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smartcutecandy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

-Puppy wrote:

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

-Puppy wrote:

Are there any orders I could take?
So far none, I believe.
Hey, do we have an official studio?

I'll tell smartcutecandy if we do or not.
Nope, we do not. That's a good idea though, I might create one in the future.

awesomenessness10
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

APPLY TO BE A STAFF MEMBER:
Username: @awesomenessness10
Link to previous work (a short story or some art): Well, all my projects are stories, so if you'd take the time to give it a visit?
How active will you be (1-10): Around a 5-7
Following the thread: I sure am!
Anything else you want to tell us: I've been writing since I was 9 and want to be an author, so I think I'd really suit this shop! Thanks for considering!


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Amateurscratch
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!

Alida7232
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Amateurscratch wrote:

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!
I'll take this. It might be a while, but I'd love to practice my art!

“A man who reads lives a thousand lives, but the man who doesn't read lives only one.” - George R. R. Martin
KaiJayColeZane
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!
I'll take this. It might be a while, but I'd love to practice my art!
And then I'll probably steal your job
No, I'm kidding. I don't like drawing people anyway- unless it's silhouettes


I'm a spy. It's my job to know things.
Alida7232
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!
I'll take this. It might be a while, but I'd love to practice my art!
And then I'll probably steal your job
No, I'm kidding. I don't like drawing people anyway- unless it's silhouettes
Hair colors were specified; I don't think so!

“A man who reads lives a thousand lives, but the man who doesn't read lives only one.” - George R. R. Martin
MistickMage
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Anything new?

Gender: Genderfluild-ish. Female most of the time, though occasionally Agender.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Spirit Animal: American Kestrel

Favorite Color: Blue/grey
pbro
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Alida7232 wrote:

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!
I'll take this. It might be a while, but I'd love to practice my art!
And then I'll probably steal your job
No, I'm kidding. I don't like drawing people anyway- unless it's silhouettes
Hair colors were specified; I don't think so!
battle of the tongues

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makethebrainhappy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .

That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!

Alida7232
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

makethebrainhappy wrote:

Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .

That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!

When do you want this done by?

“A man who reads lives a thousand lives, but the man who doesn't read lives only one.” - George R. R. Martin
-Puppy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

makethebrainhappy wrote:

Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .

That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!


Would you like this to be animated or just a still picture?

smartcutecandy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

awesomenessness10 wrote:

APPLY TO BE A STAFF MEMBER:
Username: @awesomenessness10
Link to previous work (a short story or some art): Well, all my projects are stories, so if you'd take the time to give it a visit?
How active will you be (1-10): Around a 5-7
Following the thread: I sure am!
Anything else you want to tell us: I've been writing since I was 9 and want to be an author, so I think I'd really suit this shop! Thanks for considering!
Accepted!

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Last edited by smartcutecandy (Feb. 23, 2017 03:44:59)


Agirkala
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

makethebrainhappy wrote:

Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .

That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!

Jeez, I might just order one too.


DC143C
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Alida7232 wrote:

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

I'm going to order some cover art! Thanks to everyone who works here, this is a really nice place. And I really like the story name ideas.
Cover Art:
Username: Amateurscratch
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): For a scratch project.
Title of Story: Head in the Clouds
What you want it depicting: Just 5 people in a picture. Ada, who's blonde on the far left, then her slightly taller sister, Ava who has sort of fudge-caramel coloured hair, then their dad with sort of brown-black hair and then Ada and Ava's mum, who has blonde hair. She's holding a baby. Ada has blue eyes and she's smiling. She's wearing a blue dress, a pink cardigan with brown tie-up laces, green tights and brown sandals. Ada has her hair in shoulder-length bunches. Ava has green eyes and her eyes should be slightly pink because her brother, Jacob died. Her face is white. She's wearing a black lace skirt, dark-blue tights, black school shoes, a black top and a blue cardigan. Her hair is in two plaits, tied with black ribbons. She's clutching a shortbread tin in her left hand and a lucky cat in her right hand.Their dad is wearing black shoes, a red jumper and normal blue jeans. Their mum's face is wearing a shaky smile and her face is pale. Her eyes are blue and their dad's eyes are green. Their mum's wearing a blue top and black jeans with red trainers. Jacob, the baby she's holding, is supposed to be dead, so he needs to be REALLY white. His eyes are green and his hair is slightly darker than Ava's. His lips should be slightly blue. He has to look a bit sad.
When you want it done: I don't mind, as long as it takes.
Anything else you want to tell us: I don't think so. Sorry this story is kind of depressing.
And thanks! Let me know if I've missed anything!
I'll take this. It might be a while, but I'd love to practice my art!
And then I'll probably steal your job
No, I'm kidding. I don't like drawing people anyway- unless it's silhouettes
Hair colors were specified; I don't think so!
Thanks for taking the order! (Everyone's doing these, so, )

makethebrainhappy
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1000+ posts

☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Alida7232 wrote:

makethebrainhappy wrote:

Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .

That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!

When do you want this done by?

Soonish. The answer to the second one is that it would be fine to see both. One still portrait, and one animated landscape of him shooting a lightning bolt.
smartcutecandy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Bump!

smartcutecandy
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Bump!

MistickMage
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

Can workers order items? is so:
Username: MistickMage
Character name: Owla Sorrel
Looks: Tall and willowy, with short shoulder length hair and green eyes. She is an elf. Here is a drawing of her
Powers(if any): She can call light and make people fall asleep
Talents: She is excellent at climbing trees, good with a bow, and fine with swords.
Words to describe your character: Kind, Book-loving, gentle. (She would take books over riches)
Backstory: Owla was born into a elven community. She and her friends Caldwen and Elwin grew up playing in the woods, laughing and shooting bows. Owla was always the tree loving one, and learned how to climb them easily and quickly. She is a young elf, only about 100 years old. Owla is intelligent and wise, always picking up languages much quicker then the others. She dreams of owning her own library tree house, and though Caldwen teases her for it, she would rather read then do anything else.
Flaws they have: Stubbornness, Under-confident, shy.
When you want it done by: Whenever
Any specific staff member: Nope
Anything else you want to tell us: I originally made her for a dungeons and dragons game.

Gender: Genderfluild-ish. Female most of the time, though occasionally Agender.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Spirit Animal: American Kestrel

Favorite Color: Blue/grey
awesomenessness10
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☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!

MistickMage wrote:

Can workers order items? is so:
Username: MistickMage
Character name: Owla Sorrel
Looks: Tall and willowy, with short shoulder length hair and green eyes. She is an elf. Here is a drawing of her
Powers(if any): She can call light and make people fall asleep
Talents: She is excellent at climbing trees, good with a bow, and fine with swords.
Words to describe your character: Kind, Book-loving, gentle. (She would take books over riches)
Backstory: Owla was born into a elven community. She and her friends Caldwen and Elwin grew up playing in the woods, laughing and shooting bows. Owla was always the tree loving one, and learned how to climb them easily and quickly. She is a young elf, only about 100 years old. Owla is intelligent and wise, always picking up languages much quicker then the others. She dreams of owning her own library tree house, and though Caldwen teases her for it, she would rather read then do anything else.
Flaws they have: Stubbornness, Under-confident, shy.
When you want it done by: Whenever
Any specific staff member: Nope
Anything else you want to tell us: I originally made her for a dungeons and dragons game.

This is a beautifully crafted character! (I think you want a character review ) However, I'm not sure if her powers match her talents, unless all elves can do that. Also, she is described as shy and gentle, so you should definitely show HOW she uses her bow or swords, otherwise people might confuse her for the fierce warrior-type. It's kind of the same with the climbing trees, except she may just climb them to read books up there. Again, I'm not sure what talents elves have in general from your point of view, so all of this may not mean anything to you. But, like I said, this character is well thought-out and she has both faults and talents. I can't wait to see how you'll develop her further in the future! (Haha, this is my first order, hope I did okay!)


- sᴏᴍᴇᴛɪᴍᴇs ɪ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀ ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ᴍʏ ᴏᴡɴ ɪɴsᴀɴɪᴛʏ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ᴍᴇ -
~Bookworm~Author~Coder~Flutist~Ravenclaw~Observer~INFP-T~
JK Rowling - William Shakespeare - Edgar Allan Poe - Sally
Nicholls - Lauren Child - Suzanne Collins - Derek Landy

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