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Catie623

MossMapping wrote:
Username: MossW/MossMapping
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Review
Describe what you need created: A review of my unreleased pac-man game
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): 20/08/2020
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: Yes
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes
Are you following the discussion: yes
Additional notes: Link: https://llk.github.io/scratch-gui/master/#415238377

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Catie623

MossMapping wrote:
Username: MossW/MossMapping
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Review
Describe what you need created: A review of my unreleased pac-man game
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): 20/08/2020
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: Yes
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes
Are you following the discussion: yes
Additional notes: Link: https://llk.github.io/scratch-gui/master/#415238377

Your review is done! (I styled it similarly to Nammy's reviews)

First Impressions

When I first look at the game, I see how well-made the sprites are. The pac-man sprite and the ghost sprite are very well made. However, I think you could also add a home screen with a “Play” button and an “Instructions” button, or something similar to that. A thumbnail would also make it look a little bit more appealing. But so far, it looks pretty great!

Gameplay: 8.5/10

It was very fun to play, but I believe that there are some things that could be improved on. First of all: the ghost. So, it is to my understanding that when you eat the “big food”, the ghost “runs away”. But is it supposed to come back after a while? It makes the gameplay kind of boring because it just gets stuck in a corner for the rest of the game. Second: I was expecting, when I first clicked on it, for there to be levels of some sort. I don't know if you intended it to be this way or not, but with just the same level every time, it gets kind of repetitive. Otherwise, very fun to play!

Code: 9.5/10

When I looked at the code, I was actually surprised by how simple it was. It seemed like the game would have a lot more, but it's good that you were able to make such a game with simple code. Although, again, with the ghost: I think this might be a problem with the code. I don't know if the game is still work in progress and that's why the code is still like that, but if you aren't going to add anything else then I believe it's a problem with the code (unless you intended for it to be that way). But another thing I see in the ghost sprite is that you have four differently colored costumes for the ghost when it chases you, but only the orange one currently appears.

The code for the big food kind of confuses me; so it chases away the ghost, but doesn't give you any points? Which, makes sense because you never want to overpower a player in a game, but also, I feel like it should also give you at least a point (maybe two, even, because it's twice as big and only occurs every one in ten times). Otherwise, I found the code very well done!

Graphics: 8.5/10

The graphics are very nice, but it appears to me that you took them from a picture found on the internet? It appears you have animated them, though, so that tells me that you didn't just steal them. Be sure to give proper credit for them, though.

The food images seem okay in the actual editor, but on the screen they appear a bit choppy. But here's an idea you can choose to use for the ghost graphics: You can make a separate sprite with the eyes of the ghost, and then you can make them go to the ghost sprite, but then they point towards the pac-man sprite (you already have a bit of this, but it's more using the right-left flipping of the ghost, though). It would make the ghost even more appealing to the eye.

Overall: 9

The game was very fun to play, and could be even better with some improvements, such as adding a thumbnail or instructions. But otherwise, I'm sure others would love to play your game!

Hopefully this review will help you expand on your game and improve it as much as you can. Be sure to leave a review if you can!

Catie623 (Lily)
Worker at Longarms Creations

Last edited by Catie623 (Aug. 18, 2020 17:26:58)

Nambaseking01

Catie623 wrote:
Your review is done! (I styled it similarly to Nammy's reviews)

First Impressions

When I first look at the game, I see how well-made the sprites are. The pac-man sprite and the ghost sprite are very well made. However, I think you could also add a home screen with a “Play” button and an “Instructions” button, or something similar to that. A thumbnail would also make it look a little bit more appealing. But so far, it looks pretty great!

-snip-

Catie623 (Lily)
Worker at Longarms Creations

Haha, nice order - I'll add it to the Completed Orders list. Just saying though: you can use my review template if you want, but it is not an official template and you can create your own innovative methods for reviewing, but using mine would also be good as it's clean and practical.

Catie623

Nambaseking01 wrote:
Catie623 wrote:
Your review is done! (I styled it similarly to Nammy's reviews)

First Impressions

When I first look at the game, I see how well-made the sprites are. The pac-man sprite and the ghost sprite are very well made. However, I think you could also add a home screen with a “Play” button and an “Instructions” button, or something similar to that. A thumbnail would also make it look a little bit more appealing. But so far, it looks pretty great!

-snip-

Catie623 (Lily)
Worker at Longarms Creations

Haha, nice order - I'll add it to the Completed Orders list. Just saying though: you can use my review template if you want, but it is not an official template and you can create your own innovative methods for reviewing, but using mine would also be good as it's clean and practical.

Yeah, I used a similar styling but the headlines weren't the same (because it wasn't a shop review) I just thought it's a good template (plus, I wanted it to look neat

and thanks

)

Nambaseking01

MapleTails wrote:
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One request: Could you not put the entire thing in a quote message and also put the Partnerships title centered (also, maybe also center the reserve link and put it right under the title).

Last edited by Nambaseking01 (Aug. 18, 2020 17:38:21)

Chewyblockguy

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What type of services are you a specialist at: scratch, forums, and studios
What type of services are you not a specialist at, but can complete in some occasions: art
How much time have you been on Scratch: 1 1/2 years
Are you following this discussion: yes
Have you read section 2 of the Terms and Conditions: no
Show us examples of your creations: cat vs. tacos
What is your nickname : Chewyblockguy
Would you like to be invited to our team member studio (https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/27343764) (optional): yes
Additional notes: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/users/Chewyblockguy/

Last edited by Chewyblockguy (Aug. 18, 2020 17:54:36)

bananaandchoc1

Chewyblockguy wrote:
Job Application Form
What type of services are you a specialist at: scratch, forums, and studios
What type of services are you not a specialist at, but can complete in some occasions: art
How much time have you been on Scratch: 1 1/2 years
Are you following this discussion: yes
Have you read section 2 of the Terms and Conditions: no
Show us examples of your creations: cat vs. tacos
What is your nickname : Chewyblockguy
Would you like to be invited to our team member studio (https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/27343764) (optional): yes
Additional notes: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/users/Chewyblockguy/

What do you mean you are a specialist at scratch, forums, and studios? Basically just what services are you good at.

Nambaseking01

Chewyblockguy wrote:
Job Application Form
What type of services are you a specialist at: scratch, forums, and studios
What type of services are you not a specialist at, but can complete in some occasions: art
How much time have you been on Scratch: 1 1/2 years
Are you following this discussion: yes
Have you read section 2 of the Terms and Conditions: no
Show us examples of your creations: cat vs. tacos
What is your nickname : Chewyblockguy
Would you like to be invited to our team member studio (https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/27343764) (optional): yes
Additional notes: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/users/Chewyblockguy/

Sorry, but @bananaandchoc1 is correct - you can't set “scratch, forums, and studios” as services you are a specialist at. It must be something you're extremely good at, like writing or drawing. And additionally, you're not allowed to join this shop if you haven't read section 2 of the Terms and Conditions.

Chewyblockguy

I am good at coding, typing descriptions for projects/studios, and typing forum posts
also in reply to @Nambaseking01 okay.

Last edited by Chewyblockguy (Aug. 18, 2020 18:03:19)

MapleTails

Nambaseking01 wrote:
MapleTails wrote:
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One request: Could you not put the entire thing in a quote message and also put the Partnerships title centered (also, maybe also center the reserve link and put it right under the title).

Ok fixed! (BTW: When do you want me to start partnership activity checks? Or basically what day of the week do you want me to do them?)

Voxalice

LankyBox01 wrote:
What type of thing do you need: HTML & CSS
Describe what you need created: A website that looks like this, include all the info from here.
Deadline: none

Voxalice

Voxalice wrote:
LankyBox01 wrote:
an order

Here is your website!

Please excuse the delay.

Make sure to fill out the review form so I know what to improve and what not to do. Thank you for ordering from Longarms Creations, please order another time!

Starstriker3000

Username: Starstriker3000
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Art
Describe what you need created: I need a skeleton king with a golden bone crown and glowing sword, all done in the Scratch Vector Editor. There should be a front view and a side view. The limbs and face expression should be easily editable.
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): ASAHP (but hurry up please; I can't make any more progress on my game until this is completed)
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: I don't know what this means so I'm going to say yes.
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes. Coronavirus should leave this earth.
Are you following the discussion: Yes
Additional notes: N/A

Nambaseking01

Chewyblockguy wrote:
I am good at coding, typing descriptions for projects/studios, and typing forum posts
also in reply to @Nambaseking01 okay.

There is a certain proof in the Terms and Conditions that must be included in your application to prove that you've read it. Otherwise, you cannot be accepted into this shop.

MapleTails wrote:
Ok fixed! (BTW: When do you want me to start partnership activity checks? Or basically what day of the week do you want me to do them?)

You can do it once every month (which means every 25-31 days, but you can do one right now just to kickstart your work)

Voxalice wrote:
Voxalice wrote:
LankyBox01 wrote:
an order

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Here is your website! Please excuse the delay.

Make sure to fill out the review form so I know what to improve and what not to do. Thank you for ordering from Longarms Creations, please order another time!

Wow, nice order! I'll add it to the list of Completed Orders.

Starstriker3000 wrote:
Username: Starstriker3000
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Art
Describe what you need created: I need a skeleton king with a golden bone crown and glowing sword, all done in the Scratch Vector Editor. There should be a front view and a side view. The limbs and face expression should be easily editable.
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): ASAHP (but hurry up please; I can't make any more progress on my game until this is completed)
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: I don't know what this means so I'm going to say yes.
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes. Coronavirus should leave this earth.
Are you following the discussion: Yes
Additional notes: N/A

Hi, it's important that you know what specialist means. Do you want someone who's extremely skilled at art or anybody who can do art? You can set your preference to “yes” for the skilled one, and “no” for the opposite one.

Nambaseking01

We have a small problem here: we can't include @Voxalice's order to the Completed Orders section because the website is user-made and it should be confirmed by Paddle first. But we're going to have an official website for Longarms soon anyway, so we'll not include this in the Completed Orders but we will when the Longarms website as a whole is confirmed. Are you fine with that, @Voxalice?

Last edited by Nambaseking01 (Aug. 19, 2020 13:58:24)

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Nambaseking01 wrote:
We have a small problem here: we can't include @Voxalice's order to the Completed Orders section because the website is user-made and it should be confirmed by Paddle first. But we're going to have an official website for Longarms soon anyway, so we'll not include this in the COmpleted Orders but we will when the Longarms website as a whole is confirmed. Are you fine with that, @Voxalice?

No need: https://informant.micahlindley.com/read.html?s=IEVVnUqGy5YaAjhqpNrH

MossMapping

Big news, the website is now going to be under construction! See here for more info:
https://github.com/LongarmsInc/Longarms-Creations

garnet-chan

Nambaseking01 wrote:
We have a small problem here: we can't include @Voxalice's order to the Completed Orders section because the website is user-made and it should be confirmed by Paddle first. But we're going to have an official website for Longarms soon anyway, so we'll not include this in the COmpleted Orders but we will when the Longarms website as a whole is confirmed. Are you fine with that, @Voxalice?

Websites don't need to be confirmed anymore, as per the old topic.

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