VideoGamerCanInvent wrote:

Is it just me or are the images on the fp not working

GrahamSH wrote:

hi

BGMead wrote:

GrahamSH wrote:

hi

hey

TheFlightShow wrote:

Username: TheFlightShow
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): my currency , superbux
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/367222/
How Strict (1-5)? 5
Deadline: 00:00 GMT
Other info: Please write the review on my profile.

GrahamSH wrote:

Even though i havent been posting, im still reading everything but i will not be as active because school starts in a week and i will be on much less

VideoGamerCanInvent wrote:

GrahamSH wrote:

Even though i havent been posting, im still reading everything but i will not be as active because school starts in a week and i will be on much less

That's alright I think we all feel that way (one more week for me too)

B L O B S - A P L A T F O R M E R

Instructions Quality: 2.5/5
Thumbnail Quality: 4/5
In-project Music: 1.5/5
Graphics Quality: 3/5
Idea: 3/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 17/30

Comments: Nice project! I enjoyed playing through your simple platformer game with a cool storyline. The moving platforming definitely stood out against other platforming games which stick to a still background. A couple suggestions I have would be to swap out the electricity sound at the beginning with something else as it gets annoying really fast. I would also suggest implementing somewhere that you need to use the arrow keys to move around as I initially tried to use WASD.

Mirrors 1

Instructions Quality: 4/5
Thumbnail Quality: 2.5/5
In-project Music: 0/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 3.5/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 15.5/30

Comments: This is a really cool project, and you have definitely developed it well! For a Scratch OS, it has a lot to offer. Some suggestions I have would be removing the cursor that follows your cursor, as it ending up basically being two mouse cursors which can get annoying, I also noticed how there was no music, even though your instructions made multiple references to some. Continue to work on this, and keep expanding it!

Platform code

Instructions Quality: 3.5/5
Thumbnail Quality: 3/5
In-project Music: 0/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 3/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 14.5/30

Comments: Nice work! Not only do you give us the code that we can copy into our projects, but you nicely lay out the purpose of each portion and use the project as an example of it in action. If you'd like, you could add to the project with a little music, however that wouldn't be something super important.

My profile

Instructions Quality: 2/5
Thumbnail Quality: 0/5
In-project Music: N/A/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 4/5
Code: 4/5
Overall Score: 12.5/25

Comments: Wow! What a great way to showcase your profile. I love the scroll bar that you created; it works really well! I would recommend stretching out your projects section where you name each of the projects that you are showing, and then link them in the project description.

TheFlightShow wrote:

Where's my review on superbux?

VideoGamerCanInvent wrote:

B L O B S - A P L A T F O R M E R

Instructions Quality: 2.5/5
Thumbnail Quality: 4/5
In-project Music: 1.5/5
Graphics Quality: 3/5
Idea: 3/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 17/30

Comments: Nice project! I enjoyed playing through your simple platformer game with a cool storyline. The moving platforming definitely stood out against other platforming games which stick to a still background. A couple suggestions I have would be to swap out the electricity sound at the beginning with something else as it gets annoying really fast. I would also suggest implementing somewhere that you need to use the arrow keys to move around as I initially tried to use WASD.

Ok, I will do that

Mirrors 1

Instructions Quality: 4/5
Thumbnail Quality: 2.5/5
In-project Music: 0/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 3.5/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 15.5/30

Comments: This is a really cool project, and you have definitely developed it well! For a Scratch OS, it has a lot to offer. Some suggestions I have would be removing the cursor that follows your cursor, as it ending up basically being two mouse cursors which can get annoying, I also noticed how there was no music, even though your instructions made multiple references to some. Continue to work on this, and keep expanding it!

I will do that in Mirrors 2

Platform code

Instructions Quality: 3.5/5
Thumbnail Quality: 3/5
In-project Music: 0/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 3/5
Code: 3/5
Overall Score: 14.5/30

Comments: Nice work! Not only do you give us the code that we can copy into our projects, but you nicely lay out the purpose of each portion and use the project as an example of it in action. If you'd like, you could add to the project with a little music, however that wouldn't be something super important.

I am more focusing on the code

My profile

Instructions Quality: 2/5
Thumbnail Quality: 0/5
In-project Music: N/A/5
Graphics Quality: 2.5/5
Idea: 4/5
Code: 4/5
Overall Score: 12.5/25

Comments: Wow! What a great way to showcase your profile. I love the scroll bar that you created; it works really well! I would recommend stretching out your projects section where you name each of the projects that you are showing, and then link them in the project description.

Ok, I will try

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Packages

Art/Pixel/Banners/Logos:

Username:
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo:
Description of Piece:
If Art: Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)?
When Needed:

Scripting:

Username:
Info on Script's Purpose:
When Needed:

Voice Recording:

Username:
Gender of Voice:
Script (Please provide a link to a project):
Accent:
When Needed:

Writing:

Username:
Type of Writing:
Other Info on Writing:
When Needed:

Intros/Outros:

Username:
Intro/Outro:
Explanation on what should happen:
Font and Colors:
Additional Info:
When Needed:

BBCode:

Username:
Color(s):
What would you like typed?:
Description:
Other Info:
When Needed:

Reviewing:

Username:
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.):
Link:
How Strict (1-5)?
Deadline:

Music:

Username:
Mood:
Instruments:
Length:
Additional Information:
When Needed:

Sound Effects:

Username:
Description:
Additional Information:
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De-Bugging:

Username:
Link to Project:
Problem with Project:
What Is It Supposed to Do?:
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Project Ideas:

Username:
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How Many Ideas:
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Green = Active
Orange = Fairly Active
Red = Not/Hardly Active
Blue = Retired

Shop Leaders:
Owner/Manager: VideoGamerCanInvent
Co-Owner/Manager: BGMead
June V.I.P. Member: MagicPigPerson
Head Manager 1: DrChicken24
Head Manager 2: MagicPigPerson
Head Manager 3: Programmer1121
Manager 1: RubixCube714
Manager 2: Targethntr
Manager 3: kingsnakeE
Manager 4: applesauceepicness
Head of Orders: BGMead
Chief of Art: DrChicken24
Chief of Banners: BGMead
Chief of Logos: FollowCherryBlossom
Chief of Scripting: VideoGamerCanInvent
Chief of Voice Recording: grade342015
Chief of Writing: VideoGamerCanInvent
Chief of BBCode: pig9992005
Chief of Reviewing: VideoGamerCanInvent
Chief of Music: Programmer1121
Chief of Pixel Art: venyanwarrior
Chief of Sound Effects: BGMead
Chief of De-Bugging: Targethntr
Chief of Intros/Outros: MasterOfTheTiger
Chief of Project Ideas: DracoCrab

Shop Staff:
Art Staff: yukon_pebbles, Meowcats8305, Peppermint_Cat, Darkestside77
Banner Staff: Programmer1121, ratchetyclank
Logo Staff: Starwarsguy111, svancelette, RubixCube714, torotv
Scripting Staff: kingsnakeE, rainbowpie14, Perkins6kinz6, Targethntr, 3lejas
Voice Recording Staff: pwaty66, mengtieh1
Reviewing Staff: pahrules, RaytaygirlGaming, GrahamSH
Writing Staff: MagicPigPerson, grade342015
BBCode Staff: CutieCow17
Music Staff: Wahsp, penguinpop1042
Pixel Art Staff: Vacant!
Sound Effect Staff: Vacant!
De-Bugging Staff: applesauceepicness/applesauceiscool, ShadowCatcher, cattygo101
Intros/Outros Staff: Vacant!
Project Ideas Staff: Vacant!

Retired Members:
arloclc

Username:
How Active (From 0-5):
Post Count:
Followers Count:
Following Shop (Y/N):
Age of Account:
How Many Shops Do You Work At?
What Are You Good At?
Do You Know How to Use CubeUpload?
Additional Information:

For Staff: Taking your first order at this shop? Click here before you do so.

Orders That Cannot Be Completed

Intro needed
Username: zoyahammad
Intro/Outro: Intro
Explanation on what should happen: I want a scene in which there would be thunderstorm and rain and after a few seconds of rain my username will appear with some music. After my name appears I want a rainbow to appear and I want all the rain and thunder to stop.
Font and Colors: Any font would work, I would love if it would be 3d I want the colors blue, red, grey, yellow, orange, black, purple and the colors of the rainbow,
Additional Info: Add music which would suit.
When Needed: ASAP

Music:

Username: MarioFan3629
Mood: Intense Boss Theme
Instruments: Electric Guitar, Synths, and any sort of powerful drums
Length: Around 1.5-2 minutes
Additional Information: Would perfer the song to be made in a program outside of Scratch. Also please make it easy to loop
When Needed: It doesn't matter

Reviewing:

Username: Evan2963
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): A puzzle game
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/163397813/
How Strict (1-5)? 4
Deadline: As soon as you can

Note: Can you tell me any objects I should add to the game or any specific bugs? Thanks for the help!

Username: Moonflight_358
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Banner; the same size as as The Help Shop's banner.
Description of Piece: I want it to say, “Moonflight_358” and in smaller (but readable) letters at the bottom, “Warriors, Harry Potter, Pokemon, and more!”
When Needed: Preferably today; if that is not possible, tomorrow.

Username: Jemmerl
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: A small tile-able texture of sand, dirt, and/or grass from a top-down perspective.
When Needed: Soon if possible, but not crucial.

Username: Evan2963
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: Any type of art in the style of Scribblenauts (a game)
If Art: Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)?: Sprite (or any backdrops straight from Scribblenauts)
When Needed: ASAP

Art/Pixel/Banners/Logos:

Username: lkli2346
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: A lady (Age about 35) Brown hair in a bun, glasses (black), tan-ish skin, blue or green eyes (I don't care). White dress with a black sweater on top.
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)? Sprite
When Needed: At maximum, 5 days.
Other: Please comment on my profile when it is finished!

Username: amberTALE
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art, i guess? Could you please clarify?
Description of Piece: A wallpaper for this project: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/161679498/
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop? Backdrop
When Needed: 1-3 weeks or less

Can I request a logo?
If so, I would like a white spider (like the Spider-Man one) outline on a light green background (high quality please!)
Also, if you would be as kind to do animations, I would like you to animate little spiders crawling over it. Please make their shapes visible.
I don't care when it's done as long as it is done quickly.
Thanks!

-Arachnid-

Vector art - profile pic
Username: @XCat
Vector profile pic
Warrior cat art piece, Dovewing and Ivypool
Will be used as profile pic
In anywhere from a week to two weeks from now.

Username: heldab754
Art: cute anime girl
Description of Piece: blue eyes, black hair, and other stuff just cute
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop?: Sprite.
When Needed: ASAP! (as soon as possible)

Logo order:
Username: Pahrules
Art, Banner, or Logo: Logo
Description of Piece: Cats on corners of logo, with a zig zag circle in the middle of logo,And inside the circle the name pahrules in curvy writing.
When Needed: Next weekend, or Thursday/Friday.
Thanks!

Username: DrChicken24
Mood: Calm
Instruments: Piano, maybe guitar, if it sounds good
Length: 2-4 min
Additional Information: None
When Needed: ASAP

Username: _-Milkshakes-_
Type: Banner
Description: White and blue-striped background, cookies and cream ice cream and the words “Kookies & Kreme Shop” with the words underneath “Transforming your dreams into a reality”. Lots of small cookies in the background. I'd like it if it were cartoon-ish as well.
When do you want it: ASAP (sometime this week)

Username: XenoCoding
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): 3 projects
Link: Xeno, Xeno Memorization v1.0, and Bezier Curves v1.0
Deadline: no rush

Would you mind making me a logo? (cs195198)

Username: Shatterfrost
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): Project, specifically arcade-style game.
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/153953555/
Deadline: I don't have a deadline, but within two days or so would be great

Username: BGMead
Art, Banner, or Logo: Sprite
Description of Piece: A pixelated miner wearing one of those hard hats with head lamps. He should have an uneven smile. His face should have dust all over it and he should look like he got back from some hard, long work. He should be wearing some beat-up jeans and an old t-shirt. His hair should be out of control. Please make the size 150 x 200 (Pixels). The colors should be gray, yellow (for the hat), brown hair and you can make up the rest.
When Needed: ASAP!!

Username: Perkins6kinz6.
BANNER.
Description: Pink with colored sprinkles everywhere. NO REAL PICTURES AT ALL PLEASE. THIS IS IMPORTANT.
Text: Please make it say“Vanilla.” in the middle. Color: Blue. Font: Fancy.
THANK YOU!

Username: Ravenfur2004
Art, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: A bunny eating a cherry
When Needed: soon

Username: zoyahammad
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Banner
Description of Piece: I want it to be vector and I want it to be colorful. I want it to have some pictures of things related to shopping
When Needed: As quick as you can !!

Username: jmarie9
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: banner
Description of Piece: something with a mystical feel that says Moonstones in cursive. Also, could it have a color theme of different blues?
When Needed: asap

Username: LightInDarkness
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Logo
Description of Piece: Similar to the logo I have now
When Needed: ASAP

Please comment on my profile when it is done.

Username: RaytaygirlGaming
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): Project: ~Create a Cookie~
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/114535731/
Deadline: May 25

Username: BGMead
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): Candy Factory (A cool factory game)
Link: Above.
Deadline: Soon

Please do not be very harsh.

Username: Perkins6kinz6.
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art that can be used as a banner.
Description of piece: Snow-covered background with the name Poppyfur on it.

Username: teddyshoes
Mood: Electronic + Rock
Instruments: Doesn't matter as long as it has a guitar
Length: 3 to 5 min
Additional Information: none
When Needed: ASAP

Music
username: @dawglove
mood: Mysterious/interesting
instruments: Whatever fits the music and whatever could be found or heard in the 1940s.
length: 30 seconds
additional info: None
deadline: Within a week.

Is it alright if I have a project reviewed again by a different person? I've changed a couple of things.
Username: Shatterfrost
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): Game
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/153953555
Deadline: No deadline! Take your time
Harness: 10, so as harsh as possible.

Username:YouKeepMeGlowing
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: pixel, Art
Description of Piece: I need a zebra that is platformer size that walk and jump with arrows and can do other stuff like dashing and defense actions i would love if it is kinda pixelish looking
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop? Sprite
When Needed: i need it fast just tell me on my profile when done

BBCode:

Username: grade342015
Color(s): black to light blue
What would you like typed?: i can do BBCcode!
Description: none
Other Info: none
When Needed: 6th june

Username: heldab754
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: A chibi Hermione Granger
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop?: Sprite
When Needed: Please, work at your own pace!

I would like a review:

Username: @Peppermint_Cat
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): A project that has some of my art in it
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/163070812/
Deadline: 5th June

Music:

Username: @Novakitty
Mood: Epic, inspiring, powerful.
Instruments: Anything thats really powerful, like a piano or drums or cymbals or chorus. XD
Length: Preferably about a minute or more. It's going to be used for a trailer.
Additional Information: Here are two pieces of other music that are a bit like how I want it to feel and sound: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z0zdqeivGaU and the music used in this project: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/158963828/ . I'd like for it to start slow then break into something really epic. XD It'd also prefer if it slowly mounted up to one final clash at the end. XD

Thanks!

Reviewing:

Username: Princekeela
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): Studio
Link:Keela Animations
Deadline: Soon or Whenever
Thank You!

Username:YourSongs
Logo
Description of Piece: The letters Y and S next to each other and a blue background with a shadow
Being Used as a: Sprite
When Needed: today or 32/05/2017

Hi! I need a logo for my company.

Username: ScratchProjectMakers
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Logo.
Description of Piece: I need the words “SPM Inc.” in yellow, with the SPM on top and the Inc. on the bottom. I would also like a purple background.
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop?: Sprite.
When Needed: ASAP, please.

Username: Doggiecake
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Banner
Description of Piece: Could it say ‘the wild shop’ in big bold writing, the background be A mix of Dark purple and navy, black claw marks that look like it's been ripped? Long, at the background can you have in the same font we try to get your orders done before you can roar
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)? I don't really want mine to be a sprite or background but already a banner
When Needed: 5/6/17 English time

Username: cattygo101
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: logo
Description of Piece: I don't really mind, a kiwi bird and the letter C with a 101 might be a good Idea
If Art: Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)?
When Needed: anytime from now to a week

Username: Darkestside77
What you would like reviewed (project, studio, etc.): project
Link: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/162701380/
Deadline: next week

DrChicken24 Art Request- “A King's Life” (Requested on different shop)

Can you make a beeping sound effect? Like one that's in a hospital? I can wait a while before I use it. Username: Science-Nerd

Username: DracoCrab
Art, Banner, or Logo: Art
Description of Piece: I want a mix of a dragon and a crab like a Dragon Crab or DracoCrab
When Needed: ASAP (don't put me at first priority I can wait

Username: CovieM2
Mood: Horror Chase
Instruments: anything
Length: 30 second
Additional Information: scary and fast paced
When Needed: whenever

Username: teddyshoes
Mood: Classical + Rock
Instruments: Doesn't matter as long as it has a piano.
Length: 1 to 2 min
Additional Information:
When Needed: ASAP

Voice Acting
username: @dawglove
gender: Male
accent: preferably American
voice acting audition project: Here
deadline: Within a week.

Art

Username: @PrincessFlowerTV
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Thumbnail
Description of Piece: i need it to look nerdy. a chalk board, math questions, a brain, and so on.
Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional): Thumbnail
When Needed: As soon as possible.

Thanks!

Username: CloudPixel
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Logo
Description of Piece: I would like it to be a girl with no face and a fancy background (or just polka dots). The colors I would want are: ●●●Or it has to look similar to ellielocks logo
When Needed: ASAP

Username: duckboycool
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Logo
Description of Piece: Either a duck or a small avatar against a light blue/green background. There is pleanty of room for interpretation, and I don't really mind about specifics.
When Needed: Anytime

Art
Username: ‘3lejas
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Logo
Description of Piece: Don’t mind, but bear in mind that it's a logo for a shop. Jazzy's Scratch Shop!
If Art: Being Used as a Sprite or Backdrop (optional)?
When Needed: Today, if possible

Username:Goldkitty18991
Mood:Fast Pace
Instruments:8-Bit
Length:1-3 minutes
Additional Information:I need this for a game I will be making I will Credit whoever takes the order!
When Needed: Deadline is June 10th
MUSIC! - FoodTechnology OST - Dark Matter

Username: WolfCat67
Art, Pixel, Banner, or Logo: Banner, please.
Description of Piece: I would like a banner, size of the signature, as advertisement for my project Smiley Fighters. It should have the logo (the “Smiley Fighters” in the fireball) in the middle, as well as a collage of in-game screenshots, zoomed in on the characters or full-screen, surrounding it making up the background. The collage would be set up as just rectangles or squares taking up the whole banner besides the logo; there would be absolutely no size-changing involved, just use the snipping tool multiple times and put it all together, and there would be no visible background behind the pictures.
When Needed: I don't need it at any time, but preferably in the next two days. If you could get it done in the next 12 hours, though, that'd be awesome.

I'd like a review of my shop:
Username: 78ch3
What I want reviewed: shop
Link: The Sprite Ordering Shop
How strict: 1
Deadline: in 10 days.
Thanks for reviewing us!

What I want reviewed:
Destroy the Tower

Links:
.https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/161634074/

How Strict: 10.
(Meaning as strict as you can. Point out every little thing.)

Deadline: Today, within the next 5 hours. GrahamSH

Username: Perkins6kinz6.

What I want reviewed:
Animated Series.

Links:
https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/3996865/ .
https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/160722061/ .

How Strict: 10.
(Meaning as strict as you can. Point out every little thing.)

Deadline: Today, within the next 5 hours.
Animated Series Banner:

Username:
Shop Link:
Shop Logo/Banner Link:
Amount of Members:
How many requests do you normally get a day:
Other Info:

5 Star Scratch Shop

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The United Shops of Scratch

Mango Markets

Scratchy's Art Shop!

The Help Shop

VideoGamerCanInvent wrote:

For those who haven't been with the shop since the beginning, this is what it originally looked like:

~ big snip ~

BGMead wrote:

reserved

BGMead wrote:

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