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- smartcutecandy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I'm gonna order from my own shop to give some new employees a job. I'd like at least two people to take this order please.
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
- nilbert
- Scratcher
500+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Username: nilbert
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): Here: https://bsd405-my.sharepoint.com/personal/s-luam_bsd405_org/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc=%7B84992CEE-5027-48BC-B2C8-EE5F638543F7%7D&file=CW^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.docx&action=default
How active will you be(1-10): Pretty active, 8.5
Following the thread: Yup ^^
Anything else you want to tell us: I'm a good writer (at least I think, not to brag) and I've won a few prizes for my writing. I might be a bit inactive while on vacations, I'll be sure to notify you if I will be. Thanks!
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): Here: https://bsd405-my.sharepoint.com/personal/s-luam_bsd405_org/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc=%7B84992CEE-5027-48BC-B2C8-EE5F638543F7%7D&file=CW^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.docx&action=default
How active will you be(1-10): Pretty active, 8.5
Following the thread: Yup ^^
Anything else you want to tell us: I'm a good writer (at least I think, not to brag) and I've won a few prizes for my writing. I might be a bit inactive while on vacations, I'll be sure to notify you if I will be. Thanks!
- Daring_Sailor
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I'll take this after Easter. I'm on mobile right now so I can't view it. I'm gonna order from my own shop to give some new employees a job. I'd like at least two people to take this order please.
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I'll take it as well.I'll take this after Easter. I'm on mobile right now so I can't view it. I'm gonna order from my own shop to give some new employees a job. I'd like at least two people to take this order please.
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
- MagicPigPerson
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
You did say I'm gonna order from my own shop to give some new employees a job. I'd like at least two people to take this order please. at least two people so I'll take this tomorrow once Sky fix my internet cables.
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
- jmarie9
- Scratcher
100+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Username: Jmarie9
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): (I don't have a link, but here is a story starter I made for a friend:
Moonlight streamed onto Ariel drive, only somewhat ruffled by a distant shadow. However, the shadow grew larger and larger by the second, and soon the clicking of boots onto pavement could be heard shattering the soothing silence of night. This sound was soon accompanied by the rustling of a cloak, and quiet was no more.
A figure came into light. It was a woman, with inhuman silvery eyes. With her came a feeling of danger, and the gentle hum of traffic grew silent. Dead silent. The type where you want to talk, but you feel like if you do, the night will break into a thousand pieces.
She turned to face the forest, a beautiful yet terrifying smile spreading over her face. Though her lips remained stationary, a piercing scream echoed throughout the night. The woman exited the lonely street, and even though every single person in Ariel drive that night was sleeping, the sound of talons tapping together and a thousand lost souls whispering lingered in the air.
This was only the beginning of the awakening. ((This is pretty much unedited, so I can do better.))
How active will you be(1-10): umm… I am usually on for around thirty minutes a day. I can't always post projects, but I can post writing in comments.
Following the thread: Yeah
Anything else you want to tell us: I can't do cover art much, mostly names (Examples: Eris Zendavi, Amaya Suzuki, Centauri (She is a forest creature, a fantasy species that doesn't have last names), Kataar (another forest creature), Anali Vui, Maie Thomale), story starters, and prompts. (oh yeah i can also do reviews that are not for something in a project)
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): (I don't have a link, but here is a story starter I made for a friend:
Moonlight streamed onto Ariel drive, only somewhat ruffled by a distant shadow. However, the shadow grew larger and larger by the second, and soon the clicking of boots onto pavement could be heard shattering the soothing silence of night. This sound was soon accompanied by the rustling of a cloak, and quiet was no more.
A figure came into light. It was a woman, with inhuman silvery eyes. With her came a feeling of danger, and the gentle hum of traffic grew silent. Dead silent. The type where you want to talk, but you feel like if you do, the night will break into a thousand pieces.
She turned to face the forest, a beautiful yet terrifying smile spreading over her face. Though her lips remained stationary, a piercing scream echoed throughout the night. The woman exited the lonely street, and even though every single person in Ariel drive that night was sleeping, the sound of talons tapping together and a thousand lost souls whispering lingered in the air.
This was only the beginning of the awakening. ((This is pretty much unedited, so I can do better.))
How active will you be(1-10): umm… I am usually on for around thirty minutes a day. I can't always post projects, but I can post writing in comments.
Following the thread: Yeah
Anything else you want to tell us: I can't do cover art much, mostly names (Examples: Eris Zendavi, Amaya Suzuki, Centauri (She is a forest creature, a fantasy species that doesn't have last names), Kataar (another forest creature), Anali Vui, Maie Thomale), story starters, and prompts. (oh yeah i can also do reviews that are not for something in a project)
Last edited by jmarie9 (April 18, 2017 20:41:29)
- smartcutecandy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Accepted! Username: nilbert
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): Here: https://bsd405-my.sharepoint.com/personal/s-luam_bsd405_org/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc=%7B84992CEE-5027-48BC-B2C8-EE5F638543F7%7D&file=CW^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.docx&action=default
How active will you be(1-10): Pretty active, 8.5
Following the thread: Yup ^^
Anything else you want to tell us: I'm a good writer (at least I think, not to brag) and I've won a few prizes for my writing. I might be a bit inactive while on vacations, I'll be sure to notify you if I will be. Thanks!
Username: Jmarie9Accepted!
Link to previous work(a short story or some art): (I don't have a link, but here is a story starter I made for a friend:
Moonlight streamed onto Ariel drive, only somewhat ruffled by a distant shadow. However, the shadow grew larger and larger by the second, and soon the clicking of boots onto pavement could be heard shattering the soothing silence of night. This sound was soon accompanied by the rustling of a cloak, and quiet was no more.
A figure came into light. It was a woman, with inhuman silvery eyes. With her came a feeling of danger, and the gentle hum of traffic grew silent. Dead silent. The type where you want to talk, but you feel like if you do, the night will break into a thousand pieces.
She turned to face the forest, a beautiful yet terrifying smile spreading over her face. Though her lips remained stationary, a piercing scream echoed throughout the night. The woman exited the lonely street, and even though every single person in Ariel drive that night was sleeping, the sound of talons tapping together and a thousand lost souls whispering lingered in the air.
This was only the beginning of the awakening. ((This is pretty much unedited, so I can do better.))
How active will you be(1-10): umm… I am usually on for around thirty minutes a day. I can't always post projects, but I can post writing in comments.
Following the thread: Yeah
Anything else you want to tell us: I can't do cover art much, mostly names (Examples: Eris Zendavi, Amaya Suzuki, Centauri (She is a forest creature, a fantasy species that doesn't have last names), Kataar (another forest creature), Anali Vui, Maie Thomale), story starters, and prompts. (oh yeah i can also do reviews that are not for something in a project)
- smartcutecandy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Hey guys, these two orders still have not been taken. If someone could take one of them, that would be great.
Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .
That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!
Username: MagicPigPerson
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): It's for fanfiction.net, so can it be 300x400 (width x height)
Title of Story: Together (not really important)
What you want it depicting: Can it be a playing card (the Ace of Hearts if possible) with a female (waist up) female that has medium hair and a sword in hand and the background white (with the female being black) on half and the other half the waist up of a skeleton, flipped upside-down, the backdrop being black and the skeleton white.
When you want it done: STASAP (sooner than as soon as possible, whenever soon is)
Anything else you want to tell us: Thanks
- MistickMage
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Any work I can do?
Gender: Genderfluild-ish. Female most of the time, though occasionally Agender.
Sexuality: Bisexual
Spirit Animal: American Kestrel
Favorite Color: Blue/grey
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Read above post. Any work I can do?
- jmarie9
- Scratcher
100+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Hey guys, these two orders still have not been taken. If someone could take one of them, that would be great.Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .
That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!Username: MagicPigPerson
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): It's for fanfiction.net, so can it be 300x400 (width x height)
Title of Story: Together (not really important)
What you want it depicting: Can it be a playing card (the Ace of Hearts if possible) with a female (waist up) female that has medium hair and a sword in hand and the background white (with the female being black) on half and the other half the waist up of a skeleton, flipped upside-down, the backdrop being black and the skeleton white.
When you want it done: STASAP (sooner than as soon as possible, whenever soon is)
Anything else you want to tell us: Thanks
I'll take the first one! Who made this order? I want to notify them because I have a question. Hey guys, these two orders still have not been taken. If someone could take one of them, that would be great.Username: makethebrainhappy
Do you want a drawing of your character, or character name ideas: Please draw the character
Name: Lightning (but will be called many named such as James)
Gender: Male
Backstory: He's an aware who was kidnapped by the voids before being sent to an evil planet. In a miraculous escape plot he escaped and now has joined us on earth. He's knowledgeable of the proceedings on earth because he has seen it from space. The reason why he was kidnapped was because he had magical powers and they were trying to harvest the great power.
Talents and skills: Magic and Disguises
Super Powers (if any): He has a wand which is magically embedded into him. He can pull it out through his arm.
His wand can
Most powerful: Send a ray of pure magic and lightning approx. 4 inches wide at anything. Requires little charging and is his most powerful spell.
Body Armour: Can put or take off body Armour over his disguise at any time.
his wand can control two translucent swords that fight for him. They have a range of 3 feet. He can enable or disable them at will
Other info: About the Disguises, he normally wears a blue robe, but he can with time disguise himself into other forms. So he could turn into James the Human, or Jack the Dwarf. It's not a super power, its just a normal disguise trick, but no one could really tell otherwise. He's skilled with that is all I'm saying, so he isn't limited to one character .
That was the character application ^ hopefully you can draw something based off of that information. Thanks!Username: MagicPigPerson
Size(For Scratch Projects or a vertical image): It's for fanfiction.net, so can it be 300x400 (width x height)
Title of Story: Together (not really important)
What you want it depicting: Can it be a playing card (the Ace of Hearts if possible) with a female (waist up) female that has medium hair and a sword in hand and the background white (with the female being black) on half and the other half the waist up of a skeleton, flipped upside-down, the backdrop being black and the skeleton white.
When you want it done: STASAP (sooner than as soon as possible, whenever soon is)
Anything else you want to tell us: Thanks
Last edited by jmarie9 (April 19, 2017 13:37:38)
- KaiJayColeZane
- Scratcher
100+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I'll take the first one! Who made this order? I want to notify them because I have a question.makethebrainhappy
Last edited by KaiJayColeZane (April 19, 2017 15:04:07)
I'm a spy. It's my job to know things.
- Daring_Sailor
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I'll take this now I'm gonna order from my own shop to give some new employees a job. I'd like at least two people to take this order please.
Username: Smartcutecandy
Link to story: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148739068/
When you want it done by: May 1st
Any specific staff member: Someone who's name is maroon on the FP
Anything else you want to tell us: Please use the forms I've provided on the FP to review my story, and any others. Thanks!
- jmarie9
- Scratcher
100+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
huh?I'll take the first one! Who made this order? I want to notify them because I have a question.makethebrainhappy
edit: didn't see that last part! thanks
Last edited by jmarie9 (April 19, 2017 15:05:20)
- Daring_Sailor
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
- smartcutecandy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Here's the link. They're at the bottom of the post. Where are the story review forms?https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/post/2358085/
- Daring_Sailor
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
ThanksHere's the link. They're at the bottom of the post. Where are the story review forms?https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/discuss/post/2358085/
- Daring_Sailor
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
My review on the Colour wipe:
Title: Nice title! It is very relevant and interesting.
Characters: I like Austin and Lily, but the name ‘Doctor Bob’ seems to throw off the whole ‘serious, end-of-colour-and-the-world’ thing.
Plot: I can't say much since it is only the first chapter, but it sounds like a good plot! The story captivates you into reading on to find out what they have to do.
Grammar and Writing: ‘Why am I here, I don’t know.' should be: 'Why am I here? I don't know.' Also, it should be: ‘It didn’t just affect people,' not: ‘It didn’t just effect people,'.
Other Comments: This sounds like a promising story! I'm going to make a few suggestions:
Title: Nice title! It is very relevant and interesting.
Characters: I like Austin and Lily, but the name ‘Doctor Bob’ seems to throw off the whole ‘serious, end-of-colour-and-the-world’ thing.
Plot: I can't say much since it is only the first chapter, but it sounds like a good plot! The story captivates you into reading on to find out what they have to do.
Grammar and Writing: ‘Why am I here, I don’t know.' should be: 'Why am I here? I don't know.' Also, it should be: ‘It didn’t just affect people,' not: ‘It didn’t just effect people,'.
Other Comments: This sounds like a promising story! I'm going to make a few suggestions:
- Describe the room at the start a bit more. All I know at the minute is that there is a small screen and a small bed.
- When you say, ‘We’re flying over 1,000 miles to Brazil', it doesn't quite fit since you also said: ‘It was back then called, “Russia”’ which leads us to believe that the countries we know today no longer exist. However, saying Brazil completely overturns this.
- How do Lily and Austin automatically get along? Surely if you had just met them, you wouldn't start just talking to each other like you are best friends.
- Red_Sky_in_FIRE
- Scratcher
27 posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!
- jmarie9
- Scratcher
100+ posts
☕Writer's Cafe: For All Your Writing Needs!☕ We provide OC and story reviews, as well as cover art! ARTISTS NEEDED!
I can do this! I can probably get it back to you by today, but if not tomorrow. Writing Prompt
Username: @Red_Sky_in_FIRE
Genre: Sci-FI
When you want it done: This week.
Anything else you want to tell us: Please include character ideas. Not really names, just ideas for powers, and/or personality. I have absolutely run out of ideas at the moment. Thank you!