Drunken_Sailor wrote:

Character Review of Olivia:

Name(How unique is this name? Does it fit with the time period and the personality of the character?): It's a modern name, fits with her personality.

Personality(Is this character a Mary/Gary Sue? Do they have a good balance of both strengths and flaws? Is the character too bland? Is it too cliché?): A well-woven personality, especially with the link to Fredilina with the circus. I also like the fact that their weaknesses are much more prominent and important than before.

Looks(Is the character too flawless? Do they look realistic? Do they look recognizable as this character?): The looks are still not very original, as Olivia looks very much like Imogen.

Powers(if any)(Do they have some downside to their powers? Are the powers too powerful? Do they make the character's life too easy?): N/A

Other Comments(Tell them anything else you want to tell them. Don't forget to have both positive and negative comments. Don't be too hard, but don't be too nice. They are asking for criticism.): You're doing really well, weaving all these characters together, bringing relationships in, and much more just with character descriptions. Well done!

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:

Drunken_Sailor wrote:

Character Review of Olivia:

Name(How unique is this name? Does it fit with the time period and the personality of the character?): It's a modern name, fits with her personality.

Personality(Is this character a Mary/Gary Sue? Do they have a good balance of both strengths and flaws? Is the character too bland? Is it too cliché?): A well-woven personality, especially with the link to Fredilina with the circus. I also like the fact that their weaknesses are much more prominent and important than before.

Looks(Is the character too flawless? Do they look realistic? Do they look recognizable as this character?): The looks are still not very original, as Olivia looks very much like Imogen.

Powers(if any)(Do they have some downside to their powers? Are the powers too powerful? Do they make the character's life too easy?): N/A

Other Comments(Tell them anything else you want to tell them. Don't forget to have both positive and negative comments. Don't be too hard, but don't be too nice. They are asking for criticism.): You're doing really well, weaving all these characters together, bringing relationships in, and much more just with character descriptions. Well done!

Thanks I will post another later

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:

Character Review(for us to review your character):
NOTE: If you are still working on your character, then it is fine to leave some of the fields blank. However, the more information we have about your character, the better quality review we can give.
Username: FollowCherryBlossom
Character name: Chloe
Looks: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Powers: none
Talents: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Words to describe your character: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Flaws they have: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
When you want it done by: asap
Any specific staff member: @Drunken_sailor
Anything else you want to tell us: It is Chloe in the project

Drunken_Sailor wrote:

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:

Character Review(for us to review your character):
NOTE: If you are still working on your character, then it is fine to leave some of the fields blank. However, the more information we have about your character, the better quality review we can give.
Username: FollowCherryBlossom
Character name: Chloe
Looks: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Powers: none
Talents: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Words to describe your character: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
Flaws they have: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/166456091/
When you want it done by: asap
Any specific staff member: @Drunken_sailor
Anything else you want to tell us: It is Chloe in the project

Taken

pianorecorder wrote:

MagicPigPerson wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

Username: @pianorecorder
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/129328926/ and the sequel: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/170443162/
How active will you be(1-10): 6 to 8
Following the thread: Yes, I just did
Anything else you want to tell us: Not very good at art

Please make sure the links lead to the actual projects and not random pages, thanks!

Sorry! I got the url and the name wrong.
Username: @pianorecorder
Link to previous work(a short story or some art):I'll Stand By You and the sequel: Fight/
How active will you be(1-10): 6 to 8
Following the thread: Yes, I just did
Anything else you want to tell us: Not very good at art

Here you go!

pianorecorder wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

MagicPigPerson wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

Username: @pianorecorder
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/129328926/ and the sequel: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/170443162/
How active will you be(1-10): 6 to 8
Following the thread: Yes, I just did
Anything else you want to tell us: Not very good at art

Please make sure the links lead to the actual projects and not random pages, thanks!

Sorry! I got the url and the name wrong.
Username: @pianorecorder
Link to previous work(a short story or some art):I'll Stand By You and the sequel: Fight/
How active will you be(1-10): 6 to 8
Following the thread: Yes, I just did
Anything else you want to tell us: Not very good at art

Here you go!

I believe I had given this a while ago. I'm unsure whether you guys are not accepting people, you forgot, or you don't want me. If you don't want me, I completely understand.

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Username: frostcheetah24
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: A drawing please
Looks: Dark blue eyes, dark brown hair, pale skin, druid (pointy elfish ears), usually wears a green and gold outfit (tell me if you need more detail)
Name(only if you want art): Drean Fierian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Plot of Story(for name only):
Powers(if any): Can understand animals (but isn't fluent in their language, although he doesn't really care much about them) heals somewhat faster than normal (like I said, he's a druid, it's not that abnormal in their world)
Pros(for name only):
Cons(for name only):
Time period they live in(for name only):
When you want it done: September 14 (I can extend it if you want)
Anything else you want to tell us: please notify me on my profile when you finish my order or if you have any questions.

Alida7232 wrote:

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Username: frostcheetah24
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: A drawing please
Looks: Dark blue eyes, dark brown hair, pale skin, druid (pointy elfish ears), usually wears a green and gold outfit (tell me if you need more detail)
Name(only if you want art): Drean Fierian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Plot of Story(for name only):
Powers(if any): Can understand animals (but isn't fluent in their language, although he doesn't really care much about them) heals somewhat faster than normal (like I said, he's a druid, it's not that abnormal in their world)
Pros(for name only):
Cons(for name only):
Time period they live in(for name only):
When you want it done: September 14 (I can extend it if you want)
Anything else you want to tell us: please notify me on my profile when you finish my order or if you have any questions.

I'll take this! What style of drawing do you want? I can do semi-realistic, pixel, or chibi.

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Username: frostcheetah24
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: A drawing please
Looks: Dark blue eyes, dark brown hair, pale skin, druid (pointy elfish ears), usually wears a green and gold outfit (tell me if you need more detail)
Name(only if you want art): Drean Fierian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Plot of Story(for name only):
Powers(if any): Can understand animals (but isn't fluent in their language, although he doesn't really care much about them) heals somewhat faster than normal (like I said, he's a druid, it's not that abnormal in their world)
Pros(for name only):
Cons(for name only):
Time period they live in(for name only):
When you want it done: September 14 (I can extend it if you want)
Anything else you want to tell us: please notify me on my profile when you finish my order or if you have any questions.

I'll take this! What style of drawing do you want? I can do semi-realistic, pixel, or chibi.

Thanks! Semi-realistic please

Alida7232 wrote:

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

frostcheetah24 wrote:

Username: frostcheetah24
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: A drawing please
Looks: Dark blue eyes, dark brown hair, pale skin, druid (pointy elfish ears), usually wears a green and gold outfit (tell me if you need more detail)
Name(only if you want art): Drean Fierian
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Plot of Story(for name only):
Powers(if any): Can understand animals (but isn't fluent in their language, although he doesn't really care much about them) heals somewhat faster than normal (like I said, he's a druid, it's not that abnormal in their world)
Pros(for name only):
Cons(for name only):
Time period they live in(for name only):
When you want it done: September 14 (I can extend it if you want)
Anything else you want to tell us: please notify me on my profile when you finish my order or if you have any questions.

I'll take this! What style of drawing do you want? I can do semi-realistic, pixel, or chibi.

Thanks! Semi-realistic please

Of course! I'll do my best to get it to you by the fourteenth!

jromagnoli wrote:

I'm going to quit this shop. It was nice!

jromagnoli wrote:

I'm going to quit this shop. It was nice!

• No more employee applications will be taken!
  
• Over the next few days I will continue to update the FP with the new orders from the last few days. Any orders from before June that were not completed will be discarded, but you may request them again. Sorry for the inconvenience.
  
• I will not be doing much character art anymore, I'm trying to transition from SVE to FireAlpaca. Once I get better at FireAlpaca I will continue to do art requests.
  

-CloudDream- wrote:

Username: -CloudDream-
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): My projects
How active will you be(1-10): 10
Following the thread: yes
Anything else you want to tell us: I have had an account for 2 months before, not really active though on it.
NOTE: Please don't be upset if I do not hire you. Try again soon, and we might re-consider you. Also, for reviewers, please remember to use the templates for reviewing I have provided when reviewing a story or character. Thank you!

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:

-CloudDream- wrote:

Username: -CloudDream-
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): My projects
How active will you be(1-10): 10
Following the thread: yes
Anything else you want to tell us: I have had an account for 2 months before, not really active though on it.
NOTE: Please don't be upset if I do not hire you. Try again soon, and we might re-consider you. Also, for reviewers, please remember to use the templates for reviewing I have provided when reviewing a story or character. Thank you!

She just said that she is not taking any more employees