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zphyrjns

so what music do you need?

goldfish678

zphyrjns wrote:
so what music do you need?

None at the moment

PrincessPanda_test_

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
My idea on the first part of the “Shadows and Flames” plot

Shadow and Blaze accidentally ran into each other in the park, Blaze expected Shadow to be mad and didn't want that to happen. Surprisingly, Shadow revealed he had a crush on her. Blaze blushes and holds hands with Shadow. He reminds her that their relationship is supposed to be secret and should not be revealed to anyone else.

Some time later, Shadow requests Blaze their first kiss and Blaze happily accepted. However, Silver, who had a small crush on Blaze, enviously spied on them kissing each other. Silver suddenly shrieked and decided to punch Shadow in the face. Shadow, hearing the shriek, ran up to the silver boar and was furious that he eyed him kissing Blaze which was supposed to be private.

(This is before Floee comes in and becomes Silver's girlfriend.)
It seems like their relationship escalates quite quickly if they go from barely friends to kissing each other in one episode. xD
No, the some time is in weeks.

Here's some transcript I thought of:

Blaze is walking in the park alone whistling and suddenly, Shadow dashed and collided with her. They fall to the pavement.

Blaze: (nervously) Shadow? Are you gonna hiss at me?

Shadow: (smiles) No. I have something to tell you.

Blaze: What is it?

Shadow: I have a crush on you.

Blaze blushes.

Shadow: Do you want to be my girlfriend?

Blaze: (still blushing) Sure, I really need someone to lessen my lone wolf personality.

Shadow chuckles. They both get up and hold hands together as they walk through the park.

Shadow: Keep this in mind, our romantic relationship is supposed to be a secret. Do not let anyone see us do romantic actions and do not tell anyone about this. Okay?

Blaze nods.

The camera then scrolls to the sky. Text pops up which reads, “Some time later…”. Then the camera goes back down and reveals Shadow's house. It zooms in and finally bursts into the living room where Shadow and Blaze are sitting on the couch.

Shadow: It's been weeks since we've met. Dates, gift giving, dancing, all that jazz.

Blaze: Yeah, right.

Shadow: (blushes) I have one thing, do you want us to share our first kiss?

Blaze hesitates for a while.

Blaze: (nervously) Ummmmmmm…. sure. Our bond is like a stiff piece of wood.

Silver: (outside, looking through the window) Uh oh, what are they going to do?

Shadow and Blaze lean in together, close their eyes, and kiss.

Silver: (shrieking) OH MY GOSH!!!!! SHADOW STOLE WHAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!?!?!

Shadow hears Silver shrieking outside. He furiously snarls.

Shadow: (growling) Silver, what are you doing?!?! This was supposed to be PRIVATE!

Silver: (chattering) Uh…. Nothing?!

Silver flees immediately.

Shadow turns back to Blaze and embraces her.

Shadow: Forget all about that. Since we really love each other, we might get married in the future.
Anyone?

goldfish678

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
My idea on the first part of the “Shadows and Flames” plot

Shadow and Blaze accidentally ran into each other in the park, Blaze expected Shadow to be mad and didn't want that to happen. Surprisingly, Shadow revealed he had a crush on her. Blaze blushes and holds hands with Shadow. He reminds her that their relationship is supposed to be secret and should not be revealed to anyone else.

Some time later, Shadow requests Blaze their first kiss and Blaze happily accepted. However, Silver, who had a small crush on Blaze, enviously spied on them kissing each other. Silver suddenly shrieked and decided to punch Shadow in the face. Shadow, hearing the shriek, ran up to the silver boar and was furious that he eyed him kissing Blaze which was supposed to be private.

(This is before Floee comes in and becomes Silver's girlfriend.)
It seems like their relationship escalates quite quickly if they go from barely friends to kissing each other in one episode. xD
No, the some time is in weeks.

Here's some transcript I thought of:

Blaze is walking in the park alone whistling and suddenly, Shadow dashed and collided with her. They fall to the pavement.

Blaze: (nervously) Shadow? Are you gonna hiss at me?

Shadow: (smiles) No. I have something to tell you.

Blaze: What is it?

Shadow: I have a crush on you.

Blaze blushes.

Shadow: Do you want to be my girlfriend?

Blaze: (still blushing) Sure, I really need someone to lessen my lone wolf personality.

Shadow chuckles. They both get up and hold hands together as they walk through the park.

Shadow: Keep this in mind, our romantic relationship is supposed to be a secret. Do not let anyone see us do romantic actions and do not tell anyone about this. Okay?

Blaze nods.

The camera then scrolls to the sky. Text pops up which reads, “Some time later…”. Then the camera goes back down and reveals Shadow's house. It zooms in and finally bursts into the living room where Shadow and Blaze are sitting on the couch.

Shadow: It's been weeks since we've met. Dates, gift giving, dancing, all that jazz.

Blaze: Yeah, right.

Shadow: (blushes) I have one thing, do you want us to share our first kiss?

Blaze hesitates for a while.

Blaze: (nervously) Ummmmmmm…. sure. Our bond is like a stiff piece of wood.

Silver: (outside, looking through the window) Uh oh, what are they going to do?

Shadow and Blaze lean in together, close their eyes, and kiss.

Silver: (shrieking) OH MY GOSH!!!!! SHADOW STOLE WHAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!?!?!

Shadow hears Silver shrieking outside. He furiously snarls.

Shadow: (growling) Silver, what are you doing?!?! This was supposed to be PRIVATE!

Silver: (chattering) Uh…. Nothing?!

Silver flees immediately.

Shadow turns back to Blaze and embraces her.

Shadow: Forget all about that. Since we really love each other, we might get married in the future.
Anyone?

It's fine, but i do think it's a little unrealistic for them to form a basic relationship right after Shadow reveals his crush on Blaze

PrincessPanda_test_

Any ideas on how I can improve on that?

goldfish678

PrincessPanda_test_ wrote:
Any ideas on how I can improve on that?

maybe make Blaze have more of an embarrased reaction?

PrincessPanda_test_

Sure. Tweaked some of the dialouge.

Blaze is walking in the park alone whistling and suddenly, Shadow dashed and collided with her. They fall to the pavement.

Blaze: (nervously) Shadow? Are you gonna hiss at me?

Shadow: (smiles) No. I have something to tell you.

Blaze: What is it?

Shadow: I have a crush on you.

Blaze blushes.

Shadow: Do you want to be my girlfriend?

Blaze: (still blushing, sweating) Eh…. Really?!?? I never really expected such a dark being to fall in love in me.

Shadow: Don't worry, I won't hurt you. I'll make sure you're safe.

Blaze: I… don't…. wan- Never mind, let's just pretend to be friends and then escalate to romance. Flirting from someone I don't know much creeps me out.

Shadow chuckles. They both get up and hold hands together as they walk through the park.

Shadow: Keep this in mind, our romantic relationship is supposed to be a secret. Do not let anyone see us do romantic actions and do not tell anyone about this. Okay?

Blaze nods.

The camera then scrolls to the sky. Text pops up which reads, “Some time later…”. Then the camera goes back down and reveals Shadow's house. It zooms in and finally bursts into the living room where Shadow and Blaze are sitting on the couch.

Shadow: It's been weeks since we've met. Dates, gift giving, dancing, all that jazz.

Blaze: Yeah, right.

Shadow: (blushes) I have one thing, do you want us to share our first kiss?

Blaze hesitates for a while.

Blaze: (nervously) Ummmmmmm…. sure. Our bond is like a stiff piece of wood.

Silver: (outside, looking through the window) Uh oh, what are they going to do?

Shadow and Blaze lean in together, close their eyes, and kiss.

Silver: (shrieking) OH MY GOSH!!!!! SHADOW STOLE WHAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!?!?!

Shadow hears Silver shrieking outside. He furiously snarls.

Shadow: (growling) Silver, what are you doing?!?! This was supposed to be PRIVATE!

Silver: (chattering) Uh…. Nothing?!

Silver flees immediately.

Shadow turns back to Blaze and embraces her.

Shadow: Forget all about that. Since we really love each other, we might get married in the future.

DragonAsh

I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.

goldfish678

DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.

ok!

DragonAsh

goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!

Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.

goldfish678

DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!
Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.

probably bitmap

DragonAsh

goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!
Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.
probably bitmap

Good. Sometimes, to me, vector is harder than opening a dead-locked door with a box of toothpicks.

Spycapt54

DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!
Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.

Vector produces better graphics.

DragonAsh

Spycapt54 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!
Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.
Vector produces better graphics.

That's what people say. Bit map looks more sonic-like to me.

Smiley100P

DragonAsh wrote:
Spycapt54 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
I shall be so happy to help. I can animate, I'll try to draw, and if my laptop will work I'll tet and voice act.
ok!
Thanks! Always happy to help. One question though: Will we be using bitmap or vector. I'm good with bitmap, but vector's a little harder to me.
Vector produces better graphics.
That's what people say. Bit map looks more sonic-like to me.

Agreed.

Smiley100P

zphyrjns wrote:
Sure! My intro Currently that is it on scratch but I have made more for other purposes which I haven't shared publicly.

Awesome.

goldfish678

gonna try to write more intro song lyrics

DragonAsh

goldfish678 wrote:
gonna try to write more intro song lyrics

Can some body please do a nerdy sonic flock with me?

goldfish678

DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
gonna try to write more intro song lyrics
Can some body please do a nerdy sonic flock with me?

I've never used flock before but I can try

DragonAsh

goldfish678 wrote:
DragonAsh wrote:
goldfish678 wrote:
gonna try to write more intro song lyrics
Can some body please do a nerdy sonic flock with me?
I've never used flock before but I can try

Nevermind, PPL and I are linking random stuff with sonic, shadow, and silver together and calling it, “DragonAsh(shadow), Princess panda lover(Silver) and goldfish(sonic) in a nutshell” i n the random sonic thread thingie. You should really look.

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