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KaiJayColeZane

Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.

I'm a spy. It's my job to know things.

Alida7232

KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.

Cool! To answer your question about artist/writer, I've asked for that to be removed since everyone does everything here. I hope you'll be hired!

“A man who reads lives a thousand lives, but the man who doesn't read lives only one.” - George R. R. Martin

KaiJayColeZane

Alida7232 wrote:
KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.
Cool! To answer your question about artist/writer, I've asked for that to be removed since everyone does everything here. I hope you'll be hired!

Okay! Who's the manager of the cafè? I thought you were.

I'm a spy. It's my job to know things.

Alida7232

KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Alida7232 wrote:
KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.
Cool! To answer your question about artist/writer, I've asked for that to be removed since everyone does everything here. I hope you'll be hired!
Okay! Who's the manager of the cafè? I thought you were.

I'm just a person who's overly active here. The manager is @smartcutecandy .

“A man who reads lives a thousand lives, but the man who doesn't read lives only one.” - George R. R. Martin

smartcutecandy

Ok everyone, I'm changing things up a bit!

I'm going to remove the job categories. They aren't really helping anything, and I would like everyone to be able to take whatever order.

Secondly, I'm also going to check on some inactive members. I've kinda been letting that go since we haven't gotten too many orders, but I think they should be at least checking every once and a while.

Lastly, I'm going to create an order list. I've been compiling all of the completed orders, so in a few days I'll post a list of all completed orders, along with who they were for, when they were done, who completed the order, and a link to the order.

Thanks for bringing up the problems in the shop! Hopefully these changes will be good.

smartcutecandy

KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.

You're accepted! I'm going to start hiring a few more people now that the specific jobs are gone.

KaiJayColeZane

smartcutecandy wrote:
KaiJayColeZane wrote:
Username: KaiJayColeZane
What job do you want(artist, writer): Artist. What does writer mean, exactly? Because I do write. I don't understand how it could be a job one could apply for.
Link to previous work(if you're applying to be a writer I'd like a small story, and if you're applying to be an artist I'd like some past art ): You can have both: on my profile I have numerous art projects; some of my writing
How active will you be(1-10): 9-10
Following the thread: Already following
Anything else you want to tell us: Not exactly.
You're accepted! I'm going to start hiring a few more people now that the specific jobs are gone.

Yay!

I'm a spy. It's my job to know things.

smartcutecandy

EXAMPLE WORK:

Writing Prompts:
#1: “I didn't do it! Ok, so maybe I did do it, but I didn't mean to!”
#2: It would be hard to kill me, seeing as I'm already dead.
#3: “What if it had wings?” “Do you mean fairy wings, or eagle wings, ‘cause those are two completely different things….”
#4: What if Earth’s gravity was replaced with a different type of force?
#5: Come in, but please leave your touchy-feely at the door.

Cover Art:
Made by Pbro
Made by Alida7232
Made by Smartcutecandy
Made by KaiJayColeZane

Character Reviews:
Review for MistickMage's character:
Name: I love the name! It sounds unique, and very magical.
Personality: Her personality sounds unique from what you've told me, but I can't say too much without more information. Looks good so far.
Looks: I can imagine her clearly now, but here are a few things that would be nice to add: eye color and shape (curious look, squinty eyes, bulging eyes, etc.), height and body type, (is she small for her age, tall for her age, skinny, overweight, etc.) You probably do cover this in your writing, but they are nice things to add.
Powers: The powers of your character are good, but I'd recommend trying not to give her too many powers. If she does live in a world where these powers are normal though, then I'd say you're good to go.
Other Comments: Your character sounds unique from what I've read here. I would definitely keep working on writing her backstory and a bit more about her personality and other traits, but it looks like you're going well. If you want to test her for cliché-ness, I'd recommend heading over to my quiz I made for writers. It has a guide in the last few parts on how to make a well-rounded character. It's completely fine if you don't. Here's the link if you want to: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/136594008/#player
Thank you for ordering from Writer's Café! Your character looks great!

Last edited by smartcutecandy (Feb. 18, 2017 23:50:22)

-Anvard-

Username: -Anvard-
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
When you want it done: Soon
Anything else you want to tell us: –

Those who strive above all else to be rich in worldly goods are often trying to hide their spiritual poverty.
-Anonymous
Those who would give up essential Liberty, to purchase a little temporary Safety, deserve neither.
-Benjamin Franklin
There is no greater love than that, that a man should lay down his life for his friend. Think, Daniel, can you repay such love with hate?
-The Bronze Bow, by Elizabeth George Speare
All endings are also beginnings. We just don't know it at the time.
-March Albom

smartcutecandy

-Anvard- wrote:
Username: -Anvard-
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
When you want it done: Soon
Anything else you want to tell us: –

Taken! I'll post a comment on your profile when they're done.

smartcutecandy

WRITING PROMPTS:
Note: This is where finished writing prompt orders will go.

Writing Prompts for ZLGames:
#1: “I didn't do it! Ok, so maybe I did do it, but I didn't mean to!”
#2: It would be hard to kill me, seeing as I'm already dead.
#3: “What if it had wings?” “Do you mean fairy wings, or eagle wings, ‘cause those are two completely different things….”
#4: What if Earth’s gravity was replaced with a different type of force?
#5: Come in, but please leave your touchy-feely at the door.

Writing Prompts for -Anvard-:
#1: I blinked, startled by its appearance. I thought they were just a myth. Humans didn't exist.
#2: So, where did the horn come from?
#3: You know, teleporting to be first in line is kinda cheating.
#4: I'd like to buy a memory. What kind? I dunno, something bold.
#5: I know this looks bad, but I'm the monster from under your bed, and I'm here to help.

Last edited by smartcutecandy (Feb. 23, 2017 04:06:52)

smartcutecandy

FINISHED ORDERS:
Character art for Alida7232 finished by pbro (12-31-16)
Character art for KaiJayColeZane finished by jromangoli (1-30-17) Note: Project was unshared.
Review for MistickMage finished by smartcutecandy (2-6-17)
Cover art for chocolatemeepgirl finished by Alida7232 (2-11-17)
Writing prompts for ZLGames finished by smartcutecandy (2-12-17)
Cover art for redglitter finished by pbro (2-12-17)
Cover art for SquiggleThinker finished by KaiJayColeZane (2-18-17)
Writing prompts for -Anvard- finished by smartcutecandy (2-22-17)
Review for MistickMage finished by awesomenessness10 (2-28-17)
Character Art for india_lovelace finished by -Puppy (3-19-17)
Review for MineCrafterCrafty finished by smartcutecandy (4-9-17)
Review for smartcutecandy finished by Drunken_Sailor (4-19-17)
Writing prompt and character ideas for Red_Sky_in_FIRE finished by jmarie9 (5-2-17)
Character review for MistickMage finished by jmarie9 (5-6-17)
Review for MistickMage finished by smartcutecandy (5-7-17)
Review for MagicPigPerson finished by jmarie9 (5-29-17)
4 Reviews for FollowCherryBlossom finished by Drunken_Sailor (8-21-17)

Last edited by smartcutecandy (Aug. 30, 2017 19:42:52)

jromagnoli

smartcutecandy wrote:
FINISHED ORDERS:

Character art for Alida7232 finished by pbro (12-31-16)
Review for MistickMage finished by smartcutecandy (2-6-17)
Cover art for chocolatemeepgirl finished by Alida7232 (2-11-17)
Writing prompts for ZLGames finished by smartcutecandy (2-12-17)
Cover art for redglitter finished by pbro (2-12-17)

I finished the sprite for kaijaycolezane.

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SquiggleThinker

Give us a review!
Username: @SquiggleThinker
Speed(1-10): 9.99999 THIS WAS WAY FASTER THEN I THOUGHT!
Friendliness(1-10): 8. There were multiple employees asking about my order, I would like to be only one at a time.
Quality(1-10): 9. My cover art was better than I wanted!
Comments: I really like this place. Just one thing. List out the orders and the process that it's in. For example ORDER 1: In Progress ORDER 2: DONE! Order 3: Seen, but not created.
Would you come here again: YES!
Would you recommend to a friend: maybe… my friend usually does all of this. But she will need good cover art!

smartcutecandy

jromagnoli wrote:
smartcutecandy wrote:
FINISHED ORDERS:

Character art for Alida7232 finished by pbro (12-31-16)
Review for MistickMage finished by smartcutecandy (2-6-17)
Cover art for chocolatemeepgirl finished by Alida7232 (2-11-17)
Writing prompts for ZLGames finished by smartcutecandy (2-12-17)
Cover art for redglitter finished by pbro (2-12-17)
I finished the sprite for kaijaycolezane.

Ok! Could you give me the link and approximate date you finished it? Thanks!

Last edited by smartcutecandy (Feb. 18, 2017 23:32:32)

smartcutecandy

Agirkala wrote:
I'm still here….

I never said you weren't. You just haven't taken any orders yet, that's why I marked you as semi-active. If you take 1 or 2 more orders, I'll move you to active.

smartcutecandy

SquiggleThinker wrote:
Give us a review!
Username: @SquiggleThinker
Speed(1-10): 9.99999 THIS WAS WAY FASTER THEN I THOUGHT!
Friendliness(1-10): 8. There were multiple employees asking about my order, I would like to be only one at a time.
Quality(1-10): 9. My cover art was better than I wanted!
Comments: I really like this place. Just one thing. List out the orders and the process that it's in. For example ORDER 1: In Progress ORDER 2: DONE! Order 3: Seen, but not created.
Would you come here again: YES!
Would you recommend to a friend: maybe… my friend usually does all of this. But she will need good cover art!

Thank you!

jromagnoli

smartcutecandy wrote:
SquiggleThinker wrote:
Give us a review!
Username: @SquiggleThinker
Speed(1-10): 9.99999 THIS WAS WAY FASTER THEN I THOUGHT!
Friendliness(1-10): 8. There were multiple employees asking about my order, I would like to be only one at a time.
Quality(1-10): 9. My cover art was better than I wanted!
Comments: I really like this place. Just one thing. List out the orders and the process that it's in. For example ORDER 1: In Progress ORDER 2: DONE! Order 3: Seen, but not created.
Would you come here again: YES!
Would you recommend to a friend: maybe… my friend usually does all of this. But she will need good cover art!
Thank you!

I'm not sure I posted it in the shop, (s)he asked me on my profile and I gave (her)him the link.

Last edited by jromagnoli (Feb. 19, 2017 01:05:37)

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jromagnoli wrote:
smartcutecandy wrote:
SquiggleThinker wrote:
Give us a review!
Username: @SquiggleThinker
Speed(1-10): 9.99999 THIS WAS WAY FASTER THEN I THOUGHT!
Friendliness(1-10): 8. There were multiple employees asking about my order, I would like to be only one at a time.
Quality(1-10): 9. My cover art was better than I wanted!
Comments: I really like this place. Just one thing. List out the orders and the process that it's in. For example ORDER 1: In Progress ORDER 2: DONE! Order 3: Seen, but not created.
Would you come here again: YES!
Would you recommend to a friend: maybe… my friend usually does all of this. But she will need good cover art!
Thank you!
I'm not sure I posted it in the shop, (s)he asked me on my profile and I gave (her)him the link.

Ok. I'll check there.

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