happex wrote:

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Other: It's a Christmas banner, just follow your instinct

WondareAnimator wrote:

happex wrote:

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Other: It's a Christmas banner, just follow your instinct

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happex wrote:

WondareAnimator wrote:

happex wrote:

Text:
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Are you following this topic? Yes
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Other: It's a Christmas banner, just follow your instinct

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I ordered a special Christmas banner. You can make what you want

happex wrote:

Text: Follow your instinct
Font: Follow your instinct
Colour of text: Follow your instinct
Colour of background: Follow your instinct
Images (optional):
Type (studio, signature, etc): signature
Animations (optional):
Are you following this topic? Yes
Where should we contact you? https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/560068/
Other: It's a Christmas banner

Jolia_RKW wrote:

Text: ‘Storm Services’
Font: an unusual but readable one
Colour of text: light grey
Colour of background: a swirly mass of storm colours (black, all types of grey, navy, white and maybe a teeny bit of purple/turquoise)
Type (studio, signature, etc): shop banner
Animations (optional): can you make one animated version one not?
Are you following this topic? No
Where should we contact you? Profile
Other: test order!

Review for ƬĤƐ 101 ΛŔƬ ΛИD DƐSĪƓИ SĤ♡Ṗ

This review was completed by Jolia from the тнε Wнıтε Tıɢεя Fεᴅεяαтıσп for this shop and uses their official colour/s

First Look 5/10
The title is good but the front page is very chaotic. Your banner appears NOWHERE on the front page, you say you have shop colours but I only see navy. You've oversized quotes and there's too much space in-between the forms. There's no about the directorys ok but inconsistent some have exclamation marks, some don't, Resources has accidentally got an extra a too.

At teh bottom the text is weirdly spaced, if you want to center things you must use the center function else it doesn't look centered on all device. You haven't changed teh shop name to the new fancy text version at the top either. The front page is people's first impression of your shop so it has to look good…at the the moment it doesn't look it's best

I highly recommend redoing the front page or asking someone else too (The White Tiger Federation would be happy to, just ask on our thread!)

BBCode Formatting 6/10
Too inconsistent. You've used three different formats on three words. Our Awesome Partners and overused quotes again, especially on the awards page. The award banners have actually decreased in size there are so many quotes! Like I said before, redo the BBCode. There also seems to be lots of othe people's posts in-between shop posts which districts the flow. Maybe even moving threads would help? A shop template may also be an option (you can also get that front White Tiger Federation or Feathered Finds)

Product Quality 10/10
No improvements

Speed 10/10
No improvements

Customer Service 10/10
No improvements

Accessibility 7/10
You have a resources, history, portfolio, awards but no about it bump banner. You do have a directory though.

Overall 75/100

Total × 1.6 = 100
A few things to improve and make your shop even better would be:

• Add an about and bump banner
  
• Check your use of quotes and whitespace
  
• Redo the BBCode to be less chaotic, more consistent and neater
  
• Add your banner on the front page
  
• Use the center function to center

RobloxianMinecraft wrote:

Username: robloxianminecraft
Activity level 1-10: 9.75
Shops you are/ have worked in: lightning studios, sky blue i think, some code shops, some federations, my shop (sodium polyacrylate), some more that i already left
Why you want to work here: bored
Speciality (Banners, logos, OCs, etc): bitmap art and banners
Position of power (Head of Logos, Jr of PFPs etc): normal employee
Example(s) of your work: check first section of my emoji gallery
Are you following this topic? yes
If not how will we contact You? i said im following
Is there any other information you would like us to know about you? 828 posts

BigMandoFan wrote:

Username: BigMandoFan
Activity level 1-10: 6
Shops you are/ have worked in: I can't remember the names
Why you want to work here: cause it will be fun and I love helping people
Speciality (Banners, logos, OCs, etc): OCs
Position of power (Head of Logos, Jr of PFPs etc): normal employee
Example(s) of your work: None
Are you following this topic? Yes
If not how will we contact You?
Is there any other information you would like us to know about you? No

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