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SkyClan480

Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Username: Volix-
Link to Project or Shop: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/130026330/
Anything to focus on?: Basically everything… I'm not sure so just review how you would like!
5 or 10 stars?: 5 stars is good
How strict?: Um… please don't act like IGN lol – Anyway, I think just in the middle. Example: Graphics are not bad, but not like HD, 3/5.
Anything else?: That's it!

I'm not sure if this is supposed to happen, but I waited about 10 minutes and nothing happened after I clicked the green flag. Please tell me what I'm supposed to do.

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SkyClan480

Job Form:
Username: SkyClan480
How active: kinda
What Job: assistant manager
Why do you want it: I saw it was blank, and thought I might like to have it
Anything else?: I would like to quit both my current jobs
Are you following this thread?: yes
Do you have cubeupload?: I'll still have to see about it

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SkyClan480

I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests

Last edited by SkyClan480 (April 19, 2018 22:54:57)

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doodthedoodthedood

SkyClan480 wrote:
Job Form:
Username: SkyClan480
How active: kinda
What Job: assistant manager
Why do you want it: I saw it was blank, and thought I might like to have it
Anything else?: I would like to quit both my current jobs
Are you following this thread?: yes
Do you have cubeupload?: I'll still have to see about it

I can not give you assistant manager, but I can give you head of heads with follow cherry blossom.

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
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Botcho_Otkho

Order for @SkyClan480's shop
Score: 5.8/10
Pros

I got my order fastly (about 1 day)
The script partially worked.

Cons

The script was partially incomplete.
No explanation.
I would like to see a project, so that I can backpack my script.
No notification received after my order.

Suggestions
I like this shop, it is useful. I think you should write how to use it, or use more gaps
(a gap is this block:

. . .

that can be used when a value needs to be changed by the user)
You should also notify the user when their order is complete, or at least when it's taken.
I think you can do really better if you just try it! Scratch on!

I see now that the circumstances of one's birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are. - Mewtwo

Volix-

SkyClan480 wrote:
Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Username: Volix-
Link to Project or Shop: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/130026330/
Anything to focus on?: Basically everything… I'm not sure so just review how you would like!
5 or 10 stars?: 5 stars is good
How strict?: Um… please don't act like IGN lol – Anyway, I think just in the middle. Example: Graphics are not bad, but not like HD, 3/5.
Anything else?: That's it!
I'm not sure if this is supposed to happen, but I waited about 10 minutes and nothing happened after I clicked the green flag. Please tell me what I'm supposed to do.

SkyClan480 wrote:
Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Oooooooooops….
I was editing the project once to remove my old intro (I'm gonna get a new one soon) but I forgot to turn on the broadcast that starts the project.
Sorry!!
I think it works now.

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doodthedoodthedood

Volix- wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Username: Volix-
Link to Project or Shop: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/130026330/
Anything to focus on?: Basically everything… I'm not sure so just review how you would like!
5 or 10 stars?: 5 stars is good
How strict?: Um… please don't act like IGN lol – Anyway, I think just in the middle. Example: Graphics are not bad, but not like HD, 3/5.
Anything else?: That's it!
I'm not sure if this is supposed to happen, but I waited about 10 minutes and nothing happened after I clicked the green flag. Please tell me what I'm supposed to do.
SkyClan480 wrote:
Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Oooooooooops….
I was editing the project once to remove my old intro (I'm gonna get a new one soon) but I forgot to turn on the broadcast that starts the project.
Sorry!!
I think it works now.
I will let SkyClan do this for you

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
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SkyClan480

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
Job Form:
Username: SkyClan480
How active: kinda
What Job: assistant manager
Why do you want it: I saw it was blank, and thought I might like to have it
Anything else?: I would like to quit both my current jobs
Are you following this thread?: yes
Do you have cubeupload?: I'll still have to see about it
I can not give you assistant manager, but I can give you head of heads with follow cherry blossom.

Ok, I'll take it. I would still like to quit both my current jobs.

GENERATION 368: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. I did not start this.

doodthedoodthedood

SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
Job Form:
Username: SkyClan480
How active: kinda
What Job: assistant manager
Why do you want it: I saw it was blank, and thought I might like to have it
Anything else?: I would like to quit both my current jobs
Are you following this thread?: yes
Do you have cubeupload?: I'll still have to see about it
I can not give you assistant manager, but I can give you head of heads with follow cherry blossom.
Ok, I'll take it. I would still like to quit both my current jobs.

okay. Ps can you still do the review order?

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
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SkyClan480

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
Job Form:
Username: SkyClan480
How active: kinda
What Job: assistant manager
Why do you want it: I saw it was blank, and thought I might like to have it
Anything else?: I would like to quit both my current jobs
Are you following this thread?: yes
Do you have cubeupload?: I'll still have to see about it
I can not give you assistant manager, but I can give you head of heads with follow cherry blossom.
Ok, I'll take it. I would still like to quit both my current jobs.
okay. Ps can you still do the review order?

Yes, I will do it now.
Dang 60 sec rule :mad:

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doodthedoodthedood

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
Shadow_Okami wrote:
Review
Username: Shadow_Okami
Link to Project or Shop: The Animal Kingdom Art Shop
Anything to focus on?: Everything
5 or 10 stars?: 10
How strict?: Very. Tell me exactly what you think.
Anything else?: Any advice?
Taken

So sorry for the delay

Score: 10/10

Explanation: The Art was amazing! I could not believe how realistic it looked! I love the picture! Was also very fast service

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
Visit The Everthing Shop for all your scratch needs Also visit my programming class to learn to program in scratch or JavaScript or HTML or CSS!By @chaseman3245

doodthedoodthedood

SkyClan480 wrote:
I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests

Link is here:

http://u.cubeupload.com/doodthedoodthedood/z9GiE4.png

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
Visit The Everthing Shop for all your scratch needs Also visit my programming class to learn to program in scratch or JavaScript or HTML or CSS!By @chaseman3245

SkyClan480

Volix- wrote:
Hi, could you review my project? Thanks!

Username: Volix-
Link to Project or Shop: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/130026330/
Anything to focus on?: Basically everything… I'm not sure so just review how you would like!
5 or 10 stars?: 5 stars is good
How strict?: Um… please don't act like IGN lol – Anyway, I think just in the middle. Example: Graphics are not bad, but not like HD, 3/5.
Anything else?: That's it!
Your review is ready.

Pros:
The game seemed very fun and engaging
The graphics and animations were very good
The variety of gamemodes is good

Cons:
Even on easy mode, I couldn't seem to get the shapes to respond. I swear I clicked right on them.
The change of correct shape in the corner was a little fast.
The play button from the difficulty screen lingered long into the game

Seggestions:
Try making the play button's fade out a little shorter
Maybe change the game so there is only one correct shape

Overall Rating: 3/5

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SkyClan480

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests
Link is here:
http://u.cubeupload.com/doodthedoodthedood/z9GiE4.png

Hey, that looks great, thanks! It's better than I expected!

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SkyClan480

I want another shop review. Same as always. I'm trying to improve.

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doodthedoodthedood

SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests
Link is here:
http://u.cubeupload.com/doodthedoodthedood/z9GiE4.png
Hey, that looks great, thanks! It's better than I expected!

Thx Btw I will do your review tomorrow morning I have some stuff I need to do tonight. Also, do you want to join my Development Group?

Last edited by doodthedoodthedood (April 20, 2018 22:25:52)

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
Visit The Everthing Shop for all your scratch needs Also visit my programming class to learn to program in scratch or JavaScript or HTML or CSS!By @chaseman3245

Shadow_Okami

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
Shadow_Okami wrote:
Review
Username: Shadow_Okami
Link to Project or Shop: The Animal Kingdom Art Shop
Anything to focus on?: Everything
5 or 10 stars?: 10
How strict?: Very. Tell me exactly what you think.
Anything else?: Any advice?
Taken
So sorry for the delay

Score: 10/10

Explanation: The Art was amazing! I could not believe how realistic it looked! I love the picture! Was also very fast service

Thanks! If it's ok, can I quote you in my shop?

Visit my shop, (The Animal Kingdom Art Shop) here.

doodthedoodthedood

Shadow_Okami wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
Shadow_Okami wrote:
Review
Username: Shadow_Okami
Link to Project or Shop: The Animal Kingdom Art Shop
Anything to focus on?: Everything
5 or 10 stars?: 10
How strict?: Very. Tell me exactly what you think.
Anything else?: Any advice?
Taken
So sorry for the delay

Score: 10/10

Explanation: The Art was amazing! I could not believe how realistic it looked! I love the picture! Was also very fast service
Thanks! If it's ok, can I quote you in my shop?

Of course!

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
Visit The Everthing Shop for all your scratch needs Also visit my programming class to learn to program in scratch or JavaScript or HTML or CSS!By @chaseman3245

SkyClan480

doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests
Link is here:
http://u.cubeupload.com/doodthedoodthedood/z9GiE4.png
Hey, that looks great, thanks! It's better than I expected!
Thx Btw I will do your review tomorrow morning I have some stuff I need to do tonight. Also, do you want to join my Development Group?

Ok what is that?

GENERATION 368: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment. I did not start this.

doodthedoodthedood

SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
doodthedoodthedood wrote:
SkyClan480 wrote:
I am making a brand new shop, and for that I need a brand new banner!
Art
Banner, Logo, or Sprite: banner
Should it say anything?If so, put it here: The Shops of SkyClan480
Details? (pictures, colors, ect.): Make the writing semi-fancy, but still legible
Make the background a sky with a very large airplane flying by
Due Date: I would like it by Saturday
Anything Else?: Make sure you visit my new shop!
I apologise for my repeated banner requests
Link is here:
http://u.cubeupload.com/doodthedoodthedood/z9GiE4.png
Hey, that looks great, thanks! It's better than I expected!
Thx Btw I will do your review tomorrow morning I have some stuff I need to do tonight. Also, do you want to join my Development Group?
Ok what is that?

It is a group where some scratchers get together and make projects. The link is in my sig

Go and join my development group Here. Check out my github here. If you want to help with anything just let me know.
Visit The Everthing Shop for all your scratch needs Also visit my programming class to learn to program in scratch or JavaScript or HTML or CSS!By @chaseman3245

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