Flawpaw wrote:

Monkeylover200 wrote:

Flawpaw wrote:

I know I opened today but I need a I Lyall 1. So first person to respond to this will be Lyall 1.

could I be Lyall 2?

Sure.

Flawpaw wrote:

PrincessPuppy321 wrote:

Could you put me on the waiting list for staff?
Where did you get your pfp? xD I love it

Yes, and I got it from Sangled on Picrew

hp_mega_fan wrote:

Could i be Hope? (secretary)

Flawpaw wrote:

hp_mega_fan wrote:

Could i be Hope? (secretary)

No. Am not accepting applications

Review Form
Username: Lesbeproud-
Pronouns: She/her
Link to what you want reviewed: Here
How Detailed Would you like your review? Fairly detailed, but it doesn't have to be over the top
What Would You like me to exclude in your review? Nothing, really
What's the due date? ASAP
Do you want me to do a sample order? Does not apply

Banner/Thumbnail Form
Username: Lesbeproud-
Pronouns: She/her
What would you like for your background? Ocean waves
Would you like Banner or thumbnail? Thumbnail
Link to what you want for your background: here
Do you want any extra images other than your background? Nope
Link to extra images: n/a
What would you like your banner to say? ‘there can be danger in beauty’
What color would you like your text? A light blue
What font would you like? A script
Due Date: ASAP

LesBeProud- wrote:

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Banner/Thumbnail Form
Username: Lesbeproud-
Pronouns: She/her
What would you like for your background? Ocean waves
Would you like Banner or thumbnail? Thumbnail
Link to what you want for your background: here
Do you want any extra images other than your background? Nope
Link to extra images: n/a
What would you like your banner to say? ‘there can be danger in beauty’
What color would you like your text? A light blue
What font would you like? A script
Due Date: ASAP

LesBeProud- wrote:

Do you review projects? If so:

Review Form
Username: Lesbeproud-
Pronouns: She/her
Link to what you want reviewed: Here
How Detailed Would you like your review? Fairly detailed, but it doesn't have to be over the top
What Would You like me to exclude in your review? Nothing, really
What's the due date? ASAP
Do you want me to do a sample order? Does not apply

I can do this.

LesBeProud- wrote:

Hey, just checking in! Once one (or both) of my sample orders are completed, I'll get your review finished up and posted. No rush, take your time, but I just wanted to update you

Remus Lupin's Review

First Impression: 9.5/10

When I first looked at Remus Lupin (the shop, not the character), I noticed your title and banner first. I think your title is good, although it could be better. I might try to separate the name, subtitle, and announcement like this:

Remus Lupin ❂ The Shop To Fill All Your Harry Potter Needs ❂ WE ARE OPEN!

Or something similar. Also, I think your banner looks very nice!

Original Posts - Content: 9.5/10

While you don't yet have a directory, that's okay. You don't seem to need it as you only have five main posts. Scrolling through them, I noticed a lot of helpful information. Your order forms look very nice, too! Also, I love how instead of having ‘staff’ and ‘BoD’, you have Werewolves and Board of Lupins. It definitely contributes to your theme, and makes your shop stand out as a bit more unique as well.

Bulletin Board Code: 9/10

While you only have a little bit of BB code implemented in your shop's posts, you use it well! The minimalism effect is nice, and like the little touch of making your order forms similar to the House colors.

Product: 9/10

The project review I received was wonderful! While short, it pointed out some things that would definitely improve my project as a whole. I would definitely take your advice if I were update it (but I probably won't, as that would take several hours and it's an old project).

Speed: 9/10

My order was taken in just a few hours, and then completed about a day later. That's pretty quick for such a small shop, thank you!

Customer Service: 10/10

Staff were very kind, and make sure to notify me about my order being completed. Thank you!

Staff: 4.5/5

I think you have some great staff so far! I've had the fortune to know you all, and you guys are wonderful, hard-working people! I don't see an application form anywhere, so I'm only going to cover the current member half of this category.

Productivity: 9.5/10

The two ways I measure this are OPP (Orders Per Page) and SI (Spam Index). Your OPP score is 0.65, with 1 order completed and 1.55 pages. Nice job! And with 31 posts (1 of which are spam), your SI score is 0.03. That's one of the lowest I think I've seen in a long time!

Partnerships: Not Scored

Since you aren't accepting any, nor have any, partners yet, I won't be scoring this category.

Shop Environment: 9.5/10

Overall, Remus Lupin has a good environment. The staff are kind and friendly, and there's a lot of constructive discussion, as well as quick completion of orders.

Final Impression: 83.5/100 - A

Your score was converted from 70.5/85. Overall, the vibe I get from your shop is standing out. It's different from a lot of shops, and is off to a good start. Keep up the great work!

Advice:

• Separate the title
  
• Add a directory in the future (but only if needed)
  
• Possibly add a little more BB code
  
• Just bring in more orders to expand!