LankyBox01 wrote:

LankyBox01 wrote:

Username: LankyBox01
Are you following this thread?: yes
When do you want your order?: an hour, it cannot be that much work to do
Who do you want to do it?: anyone who uses photoshop or a proffesional photo-editing software
What do you want done?: Make these look normal: https://u.cubeupload.com/LankyBox01/xIXN6j.png https://u.cubeupload.com/LankyBox01/fhWh9u.png https://u.cubeupload.com/LankyBox01/aHEgtW.png https://u.cubeupload.com/LankyBox01/CdqgfN.png https://u.cubeupload.com/LankyBox01/v6IScg.png
Description: Remove the background and try lowering their resolution to the smallest you can, that will not make them look stretched out or more pixely than the original is
Other: Please tell me what program did you use after you complete my order

i got this completed at another shop, you can cancel this.

amiable_dolphin wrote:

Username: mysterious-neutron
Are you following this thread?: Yes
When do you want your order?: Before 25 September
Who do you want to do it?: Anyone good in art
What do you want done?: Side view of a character
Description: I want a side view of this https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/428437515 character
Other: The character should be facing right. Remix the project and draw it there

mysterious-neutron wrote:

amiable_dolphin wrote:

Username: mysterious-neutron
Are you following this thread?: Yes
When do you want your order?: Before 25 September
Who do you want to do it?: Anyone good in art
What do you want done?: Side view of a character
Description: I want a side view of this https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/428437515 character
Other: The character should be facing right. Remix the project and draw it there

Please cancel this I got it from other scratcher

--cosmic wrote:

Username: @–cosmic
How active are you (1-10): 9/10
What can you do: Banners, Intros, Outros, Thumbnails, & Coding.
Why should we choose you: I'm very hardworking, I'm also trustworthy and I never give up on challenges that are hard.
Are you following this thread: Yes.
Have you read the Rules: Willow trees are my favorite
Other:

Catie623 wrote:

--cosmic wrote:

Username: @–cosmic
How active are you (1-10): 9/10
What can you do: Banners, Intros, Outros, Thumbnails, & Coding.
Why should we choose you: I'm very hardworking, I'm also trustworthy and I never give up on challenges that are hard.
Are you following this thread: Yes.
Have you read the Rules: Willow trees are my favorite
Other:

Accepted!

amiable_dolphin wrote:

UOC

Workers, please complete these orders as soon as you can!


Key:
Red: overdue and not taken. Must be completed ASAP
Crimson: taken but overdue. Must be completed ASAP
Bue: Not overdue and not taken
Purple: not taken and no specific deadline

-snip-

bananaandchoc1 wrote:

amiable_dolphin wrote:

UOC

Workers, please complete these orders as soon as you can!


Key:
Red: overdue and not taken. Must be completed ASAP
Crimson: taken but overdue. Must be completed ASAP
Bue: Not overdue and not taken
Purple: not taken and no specific deadline

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Maybe you could change the colours a bit? It’s very hard to tell the difference between the red and crimson (at least for me xD)

LankyBox01 wrote:

Username: LankyBox01
Are you following this thread?: yee
When do you want your order?: asap
Who do you want to do it?: anyone
What do you want done?: a Review
Description: Please review this: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/449065/?page=1#post-4518197
Other: Willow?

Catie623 wrote:

LankyBox01 wrote:

Username: LankyBox01
Are you following this thread?: yee
When do you want your order?: asap
Who do you want to do it?: anyone
What do you want done?: a Review
Description: Please review this: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/449065/?page=1#post-4518197
Other: Willow?

Taken! Should be completed by the end of today. Check up on the status of your order here.

Before reading the story, I took a quick glance over it and was able to easily see that it was an amazing story. However, what caught me honestly was how the “i”s we're capitalized - it makes it look slightly unprofessional. Another thing that I noticed was that there were no idents and the start of each paragraph. For me, at least, indents always make a paragraph look neater and more attractive. But otherwise, for a first glance, it's really awesome!

When writing a story about something that happens on a website, you don't need as much description, but it is definitely nice to have it there. With your story, I actually had a visual in my head of you clicking all these buttons on the screen and the profile pictures you describe and such. I've read stories before where they're just these bland words that I can't visualize. But this story is really good with description.

In shorter stories, it's a lot harder to add good vocabulary. I can definitely see those places where you slip in some higher, more descriptive vocabulary. You could definitely add some more, though, so that you can show others some awesome vocabulary that is super descriptive at the same time! One thing I noticed was how you said “pfp” in the story, you might want to change that to just a standard, non-abbreviated “profile picture” to remove any possible unprofessionalism and/or confusion, because not everyone knows what a pfp is.

With awesome description, vocabulary, spelling, and grammar, this is definitely an amazing piece of work! One thing that I would like to see some of would be some figurative language, though, to add some more things that draws the reader in to your story. Other than the constructive critiques I have given, it is a really, really amazing story! Great job!

Catie623 wrote:

Catie623 wrote:

LankyBox01 wrote:

Username: LankyBox01
Are you following this thread?: yee
When do you want your order?: asap
Who do you want to do it?: anyone
What do you want done?: a Review
Description: Please review this: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/449065/?page=1#post-4518197
Other: Willow?

Taken! Should be completed by the end of today. Check up on the status of your order here.

Hi there, @LankyBox01 - your order has been completed and is below. Let me know if you would like anything added/changed! Thanks for ordering!

~Snip~

LankyBox01 wrote:

Catie623 wrote:

Catie623 wrote:

LankyBox01 wrote:

Username: LankyBox01
Are you following this thread?: yee
When do you want your order?: asap
Who do you want to do it?: anyone
What do you want done?: a Review
Description: Please review this: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/449065/?page=1#post-4518197
Other: Willow?

Taken! Should be completed by the end of today. Check up on the status of your order here.

Hi there, @LankyBox01 - your order has been completed and is below. Let me know if you would like anything added/changed! Thanks for ordering!

~Snip~

Thank you!

Activity Check!
All members must respond by Saturday, 24th October, 2020 or get a strike!

I feel that this shop is falling into inactivity and honestly, it feels like a long time since our last activity check and I think if we have one now, we can ‘fire’ users who have not been active.

How an Activity Check works:

1. I or @Catie623 will call an activity check.
   
2. Whoever calls the activity check then sets a deadline.
   
3. All members must respond by ‘snipping’ the post and replying with ‘Active!’ before the deadline.
   
4. All members who do not respond get a ‘strike’ Those with three strikes are ‘fired’
   

Responded (1):

1. Milkysplash(Milky)
   

Not Responded (17)

1. Catie623 (Shine)
   
2. CraftGirl-HAS (HAS)**
   
3. popsyrabbit*
   
4. bananaandchoc1 (Choc)
   
5. vicuna101 (Vic)
   
6. lunastarckb (Luna)**
   
7. lightningspark6545 (Lightning)**
   
8. FirecubeT*
   
9. Flawpaw (Flaw)*
   
10. RainbowsToybox**
    
11. Rubycat_0w0
    
12. Lightning_Candy*
    
13. swing4*
    
14. lovepup3*
    
15. TroubleandTsunami*
    
16. amiable_dolphin
    
17. –cosmic (Mei)
    

Milkysplash wrote:

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Milkysplash wrote:

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Active!

Milkysplash wrote:

Activity Check!
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