“We’ve been looking for you everywhere!”
My aunt walked out of the house, her face tear-streaked and flushed.
“Is it really you?”
I grinned.
“Of course it’s me.” I told her soothingly.
“Aria!”
I turned around and saw Luka, standing on the rise of the hill, his face barely distinguishable. I furrowed my brow. Why had he come back?
“Luka… I’m coming….”
I wobbled forwards unsteadily and waited for those words that would bring me forgiveness.
Nothing.
The world spun around me and everyone’s voices became distant and blurry. As I fell back into Aunt’s arms, he fixed me with a gaze that burned forests and tumbled mountains as though they were just building blocks. It was an abyss of yearning and regret.
Like a raindrop that’s never touched the ground.
Like a star that’s never seen light.
Like a heart that’s never felt love.
And then everything went black.
Last edited by silverlynx- (July 24, 2024 21:05:22)
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- Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Daily 24:
Swifty wants chair (Prompt by @KitVMH)
I woke up from my fabulous stall, which i had furnished with the BEST carpets, and all the BEST things, since i told Glimmer “So y’know how i’m part of the rebellion and the princess alliance and all? And i how sung that AWESOME song back at your cournation a while back?” And she said “Yeah?”
“Well i was thinking that i should get a room like a rebellion member. And a chair, of course”
“I can get you a good room, sure.”
“Yes, and better rooms for all the horses, and chairs, and-” And then Bow RUDELY interrupted, saying that it was time to go help Thaymor rebuild or something. And i didn’t get to finish talking to Glimmer. Super rude, am i right? So anyway, i got up and went to eat breakfast with Adora, as i sometimes do. But Adora was all “Hi Swift Wind! We- I mean, I, am really, really, uh, busy! Yeah!”
“Busy? I can help!”
“No no no! I got it! It’s, uh, super boring! You should go have fun”
She seemed super nervous, but i didn’t want to press so i left her alone. Later i saw Bow. Buying some balloons. So i flew down to talk “Hey Bow! What’s up?”
“Oh! Hi, Swift Wind, just, uh, buying some balloons, gotta run!” And he ran off. Weird, i thought. But i kept flying. I flew over to Plumeria, because they have the best apples on Etheria! Well i haven’t tried every apple on Etheria, but they have the best i’ve tried! And whaddya know? Glimmer was there! So i flew on down to say hi. “Hi Glimmer! Whatcha doin’?”
“AH! Swift Wind! Just, getting some supplies and fruit and stuff! Gotta go! See ya!” And she teleported off! It was really annoying, no one was telling me anything, and they were all acting so weird! So i went over to Seaworthy, to find Sea Hawk. And there he was! “Hey Sea Hawk!”
“Swift Wind! Hello!”
“Can i tell you something?”
“Of course!”
“Everyone is acting kinda weird, and i dunno what’s going on”
“Well it’s probably because-”
Then Mermista came over and was like “Sea Hawk! No!” And pulled him off to talk to him in secret. So i flew off again. Then after flying around for a while, i landed in Bright moon. And when i walked in… “Surprise!” Everyone surprised me! There were balloons, and streamers, and.. wait, was this a party! “Happy birthday!” Said Bow “Well, technically it isn’t your birthday because we don’t know your birthday, but this is the day you got turned into Swift Wind, so we’re celebrating!”
“And there’s a big present for you!” They walked me over to something covered in a blanket then pulled the blanket off and… “It’s a chair! For me!”
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Swifty wants chair (Prompt by @KitVMH)
I woke up from my fabulous stall, which i had furnished with the BEST carpets, and all the BEST things, since i told Glimmer “So y’know how i’m part of the rebellion and the princess alliance and all? And i how sung that AWESOME song back at your cournation a while back?” And she said “Yeah?”
“Well i was thinking that i should get a room like a rebellion member. And a chair, of course”
“I can get you a good room, sure.”
“Yes, and better rooms for all the horses, and chairs, and-” And then Bow RUDELY interrupted, saying that it was time to go help Thaymor rebuild or something. And i didn’t get to finish talking to Glimmer. Super rude, am i right? So anyway, i got up and went to eat breakfast with Adora, as i sometimes do. But Adora was all “Hi Swift Wind! We- I mean, I, am really, really, uh, busy! Yeah!”
“Busy? I can help!”
“No no no! I got it! It’s, uh, super boring! You should go have fun”
She seemed super nervous, but i didn’t want to press so i left her alone. Later i saw Bow. Buying some balloons. So i flew down to talk “Hey Bow! What’s up?”
“Oh! Hi, Swift Wind, just, uh, buying some balloons, gotta run!” And he ran off. Weird, i thought. But i kept flying. I flew over to Plumeria, because they have the best apples on Etheria! Well i haven’t tried every apple on Etheria, but they have the best i’ve tried! And whaddya know? Glimmer was there! So i flew on down to say hi. “Hi Glimmer! Whatcha doin’?”
“AH! Swift Wind! Just, getting some supplies and fruit and stuff! Gotta go! See ya!” And she teleported off! It was really annoying, no one was telling me anything, and they were all acting so weird! So i went over to Seaworthy, to find Sea Hawk. And there he was! “Hey Sea Hawk!”
“Swift Wind! Hello!”
“Can i tell you something?”
“Of course!”
“Everyone is acting kinda weird, and i dunno what’s going on”
“Well it’s probably because-”
Then Mermista came over and was like “Sea Hawk! No!” And pulled him off to talk to him in secret. So i flew off again. Then after flying around for a while, i landed in Bright moon. And when i walked in… “Surprise!” Everyone surprised me! There were balloons, and streamers, and.. wait, was this a party! “Happy birthday!” Said Bow “Well, technically it isn’t your birthday because we don’t know your birthday, but this is the day you got turned into Swift Wind, so we’re celebrating!”
“And there’s a big present for you!” They walked me over to something covered in a blanket then pulled the blanket off and… “It’s a chair! For me!”
470 words
- Dawn_Camps
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Weekly Four
3,550 total words
Save Code: 4/1/-29/11/1/4/7/7/1/10;6;2;8;11;13;4;12;9;3;1;5;7;/1;2;2;1;2;1;1;1;1;2;1;1;2;/2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;2;/
(Intro, write 100 words about anything, 143 words)
Kataleya easily dismounted, looking around as she did so. “Go back to the castle now, Millie.” She patted the horse's neck and watched as Millie trotted off. Once the horse was out of sight, she turned and started through the woods alone. As she walked, the sounds of birdcall and the wind causing the leave to rustle surrounded her. The sound should have calmed her, however it only served to cause her focus to be solely on her upcoming task. As she neared the agreed meeting place, her steps grew slower, more cautious and calculated. Stopping behind a tree, she listened and surveyed the area. The faint sound of heavy breathing alerted her to the presence of someone else, a man by the sound of it. She could only make out one, which meant that he had probably stuck to their agreement. Hopefully.
(Sci-Fi, Writing Prompt, write a flashforward in your story, 302 words)
Alexander looked down at Kat, sleeping so peacefully. Even after many long nights outside, she still looked pretty. A little dirty -he pulled a leaf from her hair- but as beautiful as ever. He thought back to that first sighting in the woods. Her hood pulled up around her head, casting shadow on her face. The way she deepened her voice in an effort to conceal her identity. He stifled a laugh at the thought of the girl deep in sleep pretending to be a man, and a rough street thief at that. He froze when she groaned and started to move around- she was dreaming again. When she stilled, he gently brushed the hair from her face, smiling down at her. Sighing, he got up and went to the mouth of the cave; it was still raining as it had for the past couple days. He lay on the hard rock floor, using his arms as a pillow. In this position, anything that wanted to enter the cave would have to go through him first. The thought shocked him. A mere week ago, he never would have tried to protect a random girl he met in the woods. He would have said he would but if the it came down to him or the girl, he would have chosen himself in a heartbeat. The revelation that he was falling in love struck him like a lightning bolt, he had always thought she was pretty but he found her to be boring and too cautious. Now he found that where she had before been shy and reserved, she was just observant. Where he had thought her too cautious, he had found that she preferred to think things out first. She was the opposite of him in every way.
And he loved it.
(Horror, Non-Writing Prompt, Play any video or board game, 0 words)
I played Mario Party with my siblings!
(Dystopian, Non-Writing Prompt, Do 20 jumping jacks and drink a glass of water, 0 words)
Done!
(Non-Fi, Writing Prompt, Incorporate Multimedia, 223 words)
Kataleya stepped out from behind the tree, surveying the clearing. She rested her hand on her knife. “You can come out! It's me.” She forced her voice to be deeper and gruff in a way that was hopefully believable. She glanced to her right, but made no effort to turn as a tall, muscular man stepped out from behind the low bushes. “You have it?” Kataleya's heart was pounding and she forced her voice to not shake. The man stood in front of her arms crossed. “Money first.” His voice was gravelly, like he wasn't used to speaking. Kataleya pulled the pouch from her belt and held it out, flinching when he yanked it from her hands. He weighed the pouch in his hand before pulling something from his shirt. He tossed it at her without taking his eyes off the pouch sitting in his palm. Kataleya scrambled grab it, scrunching her nose up at the smell of sweat wafting from up. But, burying her disgust, she slid the string off it and unrolled it, quickly scanning it to make sure it was genuine.
To Lex,
…shipment…
…lost…
…we'll meet… …the princess…
…get away… …find…
…hope… …take…
…crown… …father…
…worried…
From…
…shipment…
…lost…
…we'll meet… …the princess…
…get away… …find…
…hope… …take…
…crown… …father…
…worried…
From…
Once she had verified it, she rolled it back up and stuck it in her belt, making sure it wouldn't slip out.
(Script, Non-Writing Prompt, Listen to a song, audiobook, or podcast, 0 words)
I listened to Chasing The Wind by Lanie Gardner
(Thriller, Writing Prompt, Increase the pace of your story, 392 words)
Kataleya turned to walk away when a hand grabbed her shoulder and yanked her back with a cry. “Where's the rest of my money?” The man leaned close, putting his face right up to hers, causing Kataleya to turn her head away from the putrid smell of his breath. “What money? It's all right there.” The man stood upright with a sneer and held the bag out upside down. A flood of coins streamed to the ground, but they weren't the silver and gold Kataleya had put in earlier, instead they were merely cheap copper. Kataleya quickly surveyed the mess on the ground, mentally calculating. There were hardly enough there for a meal, a mockery of the price they had agreed upon. “Wha…” Kataleya gaped at the coins. The man dropped the bag and gripped the front of her cloak, lifting her until her toes brushed the ground. One hand flew to her knife, the other to the massive fist lifting her. Unsheathing it, she shakily brought it up, too slowly. The man saw it and easily gripped her wrist, squeezing until she released it with a shriek. The man gazed intently at her face. “That was no man.” He growled, yanking back her hood. “Oh…” He examined her face eagerly. He ran his fingers through her hair, Kataleya clenched her teeth, there was nothing she could do against this giant of a man. Suddenly, the man's fingers released her and she fell to the ground, scrambling for her knife. She grasped it and held it out shakily before her. But there was no need, for the man was lying on the ground, not moving. She gasped and looked up, spotting another man standing before her. He squatted beside her, a look of concern in his deep brown eyes. “Are you hurt?” He grasped her elbow and assisted her in standing. “No- no…” Kataleya said shakily, glancing down at the man who had attacked her. “You're alright now.” Her rescuer frowned down at her. “Why were you risking your life for a paper?” Kataleya's head snapped up, her mouth open in shock. “You were watching me?” She snapped indignantly. His frown deepened. “You should be glad I was, or you wouldn't be here right now.” Kataleya took a deep breath. “You're right. Thank you for your help. Now, I'd better get going.”
(Folklore, Writing Prompt, Give an animal human characteristics, 297 words)
Kataleya turned to walk away, gingerly stepping around the hulking man's sleeping (she hoped) form. She had only taken a few steps when she heard a call behind her. “Wait!” She turned, confused and nervous. “That- that wasn't me.” Her rescuer was standing there, rubbing the back of his neck awkwardly. Kataleya's eye flicked down to her attacker's limp body sprawled across the grass. “It wasn't him either.” He sighed and looked toward the trees. “You just couldn't keep quiet, could you?” Kataleya followed his gaze and nearly fell in surprise when a large, colourful bird flew out. It landed on her rescuer's shoulder. “Wait!” It called out again. “K- uh… you, meet Caspar. My… parrot.” Her rescuer gestured the bird perched on his shoulder. “A parrot?” Kataleya's expression was one of surprise. “How did you get a parrot around here?” She held out her hand and clicked like she would for a horse. Caspar cocked his head at her before flying the short distance to land. “Oh!” She gasped when his talons wrapped around her wrist. “Wait! Come back.” The parrot squawked at her. She giggled. “I already have.” She reached into a pouch on her belt and pulled out a small piece of dry bread. “Would you like this?” She held it out to him, he eyed it before snatching it in his beak up and gulping it down. “More? More?” He nudged her hand. She laughed and pulled out a larger piece. He took it before flying back to perch on her rescuer's shoulder. He smiled at the bird before looking back at Kataleya, who was still staring in awe at Caspar. “Well, we should be going now.” He smiled and waved, before turning to leave. “Thank you again!” She called out to him.
(Solarpunk, Writing Prompt, Incorporate the environment into your story, 551 words)
Alexander was walking away when all of a sudden the glint of metal caused him to stop. “Don't. Move.” A low voice commanded him, startling Caspar and causing him to take flight. Alexander slowly raised his hands above his head. A rough looking man stepped out from behind a tree, the point of his knife never wavering. “Turn around and go back. Keep your hands where I can see them!” The man barked orders at him. Alexander bit back a remark and did as he was told. Once he was back in the center of the clearing, he was told to kneel. As he did so, another man, this one thin and bony with sharp features vaguely reminiscent of a rat, led the girl he had saved moments before into the clearing with him. The man threw the girl to the ground before Alexander and walked to stand with the other two men, for the one Alexander had knocked out earlier had risen and was giving him a nasty glare. “What do we do with them?” The small one -who Alexander had decided to call Ratman- asked, looking towards them in disgust. “Get rid if them.” Muscles, the first man Alexander had seen obviously wanted them gone. “I say we see what we can get from them first.” The third man had a greedy glint in his eyes that Alexander didn't like. “We can always sell what we don't want.” Alexander ground his teeth together. If he had a weapon, anything, he would try to escape. With the girl? Eh, he rescued her once already. If he could, he would, but she wasn't worth risking his skin for. He focused his attention back on the men, it seemed they had reached a decision about what to do with them. Muscles took a step towards them and crossed his arms. “You guys are lucky. We're not going to kill you.” He spit on the ground, just missing Alexander. Ratman stepped forward, peeking out from behind Muscles, he puffed out his chest, obviously trying to look menacing. “Yeah, why kill you when we can sell you.” He pointed at Alexander. “You look strong enough to work.” His gaze shifted towards the girl. “And I bet someone would buy you.” His face twisted into an ugly sneer. Just then there was a squawk and Alexander looked up in time to see Caspar shoot up from the leaves. There was a cracking sound and then a large branch fell, directly on top of the three thugs. Alexander stood and bolted, calling Caspar as he ran. The girl would be alright, he assured himself. But… what if she wasn't. He cursed and slowed, stupid conscience. He'd go back to check that she was okay and made it away from the thugs safely, then they'd go their separate ways. He turned to go back and found the girl lying where Ratman had flung her. Caspar was sitting next to her head, unmoving. Alexander hadn't even realized Caspar wasn't with him. He crouched down and lifted her wrist, her pulse was strong. Sighing he slipped his arms underneath her, picking her up. He'd just bring her to the edge of the forest and wait for her to wake up. Then he could go back and complete his mission.
(Poetry, Writing Prompt, Introduce a symbol into your story, 224 words)
Alexander was careful not to trip as he walked towards what he thought was the edge of the forest. It was the way the girl had been going anyway. Caspar flew above him, occasionally looking down at the girl. Alexander finally saw a break in the trees and headed toward it. Once he was out of the forest, he gently laid the girl down, leaning against a tree. She groaned but didn't move. He stood up to leave when he caught a glimpse of something gleaming around her neck. He crouched down and -careful not to touch her- revealed a golden necklace with a large bejeweled pendant. His eyes grew wide and he sucked in a breath through his teeth. At that moment the girl woke up and startled away from him, causing the pendant to fall back against her chest. She clutched it possessively. “What were you doing??” She shrieked, launching to her feet. “I- I-” Alexander seemed unable to get any words out. “You-” He stammered. The girl's eyes narrowed. “You will not tell anyone of this.” With that she turned her back on him and started across the field, leaving Alexander standing slack jawed behind her. He stood there for a second before he realized Caspar was still following the girl. Stupid Parrot. With a start, he ran to catch up.
(Fantasy, Non-Writing Prompt, Bake a sweet treat to share, 0 words)
I made chocolate chip cookies for my family!
(Bi-Fi, Writing Prompt, Use one of these sentence prompts: All of a sudden, a rabid moose…, 538 words)
Alexander has just caught up to the girl, when all of a sudden a rabid moose charged out of the woods to their right. It was foaming at the mouth and headed straight for them. Instinctively, he turned around ran back the way they had came, heading around the moose to the trees. He knew Caspar would be alright. But oh! The girl. He debated whether to go back for her, if it was worth risking his own skin. It could benefit him in the future, but if that moose caught him there would be no future. He had just decided to leave the girl, when he saw her shoot ahead of him. Dang, that girl can run. He forced his legs to move faster. The girl had reached the tree line and started to climb. The leafy branches shook as she nimbly pulled herself from branch to branch. Her long cloak was the last to disappear from his sight. His legs felt shaky but he pushed himself those last few feet and leaned against the trunk. He heard the girl screaming about the moose getting closer. No time to catch his breath. He grasped a thick limb and heaved himself up. He went slower than the girl had, but eventually made it up to where she sat high above the moose. And of course, Caspar was already there, perched next to the girl. He panted. “Let's hope the tree holds.” He looked up to examine the girl closer. She didn't seem to be nearly as tired as he was. The thought annoyed him, though his annoyance was quickly replaced with fear when the tree shook. The moose had reached them and was now ramming its antlers against the trunk. Which would be weird if it weren't rabid. “Looks like we'll be here for a while.” Alexander sighed. The girl's brow furrowed. “I have to get back though.” “Back where?” Alexander raised an eyebrow inquisitively. “Home.” The girl looked away. Alexander rolled his eyes, fine she could be vague if she wanted. They sat in silence for a bit, the only sound his heavy breathing, which gradually slowed. After a few minutes of the moose repeatedly charging their tree and showing no sign of letting up, Alexander sighed. “Well, we might as well introduce ourselves, since it looks like we'll be here a while.” He held out his hand. “I'm Alexander, but you can just call me Alex.” The girl hesitated before taking it. “Kat.” “Like the animal?” Alexander laughed. Kat smiled halfheartedly, almost as though humoring a small child. “Yes. Though it's spelled differently.” Alexander didn't know what to say to that and awkwardly looked away. Kat shifted on the branch until she was slouched against the trunk and shut her eyes, which gave Alexander an opportunity to look at her. She had delicate features, a small nose, rosy cheeks (though that could have been from their escape from the moose), fair skin, and dark lashes. Her fiery red hair was pulled back in a messy ponytail, probably much more disheveled than it had been when she put it in. He realized she could probably feel him looking and turned away, focusing on the moose below them.
(Gothic, Writing Prompt, Change the setting of your story suddenly, 508 words)
After many long, silent, painful hours, the moose finally stopped its assault of their tree and wandered off. Kataleya opened her eyes and sat up. Alex was still sitting there with her, Caspar now perched on his shoulder. “We should probably wait a bit to make sure it's actually gone.” Kataleya scowled, of course she knew that. As much as she wanted to get out of the tree and back home -her parents were no doubt looking for her- she had enough common sense to realize that she still had to be careful. She kept quiet and watched as the sun sunk lower behind the horizon. Pretty soon, the town gates would close and she would be locked out. After a few minutes of hearing nothing and seeing no sign of the moose returning, she swung herself down, landing softly on the ground. Beside her Alexander also landed, not quite as gracefully as she had. She turned to him. “I thank you for your help.” And with that she turned to hurry back, hoping to make it in time. She had planned to be back hours ago, before anyone even noticed she was gone. There was no chance of that, her father would be furious. She bit her lip at the thought and started to run, pulling her hood up around her. If she were lucky, she could make it back and slip inside without anyone seeing her. Then she could change, wash her face, brush her hair, and go down to meet her father like nothing had happened. She heard a howl in the distance, reminding her of another reason she didn't want to get caught outside the gates.
Alexander sighed, watching the girl hurry away. “Well, that's that. Let's go.” He called to Caspar, but Caspar ignored him, watching Kat hurry away from them instead, making no move to follow Alexander. “Come on, you. She's on her own now, we need to get back before the wolves come out.” The word “wolves” caused Caspar to tilt his head inquisitively and fly off the branch. However, he flew away from Alexander, towards Kat. “You dumb bird, get back here!” Alexander shook his fist towards Caspar. “Help!” Caspar called, continuing along his current path of flight. Alexander sighed in frustration. “Fine, go with her! See if I care.” He started deeper into the woods. Because of the moose, we was now several hours behind schedule. And now he had to travel through the woods at night. Alone. He turned, expecting to see Caspar trailing along behind him, but he was nowhere to be seen. Alexander cursed under his breath. “Stubborn beast.” Sighing, he started back to retrieve Caspar. On second thought, maybe going with Kat wouldn't be such a bad idea. He could stay in the town overnight, and head back in the morning. He told himself his decision to go back had nothing to do with the fact that he had heard a howl coming from the woods ahead of him. No, he just needed his bird.
(Mystery Market, Non-Writing Prompt, Play the NYT Connections game, 0 words)
I got the connections in this order: Green, Yellow, Purple, Blue
(Conclusion, Writing 100 words to wrap up your story, 372 words)
Kataleya gradually sped up, until she was sprinting. She heard a caw above her and saw Caspar gliding along with her. She smiled, increasing her speed. Finally, the gates were up ahead. She slowed to a walk and took deep breathes to calm herself. She needed to appear calm and collected, or she would be suspicious. She approached the gates, keeping her head down. “Halt.” One of the guards grasped her shoulder. “Who are you and what is your business?” Kataleya glanced up at him and smiled when she saw it was Fredrick. She turned so her back was to the other guard and raised her head, holding a finger to her lips. Fredrick's expression changed to one of surprise, then he smiled slightly. “Oh, Mrs. Wicket! Continue. You're just in time, we were about to close the gates for the night.” Kataleya nodded and lowered her head once again, proceeding through the gates. She had only gone a few steps, when she heard a commotion behind her. She turned and saw Fredrick and the other guard holding a struggling man. She squinted in the dim light, it was Alex! She sighed and walked back. She tapped Fredrick on the shoulder, and whispered to him when he turned. “It's alright, he's with me.” Fredrick nodded and turned to the other guard. “He's her husband, let him go.” The other guard released him and Kataleya took his hand, keeping her head down. She led him through the empty streets to a back alley. “What are you doing here?” She asked. “I needed a place to stay for the night. I would never have made it through the woods alive, not alone without a weapon at night.” He crossed his arms. “Besides, you stole my parrot.” Kataleya stared at him. “I did not steal him.” She frowned. “Whatever, you're here now. You're safe. But I fully expect you to be gone by morning.” She turned and strode of out the alley. He stood there, grinding his teeth. She seemed much more confident now that she was back in town. But he pushed all thought of her away. He would probably never see her again. For now, he needed to find a place to sleep.
Dawn_Camps's submit code: | order of cabins visited: 10, 6, 2, 8, 11, 13, 4, 12, 9, 3, 1, 5, 7 | prompts chosen: 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2 | we love the POLAR BEARS <3 (we really do <33)
also, the end credits were so cool
thank you so much to everyone involved in creating the fourth weekly
it was amazing and you should all be very proud
thank you so much to everyone involved in creating the fourth weekly
it was amazing and you should all be very proud
Last edited by Dawn_Camps (July 31, 2024 20:23:24)
- chrisluk002
- Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌘ july '24
Daily for July 24
406 words
Small Wishing Crisis
Fenrir yelped, running as rpg enemies chased after him. “Shoo, shoo!” He tried to wave them away but they didn't seem particularly interested. He'd just collected the macguffins of this game world and now every enemy he'd skipped past with his gauntlet was after him. Panicking, he pressed buttons on the glove and swiped at popups. Soon enough he managed to fast travel, getting away from the horde. He ended up in a backroom asset area. Fenrir sighed. Hopefully triggering the wish here wouldn't glitch the game's lore. “Alright.” he said, somewhat eager. “Here we go.” He put the items together, forming them in a complete but vague fashion. A large serpentine figure with many arms emerged from the artifact, growing and expanding to a godly size. They looked down to the cat creature, eyeless face piercing him with an unknown gaze. Then it froze. Fenrir groaned. “Aaaaand the game froze. I thought I did pretty good about making sure this was stable.” He tapped his hand, making the glove glow, and tapped the large digital creature before him. Soon it was copied into his gauntlet and he quickly got out of the game.
Appearing in his living room, Fenrir stretched out, turning off his computer. He raised his hand, pasting the code into his room. The deity showed up, clipping through the floor a little. He sorted that out, making them smaller and fixing the bugs caused from sequence breaking them. They looked at him. “What are you? You're not who I was expecting.” “Yeah, I know. I summoned you, soooo… could I get a wish?” He didn't mention how much he could cheat, but eh they didn't need to know that. “I… suppose… What do you want to wish for? What is your desire? Reshape history? Make the world admire you?” “I wish for infinite soda.” “Wh-what?” The deity stared. “What's… soda?” “You can still grant the wish without knowing what that is right?” “I- I mean yes but-” “Okay.” he motioned for them to do so. They huffed, quickly bursting with energy to make a self stocking mini fridge of soda. “Okay, there.” “Thanks! Have fun with like, being forced by the dark lord to fulfill his desires, it'll be alright in the end.” “Wait wh-” The creature was sent back to the game it came from and Fenrir reset the code back to how it was meant to be.
406 words
Small Wishing Crisis
Fenrir yelped, running as rpg enemies chased after him. “Shoo, shoo!” He tried to wave them away but they didn't seem particularly interested. He'd just collected the macguffins of this game world and now every enemy he'd skipped past with his gauntlet was after him. Panicking, he pressed buttons on the glove and swiped at popups. Soon enough he managed to fast travel, getting away from the horde. He ended up in a backroom asset area. Fenrir sighed. Hopefully triggering the wish here wouldn't glitch the game's lore. “Alright.” he said, somewhat eager. “Here we go.” He put the items together, forming them in a complete but vague fashion. A large serpentine figure with many arms emerged from the artifact, growing and expanding to a godly size. They looked down to the cat creature, eyeless face piercing him with an unknown gaze. Then it froze. Fenrir groaned. “Aaaaand the game froze. I thought I did pretty good about making sure this was stable.” He tapped his hand, making the glove glow, and tapped the large digital creature before him. Soon it was copied into his gauntlet and he quickly got out of the game.
Appearing in his living room, Fenrir stretched out, turning off his computer. He raised his hand, pasting the code into his room. The deity showed up, clipping through the floor a little. He sorted that out, making them smaller and fixing the bugs caused from sequence breaking them. They looked at him. “What are you? You're not who I was expecting.” “Yeah, I know. I summoned you, soooo… could I get a wish?” He didn't mention how much he could cheat, but eh they didn't need to know that. “I… suppose… What do you want to wish for? What is your desire? Reshape history? Make the world admire you?” “I wish for infinite soda.” “Wh-what?” The deity stared. “What's… soda?” “You can still grant the wish without knowing what that is right?” “I- I mean yes but-” “Okay.” he motioned for them to do so. They huffed, quickly bursting with energy to make a self stocking mini fridge of soda. “Okay, there.” “Thanks! Have fun with like, being forced by the dark lord to fulfill his desires, it'll be alright in the end.” “Wait wh-” The creature was sent back to the game it came from and Fenrir reset the code back to how it was meant to be.