This is just for people in my show. I'll post scripts, plots, schedules, episode links, etc.

Thanks,

Fortes.

Hi guys. Here's the beginning of the voice acting script! Please get to know your character, and send me any concerns/suggestions/mistakes.

Thanks,

Fortes.

EP. 1.
(Location Description: Large room, they are in the center. Behind them in a window with ei
ther a dark cityscape or just some type of grey landscape. I orginally set it at night time, but day will work just as well. If its day, their should probably be shutters or light curtains. I'd prefer the room to look like a polished office building (i.e. white walls, grey or black shiny floors etc.) The window covering, whatever you chose it to be, should be nice and not oppresive. The room should be bright, though, other than the window, no light fixtures need to be shown. The chairs show be either grey or red and, again, not oppressive. They should be rather small and round with low backs and arms that slope down. Their material should be a bit shiny, but not too much. Same material as hair salon chairs except obviously well keep and rather expensive. Its important for the room to look dignified and expensive but not too much so. The table between then should be wooden on top (the colour of spruce wood in Minecraft) but shiny and, again, well cared for and expensive looking. The table legs should be black. On it their can or can't be cups on the table it isn't crucial. The cups can be any style so long as they fit their surroundings, i.e. Disney Princess mugs won't work, and the same applies to their content.)
:Sitting in an empty room. H is leaning slightly across the table, Dior is relaxed sitting in his chair, sipping coffee.:
Herrin: What if I told you that I could give you everything you wanted?
Dior: I’d call you a fool and a liar.
Herrin: Humor me.
Dior: Why else would I be here? I won’t be patient though, cut to the chase.
:Herrin laughs nervously:
Herrin: Right then. You want to win the election. The best way to do that is to eliminate all the competition.
:slams down mug:
Dior: Why else would I be consulting the “greatest minds?” This inference requires no special intelligence…. Any aide could have told me that. This is a waste of time.
:starts up:
Herrin (hurriedly): But elections don’t work like they used to. Intelligence won’t make your win. (quietly) An army would though.
Dior: :sits back down: All right, I’m listening.
Herrin: What if I could built you a super soldier… someone who could never be killed. Someone who could walk through crossfire and still be strong enough to stab the shooters in the heart?
Dior: Then I’d call you a genius.
ffers hand to shake, they shake and fade out.:
Scene Two.
(2 backdrops for this scene. The first is an alleyway. I imagined it a grey concrete road, worn in appearance, but just dirt or weeds could work just as well. The walls can be worn concrete like the road, steel (so long as it looks tarnished and bent) or wood (again it needs to look worn.) This is an urban setting, however, so please keep that fact in mind. On the wall, there should be some worn looking posters advertising different stuff. They could be for: resturants, menials jobs etc. but they should look old and handmade since this is a VERY poor place. They can be either taped or tacked to the wall, preferably a mixture of the two. The exception to the messiness should be the government aide sign which should look white and neatly typed. It should say “FREE GOVERNMENT AID!! Call 202-555-0173.” The backdrop can be the same stage minus the signs (or at least with different signs or maybe some graffitti? There should be some “home” type supplies in this one like rolled up sleeping bags, some empty cans, and a hot plate maybe? Or a grill. if there's a hot plate there should be a circuit breaker on the wall.)
:Reina is standing staring at a sign advertising FREE GOVERNMENT AID!!, shakes her hair and walks away, through a crowd and into an alleyway. Little sister runs up:
Pearl: Reina! Did you get any food?
Reina: No, sorry. (sounds dejected.)
Pearl: I’m good, I had a slice of chicken earlier. Fried chicken!
Reina: Where did you get that? (sounds worried)
Pearl: The dumpster. I found an apple there too but I gave it to Merci.
Reina: Who’s Merci? Nevermind, just don’t eat out of the dumpster anymore, ok
Pearl: Ok… (sounds sad) I just was hungry.
:Reina nods they fade out. Later, we see Reina writing down the number for “FREE GOVERNMENT AID. She finishes and returns to her alleyway, fades out again. Fades in and Reina is in a white waiting room, THE ASSISTANT looks up: (simillair to the 1st backdrop except this room has a couch (white leather, shiny cherry wood, well kept) And a small chunky cherry wood table thats shiny and has a semi-circle of magazines splayed out on it. The wall behind them is pure white as it the wall perpendicular to it. That holds TA's desk white is also rose wood with grey lettering on it saying “reception.” Behind her on the wall is an piece of abstract modern art. (Hopefully try to make it like the show's logo, but with brighter, but still oppressive, colors.) In the corner formed by the wall with the couch and that with the desk is a pretty minecraft-dark oak with a small logo on it that says doctor. It will never need to open so don't worry about making it a sprite.)
TA: Reina Eve Mirr?
Reina: Yes?
TA: The Doctor will see you now.
(Gets up and follows the assistant to the door. Cuts and now we’re in the room with them.:
(New backdrop, the walls are mint green and we only need to see 1.5 of them (i,e, the back wall and 1/2 of the one to the right of it.) Not bright mint green, but kind of faded. It should still look newish and well-kept. The floor can just be shiny beige or grey. There should also be a table ( square, grey, with drawers replacing the legs, common doctors table. (It'd be good if this was a sprite since TA later has to open the 3rd drawer from the top (there are 4 in all.) Beside the table should be a cushioned stool with wheels on the bottom. Black faux leather and shiny metal. Also, the table should have some medically looking boxes etc, on it. The wall behind the table should also have a heart re-starter box.)
Herrin: Hello.
Reina: Hi?
Herrin: Don’t be shy! Now, if you could open your mouth and say ahhhh. (voice fades out along with characters, we transition to Herrin on the phone.)(Just make a sprite to be a dark wall with a small doorway in it. Leave the doorway open so we can see Reina. )
Herrin: I found the perfect candidate. And its not like she has much to leave behind….
Dior: She?
Herrin: A certain Reina Mirr. I’ve given her the entire exam and she fits my guidelines perfectly.
Dior: Then use her. Why are you bothering me?
Herrin: She has a little sister. I don’t want to be responsible for her death.
Dior: If this works, you’ll be responsible for millions of deaths. But, as you say. The little girl will be provided for.
(Herrin Nods and presses a few buttons on the phone returning it to his ear.)
TA: Yes?
Herrin: You’ll find a syringe in my desk, third drawer from the top. Its green, do you see it?
TA: (we hear her rummaging around for a moment.) Yes.
Herrin: Good, tell her its an extra vitamin and give it to her before she goes. :chuckles: Have her wait for a few minutes afterwards. Its been known to cause memory loss and unconsciousness. Don’t tell her that of course.
(Fades out.)

EP. 2
(Reina is suspended in a cylinder, hair floating out around her. Herrin stands nearby, shuffling through some papers. Dior enters.)
(Another grey room. Only the backwall this time. Shouldn't be quite as well kept as the rest (i.e. something dark spilled on the floor, papers on the floor.) There should be a desk with some papers, a mug, and a small gun on it.(The gun needs to be a sprite.) Some test tubes and syringes wouldn't be bad either. ) The cylinder should have a dull grey top and bottom and have cloudy grey liquid inside. (I suggest that this be a sprite so Herrin can open it.) No wires in it or anything, and it doesn't need to be plugged in. (Realistically it would need to be, but hey!))
Dior: Is she ready?
Herrin: I think so. (walks over and flips the door of the cylinder open. Reina staggers out.) If I am demonstrate… (Herrin pulls out a gun and points it at Reina.)
Dior: (nods) Go on. I’m not funding another replacement though. There's been enough mistakes.
Herrin: (nods) Creating someone who cannot die isn’t easy. I believe she’s ready, though.
(Pulls trigger, Reina falls face down)
Dior: (sighs, starts stopwatch) Ten minutes you said. (watches the clock tapping his foot. After a while, Reina starts to move, eventually standing up.)
Herrin: How long was it?
Dior: Eight minutes, thirty five seconds. She’s perfect. (Offers hand. Herrin makes to shake it, but at the last minute points the gun at him.)
Herrin: I must thank you for your funding and protection. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. But you know I can’t let you have her.
Dior: Isighs) And you know I can’t someone who knows my secrets leave. Luckily, I have a solution. (Two men appear and hit Herrin in the back of the head. He falls out, and the scene fades away.)
(Darkness)
(In a dark room, it has an open door. We need to see the wall with the door and half the wall to the left of it so Reina can be leaning against it. Dull light should be streaming through the door, but the outside should look pretty dismal.)
Dior: Ms. Mirr?
:eyes blink open, we see Dior:
Dior: Good, Good. Herrin made you perfectly didn’t he? :pauses: But surely you can do more than be our test subject?
:Gives her a piece of paper:
Dior: This man is the enemy, I need you to find him for me.
EP. 3
(Darkness)
(Just darkness, hands typing on a laptop keyboard.)
Herrin: On the 10th anniversary Dior’s success, even gaudy decorations and paid celebrators cannot mask the civilian unrest.
(They fade in) (Standing in a pretty dirty apartment, with off-white wallpaper and a kitchen counter piled with cardboard boxes against one wall. We'll need a kitchen table sprite (mine-craft oak.) and a chair sprite for Herrin. Otherwise, this should be pretty simple.)
Pearl: It’s too dramatic.
Herrin: I can’t believe I helped that man… I should have known better! I knew better!
Pearl: Don’t do this right now, we’re so close to getting her back.
Herrin: You’re right. How long do we have?
Pearl: Not long, we should go.
:Starts walking towards the door, Herrin follows, they fade out.:
(Reina is sitting hunched against a grey wall) (Just 1/2 of one grey wall and 1/2 of another. Completely plain.)
:footsteps:
Reina: No.
Dior: That’s the one flaw in Herrin’s work. He left you with a conscience. :pauses: To make you human no doubt. I didn’t pay $1 million for a human! Certainly not for a sniveling little girl.
Reina: Please…
Dior: Don’t be ridiculous. I have a new mission for you.
Reina: No.
Dior: Yes. There’s been some riots today. My company can’t afford unrest. :scoffs: You don’t even know what I mean do you? Riot equals bad. Bad equals needs to go. Riot equals too big to go. Riot leader needs to go. You make the riot leader go.
Reina: I understood you the first time.
Dior: Go then.
Ep. 4.
(Pearl and Herrin waiting by a road.)(Dark trees, medium height, no leaves on them but there are enough trees that it looks dense. We should see the edge of the road (grey with a dull yellow stripe along the edge.) and some dark bushes or weeds holding only a few leaves.)
Pearl: Herrin… are you sure this is the right place?
Herrin: No. But who else would Dior send her after?
Pearl: Don’t say “her” like that, she’s still human!
Herrin: She was when you last saw her.
Pearl: What do you mean?
Herrin: Well… it’s been almost a decade. That’s a long time for her to change. And think of all the crimes she’s committed during it. Also-
Pearl: Stop it!
Herrin: No. Just because you can’t handle the idea that the sweet big sister you knew when you were four isn’t the paragon you remember doesn’t mean that you can ignore the consequences of what we’re doing. I doubt that the moment she sees your darling face she’ll burst into tears and-
Pearl: Since when do you know everything about my sister? You didn’t even know her backstory until you met me!
Herrin: I…….
Pearl: What?
Herrin: What’s that?
:soft whirring, grows:
Pearl: It’s her?
Herrin: Exactly on schedule. :pauses to listen: Is it all ready?
(Darkness, Flashlight blinks on, showing tripwire, darkness again.)
Pearl: I think so.
Herrin: Shhh.
(we see the thing driving down the road, with someone on it. It touches the tripwire, flips, and falls crookedly.) (This will require a different perspective of the road, as we're standing in the middle of it rather than beside it. Same description as the other backdrop, just a different POV. Also, we'll need a pretty beat up looking grey motorcycle for this.)
Pearl: Reina?
(darkness, eyes blink open. Pearl and Herrin are standing over her. Metallic typing sound.)
Dior narrating, typing: The people you see are now the enemy. Go with them, find a weak spot. For the Regulation!

VOICE ACTORS-
Reina – Lynx.
Herrin-@THEFORTHRAY
Dr. Dior- Stormechos
Pearl- Dragonforli
Assitant- Voiceactingpro
ANIMATORS-
@huntedskelly
@FORTESFORTUNAJUVAT
xXPubg_masterXx
Artists -
@beguiled.
@SCerulean
@Circolair
@Vrea100

This looks great! I'm glad to have the role of Dior! I'll get to recording as soon as I'm available.
But do you want me to do them all now, or one episode at a time? I'm fine with either way. Also, is it fine if I add on a word or sound here and there for effect?

Thank you for the role of Reina! I'll get these recorded as soon as I can. Do you want me to do a sigh/umph noise as she falls out of the cylinder? Also, I deleted the link to this on my profile, and have now followed this thread. And I have the same all now, episode at a time question as @StormEchoes. Thank you!

Thanks for the prompt response! I'll finish the script soon - but once its finished please record it all @ once. A few words for effect, but please check any drastic changes with me first, and make sure your additions fit with the character. If you could RECORD this WEEK IT WOULD BE GREAT. Please do a separate recording for each sentence, as you'll all be have conversations. Please label them clearly as well. If you have any questions/concerns feel free to ask!

Ty.

Fortes

YES sound effect are welcome!

Ep. 5
(Dior narrating.)
(Standing on a platform. Behind him should be electric red walls built with many layers of overlapping metal rectangles. I imagined them Red, put if that doesn't work, deep blue or dark grey might work just as well. Dior should be standing by or beside the lecturn.The lecturn should be grey or brown, and would to well to have some random companies logo on it. This all should look very trimmed. You might add a row of people watching him (just the backs of their heads.) But thats not necessary.)
Dior: What is the regulation? It’s a simple concept. The world is… flawed… because of freedom. I’m not a dictator, humans should be able to go about the world freely – Physical freedom is necessary for human progression – and must be carefully maintained. Like Knowledge. But think back – you historians, philosophers, logicians. What is the root of every problem? Someone is given a little knowledge, a little experience, and they draw a moral from it. That moral is based off of nothing real – one death they saw, one crime left unpunished, but it expands into The Meaning of Life. That one event. Once again, I’m not a dictator. But I turn to you, scholars. How much closer to world peace would we be if knowledge were protected, and distributed with care? If everyone knew every side of every argument, if everyone was shown and realized the projected effects of their ideas? But (chuckles) we’re educated people. We know that’s impossible. That type of information can only be appreciated by the upper class. The scholars. The rest of the world wouldn’t know what to do with it – except destroy its beauty. What I propose is … (Fades out.) (YES HE"S A VILLAIN IF NO ONE NOTICED.)
(Herrin is sitting in a car, driving.)(This back drop is simple, but the upper two layers need to be sprites. The back sheild can be a backdrop (though if you want to animate landscape behind them, feel free. The middle has to be a layer so we can see Reina in in. The front should be just two seats and a steering wheel for Herrin to use to drive. The seats should be grey fake leather, and outside the car it should be pretty dark.)
Herrin: Is she awake yet?
Pearl: No. The fall wasn’t hard enough to……?
Herrin: No.
Reina: No! No! I can’t.
Pearl: Reina!
Reina: Please no. Its too much. (voice breaks.) I can’t. :Gasps: Pearl?
Pearl: Yes! Its me, your sister?
Reina: You look so old. . .
Pearl: Nevermind that now, how do you feel?
Reina: I-I can’t believe I found you…
(Switches to Dior.) (Standing over a desk with TA. Their should be a desk chair pulled out of the way, and some wires and a keyboard and mouse on the desk. The walls around them can be pure grey, preferably with some slight cracks in them. The computer screen should have some type of blurry footage, hopefully of Pearl, on it.)
Dior: Something’s changing… The program is working to well. It is only supposed to give her memories that help her with her task… not memories of emotion or feeling.
TA: Perhaps its priming her. Fill her with loving memories then some fake image that’ll cause her to anger and preform her task all the better.
Dior: Wishful thinking won’t give back the years of progress we just lost. Can we get the shell back at least?
TA: (stutters.) I don’t know.
Dior: Worry not, all will be well by this time tomorrow.
TA: How?
Dior: Only you know……
TA: (Gasps.) No please no, I can’t I don’t know how to! Please!
Dior: Two turns of the clock. Burning away… Tick…… Tick……. Tick…….
EP. 6
(Car backdrop again)
Pearl: I don’t remember the drive taking so long…
Herrin: I had to go a back way.
Pearl: Ahh….
:Awkward silence.:
Herrin: Doesn’t it seem strange to you how easy that was?
Pearl: No. There’s no reason that she wouldn’t remember her sister over a decade.
Herrin: A decade of who-knows-what. Don’t let happiness cloud your mind.
Pearl: Is there any reason to be suspicious. (sounds bitter.) Other than your mindset.
Herrin: No. But be careful……
(Fades to TA.) (Snowy landscape at night.There should be some footprints trailing off behind her, but otherwise the snow should be pretty smooth She will be walking across the middle of it. There should be no signs of life.)
TA: Three more miles. No? Three meters? Three minutes? :sighs: Oh! I’m here. (trudging noise in the background comes to a stop.) Any minute now…

(She comes out of the bushes and start walking across the road as the car comes. Falls down just before they touch her.)(New backdrop, of a snowy highway, Their should be some tire tracks and dirty snow, trees on one side.)
Herrin: No. Stay in the car. I’ll just move her out of the way…. I’d help more but we can’t afford to be found.
TA: Ahh.
Herrin: Ssh. You’ll be all right.
TA grabs his wrist.
TA: Don’t worry. I’m can stand without assistance. And so can you if you give me the car keys like a nice boy.
Herrin: No. (kicks her leg.)
TA: Yes. (Tries to push him over, Herrin slips and falls. Transitions to Pearl and Reina in the car.)
Pearl: I’m so sorry…. I’ll stay by you forever after this. I promise. (Car backdrop now.)
(leaves the car. Is tackled and pushed over by TA.)
Reina: Get away. (holding weapon.) (road backdrop)

You guys are all doing amazing! Thanks to those who've sent in their lines so far. For all of you- I'll finish the script by early this week. Once I finish, I'll need the lines within a week or will have to find new actors. Also - we still don't have a VA for Herrin. If anyone has any suggestions….

Thanks!

Fortes

I'm afraid I don't know many male voice actors, but some I do know besides @StormEchoes are @lightningstrike2001, @mintfig, @Urazgildiiev, and @jason_test. Sorry, I hope you can find someone.

Thanks for the suggestion and recordings! I have to stay up late tonight, so hopefully the script will be done by tomorrow
-I still need @dragonforli's recordings. ASAP.

Thanks,

Fortes.

Note: Herrin's role has been given to @lightningstrike2001. Sorry to everyone else who was interested in it, but his recordings were the best,
I'll finish the script ASAP.
Thanks,
Fortes!

Ok, here is the final chunk of script for the Season. Would y'all be good for another one in the future?

Thanks,

Fortes

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EP. 7.
(Last episode's snowy road backdrop)
Pearl: Reina? Reina! What… whats happening?
:eyes open, Ta is lying on the road Reina is standing by her and Pearl is staring:
Pearl: I thought you remember me, I thought you were cured!
:Reina turns toward her then runs away.:
:switches to Dior, watching the scene through Reina’s eyes.:
(Basically the same scene except from above and to the write.)
Dior: That only happens in storybooks. Fantasies with over-the-top destruction and cackling villains. Stories where the disaster is evident and where there is ALWAYS (don’t shout, just special emphasis.) a miraculous cure. In those stories the villain is always a bumbling idiot. In those stories the villain always loses…. And that is why they are called fantasies. (I cant describe all the voice inflections you need to do, but this is an important line.) FORESHADOWING GUYS. FORESHADOWING.
:Switches to Herrin and Pearl: (car backdrop)
Pearl: (sounds sick) They’re both gone?
Herrin: In different senses of the term but…. Yes.
Pearl: It makes no sense! I know Reina remembered me.
Herrin(quietly): Maybe she was bloodthirsty all along or maybe…..
Pearl: Maybe?
Herrin: Maybe my plan actually worked.
Pearl(sharply.): What plan?
Herrin: To create the perfect soldier….. incapable of emotion…… incapable of death.
Pearl: You’re-
Herrin: The only reason I was living like I was when we met is that I was hiding from Dior. I tried to save you sister…. I really did. Not at the beginning, but once she got worse… (trails off. Take a deep, shuddering breath here like you’re trying not to cry.) There was no use in reasoning with Dior. Any good businessman knows that a valuable asset can’t be lost just because of moral qualms. I stopped perfecting her design… I even tried to undo some of my work. But by then she’d returned so many times… each time losing more and more of herself. Amnesia? It can’t be undone. I had hoped to weaken the program – so in hopes that any memories – no matter how faint – could be preserved. (voice breaks.) But…
Pearl (sounds angry and tearfull.): Stop. Why didn’t you tell me this? (softly) You told me to remember who the enemy was when we met him. That he’d be full of tricks and lies… But Dior? He’s not the enemy. You are.
pens the car door:
Herrin: You don’t understand!
Pearl: No. No I don’t. But I do understand that my sister is in danger… and, because of you, is dangerous. I need to get her back.
:jumps out:
Herrin: Wai-
:car smashes into them:
:switches to Dior, standing over Herrin:
Dior: Welcome back, old friend.
(We can reuse the Reina prison backdrop.)

END SEASON ONE – THIS CLIMAX WAS HARD TO WRITE SORRY FOR THE DELAY.

FORTESFORTUNAJUVAT wrote:

Dior: That only happens in storybooks. Fantasies with over-the-top destruction and cackling villains. Stories where the disaster is evident and where there is ALWAYS (don’t shout, just special emphasis.) a miraculous cure. In those stories, the villain is always a bumbling idiot. In those stories, the villain always loses… And that is why they are called fantasies. (I can't describe all the voice inflections you need to do, but this is an important line.) FORESHADOWING GUYS. FORESHADOWING.

Oh, I kinda need to know what exactly is going on here.
Is “FORESHADOWING GUYS. FORESHADOWING.” a line that Dior actually says? And if it is, I'm trying to understand what it means and why it's all caps so that I have an idea of what it should sound like.

Nope, just a note I wrote on the script so you know its important. Sorry for the confusion!

ty.

Fortes

uhm, I might do it? idk

who will i be

This is great! I would really love to join!

have you come up with a name for the show?

Guys!! I forgot to tell everyone. THE NAME OF OUR SHOW IS…. EVENING STAR.