Spycapt54 wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

Yes, but I don't think it would be good for the show… We are keeping the basic plot,

uhh what do you mean by that? it's just a cliffhanger..

First, Season One needs more episodes and maybe the cliffhanger could be different. At the end, Metal Sonic is destroyed at Huge Crisis. Sliver rescues Floee and Sonic rescues Vanilla, Cream, and Big. The screen fades out and fades in at night, a close up of Tikal is shown from the side, she presses her hand(in a fist) to her heart and says, “Something is wrong, I feel it!” Cut to Credits DUN DUN DUUUN! Yeah, like that.

sounds good

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I wrote some theme song lyrics. If you don't like then and want to use something different then that's fine.
All stuff marked with () means this is part of the visuals the go with the song. Anything other than that is actually lyrics.

Gotta go fast!
(Sonic running down a highway)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic dodges an incoming Badnik)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic leaps over a car directly into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Friends and Family!
(Various of sonic's friends fight to get in front of the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Fearsome foes!
(Eggman commanding an army of Badniks) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Some things change but others also stay the same!
(A shot of some new characters. Preferably OCs) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic and pals smashing some Badniks with Eggman watching them)

Speed Speed!
(Sonic jumps out of the crowd of robots spin-dashing into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic and pals landing in front of the shows logo) (End)

I hope you like it!

Nice! I'll try to compose something to go along with that

goldfish678 wrote:

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I wrote some theme song lyrics. If you don't like then and want to use something different then that's fine.
All stuff marked with () means this is part of the visuals the go with the song. Anything other than that is actually lyrics.

Gotta go fast!
(Sonic running down a highway)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic dodges an incoming Badnik)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic leaps over a car directly into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Friends and Family!
(Various of sonic's friends fight to get in front of the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Fearsome foes!
(Eggman commanding an army of Badniks) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Some things change but others also stay the same!
(A shot of some new characters. Preferably OCs) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic and pals smashing some Badniks with Eggman watching them)

Speed Speed!
(Sonic jumps out of the crowd of robots spin-dashing into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic and pals landing in front of the shows logo) (End)

I hope you like it!

Nice! I'll try to compose something to go along with that

I'm thinking something Rock-ish.

Dinoguy8 wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I wrote some theme song lyrics. If you don't like then and want to use something different then that's fine.
All stuff marked with () means this is part of the visuals the go with the song. Anything other than that is actually lyrics.

Gotta go fast!
(Sonic running down a highway)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic dodges an incoming Badnik)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic leaps over a car directly into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Friends and Family!
(Various of sonic's friends fight to get in front of the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Fearsome foes!
(Eggman commanding an army of Badniks) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Some things change but others also stay the same!
(A shot of some new characters. Preferably OCs) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic and pals smashing some Badniks with Eggman watching them)

Speed Speed!
(Sonic jumps out of the crowd of robots spin-dashing into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic and pals landing in front of the shows logo) (End)

I hope you like it!

Nice! I'll try to compose something to go along with that

I'm thinking something Rock-ish.

Same

goldfish678 wrote:

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I wrote some theme song lyrics. If you don't like then and want to use something different then that's fine.
All stuff marked with () means this is part of the visuals the go with the song. Anything other than that is actually lyrics.

Gotta go fast!
(Sonic running down a highway)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic dodges an incoming Badnik)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic leaps over a car directly into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Friends and Family!
(Various of sonic's friends fight to get in front of the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Fearsome foes!
(Eggman commanding an army of Badniks) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Some things change but others also stay the same!
(A shot of some new characters. Preferably OCs) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic and pals smashing some Badniks with Eggman watching them)

Speed Speed!
(Sonic jumps out of the crowd of robots spin-dashing into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic and pals landing in front of the shows logo) (End)

I hope you like it!

Nice! I'll try to compose something to go along with that

How about at the end, we see a shadow of Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, Cheese, and Tikal landing. The logo shows up and they are now in color. Sonjc jumps and spundashes at the camera. The screen goes back and “Created by Spycapt54” is shown. We now see were the scene before the intro left off or something completely new with the title shown on the bottom middle with various credits on both sides but mot all credits. I think the song needs a few more lyrics for structure and characters l

Spycapt54 wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I wrote some theme song lyrics. If you don't like then and want to use something different then that's fine.
All stuff marked with () means this is part of the visuals the go with the song. Anything other than that is actually lyrics.

Gotta go fast!
(Sonic running down a highway)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic dodges an incoming Badnik)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic leaps over a car directly into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Friends and Family!
(Various of sonic's friends fight to get in front of the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Fearsome foes!
(Eggman commanding an army of Badniks) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Some things change but others also stay the same!
(A shot of some new characters. Preferably OCs) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed! Speed!
(Sonic and pals smashing some Badniks with Eggman watching them)

Speed Speed!
(Sonic jumps out of the crowd of robots spin-dashing into the camera) (Jumpcut to next scene)

Speed is all ya need!
(Sonic and pals landing in front of the shows logo) (End)

I hope you like it!

Nice! I'll try to compose something to go along with that

How about at the end, we see a shadow of Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, Cream, Cheese, and Tikal landing. The logo shows up and they are now in color. Sonjc jumps and spundashes at the camera. The screen goes back and “Created by Spycapt54” is shown. We now see were the scene before the intro left off or something completely new with the title shown on the bottom middle with various credits on both sides but mot all credits. I think the song needs a few more lyrics for structure and characters l

Shure! Feel free to modify it as you want!

(sorry for double post)
I'm going on vacation for a week starting today. So posting will be sporadic and inconsistent.

I have an idea for the intro theme: https://goo.gl/tU6Ck2 sorry I'm not very good with adobe audition

goldfish678 wrote:

I have an idea for the intro theme: https://goo.gl/tU6Ck2 sorry I'm not very good with adobe audition

Could work. But maybe something with electric guitar?

Dinoguy8 wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

I have an idea for the intro theme: https://goo.gl/tU6Ck2 sorry I'm not very good with adobe audition

Could work. But maybe something with electric guitar?

I don't have an electric guitar ;-; That was the closest I could get

although I could try to find an electric guitar instrument in LMMS..

Let me continue the Shadow and Flames script.

(Camera switches to a living room in Sonic's house)

Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Amy are discussing something.

Tails: You know about the Ch-

Silver bursts in, screaming.

Sonic: (surprised) Silver, what's the matter?

Silver: (panicking) Something terrible happened!

Sonic: What is it? Did Dr. Eggman attack anyone or-

Silver: NO! Shadow kissed what was supposed to be my girlfriend, Blaze. That's totally unfair.

Sonic: Well, why don't you sit here while we chat? We can talk to Shadow and Blaze.

Silver: (weeping) Alright.

Silver sits by Sonic and shivers.

goldfish678 wrote:

gonna try to write more intro song lyrics

Who will sing? I can make a beat once you give me the vocals.

goldfish678 wrote:

I have an idea for the intro theme: https://goo.gl/tU6Ck2 sorry I'm not very good with adobe audition

If you'd like I can take a crack at it, then we can choose!

zphyrjns wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

gonna try to write more intro song lyrics

Who will sing? I can make a beat once you give me the vocals.

idk yet

zphyrjns wrote:

goldfish678 wrote:

I have an idea for the intro theme: https://goo.gl/tU6Ck2 sorry I'm not very good with adobe audition

If you'd like I can take a crack at it, then we can choose!

okay

I think the vocalis I came up with will work. With Spycapt's edits that is!

Dinoguy8 wrote:

I think the vocalis I came up with will work. With Spycapt's edits that is!

okay, I might do another instrumental thing

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:

Let me continue the Shadow and Flames script.

(Camera switches to a living room in Sonic's house)

Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Amy are discussing something.

Tails: You know about the Ch-

Silver bursts in, screaming.

Sonic: (surprised) Silver, what's the matter?

Silver: (panicking) Something terrible happened!

Sonic: What is it? Did Dr. Eggman attack anyone or-

Silver: NO! Shadow kissed what was supposed to be my girlfriend, Blaze. That's totally unfair.

Sonic: Well, why don't you sit here while we chat? We can talk to Shadow and Blaze.

Silver: (weeping) Alright.

Silver sits by Sonic and shivers.

5 minutes later…
Silver: (Yelling) GAHH, IT'S NO USE!

Sonic: (Confused) Whatever… (Shrugs)

Silver is now in Cream's living room, lying on the couch. Tikal is is the chair to the right with a notepad and pen.

Tikal: So, start from the begging, what is disturbing you?

Silver: Well… you see…

The screen fades in and out on Silver.

Silver: (Crying and buried in tissues.) And that is when I learned Blaze chose Shadow over me!

Tikal: Whoa. Try to move on or find someone else and see me again in a week.

Silver gets up and leaves the house.

Spycapt54 wrote:

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:

Let me continue the Shadow and Flames script.

(Camera switches to a living room in Sonic's house)

Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Amy are discussing something.

Tails: You know about the Ch-

Silver bursts in, screaming.

Sonic: (surprised) Silver, what's the matter?

Silver: (panicking) Something terrible happened!

Sonic: What is it? Did Dr. Eggman attack anyone or-

Silver: NO! Shadow kissed what was supposed to be my girlfriend, Blaze. That's totally unfair.

Sonic: Well, why don't you sit here while we chat? We can talk to Shadow and Blaze.

Silver: (weeping) Alright.

Silver sits by Sonic and shivers.

5 minutes later…
Silver: (Yelling) GAHH, IT'S NO USE!

Sonic: (Confused) Whatever… (Shrugs)

Silver is now in Cream's living room, lying on the couch. Tikal is is the chair to the right with a notepad and pen.

Tikal: So, start from the begging, what is disturbing you?

Silver: Well… you see…

The screen fades in and out on Silver.

Silver: (Crying and buried in tissues.) And that is when I learned Blaze chose Shadow over me!

Tikal: Whoa. Try to move on or find someone else and see me again in a week.

Silver gets up and leaves the house.

(The camera switches to a tree in which Silver is sitting at)

Silver: (looks up at the sky and sobs) My whole life has been turned upside down…. What can I do?

Sonic comes up.

Sonic: (running towards Silver) Hey, we're going to Shadow's house to discuss with him and Blaze. Wanna come?

Silver stands up slowly.

Silver: Alright….

(The camera zooms out and shows Sonic and Silver walking down the hill. Then it switches to the front of Shadow's house.)

Sonic rings the doorbell and Shadow opens the door.

Shadow: What's up, Sonikku?

Sonic: Is Blaze still inside?

Shadow nods.

Sonic: So, Silver would like to investigate why Blaze decided to go out-

Shadow: (angrily) HEY, YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO INTERFERE WITH OUR RELATIONSHIP. NOW LEAVE!

Sonic: Well, Silver had a crush on Blaze for a while.

Shadow is about to slam the door when Blaze interrupts.

Blaze: (offscreen) Shades, will you allow them to enter? I would be eager to share my answers.

Shadow: Okay, you can go in.

Silver and Sonic wander into the house.

(Camera switches to Shadow's living room)

Silver: Blaze, why did you choose Shadow over me? I helped you, right?

Blaze: (purring) I hate to disappoint you but you're too late to tell that you loved me. Shadow was the first one to say that and I chose him so I wouldn't disappoint him.

Silver cries excessively.

Blaze: Hey, chill. You can act like a little brother to me and probably be a royal assistant once Shadow and I marry.

Silver: (wiping his eyes) Alright…. Now how can I move on?

Blaze: Take a deep breath and enjoy your life. Probably another girl will fall in love with you. Remember, our friendship is still strong.

Silver nods slowly.

Shadow cuddles Blaze and Blaze purrs.

(Camera switches to the outside)

Silver walks on the sidewalk, looking at the pavement and sighing.

Zooey comes up from the hill with a red female fox.

Zooey: Hi! I would like to introduce this girl! Her name's Floee and she's wanting a partner recently. I think you make a great boyfriend for her.

Silver anxiously taps Floee's hand.

Floee: You look cute. And handsome.

Silver: (surprisingly) Whoa, you like me?

Floee: Uh huh. I think I'll enjoy you.

Silver takes Floee's hand and smiles.

Tikal (in the background): I think a new relationship has been started.

(Credits roll)

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:

Spycapt54 wrote:

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:

Let me continue the Shadow and Flames script.

(Camera switches to a living room in Sonic's house)

Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Amy are discussing something.

Tails: You know about the Ch-

Silver bursts in, screaming.

Sonic: (surprised) Silver, what's the matter?

Silver: (panicking) Something terrible happened!

Sonic: What is it? Did Dr. Eggman attack anyone or-

Silver: NO! Shadow kissed what was supposed to be my girlfriend, Blaze. That's totally unfair.

Sonic: Well, why don't you sit here while we chat? We can talk to Shadow and Blaze.

Silver: (weeping) Alright.

Silver sits by Sonic and shivers.

5 minutes later…
Silver: (Yelling) GAHH, IT'S NO USE!

Sonic: (Confused) Whatever… (Shrugs)

Silver is now in Cream's living room, lying on the couch. Tikal is is the chair to the right with a notepad and pen.

Tikal: So, start from the begging, what is disturbing you?

Silver: Well… you see…

The screen fades in and out on Silver.

Silver: (Crying and buried in tissues.) And that is when I learned Blaze chose Shadow over me!

Tikal: Whoa. Try to move on or find someone else and see me again in a week.

Silver gets up and leaves the house.

(The camera switches to a tree in which Silver is sitting at)

Silver: (looks up at the sky and sobs) My whole life has been turned upside down…. What can I do?

Sonic comes up.

Sonic: (running towards Silver) Hey, we're going to Shadow's house to discuss with him and Blaze. Wanna come?

Silver stands up slowly.

Silver: Alright….

(The camera zooms out and shows Sonic and Silver walking down the hill. Then it switches to the front of Shadow's house.)

Sonic rings the doorbell and Shadow opens the door.

Shadow: What's up, Sonikku?

Sonic: Is Blaze still inside?

Shadow nods.

Sonic: So, Silver would like to investigate why Blaze decided to go out-

Shadow: (angrily) HEY, YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO INTERFERE WITH OUR RELATIONSHIP. NOW LEAVE!

Sonic: Well, Silver had a crush on Blaze for a while.

Shadow is about to slam the door when Blaze interrupts.

Blaze: (offscreen) Shades, will you allow them to enter? I would be eager to share my answers.

Shadow: Okay, you can go in.

Silver and Sonic wander into the house.

(Camera switches to Shadow's living room)

Silver: Blaze, why did you choose Shadow over me? I helped you, right?

Blaze: (purring) I hate to disappoint you but you're too late to tell that you loved me. Shadow was the first one to say that and I chose him so I wouldn't disappoint him.

Silver cries excessively.

Blaze: Hey, chill. You can act like a little brother to me and probably be a royal assistant once Shadow and I marry.

Silver: (wiping his eyes) Alright…. Now how can I move on?

Blaze: Take a deep breath and enjoy your life. Probably another girl will fall in love with you. Remember, our friendship is still strong.

Silver nods slowly.

Shadow cuddles Blaze and Blaze purrs.

(Camera switches to the outside)

Silver walks on the sidewalk, looking at the pavement and sighing.

Zooey comes up from the hill with a red female fox.

Zooey: Hi! I would like to introduce this girl! Her name's Floee and she's wanting a partner recently. I think you make a great boyfriend for her.

Silver anxiously taps Floee's hand.

Floee: You look cute. And handsome.

Silver: (surprisingly) Whoa, you like me?

Floee: Uh huh. I think I'll enjoy you.

Silver takes Floee's hand and smiles.

Tikal (in the background): I think a new relationship has been started.

(Credits roll)

Floee could be a friend of Zooey. Fun fact: Tikal is half spirit and half echidna. Where should she live in the anime, I don't think her own house fits and Angel Island is too far. Another Fun Fact: In the scene were Silver is talking to Tikal, Cream is sitting in a beanbag chair on the left. How are we gonna put Sally in an episode, I don't read the comics, we will use her design from her 3D render on Sonic News Network(The one that is probably fake because she isn't in the games.)

no offense to anybody that wrote it, but the current shadows and flames script seems awfully convenient and the relationships still escalate unrealistically quickly.