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-StarryGalaxy-

Full username: -StarryGalaxy-
Type of voice: American(?) Male
Words: I have a very, strange.. Job. To say the least that is.. Hello, I'm Matthew, tatinani (Ta-Tee-na-nee), and i'm a assassin (pause)
Do I like my job? Well yes, it pays, it keep me fit, and honestly, as bad as it sounds.. It's kinda enjoyable. Not in a fun way! But in a way that is thrilling, can't explain it.
Comments: I need this before the end of the week if possible

bigpuppy

Full username: MistickMage
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/142383121/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Writing
Comments: (anything else?): Nope

Taken.

bigpuppy

Review for Lumen-the tides of light: Prologue by MistickMage
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Coding (N/A)
A story isn't really coding.

Graphics (95/100)
I really like the title page.

Bugs (100/100)
Note - this means I couldn't find any bugs.

Grammar (85/100)
1. You spelled “stretched” wrong -

2. In the notes and credits:
Before: “Q:Whats a morgana?:”
After: “Q: What's a morgana?”

Creativity (99/100)
Very creative story!

Comments:
I liked your story a lot! :D
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Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop

MistickMage

bigpuppy wrote:
Review for Lumen-the tides of light: Prologue by MistickMage
________________________________________________________

Coding (N/A)
A story isn't really coding.

Graphics (95/100)
I really like the title page.

Bugs (100/100)
Note - this means I couldn't find any bugs.

Grammar (85/100)
1. You spelled “stretched” wrong -

2. In the notes and credits:
Before: “Q:Whats a morgana?:”
After: “Q: What's a morgana?”

Creativity (99/100)
Very creative story!

Comments:
I liked your story a lot! :D
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Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop

Thanks so much! I will fix the errors!

-Puppy

TacoCatProuductions wrote:
(im head judge lol)

Please don't put me in court! I'm innocent!

TacoCatProuductions

-Puppy wrote:
TacoCatProuductions wrote:
(im head judge lol)

Please don't put me in court! I'm innocent!

GeeTransit

bigpuppy wrote:
Austinato wrote:
Greetings,

I have reviewed your shop and determined that it is worthy of an invitation to the United Shops of Scratch. We are currently undergoing renovation and improvement, but our continuous goal is to cooperate and work hard.

We are well organized, and we are organizing a few contests.

Please consider this invitation,
USS Co-Founder/Co-Owner Austinato

EDIT: Fixed typo.
Hmm…. What is GeeTransit's opinion? Because jromagnoli works for you.

Sure? bigpuppy's the owner too, and I just work here. I myself am more used to being unique and stuff, but most of the time it breaks down ‘cause noone knows what I’m doing…

(I have a 82.5% going in the USS, but I feel maybe a vote or a discussion???)

Last edited by GeeTransit (March 14, 2017 21:01:51)

GeeTransit

Austinato wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
Hmm…. What is GeeTransit's opinion? Because jromagnoli works for you.
I'm not too sure what you mean by GeeTransit?

Herro! (I'm just the manager of this shop. Only person of higher authority in this shop is bigpuppy himself!)

Monkey_Legend

Nice new name, although you could maybe change it by putting “bigpuppy's shop” first? Although then that could also make the “Hello there” bit sound a little strange. I don't know XD

ML

bigpuppy

Monkey_Legend wrote:
Nice new name, although you could maybe change it by putting “bigpuppy's shop” first? Although then that could also make the “Hello there” bit sound a little strange. I don't know XD

ML

XD

Austinato

GeeTransit wrote:
Sure? bigpuppy's the owner too, and I just work here. I myself am more used to being unique and stuff, but most of the time it breaks down ‘cause noone knows what I’m doing… (I have a 82.5% going in the USS, but I feel maybe a vote or a discussion???)

GeeTransit wrote:
Herro! (I'm just the manager of this shop. Only person of higher authority in this shop is bigpuppy himself!)

So, just as long as bigpuppy's cool with it, you all are in!

You can host a vote if you want, it isn't much of a problem, either.

GeeTransit

bigpuppy wrote:
Monkey_Legend wrote:
Nice new name, although you could maybe change it by putting “bigpuppy's shop” first? Although then that could also make the “Hello there” bit sound a little strange. I don't know XD

ML
XD

All I see in the tab is, “Hello There | bigpuppy's shop -” and yes Iit does sound a bit creepy. My sister was like, “Ooohhh. New name? AHKJFKJAFJKAJ!!!” Yeh…

GeeTransit

Austinato wrote:
GeeTransit wrote:
Sure? bigpuppy's the owner too, and I just work here. I myself am more used to being unique and stuff, but most of the time it breaks down ‘cause noone knows what I’m doing… (I have a 82.5% going in the USS, but I feel maybe a vote or a discussion???)
GeeTransit wrote:
Herro! (I'm just the manager of this shop. Only person of higher authority in this shop is bigpuppy himself!)
So, just as long as bigpuppy's cool with it, you all are in!

You can host a vote if you want, it isn't much of a problem, either.

Sure? I dunno how though. I've never set up a vote, or anything similar. *Raises both hands towards bigpuppy* He's the one that takes charge. (And your projects are great!)

jakel181

Username: Jakel181
What things are you good At: I'm good at math science coding everything art and I'm a professional voice actor/ actor and management of large groups up too 206 (that's my record but I can go higher than that thought)
What is your favorite animal: Liturgusa krattorum
Example(s) of work? https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/105465413/

Are you following this topic? Yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 1 bubble103's voice acting shop

Last edited by jakel181 (March 15, 2017 08:08:52)

jakel181

jakel181 wrote:
Username: Jakel181
What things are you good At: I'm good at math science coding everything art and I'm a professional voice actor/ actor and management of large groups up too 206 (that's my record but I can go higher than that thought)
What is your favorite animal: Liturgusa krattorum
Example(s) of work? https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/105465413/
https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148648888/
Are you following this topic? Yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 1 bubble103's voice acting shop

GeeTransit

jakel181 wrote:
jakel181 wrote:
Username: Jakel181
What things are you good At: I'm good at math science coding everything art and I'm a professional voice actor/ actor and management of large groups up too 206 (that's my record but I can go higher than that thought)
What is your favorite animal: Liturgusa krattorum
Example(s) of work? https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/105465413/
https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/148648888/
Are you following this topic? Yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 1 bubble103's voice acting shop

Try not to quote the same thing twice. And yep, you're accepted (but bigpuppy still needs to hire you), though keep in mind that not many people will do orders for coding, but voice acting is becoming a huge hit! Also, what do you mean by “large groups”?

TacoCatProuductions

Will be gone tll the 18th BYE

jromagnoli

TacoCatProuductions wrote:
Will be gone tll the 18th BYE

bye.

TacoCatProuductions

jromagnoli wrote:
TacoCatProuductions wrote:
Will be gone tll the 18th BYE
bye.

going camping.

BrownieBatter987

Uh, whenever I get a message all I can see is: ‘Hello There’ it kinda creeps me out XD

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