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- Monkeylover200
- Scratcher
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TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
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- Flawpaw
- Scratcher
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TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
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- hihenetu2029
- Scratcher
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TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Username: hihenetu2029
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
Last edited by hihenetu2029 (June 21, 2020 13:29:26)
- Flawpaw
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Sorry but we are not accepting orders at the moment! You also didn't fill out the form correctly! Thank you and have a nice day! Username: hihenetu2029
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Application Form
Username: XxDusk_LlamaxX08
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them) She/Her
5 examples of work for Portfolio: (If any less will be accepted as an apprentice): I own a shop, I like to help, I am good at making intros, outros, and banners.
Why should we hire you?: I am good with people and I get things done in less than a day.
How active are you?: from 1 - 10, 7
Scratcher status?: (If New Scratcher, you can still be hired, just as an apprentice) 2 months and 2 weeks I AM NOT NEW
Did you read the Terms and Conditions?: yes
Other: Avengers Assemble!
Username: XxDusk_LlamaxX08
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them) She/Her
5 examples of work for Portfolio: (If any less will be accepted as an apprentice): I own a shop, I like to help, I am good at making intros, outros, and banners.
Why should we hire you?: I am good with people and I get things done in less than a day.
How active are you?: from 1 - 10, 7
Scratcher status?: (If New Scratcher, you can still be hired, just as an apprentice) 2 months and 2 weeks I AM NOT NEW
Did you read the Terms and Conditions?: yes
Other: Avengers Assemble!
Last edited by XxDusk_LlamaxX08 (June 22, 2020 22:40:03)
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
I can do it I can do the old lady voice, normal woman voice, angry woman voice, and a little girl voiceSorry but we are not accepting orders at the moment! You also didn't fill out the form correctly! Thank you and have a nice day! Username: hihenetu2029
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
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Blu3coder
You have until Saturday the 13th June to respond
Also can you promote me to manager of the Apprentice studio as I am on the BoD
- hihenetu2029
- Scratcher
80 posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Oh, thanks. I will get the lines to you.I can do it I can do the old lady voice, normal woman voice, angry woman voice, and a little girl voiceSorry but we are not accepting orders at the moment! You also didn't fill out the form correctly! Thank you and have a nice day! Username: hihenetu2029
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
okai, contact me on my profileOh, thanks. I will get the lines to you.I can do it I can do the old lady voice, normal woman voice, angry woman voice, and a little girl voiceSorry but we are not accepting orders at the moment! You also didn't fill out the form correctly! Thank you and have a nice day! Username: hihenetu2029
What Package?: Voice Acting for the Pilot episode of my show
Preferred Pronouns: he, him
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): I need someone who can do an old man voice, a angry lady voice, a normal lady voice and a little girl voice. I do most of the voices.
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late)
Other: I need some voice actors after the pilot if it goes good for a full season.
- asgasher
- Scratcher
7 posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
My I have some platformer script please
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
You would have to fill an order form out for your order My I have some platformer script please
- Monkeylover200
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
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You have until Saturday the 13th June to respond
Also can you promote me to manager of the Apprentice studio as I am on the BoD
- Flawpaw
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Application FormAccepted
Username: XxDusk_LlamaxX08
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them) She/Her
5 examples of work for Portfolio: (If any less will be accepted as an apprentice): I own a shop, I like to help, I am good at making intros, outros, and banners.
Why should we hire you?: I am good with people and I get things done in less than a day.
How active are you?: from 1 - 10, 7
Scratcher status?: (If New Scratcher, you can still be hired, just as an apprentice) 2 months and 2 weeks I AM NOT NEW
Did you read the Terms and Conditions?: yes
Other: Avengers Assemble!
- XxDusk_LlamaxX08
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
I am now…I just saw the due date to…You haven't been accepted yet so you cannot take ordersActivity CheckActive
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Flawpaw
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Also can you promote me to manager of the Apprentice studio as I am on the BoD
- Monkeylover200
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
There is an other one further up this pageI am now…I just saw the due date to…You haven't been accepted yet so you cannot take ordersActivity CheckActive
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- LesBeProud-
- Scratcher
100+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
The Marvel Shop's Review
First Impression: 9.5/10
I really like your title! It's got a unique font that stands out BUT is still very readable. I also like the pun! Another thing standing out to me is your first post. Everything is really clear and succinct. You've got a nice directory (with links that all work!!!), however, there is no way to go back to that post once you go to another. Still, it's not insanely over the top but looks nice all the same. You also clearly state your specialty areas, which is very helpful.
Original Posts - Content: 7.5/10
I found your order form very confusing. To be more specific, it was the package listing. I was rather confused on what to put if I just wanted something specific like a banner that wasn't listed as a package. However, the rest of the posts were quite helpful!
Bulletin Board Code: 8.5/10
You show a good mastery of BB code! However, I feel like you could jazz up your posts more. Maybe add some decorations like fancy fonts or different colors? It would make them a little more interesting and draw in people's attention.
Product: 7/10
I think it's a good banner, but not exactly what I was envisioning. The background looks very nice. Both the color of that and the text go perfectly with the palette I requested. But the text is a little hard to see. I feel like adding a shadow or other element lighter in color to offset it would increase the readability. I also feel that the elements on the sides don't really fit in. First of all, the colors don't match. Secondly, they just feel out of place. However, you absolutely nailed the font choice. It was exactly what I wanted!
Speed: 6/10
My order was taken within a day, and then completed four days later. I absolutely get having commitments and I life outside of Scratch - I do too! However, the time was a bit long.
Customer Service: 10/10
The employee who took my order was very kind. They were also sorry my order was a bit late. Thank you for mentioning that and apologizing! It's perfectly fine to take your time with an order, however I really appreciate even just briefly mentioning it. And as one of the most important categories, you've done very well!
Staff: Not Scored
I know you asked me not to comment on this, and that's okay. I will respect that! However, I want to respond to something you said in your order form:Some specific things I want excluded are: Number of staff, I know we don't have a lot of staff, I'm trying to fix thatIt is okay not to have a lot of staff. Just because you have only hired four people does not mean that's bad, okay? We all start small. I'm sorry for commenting on this when you asked me not to, but I just wanted to make sure you know that no matter how many staff you have, it's totally okay! :)
Productivity: 9/10
I use two different methods to score this: OPP (Orders Per Page) and SI (Spam Index). With 3 completed orders and 3.75 pages, your OPP score is 0.8. Good work! Measuring the amount of spam in comparison to other posts, your SI score is 0.11, with 75 posts and 8 spam posts. Very impressive!
Partnerships: 7.5/10
I think you've picked some good partners! The Houdini Shoppe offers similar services to you, which is great because you can help work on each other's unfinished orders. Sorry for not taking the time to look at Scratchazon, I just remember because I reviewed them as well! Anyways, it's great to be giving each other exposure. However, I want you to think about some other benefits you might give each other!
Shop Environment: 9/10
The shop environment here is great! All your workers are very friendly and orders are completed on time. It's definitely a place I would consider working at!
Final Impression: 82/100 - A-
I think you have a great shop so far! I also like your theme, though I honestly don't get it as I'm not into it as much. Still, it's unique and that's great! Note that your final score was converted from the original score of 74/90, as one category is unscored by request.
I hope this review helped you - keep Scratching, Flaw, I know you'll go very far one day.Advice:
- Make links to return to your directory (or better yet, add it to all original posts!)
- Be more clear on how to fill out the order form
- Add more color
- Try to complete orders a little quicker
- Try to brainstorm more partner benefits
- Love your shop for what it is! - one with few employees can be as great as one with tons of employees
- Arsxi_
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Order Form
Username: Arsxi_
What Package/Product?: project thumbnail
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them): she/her
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): no
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late): ! week max
Other: Let it say updates
Username: Arsxi_
What Package/Product?: project thumbnail
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them): she/her
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): no
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late): ! week max
Other: Let it say updates
- Flawpaw
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
I can do this! Order Form
Username: Arsxi_
What Package/Product?: project thumbnail
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them): she/her
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): no
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late): ! week max
Other: Let it say updates
- Flawpaw
- Scratcher
500+ posts
TᕼE ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ ᔕᕼOᑭ ᗯE GET YOᑌᖇ OᖇᗪEᖇᔕ ᗪOᑎE Iᑎ ᗰᗩᖇᐯEᒪ-Oᑌᔕ ᖴᗩᔕᕼIOᑎ(Currently Closed to Orders, Accepting Applications?)
Your order is complete! You can find it here Order Formhttp://u.cubeupload.com/Fernpool/Updates.png and here https://www.canva.com/design/DAEARFSPcB0/KUKExPy2UYV5nIKzFauBHQ/view
Username: Arsxi_
What Package/Product?: project thumbnail
Preferred Pronouns: (She/her, he/him, they/them): she/her
Any Particular Avenger? (Look at their profiles to see what they can do): no
Due date: (ASAP doesn't have a due date so it can't be late): ! week max
Other: Let it say updates
Last edited by Flawpaw (June 26, 2020 12:19:46)
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