smartcutecandy wrote:

Here's my review for your character!

Name: I love the name! It sounds unique, and very magical.
Personality: Her personality sounds unique from what you've told me, but I can't say too much without more information. Looks good so far.
Looks: I can imagine her clearly now, but here are a few things that would be nice to add: eye color and shape (curious look, squinty eyes, bulging eyes, etc.), height and body type, (is she small for her age, tall for her age, skinny, overweight, etc.) You probably do cover this in your writing, but they are nice things to add.
Powers: The powers of your character are good, but I'd recommend trying not to give her too many powers. If she does live in a world where these powers are normal though, then I'd say you're good to go.
Other Comments: Your character sounds unique from what I've read here. I would definitely keep working on writing her backstory and a bit more about her personality and other traits, but it looks like you're going well. If you want to test her for cliché-ness, I'd recommend heading over to my quiz I made for writers. It has a guide in the last few parts on how to make a well-rounded character. It's completely fine if you don't. Here's the link if you want to: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/136594008/#player
Thank you for ordering from Writer's Café! Your character looks great!

MistickMage wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

Here's my review for your character!

Name: I love the name! It sounds unique, and very magical.
Personality: Her personality sounds unique from what you've told me, but I can't say too much without more information. Looks good so far.
Looks: I can imagine her clearly now, but here are a few things that would be nice to add: eye color and shape (curious look, squinty eyes, bulging eyes, etc.), height and body type, (is she small for her age, tall for her age, skinny, overweight, etc.) You probably do cover this in your writing, but they are nice things to add.
Powers: The powers of your character are good, but I'd recommend trying not to give her too many powers. If she does live in a world where these powers are normal though, then I'd say you're good to go.
Other Comments: Your character sounds unique from what I've read here. I would definitely keep working on writing her backstory and a bit more about her personality and other traits, but it looks like you're going well. If you want to test her for cliché-ness, I'd recommend heading over to my quiz I made for writers. It has a guide in the last few parts on how to make a well-rounded character. It's completely fine if you don't. Here's the link if you want to: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/136594008/#player
Thank you for ordering from Writer's Café! Your character looks great!

Thank you! I am writing a longer description of her in a project, which will be shared soon. Thanks again?

smartcutecandy wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

Here's my review for your character!

Name: I love the name! It sounds unique, and very magical.
Personality: Her personality sounds unique from what you've told me, but I can't say too much without more information. Looks good so far.
Looks: I can imagine her clearly now, but here are a few things that would be nice to add: eye color and shape (curious look, squinty eyes, bulging eyes, etc.), height and body type, (is she small for her age, tall for her age, skinny, overweight, etc.) You probably do cover this in your writing, but they are nice things to add.
Powers: The powers of your character are good, but I'd recommend trying not to give her too many powers. If she does live in a world where these powers are normal though, then I'd say you're good to go.
Other Comments: Your character sounds unique from what I've read here. I would definitely keep working on writing her backstory and a bit more about her personality and other traits, but it looks like you're going well. If you want to test her for cliché-ness, I'd recommend heading over to my quiz I made for writers. It has a guide in the last few parts on how to make a well-rounded character. It's completely fine if you don't. Here's the link if you want to: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/136594008/#player
Thank you for ordering from Writer's Café! Your character looks great!

Thank you! I am writing a longer description of her in a project, which will be shared soon. Thanks again?

No problem! I'll be looking out for it!

pbro wrote:

How do you make figures in bitmap,it's so hard and they look so bad after they're done.With vector I can make volcanoes,humans,good eye's.

22babygurl wrote:

pbro wrote:

How do you make figures in bitmap,it's so hard and they look so bad after they're done.With vector I can make volcanoes,humans,good eye's.

Easy!

Use the drawing tool first. You just may use vector, which is easier.

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

ZLGames wrote:

Username: ZLGames
Genre: Any.
Fiction or free writing: Sorry, I don't understand this question.
When you want it done: ASAP
Anything else you want to tell us: I'd just like a few cool writing prompts, comment on my project when they're done.

Amateurscratch wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

Okay! Do you mind if I see it when it's done? And BTW, is it Vector or Bitmap?

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

Okay! Do you mind if I see it when it's done? And BTW, is it Vector or Bitmap?

It's vector. I'll send a link to you when I share it.

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

Okay! Do you mind if I see it when it's done? And BTW, is it Vector or Bitmap?

It's vector. I'll send a link to you when I share it.

chocolatemeepgirl wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

Okay! Do you mind if I see it when it's done? And BTW, is it Vector or Bitmap?

It's vector. I'll send a link to you when I share it.

Wait I thought it was traditional? (not that I really care, but still XD)

Alida7232 wrote:

chocolatemeepgirl wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Have you ever done cover art in the past? I was just wondering, because I was about to make an order for some cover art.

Actually, I'm just finishing up an order for cover art. I hope to have it shared by the weekend.

Okay! Do you mind if I see it when it's done? And BTW, is it Vector or Bitmap?

It's vector. I'll send a link to you when I share it.

Wait I thought it was traditional? (not that I really care, but still XD)

I decided that vector would be easier after I thought about it a little. I think you'll like this better than what I'd have done traditionally.

Amateurscratch wrote:

Hi, I'd like to make 2 orders, please.

The first one didn't have a template and you didn't mention it in the first comment, but can you give me story name ideas?

This is what the story's about:

There are two girls. One is called Ava and she is 12. Her sister is called Ada and she is 10. They had a brother called Jacob, but he died from Cancer when Ava was 2. A bit after Jacob died, Ava's parent's had Ada. Ava spends her pocket money on tins of shortbread and lucky cat charms. Whenever she feels down, she has a piece of shortbread, as she hides the tin under her bed in her room. Ada often thinks about her dead brother, too. Ada appears to live in Cloud Cuckoo Land half the time, where she dreams her brother is alive, where she dreams there are mermaids, pheonix's and more.

In the end, Ava dies from depression. Ada still lives in Cloud Cuckoo Land.

What should this story be called? Cloud Cuckoo Land?

I'll write the next order when this one's been completed. Thanks, Amateurscratch.

Alida7232 wrote:

Amateurscratch wrote:

Hi, I'd like to make 2 orders, please.

The first one didn't have a template and you didn't mention it in the first comment, but can you give me story name ideas?

This is what the story's about:

There are two girls. One is called Ava and she is 12. Her sister is called Ada and she is 10. They had a brother called Jacob, but he died from Cancer when Ava was 2. A bit after Jacob died, Ava's parent's had Ada. Ava spends her pocket money on tins of shortbread and lucky cat charms. Whenever she feels down, she has a piece of shortbread, as she hides the tin under her bed in her room. Ada often thinks about her dead brother, too. Ada appears to live in Cloud Cuckoo Land half the time, where she dreams her brother is alive, where she dreams there are mermaids, pheonix's and more.

In the end, Ava dies from depression. Ada still lives in Cloud Cuckoo Land.

What should this story be called? Cloud Cuckoo Land?

I'll write the next order when this one's been completed. Thanks, Amateurscratch.

Hmm… maybe title it Head in the Clouds or The Dreamer. Ultimately, it's up to you, but those are some starter suggestions.