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jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!

I can do this! I can probably get it back to you by today, but if not tomorrow.

Thanks!!!

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!

I can do this! I can probably get it back to you by today, but if not tomorrow.

Thanks!!!

Yup Would you like the prompt part in first person or third person? Right now I'm doing first, but it can be changed.

jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!

I can do this! I can probably get it back to you by today, but if not tomorrow.

Thanks!!!

Yup Would you like the prompt part in first person or third person? Right now I'm doing first, but it can be changed.

First or third doesn't matter, (To be honest, I can't decide)

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

Red_Sky_in_FIRE wrote:

Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!

I can do this! I can probably get it back to you by today, but if not tomorrow.

Thanks!!!

Yup Would you like the prompt part in first person or third person? Right now I'm doing first, but it can be changed.

First or third doesn't matter, (To be honest, I can't decide)

Here is the prompt and character ideas. Tell me if you want more character outlines or any changes at all!

I don't really like giving prompts away to people. You're basically setting down the whole book for them

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

I don't really like giving prompts away to people. You're basically setting down the whole book for them

I like giving prompts, just ones that don't set down the whole story, like you said.

Drunken_Sailor wrote:

My review on the Colour wipe:
Title: Nice title! It is very relevant and interesting.
Characters: I like Austin and Lily, but the name ‘Doctor Bob’ seems to throw off the whole ‘serious, end-of-colour-and-the-world’ thing.
Plot: I can't say much since it is only the first chapter, but it sounds like a good plot! The story captivates you into reading on to find out what they have to do.
Grammar and Writing: ‘Why am I here, I don’t know.' should be: 'Why am I here? I don't know.' Also, it should be: ‘It didn’t just affect people,' not: ‘It didn’t just effect people,'.
Other Comments: This sounds like a promising story! I'm going to make a few suggestions:

• Describe the room at the start a bit more. All I know at the minute is that there is a small screen and a small bed.
  
• When you say, ‘We’re flying over 1,000 miles to Brazil', it doesn't quite fit since you also said: ‘It was back then called, “Russia”’ which leads us to believe that the countries we know today no longer exist. However, saying Brazil completely overturns this.
  
• How do Lily and Austin automatically get along? Surely if you had just met them, you wouldn't start just talking to each other like you are best friends.
  

Apart from that, great story!

Thank you! I've added it to the review post.

KaiJayColeZane wrote:

I don't really like giving prompts away to people. You're basically setting down the whole book for them

I know what you mean, it's hard having a prompt but writing something original.

smartcutecandy wrote:

Drunken_Sailor wrote:

My review on the Colour wipe:
Title: Nice title! It is very relevant and interesting.
Characters: I like Austin and Lily, but the name ‘Doctor Bob’ seems to throw off the whole ‘serious, end-of-colour-and-the-world’ thing.
Plot: I can't say much since it is only the first chapter, but it sounds like a good plot! The story captivates you into reading on to find out what they have to do.
Grammar and Writing: ‘Why am I here, I don’t know.' should be: 'Why am I here? I don't know.' Also, it should be: ‘It didn’t just affect people,' not: ‘It didn’t just effect people,'.
Other Comments: This sounds like a promising story! I'm going to make a few suggestions:

• Describe the room at the start a bit more. All I know at the minute is that there is a small screen and a small bed.
  
• When you say, ‘We’re flying over 1,000 miles to Brazil', it doesn't quite fit since you also said: ‘It was back then called, “Russia”’ which leads us to believe that the countries we know today no longer exist. However, saying Brazil completely overturns this.
  
• How do Lily and Austin automatically get along? Surely if you had just met them, you wouldn't start just talking to each other like you are best friends.
  

Apart from that, great story!

Thank you! I've added it to the review post.

Thanks

Hi, I do not wish to order anything but rather to compliment you. I love the fact that you are making a shop for much more than just art requests. Good job and keep it up!

-Nameless- wrote:

Hi, I do not wish to order anything but rather to compliment you. I love the fact that you are making a shop for much more than just art requests. Good job and keep it up!

Thank you for the compliment! That's what I had in mind while I was making the shop. There are a lot of art shops on Scratch, and almost no writing ones, so a writing shop is just what I felt was needed.

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

Character Form:
Username: FollowCherryBlossom
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: drawing
Looks: Ginger curly hair tied in two buns, on the side of her hair. Hair goes down to shoulders. Blue T-shirt and skirt. Red high heels and green eyes.
Name(only if you want art): Chloe
Gender: girl
Age: 12
Plot of Story(for name only):
Powers(if any): none
Pros(for name only):
Cons(for name only):
Time period they live in(for name only):
When you want it done: 6th May
Anything else you want to tell us:

(((Finn the [Evil Kumquat Protector v]::#B22222)::#ffb6c1)::#9370DB)

MistickMage wrote:

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

I'll do it!

Cover art order form

Username: younginventor73
Size: For a scratch project
Title of story: Scratch Bakery 2 - First Day!
What I want it depicting: Cute anime food surrounding the title. The title I want in a some-what cursive font
When I want it done: Within the next two weeks
Anything else: Must be whimsical

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

I'll do it!

Actually, can @smartcutecandy do it too? I want two opinions.

MistickMage wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

I'll do it!

Actually, can @smartcutecandy do it too? I want two opinions.

Wait, so do you want both of us to do it, or just smartcutecandy?

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

I'll do it!

Actually, can @smartcutecandy do it too? I want two opinions.

Wait, so do you want both of us to do it, or just smartcutecandy?

Both

MistickMage wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

jmarie9 wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Character Review:

Username: MistickMage

Character name: Sorrel Wood

Looks: Tall and willowy, with long brown hair normally braided. Occasionally later in the story wears eagle feathers braided in her hair. Unusually bright green eyes. Fair skin with a tan from being outside so much. She has a curious light in her eyes, as though she always wants to know more. She wears clothes that never seem to fit from the boys section, and a Celtic not that represents infinity.

Personality: Kind to all that she can be, although frustrated with boys who flirt with her. She is gentle, although when threatened she will defend herself. Generally loves school, and gets over-focused in school. You can't pry her away from her homework.

Powers(if any): She can manipulate atoms to form new things, so anything from cake to water or manipulating her own cells to become a bird.

Talents: She loves science, and is generally good with animals, especially after king Sarin gives her the amulet of Birds.

Words to describe your character: Loving, caring. A strong leader of smaller numbers, but feels overwhelmed when to many people ask her questions. She will often hide in the shadows, but comes forward if there is something that she really is passionate about.

Backstory: Sorrel Wood lived in the land of Zephiar, a land where the president squashes out any rules to his dictatorship. Sorrel lives in a town that is known for resistance, and her parents have been secretly helping the rebels for years. When Sorrel was in sixth grade she was given an option to move up a grade in science, and she did it. In the summer before seventh grade she discovered the power to manipulate magic, and began to teach it to others. In the spring, she left her life and started her own resistance cell, codenamed Molecular Movers, or the MM. She met the king of eagles, Sarin, and after Sarin and the group of Atomic Magicians over through the president, Sorrel leaves them to grow on her own, and after permanently turning herself into an Eagle, marries Sarin. (Thats basically the story…)

Flaws they have: She is overwhelmed easily, and is stubborn when she thinks she is right. She is a perfectionist, and has a slight need to always be helping others, although she also tends to let them work it out without her if she thinks they can. She isn't the best at the magic she found, even though she was the ones who taught the others.

When you want it done by: When ever.

Any specific staff member: No.

Anything else you want to tell us: I'm sorry the backstory is more of her story, I haven't really developed her past much.

I'll do it!

Actually, can @smartcutecandy do it too? I want two opinions.

Wait, so do you want both of us to do it, or just smartcutecandy?

Both

Okay! I'll start tomorrow!