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Nambaseking01

itschaoticcrazycat wrote:
ipaddude wrote:
Nambaseking01 wrote:
If there's a tie in the Poll Jumble, we'll have to redo the poll and put it at the last deadline possible - that way there's much more time for votes and decisions and lower chance of a tie appearing again. But anyways, this poll was pretty interesting!
there would be a lower chance if the results weren't biased. Because everyone who voted has already voted, they now have a bias towards that decision so next time they are more likely to vote for the same thing. Hence, the chance cannot be calculated without knowing the chances of every individual voting for a candidate.
That's very true. Instead, you can change the option's wordings to see if the original results were biased.

Maybe we can discuss new ideas for poll ties when the next one pops up, but for now let's just leave it. We have time until the 28th of August, anyway.

itschaoticcrazycat

Nambaseking01 wrote:
itschaoticcrazycat wrote:
ipaddude wrote:
Nambaseking01 wrote:
If there's a tie in the Poll Jumble, we'll have to redo the poll and put it at the last deadline possible - that way there's much more time for votes and decisions and lower chance of a tie appearing again. But anyways, this poll was pretty interesting!
there would be a lower chance if the results weren't biased. Because everyone who voted has already voted, they now have a bias towards that decision so next time they are more likely to vote for the same thing. Hence, the chance cannot be calculated without knowing the chances of every individual voting for a candidate.
That's very true. Instead, you can change the option's wordings to see if the original results were biased.

Maybe we can discuss new ideas for poll ties when the next one pops up, but for now let's just leave it. We have time until the 28th of August, anyway.

Ok.

Nambaseking01

miagupta wrote:
Username:miagupta
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here):Review Cause I ordered a week ago and was great!
Describe what you need created:a review of my new branch https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/431927/
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy):Soon not as long as last time
Do you want a specialist to complete your order:yes!
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions:Yup
Are you following the discussion:yes
Additional notes:coronavirus must leave earth even tho you should say COVID-19

Taken!

Catie623

Nambaseking01 wrote:
Catie623 wrote:
-snip-

Accepted!

Also, I hope you're being sarcastic with that last question. Most people give, like, one or two examples

Thanks! Also yes, I was being sarcastic xD

Nambaseking01

miagupta wrote:
Username:miagupta
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here):Review Cause I ordered a week ago and was great!
Describe what you need created:a review of my new branch https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/431927/
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy):Soon not as long as last time
Do you want a specialist to complete your order:yes!
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions:Yup
Are you following the discussion:yes
Additional notes:coronavirus must leave earth even tho you should say COVID-19

First Impressions

My first impressions on this forum thread is: it seems blank. If you go to the front page of Longarms, there are so many different colors, we have banners, we have quotes and everything is organized and easy to read. But in the forum thread of your shop, it seems blank with no colors at all. For the forms, each should be in a quote and the questions can be bold, and there can be a directory to all of the posts in every single front page post. There is so many improvements there can be, but at the moment it's a little bit of a mess. If you don't know how to fix anything, you can order BBCode fixing and improvements at a shop that offers BBCode as a service, like this one.

Grammar: 6/10

The grammar in the title is incorrect and the grammar in the first post is also slightly incorrect. Of course, people can understand that it's just how the shop works, but it decreases the professionalism and makes people think that the shop is bad just because of it's grammar (which it is not, of course). It might be a good idea to learn English grammar more professionally so it's easier for you to update the main post and the title to something better. Or, you can also order at a shop like this one that offers writing products that all of the grammar mistakes get fixed so everything looks nice and well.

Not only in the main post, also in the other posts - they are all full of grammatical mistakes. One way to fix this is to click on the green “V” mark in the giant button bar above the place where you write your posts, and then there's a little preview of what your post will look like if you actually post it. Then, you can finish all mistakes and then post it in your shop. Another good idea would be to look at other shops, see the choice of words they use, how they use their creativity to find good words, and implement those ideas in your shop. When I ran my last shop, I did the same thing to learn, but now I run my new one and I know what to do.

Professionalism: 6/10

The professionalism hasn't really improved from your other studio shop. First of all, you didn't bother with implementing my suggestions to improve your shop in the first place into your new branch. All of the forms aren't capitalized and the sentences aren't in bold, and it's not separated properly. I understand that it looks perfectly clean and neat for you, but for other people who've seen big shops with perfect BBCode and grammar it seems disorganized and therefore it will give out a bad vibe and will seem like your shop is bad (which it is NOT, the orders are brilliant)

It all really depends on the grammar, but it is wrong everywhere, and that's the main reason all of your branches go inactive and don't get much response. If you learn more and make a fantastic shop with amazing grammar and colors, it will be so attractive. Your title is already super unique and it's a major attraction, but the rest is unprofessional and doesn't give a great vibe. This shop, for example, the title is unique - Longarms Creations. The front page is very colorful, the orders are very good, and the grammar is almost never wrong.

Buzzy Bee Banners, for an example - the title is definitely unique. The front page is colorful, the orders are perfect, and the grammar is also never wrong there. That's the reason these shops seem so professional and high-level, even though they're run by people who are the same age as you and learn the same things like you at school. Additionally, it might be a good idea to stop making posts like “Orders?” and “We need workers!” since it's like indirectly bumping your topic. And if you need more workers or orders, you can put in big and bold text on the front page that you need those instead of spamming your topic with messages with it, because that also gives an unprofessional vibe indirectly.

Now, let's do an example. If you're a Scratcher surfing the Requests forum and you see a shop title that has a couple of grammatical mistakes in the front page posts, in the title, and the owner keeps posting that they need more workers and more orders, would you think that's a professional and well-made shop? I don't think so. But people don't understand that. So the key to getting people to know about your awesome orders and the fact that you need workers is better grammar and professionalism.

But I've repeated this many times before, and I don't think you're taking my advice: if you don't think you can improve your grammar or improve your BBCode (coloring and formatting the front page), you can order at shops like this one that offer writing and BBCode as services and request them to fix everything at your shop. Another good idea might be to request shops that offer advertising to advertise your shop, so they can advertise it and give it more customers and workers.

Anyways, those are my complaints and compliments about your new branch, and please don't take anything seriously as it's only criticism and you can take it if you want but not take it if you don't want. But everything I wrote is from experience and not because 1) I want to be mean and make people think your shop is bad 2) I'm forcing you to order BBCode, advertising, or writing at my shop 3) Stress you out with all of the advice I gave

Hopefully this review will help you expand on your shop and improve it as much as you can. Please make sure to fill in the customer review form and return to Longarms Creations for all your needs!

Nambaseking01 (Nammy)
Founder & President of Longarms Creations
Founder & Former President of Longarms Creations

Last edited by Nambaseking01 (Aug. 18, 2020 13:36:59)

MiaTheMia

Nambaseking01 wrote:
miagupta wrote:
Username:miagupta
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here):Review Cause I ordered a week ago and was great!
Describe what you need created:a review of my new branch https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/431927/
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy):Soon not as long as last time
Do you want a specialist to complete your order:yes!
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions:Yup
Are you following the discussion:yes
Additional notes:coronavirus must leave earth even tho you should say COVID-19

First Impressions

My first impressions on this forum thread is: it seems blank. If you go to the front page of Longarms, there are so many different colors, we have banners, we have quotes and everything is organized and easy to read. But in the forum thread of your shop, it seems blank with no colors at all. For the forms, each should be in a quote and the questions can be bold, and there can be a directory to all of the posts in every single front page post. There is so many improvements there can be, but at the moment it's a little bit of a mess. If you don't know how to fix anything, you can order BBCode fixing and improvements at a shop that offers BBCode as a service, like this one.

Grammar: 6/10

The grammar in the title is incorrect and the grammar in the first post is also slightly incorrect. Of course, people can understand that it's just how the shop works, but it decreases the professionalism and makes people think that the shop is bad just because of it's grammar (which it is not, of course). It might be a good idea to learn English grammar more professionally so it's easier for you to update the main post and the title to something better. Or, you can also order at a shop like this one that offers writing products that all of the grammar mistakes get fixed so everything looks nice and well.

Not only in the main post, also in the other posts - they are all full of grammatical mistakes. One way to fix this is to click on the green “V” mark in the giant button bar above the place where you write your posts, and then there's a little preview of what your post will look like if you actually post it. Then, you can finish all mistakes and then post it in your shop. Another good idea would be to look at other shops, see the choice of words they use, how they use their creativity to find good words, and implement those ideas in your shop. When I ran my last shop, I did the same thing to learn, but now I run my new one and I know what to do.

Professionalism: 6/10

The professionalism hasn't really improved from your other studio shop. First of all, you didn't bother with implementing my suggestions to improve your shop in the first place into your new branch. All of the forms aren't capitalized and the sentences aren't in bold, and it's not separated properly. I understand that it looks perfectly clean and neat for you, but for other people who've seen big shops with perfect BBCode and grammar it seems disorganized and therefore it will give out a bad vibe and will seem like your shop is bad (which it is NOT, the orders are brilliant)

It all really depends on the grammar, but it is wrong everywhere, and that's the main reason all of your branches go inactive and don't get much response. If you learn more and make a fantastic shop with amazing grammar and colors, it will be so attractive. Your title is already super unique and it's a major attraction, but the rest is unprofessional and doesn't give a great vibe. This shop, for example, the title is unique - Longarms Creations. The front page is very colorful, the orders are very good, and the grammar is almost never wrong.

Buzzy Bee Banners, for an example - the title is definitely unique. The front page is colorful, the orders are perfect, and the grammar is also never wrong there. That's the reason these shops seem so professional and high-level, even though they're run by people who are the same age as you and learn the same things like you at school. Additionally, it might be a good idea to stop making posts like “Orders?” and “We need workers!” since it's like indirectly bumping your topic. And if you need more workers or orders, you can put in big and bold text on the front page that you need those instead of spamming your topic with messages with it, because that also gives an unprofessional vibe indirectly.

Now, let's do an example. If you're a Scratcher surfing the Requests forum and you see a shop title that has a couple of grammatical mistakes in the front page posts, in the title, and the owner keeps posting that they need more workers and more orders, would you think that's a professional and well-made shop? I don't think so. But people don't understand that. So the key to getting people to know about your awesome orders and the fact that you need workers is better grammar and professionalism.

But I've repeated this many times before, and I don't think you're taking my advice: if you don't think you can improve your grammar or improve your BBCode (coloring and formatting the front page), you can order at shops like this one that offer writing and BBCode as services and request them to fix everything at your shop. Another good idea might be to request shops that offer advertising to advertise your shop, so they can advertise it and give it more customers and workers.

Anyways, those are my complaints and compliments about your new branch, and please don't take anything seriously as it's only criticism and you can take it if you want but not take it if you don't want. But everything I wrote is from experience and not because 1) I want to be mean and make people think your shop is bad 2) I'm forcing you to order BBCode, advertising, or writing at my shop 3) Stress you out with all of the advice I gave

Hopefully this review will help you expand on your shop and improve it as much as you can,

Nambaseking01 (Nammy)
Founder & President of Longarms Creations
Founder & Former President of Longarms Creations

Okay thx!

itschaoticcrazycat

miagupta wrote:
Nambaseking01 wrote:
miagupta wrote:
-le snippy-

Next time, just snip it.

Last edited by itschaoticcrazycat (Aug. 18, 2020 13:40:35)

Nambaseking01

miagupta wrote:
-snip-
Okay thx!

It's our pleasure to help out!

itschaoticcrazycat wrote:
-snip-
Next time, just snip it.

Please be more kind when saying things to our customers - you could've said something like “Please snip your posts so it doesn't clatter up the forum thread. Thanks!”. But then again, you're not a team member, so I can't force you to maintain a kind nature…

itschaoticcrazycat

Nambaseking01 wrote:
miagupta wrote:
-snip-
Okay thx!

It's our pleasure to help out!

itschaoticcrazycat wrote:
-snip-
Next time, just snip it.

Please be more kind when saying things to our customers - you could've said something like “Please snip your posts so it doesn't clatter up the forum thread. Thanks!”. But then again, you're not a team member, so I can't force you to maintain a kind nature…

You're right in both senses….

MiaTheMia

Username:miagupta
Who finished your order:Namebaseking
How much would you rate your order on a scale of 10:6/10
Was your order finished within the deadline:yes
Describe your general thoughts here

kay but to much criticism basically the only thing which was good was the name and I thought it was useful but to critical.The main thing is I’m just doing this for fun and I feel the review is to serious.
Do you think you will return to this shop:Not really
Additional notes:also the members aren’t as friendly as other shops I think everything here is to serious for me as I just came to scratch to have fun and meet people make projects and program not to start a serious business in a office like atmosphere

Sorry if I’ve criticised to much but I loved the banner The robot looks cool

Last edited by MiaTheMia (Aug. 18, 2020 14:17:16)

Nambaseking01

miagupta wrote:
Username:miagupta
Who finished your order:Namebaseking
How much would you rate your order on a scale of 10:6
Was your order finished within the deadline:yes
Describe your general thoughts herekay but to much criticism basically the only thing which was good was the name and I thought it was useful but to critical.The main thing is I’m just doing this for fun and I feel the review is to serious
Do you think you will return to this shoprobably not for reviews as they are a bit to much criticism
Additional notes:none really

Thanks for your review! I respect your opinion that you're doing this for fun and therefore are not accepting serious criticism, but you were the one who ordered a review and if I make a review, I like to make it so it explains everything in detail and says how to improve your shop. A lot of people gave me serious criticism in the past and I became a little annoyed just like you back then, but had I not listened back then I wouldn't have become the boy I am today. Just speaking out of experience

mtech22

Username: mtech22
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): advertising
Describe what you need created: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/432147/
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): Whenever, sooner rather than later
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: no…?
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: coronavirus shall leave this earth
Are you following the discussion: yes
Additional notes: no

MapleTails

Order Form
Username: MapleTails
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Review
Describe what you need created: Review of This Shop: Shop is Here.
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): 20-27//8//2020 but preferably as soon as possible.
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: Nope!
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yep, but are we all in agreement that Covid-19 should leave this Earth?
Are you following the discussion: Yup.
Additional notes: Be as harsh/critcal as you like.

Last edited by MapleTails (Aug. 18, 2020 14:26:51)

lightningspark6545

MapleTails wrote:
Customer Forms
Order Form
Username: MapleTails
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Review
Describe what you need created: Review of This Shop: Shop is Here.
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): 20-27//8//2020 but preferably as soon as possible.
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: Nope!
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yep, but are we all in agreement that Covid-19 should leave this Earth?
Are you following the discussion: Yup.
Additional notes: Be as harsh/critcal as you like.
Taken!

Nambaseking01

Did anybody notice?

THE PR OFFICERS AND GENERAL PARTNERSHIP MANAGER POSITIONS ARE OUT!!!!!!

i dont care how many spelling mistakes i make this is such a big work done omg ogm go gm go mg ogmg g

—————————-

Anyone can apply to become a PR Officer position or General Partnerships Manager, but first you must read the gigantic, humongous section 3.2 in the Terms and Conditions lol

OMG OMG OMG IM SO EXCITED

ITS FINALLY OUT THATS SUCH A BIG WORK GONE!! AND IF PEOPLE APPLY FOR IT SO MANY WORKS WILL DROP OFF MY SHOULDER!!

Nambaseking01

mtech22 wrote:
Username: mtech22
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): advertising
Describe what you need created: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/topic/432147/
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): Whenever, sooner rather than later
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: no…?
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: coronavirus shall leave this earth
Are you following the discussion: yes
Additional notes: no

Taken! I'll finish it tomorrow along with the other voice acting orders I have to finish

MapleTails

BoD (Board of Directors) Application Form
coronavirus should leave this earth
What position do you need on the Board of Directors: General Partnerships Manager. I have some neat tokens.
Why do you want a position on the Board of Directors: I really want to help out this shop more than being just a worker. I'm only going for General Partnerships Manger so I don't overwork myself if I do
What qualities do you have as a leader: I currently run my own shop (Creative Pack) and I've been here for a while. (I don't know how to continue this however without knowing how to sound like I'm bragging) Hippoty Hoppity this position is now my property.
In how many shops do you work (or how many do you own, too): 3. Longarms, Spritemaster, Starry Sky, and Creative Pack.
Show us examples of your contributions to other shops (orders or official statements): Spiral Order Longarm Order
I currently can't find the page for where I took the order.
Voice Acting Order
PFP Order
(If I can find the VP and Second VP speeches I'll throw them in here too)
Have you read sections 2 and 3 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes,
Additional notes: Note: The thing was a little difficult to read, terms and conditions. I am public expert xd

Nambaseking01

MapleTails wrote:
BoD (Board of Directors) Application Form
coronavirus should leave this earth
What position do you need on the Board of Directors: General Partnerships Manager. I have some neat tokens.
Why do you want a position on the Board of Directors: I really want to help out this shop more than being just a worker. I'm only going for General Partnerships Manger so I don't overwork myself if I do
What qualities do you have as a leader: I currently run my own shop (Creative Pack) and I've been here for a while. (I don't know how to continue this however without knowing how to sound like I'm bragging) Hippoty Hoppity this position is now my property.
In how many shops do you work (or how many do you own, too): 3. Longarms, Spritemaster, Starry Sky, and Creative Pack.
Show us examples of your contributions to other shops (orders or official statements): Spiral Order Longarm Order
I currently can't find the page for where I took the order.
Voice Acting Order
PFP Order
(If I can find the VP and Second VP speeches I'll throw them in here too)
Have you read sections 2 and 3 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes,
Additional notes: Note: The thing was a little difficult to read, terms and conditions. I am public expert xd

Accepted!

OK, so, for starters, just quote the Partnerships post and have a small link in [i] and [/i] tags somewhere linking to the first Partnerships post saying “reserve partnerships”, and I'll change all of the links on the front page to link to your post. (Also, you can brag in your application, that's technically the point of all those questions - to know how good you are

)

MapleTails

Partnerships

Partnership Form
Username:
What is the name of your shop:
What is the link of your shop:
Please provide the banner of your shop (required):
Have you read the Partnership Terms in the Terms and Conditions:
What is our deal (partnerships do not get accepted without a proper and fair deal):
Additional notes:

Lightning Studios
Owned by @lightningspark6545
Our deal is that we should advertise each other's shops and also take each other's orders when possible.

The Coffee Shop - Order Banners Here!
Owned by @-0live-
Our deal is that we should advertise each other's shops in any way we wish.

This is a link for the reserve Partnerships.

Last edited by MapleTails (Aug. 18, 2020 17:59:13)

MossMapping

Username: MossW/MossMapping
What type of thing do you need (e.g. Scratch or Art) (you can find all of our services here): Review
Describe what you need created: A review of my unreleased pac-man game
Deadline (please use dd/mm/yyyy): 20/08/2020
Do you need a specialist to complete your order: Yes
Have you read section 1 of the Terms and Conditions: Yes
Are you following the discussion: yes
Additional notes: Link: https://llk.github.io/scratch-gui/master/#415238377

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