bigpuppy wrote:

Review for Make a Scratch Website by dude341

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Coding (95/100)
Good.
Graphics (87/100)
Pretty good, the scratch logo is a bit pixely.
Bugs (100/100)
Please note this means I couldn't find any bugs.
Grammar (100/100)
I couldn't find any bad grammar.
Creativity (95/100)
It's pretty creative.

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Comments:
Look at my comments on each of the things (coding, graphics, etc.)

Improvements that could be made:
-You could make it so the left arrow makes it turn the other way.
-You could also make it so the search bar is a bit smaller because it takes up a lot of space.

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Review by bigpuppy from

dude341 wrote:

bigpuppy wrote:

Review for Make a Scratch Website by dude341

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Coding (95/100)
Good.
Graphics (87/100)
Pretty good, the scratch logo is a bit pixely.
Bugs (100/100)
Please note this means I couldn't find any bugs.
Grammar (100/100)
I couldn't find any bad grammar.
Creativity (95/100)
It's pretty creative.

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Comments:
Look at my comments on each of the things (coding, graphics, etc.)

Improvements that could be made:
-You could make it so the left arrow makes it turn the other way.
-You could also make it so the search bar is a bit smaller because it takes up a lot of space.

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Review by bigpuppy from

The Scratch Logo is pixelated because Scratch pixelates sprites when you upload them.

zphyrjns wrote:

I'll try to do this order: Username:dude341
What you want the code to do: Cloud Data Multiplayer. (Very Important)
First, there will be a menu that will select another player on Multiplayer to play with. I need help with that. Second, the multiplayer itself. This is how it will work. The first player will have a go. If the first player dies, the second player has a go. If the second player dies, the first player has a go etc. How do I do that?
Other info: This is for help with a Super Mario Bros project.

zphyrjns wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

I'll try to do this order: Username:dude341
What you want the code to do: Cloud Data Multiplayer. (Very Important)
First, there will be a menu that will select another player on Multiplayer to play with. I need help with that. Second, the multiplayer itself. This is how it will work. The first player will have a go. If the first player dies, the second player has a go. If the second player dies, the first player has a go etc. How do I do that?
Other info: This is for help with a Super Mario Bros project.

Never mind, I can't do it, I failed.

dude341 wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

I'll try to do this order: Username:dude341
What you want the code to do: Cloud Data Multiplayer. (Very Important)
First, there will be a menu that will select another player on Multiplayer to play with. I need help with that. Second, the multiplayer itself. This is how it will work. The first player will have a go. If the first player dies, the second player has a go. If the second player dies, the first player has a go etc. How do I do that?
Other info: This is for help with a Super Mario Bros project.

Never mind, I can't do it, I failed.

I want my orders done in order, so do my first order, my 2nd order, my 3rd order, etc up to my 9th order.

zphyrjns wrote:

dude341 wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

I'll try to do this order: Username:dude341
What you want the code to do: Cloud Data Multiplayer. (Very Important)
First, there will be a menu that will select another player on Multiplayer to play with. I need help with that. Second, the multiplayer itself. This is how it will work. The first player will have a go. If the first player dies, the second player has a go. If the second player dies, the first player has a go etc. How do I do that?
Other info: This is for help with a Super Mario Bros project.

Never mind, I can't do it, I failed.

I want my orders done in order, so do my first order, my 2nd order, my 3rd order, etc up to my 9th order.

Got it. Sorry for the arror.

dude341 wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

dude341 wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

zphyrjns wrote:

I'll try to do this order: Username:dude341
What you want the code to do: Cloud Data Multiplayer. (Very Important)
First, there will be a menu that will select another player on Multiplayer to play with. I need help with that. Second, the multiplayer itself. This is how it will work. The first player will have a go. If the first player dies, the second player has a go. If the second player dies, the first player has a go etc. How do I do that?
Other info: This is for help with a Super Mario Bros project.

Never mind, I can't do it, I failed.

I want my orders done in order, so do my first order, my 2nd order, my 3rd order, etc up to my 9th order.

Got it. Sorry for the arror.

*error
(Did you do that typo on purpose?)

dude341 wrote:

#BUMPY!

SonicMasterSystem wrote:

Username: SonicMasterSystem
Colour bricks: Any needed
Whether or not you would like it to be a .pdf file: I would like it to be a pdf
What you want it to be: Back to the Future Time Train (Small not large)
Other info: Please make it as small as possible, but keep the main features in type.

banana439monkey wrote:

BUMPY!

Banana

dude341 wrote:

BUMPY!!!!!!

banana439monkey wrote:

dude341 wrote:

BUMPY!!!!!!

Banana