AestheticKitty24 wrote:

Helloooo (Just making sure i don't get a strike. emx3ti vmlf3u;fwrmfxgo4th)

The Electric Shop Review #1

First Look (5.5/10)

First of all - your title. You seem to be using a fancy font as well as symbols. Great, as it helps your shop stand out in the Requests Forums among the many other shops! Now, to your front page: your shop isn't multiposted and only consists of 2 posts, and they are kind of messy. The second banner and the OC image is not necessary though. I can see some grammatical and spelling errors too. It also bothers me that some things are in quotes and some are not. Also, the “Lightning_Bolt77 wrote” part in the quotes is not necessary.. It would also be better if you could highlight some of the important words such as “Partners”, “FORMS”, etc. You should also try making your text bold, italic, underlined or

centered

to make the text stand out. I see that you have a 3rd banner as well. It kind of separates the Leave Form from the other forms, and that disturbs me quite a bit. Your motto is “we will do your order at electric speeds”. It has a grammatical error, “electric speeds” maybe change it to: “we will do your order at the speed of electric” You do have some good things on the front page, such as a reviews section or awards section. You may want to improve on your front page.

Originality (N/A/10)

I cannot rate this section as your shop doesn't really have any original ideas besides the packages no offence . You should try and brainstorm more ideas such as official colors, special offers, benefits for partners, etc.

Staff (6/10)

You have quite a sustainable amount of staff. I do see some off-topic posts or spam such as (“hi”, “I'm bored”, and “500 POSTS AHHHH”), and none of your staff has any strikes, well done! Although, you may want to create some terms & conditions in the shop. I do see, however that you organised a shop meeting and nobody actually responded in the studio.

Bulletin Board Code Formatting (6/10)

You may want to tune up your BBCode skills. I've mentioned some of the flaws in the “First Look” section.

Product Quality (9.5/10)

The product was great! In fact, it was so good I may use it for a while (or a long time), although I had to deduct half a mark. You see - I stated that I wanted my favourite colors on it. Although, the employee did not ask what my favorite colors were and put yellow. Ask to be sure, don't always assume!

Speed (9/10)

My order was taken on the next day - and completed in about an hour. Well done!

Customer Service (6.5/10)

Even with good speed and product quality, the third factor to satisfy a customer is Customer Service. I was notified on my profile one day after the order was done - and I didn't get a link to the completed order. Maybe improve on that.

When done on the forums,

Worker wrote:

-snip Done!
-pfp here-
to get it right click and save image as

When it probably should be:

Hi there -username-, your order is now done! If you need any changes don't hesitate to ask and please leave a review if possible! Here it is:
-completed order-
To use it, right-click the image and click save image as. Then set it as your profile picture!

When done on profile:

Worker wrote:

I finished your test order at t.e.s

Try to avoid acronyms - use the full shop name or it may cause confusion. In fact, I know another shop with the acronym T.E.S, the emerald shop.
It should be:

Hi! I finished your order at The Electric Shop. Find it here: -insert link- Have a great day!

Anyways, that's all for this section.

Accessibility (6/10)

You don't have a link directory, which I suppose is okay since you only have 2 posts for the shop info. It may be hard to find specific stuff like forms since you don't highlight some of the important text.

Partnerships (8/10)

You have A LOT of partners. Maybe try coming up with ideas to help each other?

Other Order Quality (OOQ) (94/100)

I've rated the quality of a few of your past orders. Keep it up with the AMAZING product quality.

Final Marks: 65.9/90 - 73% - Good.

I calculated this out of 90 since one section was N/A.
Take this as constructive criticism, but don't take it too seriously :)

• Improve BBCode formatting, and correct the spelling and grammatical errors.
  
• Come up with original ideas
  
• Improve Customer Service
  
• Ask the customer when needed, don't just assume.
  
• Avoid Acronyms when notifying
  
• Come up with benefits for your partners
  
• Highlight some text
  
• Try to avoid spam/off-topic posts
  
• Get your employees active and productive in the shop.
  

Lightning_Bolt77 wrote:

-SNip-
no offense it didnt really help me at all i know im good at making stuff and i know my staff are active. and the off-topic posts idc about tbh and the front page idc about either thanks anyways

Scratchgaming2newacc wrote:

Username:scratchgaming2newacc (Pablo for oc name)
Hair and skin:medium light skin tone and black hair
Clothes:brown t shirt with short sleeves and on the t shirt it has a image of the scratch logo and green shorts
Other:none
Where would you like us to contact you:profile

1Oaktree2 wrote:

What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you

1Oaktree2 wrote:

1Oaktree2 wrote:

What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you

Bump

Lightning_Bolt77 wrote:

1Oaktree2 wrote:

1Oaktree2 wrote:

What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you

Bump

taken! not sure when it wil be done but it will be done before the due date

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