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- PrincessTS
- Scratcher
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~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Taken! Reviews
Link to project or whatever you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/164515504/
Harshness out of ten: 0-1
Deadline: today
Misc: please review it on how fun it is. You should also tell me what to improve (for version 1.30), what was fun and your comments on it. Please give it a love and fave!
Instructions Quality 9/10
Art Quality 8 /10
Coding Quality 8/10
Credits Quality 9/10
Overall Quality 9/10
Comments: It's an interesting game. It's fun, but I felt though that you had to play for too long. I enjoyed how you put the sensation of the cars going back and forth. Changes to the game I think that changes could be made are:
1. Having a car not go on top of another car
2. Maybe keeping the cars on the road.
3. Making “click to start” to “click the black button to start”. I found it confusing when I was clicking everywhere.
4. I'm pretty sure the paddles got in the way of the comment illustration at the end. The end artwork was a little off.
- FollowCherryBlossom
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
The Owner is back now People who did not respond to the activity check: (I'm really bored right now)
Lotosprincess
Drunken_Sailor
rainbow123
VideoGamerCanInvent (I believe they're away…somewhere…)
RaytaygirlGaming
EJKim27
besbert
SwoopyDoopy1
Last edited by FollowCherryBlossom (Aug. 20, 2017 07:12:40)
- GamerGaveMe5Points
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
i might take a break from the shop for a bit as i have to juggle a lot of things as i have to practise things and i just might take a little break from scratch and i'm really busy sorry, btw i am not quitting just taking a break i will do quite a lot of things after that so do not worry thank you for understanding
@LauraDraws
- KMWM
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
I don't think you are staff here i might take a break from the shop for a bit as i have to juggle a lot of things as i have to practise things and i just might take a little break from scratch and i'm really busy sorry, btw i am not quitting just taking a break i will do quite a lot of things after that so do not worry thank you for understanding
The Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
Come visit the Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
We Complete Coding, Art, and Reviewing Orders!!
Now Hiring and Taking Orders!
- KMWM
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Don't worry, I totally understand. I'm a little less active too now (I saw the above post and decided to say something too)
Anyways, I might be less active than usual because I'm starting high school this year(whywhwyhwywhwyhwywhywhy do I have to take precalc????) and my schedule is packed (school…swimming…homework). Bleh. I'm not going to quit though
The Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
Come visit the Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
We Complete Coding, Art, and Reviewing Orders!!
Now Hiring and Taking Orders!
- KMWM
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
No, it's fine Was there a rolecall? I'm sorry! I was away for a week with no internet access. I'm so sorry; I should have told you first.
The Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
Come visit the Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
We Complete Coding, Art, and Reviewing Orders!!
Now Hiring and Taking Orders!
- VideoGamerCanInvent
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
hiiiEllo.Activity Check
I think it's time for an activity check!
woah, haven't been on here in a while
- -CoolCoder-
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Script/coding
What you want it to do: have arrows that switch between pokemon we already have the pokemon. and it has to be a remix of this project https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/171604258/.
Who do you want to do it (optional): I don't now.
Deadline: now would be good
Thanks you can add more pokemon if you want you will go in the credits?
What you want it to do: have arrows that switch between pokemon we already have the pokemon. and it has to be a remix of this project https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/171604258/.
Who do you want to do it (optional): I don't now.
Deadline: now would be good
Thanks you can add more pokemon if you want you will go in the credits?
- -CoolCoder-
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Art
Username: channanlawson
Type (logo, signature, banner, sprite): logo
What is it for? (Studio thumbnail, profile pic, forum post etc.): Studio
What does it look like?: a golden background and giant text saying Golden Games
Size: I don't now.
Deadline (when you want it done by): now would be really good because we have a really back logo.
Who you want to do it? (optional): A good artist.
Misc (anything else?) here's the studio https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/4224099/
Thanks.
Username: channanlawson
Type (logo, signature, banner, sprite): logo
What is it for? (Studio thumbnail, profile pic, forum post etc.): Studio
What does it look like?: a golden background and giant text saying Golden Games
Size: I don't now.
Deadline (when you want it done by): now would be really good because we have a really back logo.
Who you want to do it? (optional): A good artist.
Misc (anything else?) here's the studio https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/4224099/
Thanks.
- KMWM
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Love the new look!hiiiEllo.Activity Check
I think it's time for an activity check!
The Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
Come visit the Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
We Complete Coding, Art, and Reviewing Orders!!
Now Hiring and Taking Orders!
- VideoGamerCanInvent
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Taken. Art
Username: channanlawson
Type (logo, signature, banner, sprite): logo
What is it for? (Studio thumbnail, profile pic, forum post etc.): Studio
What does it look like?: a golden background and giant text saying Golden Games
Size: I don't now.
Deadline (when you want it done by): now would be really good because we have a really back logo.
Who you want to do it? (optional): A good artist.
Misc (anything else?) here's the studio https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/studios/4224099/
Thanks.
Thanks!Love the new look!hiiiEllo.Activity Check
I think it's time for an activity check!
woah, haven't been on here in a while
- VideoGamerCanInvent
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
I just took it, but please be a bit more patient as it has only been a few minutes. Thanks! Guys don't skip my message.
woah, haven't been on here in a while
- KMWM
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Thanks This shop is awesome.
The Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
Come visit the Salt & Pepper Shoppe!
We Complete Coding, Art, and Reviewing Orders!!
Now Hiring and Taking Orders!
- VideoGamerCanInvent
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
It's fine! Here it is anyways:I now I am sorry its just that you replied to 2 messages and I did not see mine because once I was on this shop and my order was skipped sorry.I just took it, but please be a bit more patient as it has only been a few minutes. Thanks! Guys don't skip my message.
http://i.cubeupload.com/bmloCq.png
woah, haven't been on here in a while
- -CoolCoder-
- Scratcher
100+ posts
~ Salt & Pepper Shoppe ~ Now Hiring and Taking Orders!!
Great thanks.It's fine! Here it is anyways:I now I am sorry its just that you replied to 2 messages and I did not see mine because once I was on this shop and my order was skipped sorry.I just took it, but please be a bit more patient as it has only been a few minutes. Thanks! Guys don't skip my message.http://i.cubeupload.com/bmloCq.png