bigpuppy wrote:

I don't get it. You're the owner of this shop..?

AiyanMind wrote:

Order Type: Bug Extermination, Thorough Test Run

I want to get my project tested and any bugs smoothed out before my project will go on front page curated by @wonderlust. Please go through it thoroughly.

Thank you,
~AiyanMind

P.S. Multiple people can test it out at a time

Click on the image below to get to the project

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AiyanMind wrote:

Is there a form for bug extermination?

banana439monkey wrote:

If you want anything that is not on the list, we will most likely be able to make it. This was made after a bit of inspiration from paddle.

germanengland3 wrote:

I'm resigning.

Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: cbuugdrama9
Type of idea: an idea for what to do with a story
Other Info: see below

jromagnoli wrote:

Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: cbuugdrama9
Type of idea: an idea for what to do with a story
Other Info: see below

Can I take this order? I am an employee of bigpuppy's shop. I'm not a girl but, I can review it.

Monkey_legend wrote:
Hi I am from bigpuppies shop and I heard you had some agreement that you could help each other with orders so I would like to help you with these two

Reviews
Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: cbuugdrama9
Type of idea: an idea for what to do with a story
Other Info: see below

Coding: 92/100 Not much to do here but works, could add a slide system though! Graphics: 88/100 This is great art, just a tad girly, kind of pixelated too, try vector next time! Bugs: 100/100, Bug free! The coding wasn't hard though, and it would be nice if it had a slide system as I said above. Grammar: 95/100 just a few errors in the instructions, some misplaced/missing capitals. Creativity: 90/100, I have seen a few thing like this, but they are pretty rare. Nice touch making it girly.
Comments:
WOW! Even though this is girly, I must admit that half of these look professional! And the other half look really good as well!
Improvements:
Next time try to convert it to vector, it looks nicer that way
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

jromagnoli wrote:

Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: cbuugdrama9
Type of idea: an idea for what to do with a story
Other Info: see below

Done:

WOW! Even though this is girly, I must admit that half of these look professional! And the other half look really good as well! Coding: 9/10 not much to do here but works, could add a slide system though! Art: 10/10 Really good even though its really girly, I could see someone paying for this. Animation: 8/10 could be improved with a slide system for a smooth glide to the next picture. Music: nice choice! 9/10 Other/critique: good prompt with the click heart and star sprite! Overall: 9/10, the interface could be improved with a slide system, the pictures could be converted to vector for hd viewing, but very good art..

Username: Monkey_Legend
Type (Logo, Sprite, etc.): GIF
Size: the size of the word bump
Description: could it say ‘BUMP’ with each letter separately jumping up a little
Colours: changing colored (using the colors red,blue, green and orange)
Bitmap or Vector: don't mind
Other Info: None

https://cdn2-scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/get_image/gallery/3592353_170x100.png?v=1482110394.38

jromagnoli wrote:

Username: @storytellergirl2247
Link to work you want reviewing: this project.
Other info: it's a girl-ish type of project, so i'd like, if possoble, a girl to do this order.

Username: cbuugdrama9
Type of idea: an idea for what to do with a story
Other Info: see below

Can I take this order? I am an employee of bigpuppy's shop. I'm not a girl but, I can review it.

Hans5958 wrote:

13th shop.
Review by project, please.

Username: Hans5958
Link to work you want reviewing to reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/70357630/
Other info: Tell me in the project comments when it's done.

Monkey_Legend wrote:

Hans5958 wrote:

13th shop.
Review by project, please.

Username: Hans5958
Link to work you want reviewing to reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/70357630/
Other info: Tell me in the project comments when it's done.

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