Discuss Scratch
- Discussion Forums
- » Requests
- » << TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
I would like a review please!
Username: Jromagnoli
link : my game: Agar.io test (not aiming to be Agar.io, but something more like a dot eating game)
subject: game
Date : If it isn't too much to ask… ASAP
Miscellaneous : please include why (it was good/bad) and how (it was good/bad). And could you post it on the project page?
Username: Jromagnoli
link : my game: Agar.io test (not aiming to be Agar.io, but something more like a dot eating game)
subject: game
Date : If it isn't too much to ask… ASAP
Miscellaneous : please include why (it was good/bad) and how (it was good/bad). And could you post it on the project page?
Last edited by jromagnoli (Dec. 11, 2016 23:00:37)
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Taken I would like a review please!
Username: Jromagnoli
link : my game: Agar.io test (not aiming to be Agar.io, but something more like a dot eating game)
subject: game
Date : If it isn't too much to ask… ASAP
Miscellaneous : please include why (it was good/bad) and how (it was good/bad). And could you post it on the project page?
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Review for agar.io test by jromagnoli
—————
Coding (90/100)
The coding was pretty good.
Graphics (95/100)
I mean, something like this doesn't really need that good of graphics, but…
Bugs (100/100)
I personally didn't find any.
Grammar (99/100)
I don't think I found any issues.
Creativity (60/100)
I have seen a lot of people make agar.io games like this.
Overall score (444/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
Thanks for ordering from us! If you liked your order, consider reviewing us! Have a nice day
—————
Coding (90/100)
The coding was pretty good.
Graphics (95/100)
I mean, something like this doesn't really need that good of graphics, but…
Bugs (100/100)
I personally didn't find any.
Grammar (99/100)
I don't think I found any issues.
Creativity (60/100)
I have seen a lot of people make agar.io games like this.
Overall score (444/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
Thanks for ordering from us! If you liked your order, consider reviewing us! Have a nice day
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
bigpuppy wrote:Thanks! I actually made this for a school project, I needed something neat, but relatively straitforward in coding! You were really fast with the review!
Review for agar.io test by jromagnoli
—————
Coding (90/100)
The coding was pretty good.
Graphics (95/100)
I mean, something like this doesn't really need that good of graphics, but…
Bugs (100/100)
I personally didn't find any.
Grammar (99/100)
I don't think I found any issues.
Creativity (60/100)
I have seen a lot of people make agar.io games like this.
Overall score (444/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
Thanks for ordering from us! If you liked your order, consider reviewing us! Have a nice day
Last edited by jromagnoli (Dec. 11, 2016 23:19:09)
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
You really do have mindblowing speed and quality!
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Thanks You really do have mindblowing speed and quality!
- Hans5958
- Scratcher
100+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Review my project, please.
Username: Hans5958
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/70357630/
Type of thing you want reviewed: A game project.
Comments: Tell me when it's done.
This is the 6th shop I asked to review my project.
Username: Hans5958
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/70357630/
Type of thing you want reviewed: A game project.
Comments: Tell me when it's done.
This is the 6th shop I asked to review my project.
Last edited by Hans5958 (Dec. 12, 2016 12:18:44)
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Taken Review my project, please.
Username: Hans5958
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch-mit-edu.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/projects/70357630/
Type of thing you want reviewed: A game project.
Comments: Tell me when it's done.
This is the 6th shop I asked to review my project.
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Review for Cookie Clicker v1.4 by Hans5958
—————
Coding (95/100)
Definitely the best Cookie Clicker project I have seen on Scratch. And SAVING and LOADING? Awesome.
Graphics (95/100)
They're really good, I don't see anything you could change on them.
Bugs (100/100)
Well, I didn't find any.
Grammar (100/100)
Didn't find any problems with grammar…
Creativity (30/100)
I have (and I'm sure you have too) seen A LOT of cookie clicker games on Scratch.
Total Score: (420/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
If you liked your review please consider giving us a review! Here is an example of a review someone gave us.
Scratch on!
—————
Coding (95/100)
Definitely the best Cookie Clicker project I have seen on Scratch. And SAVING and LOADING? Awesome.
Graphics (95/100)
They're really good, I don't see anything you could change on them.
Bugs (100/100)
Well, I didn't find any.
Grammar (100/100)
Didn't find any problems with grammar…
Creativity (30/100)
I have (and I'm sure you have too) seen A LOT of cookie clicker games on Scratch.
Total Score: (420/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
If you liked your review please consider giving us a review! Here is an example of a review someone gave us.
Scratch on!
- TacoCatProuductions
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Cookie Clicker v1.4 by Hans5958May I politely suggest somehthing? Review for
—————
Coding (95/100)
Definitely the best Cookie Clicker project I have seen on Scratch. And SAVING and LOADING? Awesome.
Graphics (95/100)
They're really good, I don't see anything you could change on them.
Bugs (100/100)
Well, I didn't find any.
Grammar (100/100)
Didn't find any problems with grammar…
Creativity (30/100)
I have (and I'm sure you have too) seen A LOT of cookie clicker games on Scratch.
Total Score: (420/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
If you liked your review please consider giving us a review! Here is an example of a review someone gave us.
Scratch on!
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Yes?Cookie Clicker v1.4 by Hans5958May I politely suggest somehthing? Review for
—————
Coding (95/100)
Definitely the best Cookie Clicker project I have seen on Scratch. And SAVING and LOADING? Awesome.
Graphics (95/100)
They're really good, I don't see anything you could change on them.
Bugs (100/100)
Well, I didn't find any.
Grammar (100/100)
Didn't find any problems with grammar…
Creativity (30/100)
I have (and I'm sure you have too) seen A LOT of cookie clicker games on Scratch.
Total Score: (420/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
If you liked your review please consider giving us a review! Here is an example of a review someone gave us.
Scratch on!
- TacoCatProuductions
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
educe the fractionYes?Cookie Clicker v1.4 by Hans5958May I politely suggest somehthing? Review for
—————
Coding (95/100)
Definitely the best Cookie Clicker project I have seen on Scratch. And SAVING and LOADING? Awesome.
Graphics (95/100)
They're really good, I don't see anything you could change on them.
Bugs (100/100)
Well, I didn't find any.
Grammar (100/100)
Didn't find any problems with grammar…
Creativity (30/100)
I have (and I'm sure you have too) seen A LOT of cookie clicker games on Scratch.
Total Score: (420/500)
—————
Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop
If you liked your review please consider giving us a review! Here is an example of a review someone gave us.
Scratch on!
- doggy230
- Scratcher
58 posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
tell me when I can do itOkay. I'll remove it from the dustbin.The Dustbincan I do the second one
Back to Unfinished Orders List
Welcome to The Dustbin! Orders that nobody in the shop has been able to do and have been on the order list for a long time will be sent here, to the dustbin. If you own an order that is in the Dustbin and would like to claim an order out of here, please tell me.
Username: Amateurscratch
What you want it to be: A new profile pic. Details in the comments below.
Do you have a preferred employee? Not really, just someone who's really good at using Vector.
Comments: (anything else?)An Anime head. Dark brown straight hair, like (link not put in yet), turquoise eyes, (it should look a bit Japanese) freckles, and I think that's it. I will put in the link in a minute. Comment on my profile when the order is done, other wise I probably won't find it.
Username: SoarPlusPlus
What you want it to sound like: like a prologue from a game
Long, medium or short? medium
Comments: (anything else?) nope
Someone please take this order!
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
you can do it now!tell me when I can do itOkay. I'll remove it from the dustbin.The Dustbincan I do the second one
Back to Unfinished Orders List
Welcome to The Dustbin! Orders that nobody in the shop has been able to do and have been on the order list for a long time will be sent here, to the dustbin. If you own an order that is in the Dustbin and would like to claim an order out of here, please tell me.
Username: Amateurscratch
What you want it to be: A new profile pic. Details in the comments below.
Do you have a preferred employee? Not really, just someone who's really good at using Vector.
Comments: (anything else?)An Anime head. Dark brown straight hair, like (link not put in yet), turquoise eyes, (it should look a bit Japanese) freckles, and I think that's it. I will put in the link in a minute. Comment on my profile when the order is done, other wise I probably won't find it.
Username: SoarPlusPlus
What you want it to sound like: like a prologue from a game
Long, medium or short? medium
Comments: (anything else?) nope
Someone please take this order!
- jromagnoli
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Are you hiring? Or is it just you?
- GeeTransit
- Scratcher
100+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
There are other people, it's just that some staff are less active than others as he is the owner of this shop. We are still hiring in some places so just click on page 1 and click on staff. You can be hired and check which jobs are availiable. Are you hiring? Or is it just you?
Click here for staff
Last edited by GeeTransit (Dec. 13, 2016 23:05:20)
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
Yep - Thanks for replying to themThere are other people, it's just that some staff are less active than others as he is the owner of this shop. We are still hiring in some places so just click on page 1 and click on staff. You can be hired and check which jobs are availiable. Are you hiring? Or is it just you?
Click here for staff
- GeeTransit
- Scratcher
100+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
No prob! I was like “Hmm… to reply or not to reply? That is the question…”Yep - Thanks for replying to themThere are other people, it's just that some staff are less active than others as he is the owner of this shop. We are still hiring in some places so just click on page 1 and click on staff. You can be hired and check which jobs are availiable. Are you hiring? Or is it just you?
Click here for staff
- bigpuppy
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
XDNo prob! I was like “Hmm… to reply or not to reply? That is the question…”Yep - Thanks for replying to themThere are other people, it's just that some staff are less active than others as he is the owner of this shop. We are still hiring in some places so just click on page 1 and click on staff. You can be hired and check which jobs are availiable. Are you hiring? Or is it just you?
Click here for staff
- GeeTransit
- Scratcher
100+ posts
<< TᕼE ᗪOGᕼOᑌᔕE >> Closed, please visit our new topic! Link on front page.
What does co-manager do? I'm thinking of a promotion! Scripts doesn't have that many orders